Blessings Tree

Christian Inspirational Fantasy

Written in response to: "Start your story with it raining… anything but rain (e.g. flowers, cutlery, seashells, running shoes)." as part of Fabulism with Shaelin Bishop.

Blessings Tree

I pick up a golden leaf. On it is written in flowing script 'Peace'. On the next one is 'Hope'. Three more: 'Joy', 'Love', 'Patience'. More leaves rain down on me from my backyard blessings tree. 'Kindness', 'Self-Control', 'Gentleness'. So many to choose from. I want them all. Please, help me decide. 'Wisdom', 'Knowledge', 'Health', 'Prosperity', 'Abundance', 'Talent'. How is one to figure it all out? Is there a limit? I shouldn't be greedy. 'Generosity', 'Unselfishness', 'Common Sense', 'Grace', 'Mercy', 'Foresight', 'Discernment', 'Clarity', 'Compassion'. Are they never ending? How many will there be? Can I save some for later in case I need them more at another time?

Very few instructions came with it when I acquired this rarity. I certainly do not want to abuse the privilege of ownership. It was so long ago, now. I barely remember. No leaves were even on it for quite a while. The tree cycled through many seasons before faint scribbles were noticed on the undersides of the leaves whenever fall began. I still thank goodness I had a gardener willing to rake up the abundant foliage as it cascaded down during the season. He was the one who first noticed the script was readable. How was that even possible?

'Intelligence', 'Family', 'Spouse', 'Children', 'Career'. Those were a few of the first ones the befuddled worker brought to me for my inspection. I know those were things I often wished I had. And for the most part those wishes came true. I came from a loving family, I had enough intelligence to do well in school. I got married young and was blessed with four wonderful children and eventually got to start a career I loved. I always thanked my lucky stars and the Good Lord for granting what I wanted.

Ooooh! Forget about the lucky stars. There is likely no such thing. But the Good Lord? Could He have a hand in this good fortune? Maybe I need to go back to His Good Book and study again some of the long ago Bible stories I learned as a child. As a grown adult sometimes I brush aside all those important messages because I get so swept away trying to negotiate the necessities of living and caring for my loved ones. So exactly when I need Him most, I ignore His helping hand. Yet there He waits for me still with His steadfast promises.

You are a forgiving God, gracious and compassionate, slow to anger and abounding in love.” Nehemiah 9:17.

I have loved you with an everlasting love.” Jeremiah31:3.

If we confess our sins, He is faithful and just and will forgive us our sins and purify us from all unrighteousness.” 1 John 1:9.

So I remember to ask forgiveness for neglecting my faithfulness to Him. Imagine for a moment if the only things we were blessed with daily were the things we remembered to thank Him for daily. A good night's sleep, waking up refreshed, sunshine or seasonable weather, shelter, a comfortable environment, rain to grow crops, water for washing, clothing, nourishing breakfast, lunch and dinner for most of us, loved ones, good health, a stable mind, education, capable professionals helping with all our needs, a means to make a living, means to get to a means to make a living and on and on... So thank You, Lord, for your divine providence.

And he fulfills even more promises: 'Light', 'Life', 'Redemption'

A generous person will prosper; whoever refreshes others will be refreshed.” Proverbs 11:25

In peace I will lie down and sleep, for You alone, Lord, make me dwell in safety.” Psalm 4:8

And we put our trust in Him: 'Freedom', 'Liberty', 'Peace of Mind'

I will say of the Lord, 'He is my refuge and my fortress, my God, in whom I trust.” Psalm 91:2

Teach me knowledge and good judgment, for I trust Your commands.” Psalm 119:66

As a result, we strive to do His will: 'Charity', 'Goodness', 'Good Will Towards Men'

Do to others as you would have them do to you.” Luke 6:31

A servant of the Lord must not quarrel but must be kind to everyone, a good teacher, and patient.” 2 Timothy 2:24

Whoever despises his neighbor is a sinner, but blessed is he who is generous to the poor.” Proverbs 14:21

All words to live by and from which to prosper.

Consider my unusual tree in my backyard that each fall rains down its golden leaves with gems of messages engraved on their undersides. How is it happening?

I remember a children's song we would sing in Sunday School when we read the parable about the foolish man who built his house upon the sand and the wise man who built his house upon the rock. The sand would represent the world or our own flawed hopes, dreams or expectations we can take care of everything by ourselves. The rock would be relying on the Lord, Jesus Christ to be our salvation from sin, death and the devil. When the rains, or trouble came, the floods rose up and the house on the sand fell flat. Whereas, when trouble came the house built on the rock stood firm.


The foolish man built his house upon the sand.

The foolish man built his house upon the sand.

The foolish man built his house upon the sand and the rains came tumbling down.

The rains came down as the floods came up.

The rains came down as the floods came up.

The rains came down as the floods came up and the house on the sand fell flat.


The wise man built his house upon the Rock.

The wise man built his house upon the Rock.

The wise man built his house upon the Rock and the rains came tumbling down.

The rains came down as the floods came up.

The rains came down as the floods came up.

The rains came down as the floods came up and the house on the rock stood firm.


So build your life on the Lord, Jesus Christ.

Build you life on the Lord, Jesus Christ.

Build your life on the Lord, Jesus Christ and the blessings will tumble down.

The blessings come down as your prayers go up.

The blessings come down as your prayers go up.

The blessings come down as your prayers go up so build your life on the Lord.”


Ah,ha! Maybe this explains the mystery of the tree. Troubles and crisis confront us daily. Sometimes big ones, sometimes small. Together they can create a flood that threatens to wash us away. If we turn to the Lord, our Rock in the storm, to help us navigate and withstand the onslaught we can survive. We only need to ask using prayer to talk to Him.

So as our prayers go up, the blessings rain down. Luckily, this doesn't only happen in the season of autumn. In the case of my tree that is symbolic. A reminder that those blessings are granted to me continuously. A reminder that I need to pray continuously. I need to thank Him continuously for all the good things He grants every day.

The world is a sinful environment full of corruption and danger and poor management that affects everyone living in it even those trying to follow God's commandments and live righteous lives according to the way He would want us to exist. We need to repent of our numerous sins because we fall short. But Christ has taken our sin upon Himself and died the death we deserved, defeated the evil one so that we may live with Him in heaven one day.

Blessings like 'Grace' and 'Mercy' come down to God's people but the unrighteous people also benefit from the gifts He gives. Beneficial rain falls on all people. Likewise 'Salvation' is for all people. It is a free gift. One needs only to repent of their sins and ask for 'Forgiveness'.

So when my blessing tree rains down blessings I gather them up and save them for a rainy day. And I say a prayer of 'Thanksgiving'.






Posted Mar 02, 2024
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Jonathan Page
March 02, 2024 17:25

A winner in my book! So great and uplifting! This is a beautiful tale with crisp, purposeful language. I liked this beautiful bit of prose: "A good night's sleep, waking up refreshed, sunshine or seasonable weather, shelter, a comfortable environment, rain to grow crops, water for washing, clothing, nourishing breakfast, lunch and dinner for most of us, loved ones, good health, a stable mind, education, capable professionals helping with all our needs, a means to make a living, means to get to a means to make a living and on and on..."

That was a particularly tough prompt to craft a story around, but I think you took up the challenge and hit it out of the park. I think there's a lot more you could do with this concept. Blessings raining down written on the leaves of a tree. Brilliant concept!

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:47

Thanks for liking and the corrections. Rushed to get it in before deadline.

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Jonathan Page
March 02, 2024 19:54

Trust me, I know the feeling!!

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Ty Warmbrodt
March 02, 2024 16:19

An uplifting and passionate message, Mary. I love that you included scripture.

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:19

What a blessing! Thank you:)

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Russell Mickler
March 02, 2024 14:25

Hey Mary!

The idea that a tree drops leaves with inscribed blessings is brilliant, and I'm going to shamelessly steal this from you :)

A very poignant story - thank you for sharing -

R

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:18

As long as you let me see the result of your theft (let's say 'borrow').
Glad you liked it enough to borrow it:).

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Alexis Araneta
March 02, 2024 13:11

Interesting take on the prompt ! Certainly very unique. I love the imagery of the tree with the golden leaves. Lovely job !

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:01

Thanks so much!

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Irene Duchess
March 30, 2024 21:39

love this, Mary. :)

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Rebecca Lewis
March 14, 2024 00:52

Your reflections hit home with the importance of faith and gratitude in our lives. It's clear you've put a lot of thought into the significance of the golden leaves and their messages, and your connection to biblical teachings adds a profound layer to your understanding of life's ups and downs. Your personal anecdotes make your perspective relatable and engaging, and the reminder to build our lives on a solid foundation of faith resonates. Overall, your insights are thought-provoking and serve as a powerful reminder of the importance of staying grounded in gratitude and trust, no matter what challenges come our way. Keep sharing your wisdom — it's inspiring!

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Mary Bendickson
March 14, 2024 04:29

Thank you. Glad it resonated with you.

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George Beasley
March 07, 2024 21:29

Loved this story, always need more grace and a great reminder that all blessings come from our Father.

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Mary Bendickson
March 08, 2024 00:26

Thank you kindly!

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Myranda Marie
March 07, 2024 21:17

Oh, what a beautiful and inspiring sermon this would be! I felt every bit of your writing as I read. As always, well done!

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Mary Bendickson
March 08, 2024 00:25

Thank you so much. You are always one of those blessings.

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Kristi Gott
March 07, 2024 06:03

I literally just came home from an incredibly inspiring Bible Study this evening, with wonderful people, a heartfelt and amazing message from the teacher, and I read your story. An incredible story. I believe God is sending us a message through you. Your story fits perfectly with the Bible Study I had tonight. It is a miracle that I came home and there was your story. Wow, please keep it up. The world needs stories like yours. :-) Sending blessings :-)

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Mary Bendickson
March 07, 2024 06:29

Blessings to you, too.

Thanks for liking my donut story. That one was about my mom. Oh, and my brother. I do a lot of creative non-fiction.
I am experimenting with writing also so my stories do range from inspirational to 'Did I really write that!'

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Kristi Gott
March 07, 2024 06:33

I understand! Me too, lol! :-) Looking forward to reading more of your stories. You've got talent and skill!

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Mary Bendickson
March 07, 2024 12:36

Thanks for the encouragement. Same back to you.

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Tommy Goround
March 06, 2024 21:36

This one made me happy. Thank you.

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Mary Bendickson
March 07, 2024 05:12

What a blessing to make you happy!

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Lily Finch
March 05, 2024 16:48

Mary, cool concept. I wrote a similar story a while back. I like yours better. The concept intrigues me still. I think there is something everyone can take from this one. Well done. LF6

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Mary Bendickson
March 05, 2024 18:15

Must have missed yours or my memory... what was I saying? Glad you liked it.😁

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Jack Kimball
March 05, 2024 16:06

Hey Mary,
I love the take on the prompt where the twist is leaves have messages. This is the most unique view I've read. I also really love the messages, all positive. Great job on the prompt.

Crossing my fingers for your win.

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Mary Bendickson
March 05, 2024 18:12

What a blessing you think so. Thank you.😊

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Angela M
March 05, 2024 14:17

What a beautiful image and amazing metaphor on how life is full of abundance and blessings.

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Mary Bendickson
March 05, 2024 18:11

A blessing to me that you enjoyed it.

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Asia W
March 05, 2024 08:34

This is so delightful, I absolutely love what you've written here Mary!

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Mary Bendickson
March 05, 2024 16:46

Thank you! So glad it touched you. That's a blessing to me.

Thanks for the follow.

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Michelle Oliver
March 04, 2024 08:43

This is beautiful Mary, so much to be grateful for. I like the idea of gathering the blessings up and saving them for a rainy day.

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Mary Bendickson
March 04, 2024 16:38

So glad you liked it. What a blessing!

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Corey Melin
March 04, 2024 01:35

Very well done. An uplifting story that this world needs daily as we want to rule ourselves but fail throughout history. Good read

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Mary Bendickson
March 04, 2024 04:28

Thanks for likingit.

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John Rutherford
March 03, 2024 11:53

A feel-good story Mary. Well done.

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Mary Bendickson
March 03, 2024 14:27

Thanks for liking.

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Wally Schmidt
March 03, 2024 00:36

Your story brought me back to a place I used to work. At the holidays we had a huge tree with branches that spread out the length of the wall that someone had painted. In a basket next to the tree there were colorful leaves made out of construction paper. Whoever felt like it could write down what they were thankful for and tape it on one of the branches. At first the 'blessings' were generic (health, love, kids) but soon people started writing very specific things. Not only was it a wonderful thing to be able to stop and reflect about what we were thankful for, but it really gave the employees an opportunity to learn about each other in a personal and meaningful way.
Thank you for this reminder to be grateful for all things big and small and for sharing this story.

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Mary Bendickson
March 03, 2024 03:48

So happy you could relate and liked it.

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Wendy M
March 02, 2024 23:47

The Blessings Tree is a delightful concept. Well done.

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Mary Bendickson
March 03, 2024 02:29

Thanks so much. And yes artistic is very good.

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Bill Miller
March 02, 2024 22:44

Beautiful story Mary. I thought I recognized the fruits of the spirit from Galatians at the start of the story and was blessed to read many other inspirational Bible quotes in your story. Well done!

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 22:51

Right you are. I once wrote a children's song to be used while giving a child a back rub using those fruits. Glad you liked it.

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March 02, 2024 19:58

I'll be very surprised if this doesn't get at least shortlisted! 💖

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 20:11

What a nice thing to say! Thank you😊. I almost didn't put it in contest 'cause I was rushing so much last night to get it in before deadline. I've read so many great stories already for these prompts and there are a record number entered, for what I have seen so far.

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March 02, 2024 13:07

Uplifting and inspiring. Easy to forget the things we have to be grateful for when we are caught up in the unending cycle of racing around trying to achieve something
Thanks for this pause for reflection Mary

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:02

I am so glad it touched you. Thanks.

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Christy Morgan
March 02, 2024 12:31

Thanks for the needful reminder. Your story is genuine and heartfelt.

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 19:00

Why, thank you kindly. Quite the blessing!

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March 02, 2024 07:07

We have soooo much to be thankful for. Such a spiritual way to interpret this prompt. We build our faith not on sand (man's philosophies and reasonings or our own imperfect understanding) but on rock (Jesus teachings, Bible principles and beliefs in the Creator which we glean from seeing the marvels of His creations and His tangible blessings.) You could tweak this story to fit the wind prompt this week! Wind blowing the leaves from the tree. Loved the thought that went into this very different story. Thanks, Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
March 02, 2024 18:29

Thank you so much. I wanted to convey so much more but you stated it well. Almost didn't enter into contest 'cause are so many and I already read some awesome ones.

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