The Sound of Light

Christian Contemporary Speculative

Written in response to: "Hide something from your reader until the very end." as part of Hidden Threads.

The Sound of Light

By: Eric Schrag

Part 1 –

DO you remember the movie Contact? I owe a lot to Carl for that story. It’s all because of the leading star (pun intended), Ellie, that I became a radio astronomer.

The movie came out around the time I was a teenager, and I had better things to do than watch a sci-fi drama. It looked like it was going to be a slow and boring love story with a little outerspace sprinkled in for good measure. But my girlfriend at the time was obsessed with Matthew McConaughey, so she dragged me to the theater to see it on the big screen.

I’m so glad she did though, because it changed my life!

Like I said, I was a teenager. And like most teenagers, I had no idea what job I wanted to do when I graduated. But as soon as that movie ended, I knew what I was going to be.

While walking her home after our evening movie date, I told Theresa my big plans to study astronomy. She just chuckled warmly and reminded me that I said the same thing after we watched Karate Kid together as children.

Yes, we’ve known each other that long… and yes, I did end up studying karate, thank you very much. But so did she; and she was way better at it than me... mostly because she stuck with it, while I quit after the first few lessons.

I jokingly called her “Danielle San” one time… and only one time. When I made the wisecrack, she hadn’t quite learned the discipline involved in the art yet. I thought it was clever, but she smarted me good for it!

Theresa and I had been neighbors since elementary school, and our parents took turns babysitting each other’s kids every now and then. Whenever we ended up at my house, I chose the movies we would watch—the good ones.

Anyway, back to our movie date. As we moseyed along the old fashioned, lamp lit, cobblestone street leading into our cul-de-sac, reminiscing the nostalgia of those good old days, Theresa went on to recall how I wanted to be an archaeologist after we watched Indiana Jones for the first time, then a paleontologist when Jurassic Park came out, and the very next year, a crypto-linguist, after watching Stargate.

“I’m serious this time Theresa,” I persuaded, “This isn’t one of those childish fantasies. I’m determined this time. I am going to be a radio astronomer!”

“Okay, okay,” she relented. “It certainly would be a fitting occupation for you, considering your name.”

“What do you mean?” I asked, confused. “I was named after a Roman god… or maybe Greek… one of those anyway.”

“Most of the heavenly bodies were named after myths and lore in some form or fashion. Perseus is also the name of a group of stars. It’s actually one of my favorites,” she turned her head and smirked at my reaction. “Not because it’s your name, but because of how the constellation looks… to me anyway. Come on. I’ll show you.”

She cradled my arm tightly in hers and pulled me through the perfectly manicured row of evergreen bushes that lined the sidewalk like a hedge maze in a palace garden. The scent of pine needles followed us as we strolled into the empty field to our right. Each step took us farther from the streetlights and further into the darkness.

During the day, the park was always bustling with activity: ultimate Frisbee, soccer, volleyball, picnickers—oh man, the smell of grilling hotdogs and burgers made my mouth water every day in summer; but our neighborhood was relatively quiet and peaceful at night, so no one ever really went there to cause trouble or do things that other people might do in the dark.

At that moment though, only the songs of crickets and the intermittent flashes of fireflies accompanied us. Which got me thinking… “Why haven’t we ever come here at night before?” I asked, the darkness hiding my mischievous grin, but I knew she caught my drift. I also knew that I would never get that lucky because Theresa was a Christian and was ‘saving herself’ for marriage. But that made her all the more appealing to me, and I was willing to respect her wishes because I was planning to be ‘the one’.

“Get your mind out of the gutter, and your eyes up there, mister!” she exclaimed in mock disgust, then pointed directly overhead. “You see that kind of hook right there? And the trapezoid-looking body? And the arch coming out of the back?”

The way she described it was so apt that I immediately found what she was pointing at. “I do see it! Wow! That’s me?” I jested.

“That’s Perseus,” she confirmed, ignoring my vanity. “It’s supposed to look like the hero who lopped off the head of Medusa, but to me it looks more like a winged horse, flying in that direction.” She motioned with her hand. “In my opinion, it actually looks more like Pegasus than that square there,” she added, nonchalantly pointing a little lower down in the sky. “Do see what I’m talking about?”

I verified that I did, in fact, see what she was implying. And from that point on, I was unable to picture anything else. Pegasus was now just a big square, and Perseus would forever be cemented in my brain as a flying horse, galloping toward the east.

She continued her impromptu lesson on the constellations, but I was transfixed. The last thing I heard of the conversation was her almost whispering in a soft, awed voice, “God sure is amazing to have created all this for us.”

Part 2 –

YOU know what the craziest thing is? That was the last thing I ever heard her say. She literally died the next day in a freak car accident, and her words have haunted me to this day, “God sure is amazing…” Yeah right. If He was so amazing, why did He let her die? Out of all the people in the world, why’d He have to take her? I refuse to believe in a God like that. Even if He were to come down from Heaven and speak directly to me, I still wouldn’t believe.

But I digress. You wanted to know how I ended up here at this tedious job working at the ‘Square Kilometer Array’ listening for little green men. Well, that’s how it happened. I was just one of the fortunate few who were chosen to man this monster of a radio telescope.

“That’s… quite a story,” my intern for the evening, Suugii, remarked, finally breaking the silence—both from the lull in my monologue and the telescope speakers. “Sorry to hear that. It sounds like she was a really nice girl.”

Sugawari, Suugii for short, was usually the chatterbox of the bunch. I think she was fluent in at least ten different languages, and could converse with anyone in our close-knit group, in their own native tongue. She must have seen Stargate too! But tonight, she let me do the talking. And, since it was just the two of us left in the building, I poured my heart out. It was the first time I'd done that in I don’t know how long, and it was somewhat therapeutic to get it all off my chest. I have to admit, for as much talking as Suugii normally did, I was rather impressed with her attentive listening skills... must come with the territory.

As far as radio astronomy interns go, Sugawari was top of the line. I barely had to teach her anything. She effortlessly slid into the position, hardly needing any oversight. But since tonight seemed to be slow and uneventful, I gave her the option to leave early. She jumped at the opportunity and was out the door before I could even look up from changing frequencies on the modulator. I hope it wasn’t because of my story.

Now that I was alone with my thoughts of bygone days—or more accurately, nights—I adjusted the coordinates so the array would point toward my namesake. And, while waiting the excessively long period of time it takes for a kilometer’s-worth of telescopic antennae to turn, I went outside to enjoy the crisp, evening air.

The humming of the servos spinning on their axes filled the otherwise peaceful expanse around me. I gazed up, instantly spotting the winged horse leaping across the southwestern sky, and my mind drifted to what could have been, what might have been, if things were different. The faint hint of pine trees in the distance tickled my nose as I stood there, staring into space.

God sure is amazing to have created all this for us. The soft words replayed in my mind.

“Please,” I harrumphed, and stormed back inside, expecting my footsteps on the tile floor to be the only sound I would hear... but they weren’t!

There was a low, oscillating tone reverberating from the speakers. It gradually rose in pitch, then fell abruptly, then rose again in a slightly different tone. The sequence repeated three times before it completely faded out and the room went deathly silent.

I dashed over to the phone and dialed Suugii’s number. Hopefully, she hadn’t gotten too far yet… and still had cell service. This was big! I needed someone else here to verify these findings.

Part 3 –

“BELIEVE me, I’m just as stunned as you are. What do you think it could be? A pulsar?” Sugawari admitted, as we played back the sequence for the umpteenth time.

“Not a pulsar. The pitch is too low, and the duration is too drawn out... maybe radio waves?” I responded skeptically.

“It’s coming from too far away to be anything sent from Earth. Could it be CBR?” But before I could reply, she corrected herself, “No… Cosmic Background Radiation would sound more like static, wouldn’t it? At least from the images I’ve seen, that’s what it looks like it would sound like… if that makes sense... Nevermind.”

“Perhaps they’re radio waves coming from another planet? An alien world? Could you imagine? We might be the first people on Earth to hear a message from another intelligent species,” I wondered aloud.

We brainstormed for the next few minutes, and I began furiously taking notes on the facts of the matter:

1) Low pitch

2) Long duration

3) Triple sequence of varying tones

4) Too far to have come from Earth

“Doppler effect!” Suugii cried out, startling me into streaking my pencil across the paper. “It’s far away right? Well, the farther away it is, the more the bandwidth would be stretched. So, the tones would naturally be longer and lower than normal.”

“Good thinking. You might be on to something there! Let’s speed up the playback and see if that does anything,” I said excitedly, mind racing as I prepared myself for what we might hear next.

HhhoooEeeeHhhiiiiiaaayyyaaaavvv

The enigmatic tones exuded from the speakers, bounced off the walls, and echoed back into our ears. It was such an eerie sound I was reluctant to play it again, but knew I had to.

HhhoooEeeeHhhiiiiiaaayyyaaaavvv

“Maybe that’s ‘Hello’ in some alien language?! You know a bunch of languages, don’t you Suugii? Does that sound familiar to you?” I joked.

After a long pause, she made a statement that completely caught me off guard. “Actually… it does sound like a language I’ve heard before. But it sounds like it’s backmasked.”

“Say what now?”

“Backmasked, like it’s being played in reverse.”

“I know what backmasking is. A couple songs I’ve heard growing up did that. There were random bits in certain songs that, if you played them backwards, would have some sort of subliminal message hidden in them.”

“Well, perhaps that’s what this is... Maybe the aliens are transmitting subliminal messages to us while we sleep?” Sugawari said, somewhat tongue in cheek.

I set up the playback so the output would be in reverse and pressed enter.

Vvvaaaayyyiiiiiaaahheeeeooohhh

“Can you clean up the distortion a bit more?” she asked.

I did so, and replayed the audio.

Vaya He Oh

“Via… he… oh?” I attempted to repeat what I just heard, totally baffled.

“That can’t be right,” Suugii commented. “Play it again… please.”

Vaya He Oh

She just sat there, dumbstruck. “Again!”

Vaya He Oh

“What is it? Do you know what it says?” I inquired, almost impatiently now.

“I know what language this is,” Sugawari somberly admitted.

I couldn’t contain myself anymore. “Well? What language is it? Can you translate it?”

“It really is the strangest thing... the language is… ancient Hebrew!”

“Okay?! And…?”

“It says…, ‘Let there be light!’”

The End

Posted Jul 27, 2025
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Kevin Blount
21:10 Aug 06, 2025

Okay, ya caught me off-guard. And I thought Alan Moore’s variant of that infamous line was interesting.

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Rich Graces
02:46 Aug 07, 2025

Awesome! My goal of "a big surprise at the end" has been achieved ;-)
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Kevin!
Just to be sure though, which phrase are you speaking of? I didn't intentionally quote anyone. But I guess great minds think alike.

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Raz Shacham
04:12 Aug 06, 2025

I absolutely loved this story. At first, I was drawn in because I too once had a crush on Matthew McConaughey and practiced karate—it made me smile. You built the narrator’s connection with Theresa so naturally and effortlessly that I was genuinely surprised to discover she had died. The monologue to the intern that followed was deeply moving, and the ending, especially, gave me chills.

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Rich Graces
02:49 Aug 07, 2025

I'm so glad to hear the final effect of the "punchline" at the end was as I had planned. I hope my usage of Hebrew accurately transliterated ;-)

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Raz Shacham
03:10 Aug 07, 2025

It sure did — it translated to 'flow,' 'earth' or 'dirt,' and 'flower.' (You can always check with me — I happen to be a certified translator.)

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Rich Graces
01:48 Aug 08, 2025

Thanks for the offer, Raz. I might just take advantage of your expertise in the future.
Those were the names I used in "Secret History of Water". I'm glad they worked well. But I meant, does "Vaya He Oh" transliterate closely enough to the final phrase that gave you chills? ;-)
It sounds like you truly enjoy my stories for their subtleties. If that's the case, you may like my full-length sci-fi/fantasy novel named, "Horizon Enigma" entertaining. I entered it into a contest on Amazon where the more readers I get, the higher my chances of being recognized. It is full of barely imperceptible "hints" like Secret History of Water and Sound of Light.

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Raz Shacham
02:53 Aug 08, 2025

Congratulations on your full-length novel—I’ll definitely check it out. The actual phrase from Genesis is transliterated as 'vayehi or' (‘let there be light’).

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Rich Graces
17:46 Aug 08, 2025

Oh no... I misspelled the last word. I will have to change that. Must be why I didn't win this week's prompt ;-) Just kidding. I truly appreciate your input very much! Thank you so much for your assistance Raz! I hope you find no errors in Horizon Enigma.
If, by chance, you don't end up getting that one, you can check out my Booksie page with other short stories (some of which seem fairly similar to a few of yours).

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