Snatched

Crime Fiction Horror

Written in response to: "Include the line “We don't have time for this” in your story." as part of In Real Time.

The heat in Bangkok was a physical weight, pressing down on the back of Marcus’s neck as he adjusted the damp rag in his grip. Beside him, Leo chain-smoked, the glowing tip of his cigarette a nervous firefly in the gloom of the soi

Their target was a boy, no older than seven, who walked this alley every afternoon to buy mango sticky rice from the old woman at the end. A routine. A vulnerability.

The boy, Niran, arrived precisely at 4:17 PM, his small sandals slapping against the cracked concrete. He was humming a tune, his eyes fixed on the coins clutched in his fist. He didn't see Marcus step out from behind the corrugated iron shutter. He didn't feel the cloth clamp down over his nose and mouth until the chemical sting had already pulled him under.

They bundled him into the back of the rusted Toyota, Leo’s hands shaking as he fumbled with the zip ties. Marcus sped away, the city’s neon blur bleeding into a muddy smear of brown and grey as they headed for the outskirts. Their destination was a safehouse—a derelict teakwood house on stilts, half-swallowed by overgrown ferns and the relentless jungle.

The boy woke an hour later. He didn't scream. He didn't cry. He just stared at them with large, dark eyes that reflected the single naked bulb swinging from the ceiling. Leo, tasked with watching him, found the silence more unnerving than any tantrum. He paced, chainsmoking, while the boy sat perfectly still, his small hands bound behind his back.

“He’s in shock,” Leo muttered, wiping sweat from his brow. “That’s good. Makes it easier.”

Marcus was on the satellite phone, his voice a low growl of negotiation. The ransom demand was set—five million baht. The boy’s father was a wealthy property developer. It would be paid.

That was when the cicadas stopped.

It happened at dusk. The deafening, rhythmic screech that had been the jungle’s heartbeat ceased. A profound, sucking silence fell over the house. Leo went to the window, peering through the slatted wood. The ferns outside were motionless. The air grew cold—an impossible, bone-deep chill that made his sweat turn to ice on his skin.

“Marcus,” he whispered.

Marcus was counting the cash the little they had left-his back to the room. “What?”

“The boy… he’s smiling.”

Marcus turned. Niran was indeed smiling, a serene, beatific expression that stretched his thin lips too wide. His eyes, however, were not smiling. They were voids—black pools that drank the light. And behind him, on the peeling lime-green wall, a shadow was moving. It didn't match the boy’s small form. It was tall, gaunt, and angular, with limbs that bent in too many places. It twisted and writhed, as if trying to peel itself out of the plaster.

“Get away from him,” Marcus ordered, his voice cracking.

Leo scrambled back. The light bulb flickered. The smell of burning jasmine and wet earth filled the room, thick and cloying. The shadow on the wall detached itself, slithering across the ceiling, dripping a viscous, non-existent darkness.

Niran’s voice, when he finally spoke, was not a child’s. It was a chorus of whispers, dry as husks, chattering over each other. “My grandfather was a phii doctor. He taught me the old songs. The ones that invite them in.”

Marcus lunged for the door, but the wood had warped, the lock fused. He could hear his own heartbeat, a frantic drum against his ribs. The shadow coalesced in the corner, taking a vaguely humanoid shape with a mouth that opened sideways, revealing a maw of splintered teeth.

Leo, driven by pure panic, grabbed a knife and advanced on the boy. “We don’t make deals with ghosts!” he screamed.

The shadow moved faster than he thought. It didn't strike Leo; it simply passed through him. Leo froze, his eyes wide, the knife clattering from his hand. A thin trickle of blood ran from his nose, then his ears. He crumpled to the floor, his limbs twitching, his mouth open in a silent scream that would never end.

Marcus backed against the far wall, his hands up. The boy rose, the zip ties snapping like dry twigs. He walked past Leo’s quivering body and stood before Marcus, his head tilted at an unnatural angle. The shadow loomed behind him, a guardian made of nightmare.

“The money?” Niran asked, his voice now a soft, mocking lilt. “You can keep whatever money you have. It’s in the bag. But I was hoping you could carry a message for my father. Tell him the jungle remembers what he bulldozed. Tell him we are coming to collect.”

He reached out a tiny, clammy hand and placed it on Marcus’s chest. The cold that emanated from it seized his heart, not stopping it, but slowing it to a glacial, painful crawl. Marcus felt every second stretch into an hour, every breath a labour.

Then the boy smiled his serene smile, turned, and walked to the open window. He looked back once, his dark eyes glittering. The shadow seeped back into his silhouette, and he stepped out into the night, vanishing without a sound.

Marcus was left in the frozen house with the corpse of his partner, a wallet of some money, and a heart that now pumped ice water through his veins. He couldn't move. He couldn't call for help. He just sat, staring at the window, as the first rays of dawn bled through the trees. He knew the boy would be found wandering near a temple, serene and unharmed, his story of the two bad farang men who tried to take him a legend in the making. Marcus also knew that the cold in his chest would never leave. It was a timer—a promise.

The cicadas started their scream again, a deafening wave of sound that shattered the silence. Outside, he heard the distant, frantic honking of a car—the police, perhaps, finally tracing the ransom call. He tried to stand, to wave, to signal, but his limbs were leaden.

The front door splintered open. Uniformed men flooded the room, their voices a jumble of Thai and English. They saw Leo. They saw the men. They saw Marcus, slumped and pale. A young officer knelt beside him, pressing a radio to his ear.

Marcus’s lips moved, but only a froth of cold saliva emerged. His vision was narrowing to a pinprick. The officer shook his head and called for a medic.

As the world faded to black, Marcus felt the phantom touch of the boy’s hand on his chest one last time, and he understood that the darkness wasn't an end. It was merely the beginning of his journey to the place the boy had come from. The last thing he heard, before the black tide consumed him, was the officer’s frantic, crackling voice over the radio, barking orders.

The medic pushed through, but Marcus was gone. The officer looked at his watch, then at the body, a flicker of frustration breaking through his professional calm.

“Forget him,” he snapped into the radio. “We have a man down and a missing child. We don’t have time for this.”

The END

Posted Aug 29, 2026
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