Last Call

Drama Fiction

Written in response to: "Set your story during the packing up of a home, office, or life." as part of What We Carry.

On an overcast chilly Saturday in October, Contessa Eleonora moved into the apartment across from mine in Manhattan. At the time, I didn’t know she was a Contessa, just that she arrived with an absurd quantity of belongings and a regal confidence in the way she ordered about the half-dozen people carrying her things into the apartment. I watched through my peephole after being woken by the commotion.

After a few minutes, I returned to bed. Working as an options salesman on Wall Street, I woke at 6:30 a.m. and returned home most nights after 9. My only recreation was an occasional night out drinking with customers, using my own money and hours of sleep that I could never replace.

Having arrived in New York six months previously, I was still curious about everything and everyone.

My apartment was tiny and faced the inner courtyard, a narrow, dark space that would be more properly called a ventilation shaft. Hers faced the street and was three times the size. Curious about my new neighbor, I scrolled through the footage from my Ring camera later that week. While I worked like a dog on Wall Street, my new neighbor went out after 11 a.m. each morning and passed in and out of her door more in one day than I did in a week. She was taller than I had first thought. And always dressed in colorful, fashionable outfits. She had a presence; she never rushed. Even when the elevator took too long, she stood perfectly still, never glancing at her phone as most people do.

Proximity making it probable, we had a chance encounter. One afternoon, without introducing herself, she simply asked, “Could you help me carry this downstairs?” Her gaze dropped to a box in her doorway.

“Sure,” I said, without thinking, and picked it up. It held something surprisingly heavy. I followed her to the elevator, wondering if she had mistaken me for someone else. Holding the heavy box, struggling to maintain my footing, I glanced at her. She looked away. 

“I’m in 9D,” I offered. “New to the building?”

“Yes.” The single syllable carried a European accent. She looked at me. “I’m Eleonora.”

She offered her hand to shake, but mine were occupied with the box. “Welcome to the building!” I said instead.

“What do you do in New York?”

“Options broker.” 'broker' being a euphemism for salesperson.

“Fascinating.” Once outside, she gestured at a black sedan, whose driver rushed over to take the box out of my arms. I took out a business card and pushed it into her hand, just before she and the car departed.

Weeks later, I received a text message from an unknown number.

“Stop by my apartment for a glass of wine at 7 pm? – Contessa Eleonora.”

It confused me. I had several strange coworkers, but none who seemed likely to give themselves the name of Contessa Eleonora. My mind spun trying to figure out who the message was from – ‘Contessa’ would be someone ridiculously high above my social circle in New York, or possibly an OnlyFans user handle. Then I remembered my neighbor. “Happy too."

At seven, I hesitantly knocked on her door, half-expecting a confused, defensive response. I felt immense relief when she opened the door with a welcoming smile.

I entered a realm that bore no resemblance to the world outside. The room looked like a cross between an art gallery and a history museum. She gestured for me to sit on the sofa and pushed a button. BBC News sprang to life on a somewhat modest TV.

“Every night I watch the BBC,” she said and motioned for me to sit on a sofa. As I watched the opening segment about a war someplace, she poured two glasses of red wine before settling in on the opposite end of the sofa.

We watched the news together. She made soft sounds, letting out an occasional “ooh” and “poor things” to images of world disasters and political protests. Her accent was untraceable, almost but not quite Italian. At 8 pm, she stood and said, “Thanks for stopping by,” before going off to rinse the glasses. I was hoping for a second glass. “You can let yourself out.”

As I reached the door, I glanced back. She was watching me with a strange interest. I was halfway out, and it would have been rude to turn around.

I searched the name I saw on the deliveries outside her door: Eleonora di Borromeo. She didn’t have a Facebook account but had a publicist. Photos appeared of her at celebrity-studded charity balls and art gallery openings. Nothing that really explained who she was or what she did in New York.

For the next two weeks, invitations to watch the news with her continued: “To practice English”. Gradually, almost as an afterthought, she began to tell me bits and pieces about things happening in her life. Her dislike of air travel in America. The very talented architect remodelling her family’s apartment building in Tribeca. The way she tipped every attendant at her father’s retirement home on the Upper East Side. Her Italian father (yes, she was Italian) had taken a liking to America at some point in his life, and tried to move their entire family here, and now only he remained.

“Pay extra,” she told me, “and people will help you later.” 

“Why would they?”

“Just think of all the people who go to work and listen to complaints all day. When something good comes up, who are they going to call?”

As if on cue, her mobile rang.

She began to speak in Italian, or perhaps it was French; I couldn’t tell. She had the tone of giving instructions to someone. When she hung up, she turned to me.

“My friend, Rebecca, her mother’s estate fell into her hands, but is in probate at least a year.”

"In probate?"

"She would like to sell options on Maxna Insurance shares. The ones she's inheriting."

Until that moment, I assumed she hadn’t been listening to me at all. Now it was clear she was aware of my job and that, simply for being her friend, I had been given a client. 

That single trade, done at a hefty premium, cemented my career at FNI Options. I was promoted to Sales Director, no longer a lowly Associate.

With the new title came freedom to be out of the office to scout new business. I was no longer chained to my desk. I began joining Eleonora’s lunches and dinners with her friends from every profession and position. I became to be on a first-name basis with many of them. With a crowd, she was gracious, polite, charming, yet kept a certain distance. Parties ended on time; no one stayed past ten, and there were none of the wild late-night outbursts of a typical American gathering.

Despite our age difference (she seemed 10 years older than I), I felt we had become a team. Perhaps even a couple. I decided to ask her - if we were, something. But I needed to find the right moment.

The next evening, we were watching the BBC at the usual time. As I sipped my glass of Barolo, the BBC presenter talked about the war in Ukraine, an earthquake in Venezuela, a political protest in Berlin, struggles of the new Mexican president. The BBC's coverage of all the tragic events of the world was endless. Eleonora sighed, and oohed, and groaned. 

When the presenter moved on to the world weather report was my chance.

“There’s something I’d like to ask you, Eleonora.”

But her gaze remained fixed on the weather map of the Middle East.

“Eleanora?”

On the television, the image shifted.

“Fascinating,” she said of the heavy rains on the African continent, then added, “Help yourself to another glass; the bottle is on the kitchen counter.” 

Wanting to be agreeable, I went to the kitchen, refilled my glass and watched the rest of the news in silence until she told me to let myself out as usual.

The next night, I didn’t receive a text message. At 7 pm, I knocked on her door. No one answered. I sent a text; she didn’t reply. Two days later, I received a brief message: “I’ll contact you in a few days.”

Weeks passed. I checked my Ring camera; there was only one video of her leaving with a carry-on, the day after we had watched the weather report together. Like an expired call option, it appeared our time together might have expired.

While I was waiting to hear from her, her friends, Rebecca, Stephen, Boris, and others continued to contact me, asking if I had heard anything from her, and what gatherings might she have on the calendar. I said I had spoken to her, a small white lie, and she was fine.

Some mentioned about an ex-husband. Some asked about a medical treatment. Boris about a hotel project in Morocco. They treated me as her close confidant, someone who might know things they did not. I remained non-committal. They called again after a week or two. When they did, I shared gossip about people we knew; I began to ask them for small favors under the pretense that it would ‘help Eleonora’, in return I introduced them to interesting people that others had introduced to me. The absence of Eleonora caused my ‘Eleonora network’ to grow. Business deals arrived at my doorstep. I was given 2% of a real estate project (worth more than I could make in a decade of salary) when Boris needed an American name on a public registry to represent an investor in the Middle East. I learned to impress people with little mentions my connections, to give compliments, to not to ask questions except about happy things, just as Eleonora had taught me.

I hoped for one last call from Eleonora. It never came. The final text I receive was an automated notice her number had been disconnected. Her publicist began posting updates of Countessa Eleonora attending events in London and around Europe. 

Months after she left, movers came to carry her belongings away. I watched for her any hint of her presence, but there was none.

I think often of our time together. Intimate, and yet so carefully distant. What I regret most is never asking the only question that mattered: why me?

Posted Aug 23, 2026
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Louise Chambers
August 23, 2026 20:34

This was an interesting read and reminded me of an old black and white film. A bit ‘Strangers on a train’ meets Alfred Hitchcock. If you know what I mean. It had all of those old time feelings about it. I could see Eleonara smoking with one of those long cigarette holders! Thank you for sharing it.

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August 24, 2026 00:42

Thanks! That's exactly what I was going after! In a future edition I'll add a cigarette holder;)

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JF Bacon
August 24, 2026 14:22

Totally agree with Louise, I could hear the narrator from Sunset Boulevard taking me through this. I enjoyed it. Well done, Scott.

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Kate Winchester
September 06, 2026 02:11

I like how it started with him spying on her moving in, and I like the connection they built. At first, I felt that she knew he wanted to be something more and that’s why she left, but she’s so mysterious-which makes her interesting- it was probably something else. I also like how the MC used her as an advantage and even more when she was absent.

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September 06, 2026 07:51

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Happy to hear the story had some mystery and intrigue. I wasn't sure whether she was being manipulative or just living in the present, perhaps the same situation could be interpreted two different ways.

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Kate Winchester
September 06, 2026 13:38

Welcome. Yeah, I think she’s a little manipulative, but the MC benefited from it too, so it’s not all bad lol.

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September 02, 2026 22:53

This was a fantastic read! Mysterious, elegant, and very captivating. The contrast between the fast-paced Wall Street lifestyle and Contessa Eleonora's quiet, calculated persona made for such a compelling dynamic. I loved how her influence completely transformed the narrator's life without her ever dropping her mystery or distance. That final question lingering at the end was the perfect touch.
Beautifully written!

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September 06, 2026 07:52

Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy the hear the mystery worked.

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Marjolein Greebe
August 29, 2026 12:16

The moment that really landed for me was when Eleonora suddenly hands him a client and he realises she had been listening to him all along. It quietly changes the whole relationship: what looked almost casual suddenly feels deliberate, and from there you start wondering whether she had been shaping his future from the beginning. Really enjoyed that turn, Scott.

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September 06, 2026 07:53

Thanks for reading and your comment, Marojlein!

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Akihiro Moroto
August 27, 2026 12:15

The elusive 'Fixer'. They do exist, or do they? You have given us a glimpse of one of them- a name, even: Countessa Eleonora! Being 'groomed' does come to mind, but it seemed beneficial in a way for the recent NYC transplant options broker, too. Eleonora's every action and response are so calculated—a test. In a way, when one diverts from that, her response, 'fascinating, '= concludes the arrangements. I had the same question throughout the story as the MC asked- 'why me?' I wonder if he was her target all along, and once the fix was done and the connections were made, Countessa was on to the next fix elsewhere. It was a fun read, Scott. Thank you for sharing!

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September 06, 2026 08:00

Thanks for reading! Yeah, I was aiming for someone who might be a PG rated female version of epstein. New york is full of wealthy socialites who connect people and do deals. I kind of kept it open ended though maybe she was just being nice to him or need companionship.

I realized how corrupt New York can be when I took my kindergarten aged daughter to a private school interview, and the admission person said "the waitlist was full". And left me waiting with a long awkward pause. I said thanks for her time and left. Checking in with my new york colleagues the next day, they said that pause is when I was supposed to offer a bribe ("donation") or let her know what important people I knew and how I might benefit her or the school. Wow. Things don't work like that in the Midwest.

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Alex Merola
August 23, 2026 17:27

Scott, I thought the narrator's life and career literally mirror the mechanics of the financial instruments he sells. I felt that the relationship between the narrator and Eleonora was complex yet deeply compelling. The transition of the narrator inheriting her social network is a clever narrative turn. I felt the narrator being groomed as part of a larger social machinery was a bit predictable. However, thanks for a good read.

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September 06, 2026 07:52

Thanks for reading and your comment, Alex!

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Liza Mischel
September 01, 2026 21:02

I loved how Eleonora’s absence became almost as influential as her presence, especially once her whole network began flowing through him. That final “why me?” was such a quietly unsettling note to leave us on. Great read!

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Marty B
August 24, 2026 04:39

The Contessa is an awesome character!
The MC though was passive in this relationship, things happened to him through Eleonora, and her friends, but he did little himself. 'Proximity making it probable' is the entire agency he took in this.
It would have been interesting if he worked to take advantage not of Eleonora, but of her friends, or if he leaned in more to the 'small favors under the pretense that it would ‘help Eleonora’,

Thanks!

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August 24, 2026 05:25

Thanks so much for your feedback! early days. I just sketched this out and suddenly I was at 1800 words. I get your point! the really interesting story might be the Mr Ripley like plot of how he takes her role after she leaves. I'll brew on how to make that scene longer and more active. The MC making things happen, instead of things happening to him.

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August 23, 2026 10:23

I've had the idea of writing a good ole fashioned tale of a narrator meeting a mysterious, fascinating person, like those novels of yesteryear, and this is my first attempt at writing that sort of story.

One weakness is right now things happen to the main character, rather than him making things happen.

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