2026 Last Notice

Historical Fiction Sad Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Write about a character in search of — or yearning for — something or someone." as part of Beyond Reach with Kobo.

Daughter: You’re pacing again.Father: They’re late. If you’re going to steal a man’s house, you’d think you’d at least be on time.Daughter: That’s not how this works.Father: Don’t start with me. I’ve read every letter, every “notice of intent,” every “final warning.” Funny word, “final.” They keep finding new ones.Daughter: You know this isn’t your fault.Father: The papers say otherwise. “Failure to comply.” “Failure to remit.” “Failure.” They use that word a lot.Daughter: Lawyers like labels. Makes it easier to forget you’re a person.Father: He shook my hand, you know. That first Zoom call. The “assistance attorney.” Said they were here to help me navigate the relief programs.Daughter: You believed him.Father: Your mother said I shouldn’t.Daughter: She always could smell rot under fresh paint.Father: I told her, “At least someone’s on our side this time.”Daughter: You still think that was the moment everything broke?Father: No. The moment everything broke was when they wheeled you out past that stupid “Heroes Work Here” banner.Daughter: Dad—Father: No. You don’t get to make that softer. They called from a blocked number. Wouldn’t even say your name at first, just “your loved one.” Like you were interchangeable. Like they had a list and I was supposed to guess.Daughter: I was the only one you could have meant.Father: I said, “My wife or my daughter?” Like the world had turned into some sick game show.Daughter: And then both.Father: And then both.Daughter: You’re gripping the banister too tight. It’s just wood.Father: It’s the last thing your mother varnished before they closed her shop. She said, “At least the house will outlast us.”Daughter: She was trying to be funny.Father: This isn’t what I signed up for. I signed up for growing old in this place, finding your scribbles on the underside of the stairs, complaining about property taxes like a normal old man.Daughter: People sign up for normal all the time. Life keeps changing the terms.Father: You know what he said? The attorney? The last time we were in that courtroom?Daughter: You keep replaying it.Father: He smiled at the judge, not at me. Said, “Your Honor, my client has simply run out of options.” Like I was his client. Like we were on the same side.Daughter: You wanted to stand up.Father: I wanted to stand up and scream, “You forged my name on those refinance papers.”Daughter: So why didn’t you?Father: Because I was tired. Because the judge looked at me like a man already gone. Because when you’ve buried two coffins in the same month, paperwork feels like a joke you don’t get.Daughter: So you said the other thing instead.Father: I said, “Maybe it’s better this way.”Daughter: Yeah. That was the wrong thing.Father: The judge nodded like I’d confessed to something. The attorney wrote it down. “He said it himself, Your Honor.”Daughter: And you can’t take it back.Father: I didn’t mean it.Daughter: I know.Father: But the record doesn’t.Daughter: The record doesn’t know how many nights you sat on the floor with Mom’s sweater in your hands pretending it still smelled like her.Father: The record doesn’t know I talked to your voicemail for a year straight.Daughter: The record doesn’t know you stopped counting days after the numbers started to sound like body counts on the news.Father: You were twenty in 2020.Daughter: I was a headline nobody read all the way through.Father: Don’t say that.Daughter: It’s what it felt like. “Local woman, 20, dies after complications.” That word too. “Complications.”Father: They use it when they don’t want to say “alone.”Daughter: I wasn’t alone.Father: Don’t lie to make me feel better.Daughter: You were in the parking lot, remember? Hands on the steering wheel, forehead on your knuckles. Talking to the dashboard like it was me.Father: I remember security tapping the window, telling me I had to move. “You can’t park here, sir.”Daughter: You said, “My family is in there.”Father: He said, “Everyone’s family is in there.”Daughter: That’s when you split.Father: What do you mean?Daughter: Part of you walked inside and never came back out. The rest of you drove home.Father: Home. Funny word, that.Daughter: It’s still that, even with the boxes by the door.Father: Those aren’t boxes. They’re evidence that I’ve already lost.Daughter: They’re proof you tried. Old bills, clinic pamphlets, the flyer from that legal aid place you never called.Father: They said they only take “winnable” cases.Daughter: You decided for them that you weren’t worth the fight.Father: Maybe I wasn’t.Daughter: Don’t you dare.Father: Look around. The bank doesn’t see a grieving father; they see a delinquent account. The attorney doesn’t see fraud; he sees a fee. The judge doesn’t see a man; she sees a docket she has to clear before lunch.Daughter: I see you.Father: You’re not here.Daughter: I’m here enough that you argue with me.Father: That’s because the silence is worse.Daughter: You know what silence sounds like on the other side of the glass doors in the ICU?Father: Don’t.Daughter: It sounds like this house at three a.m. You, walking the hallway, stopping outside my bedroom, not opening the door.Father: I didn’t want to disturb your things.Daughter: They’re just things, Dad.Father: They’re the shape of you.Daughter: Knock, knock.Father: Don’t.Daughter: Knock, knock.Father: Who’s there?Daughter: Sheriff’s department. Civil enforcement.Father: That’s not funny.Daughter: That’s what he’s going to say in about thirty seconds.Father: You think I don’t know? They mailed the schedule like it was an invitation. “Eviction set for January 9, 2026, between 8:00 and 10:00 a.m.”Daughter: You always were early.Father: For your recitals, for your graduations. Never late.Daughter: For the worst day too, I guess.Father: Maybe if I’m gone when they get here, it’ll be easier.Daughter: No.Father: If they open the door to an empty house, no scene, no old man begging—Daughter: No.Father: You don’t get to tell me what to do.Daughter: I do, actually. It’s part of the job description of a dead daughter.Father: That’s not a thing.Daughter: It is now. First rule: you don’t get to throw yourself away just because someone else threw away a piece of paper with your rights on it.Father: They forged my signature. That’s not a piece of paper. That’s theft.Daughter: Then call it what it is. Out loud. To someone who can write it down in ink that matters.Father: Who? The sheriff? The man with the clipboard and the apologetic eyes?Daughter: The legal aid number you still have stuck to the fridge. The one with the coffee stain.Father: It’s too late.Daughter: It’s late. That’s all. Late is not never.Father: I can’t start over at my age.Daughter: You said that when Mom wanted to switch careers. Remember what she told you?Father: “You don’t start over. You start from here.”Daughter: So start from here. From this ugly, unfair, fraudulent here.Father: Where would I even go?Daughter: Somewhere with a ceiling and a door that locks, first. Shelter, maybe. A friend. A church basement that smells like burnt coffee and Lysol. Somewhere you can sit without wondering which piece of furniture the bank technically owns.Father: I’m not a charity case.Daughter: You’re a human being who got hit by a global disaster and a crooked system at the same time. That’s not charity. That’s triage.Father: I can’t walk out that door with nothing.Daughter: You won’t be walking out with nothing.Father: Look around. They’re taking everything.Daughter: They’re taking walls and windows and chipped plates. They can’t take the way Mom snorted when she laughed or the way I used to sing off-key in the shower on purpose to annoy you.Father: They can take the piano.Daughter: The songs are still in your hands.Father: I haven’t played since—Daughter: Since the funeral. I know.Father: My fingers shook.Daughter: They’ll shake again. That’s okay. People’s hands shake when they keep holding on.Father: What if I can’t do it? What if I walk out there and fall apart?Daughter: Then you fall apart. In front of people who have to see you. Not in an empty house that’s about to belong to strangers.Father: I’m so tired.Daughter: I know.Father: This is all my fault.Daughter: No. It’s not.Father: If I’d read the fine print. If I’d pushed harder for a different doctor. If I’d taken you to a different hospital. If I’d—Daughter: You loved us. That’s what you did. That’s what you do. The rest is noise.Father: The rest took everything.Daughter: It took our bodies. It took the house. It didn’t take you. Not yet.Father: They’re here.Daughter: I hear it.Father: Doors of the truck, heavy. Boots on gravel.Daughter: You going to open the door or make them knock three times?Father: Maybe I’ll just go upstairs. Lie down. Pretend I didn’t hear.Daughter: Then they’ll come in and find you curled around Mom’s sweater and call it “noncompliance” in their report.Father: You always did have a dark sense of humor.Daughter: I got it from you.Father: What if I step out and there’s nothing on the other side?Daughter: There’s always something on the other side of a door. Even if it’s just cold air and the chance to take one more step.Father: I don’t know if I can step without you.Daughter: So step with me.Father: You’re not real.Daughter: I’m real enough that your heart calms down when you hear me.Father: It does.Daughter: That’s your reason. That slowing beat in your chest when you talk to me. Follow that.Father: They’re knocking.Daughter: Then walk.Father: My legs feel heavy.Daughter: Good. That means you’re still in your body. One foot, Dad. Then the other.Father: What if they think I’m crazy? Talking to you.Daughter: Let them. Crazy people file complaints, too. Crazy people win cases. Crazy people survive winters on donated blankets and coffee.Father: This isn’t the life I promised your mother.Daughter: She didn’t make you promise comfort. She made you promise you’d stay.Father: I’m at the door.Daughter: Open it.Father: What if I lose you when I step through?Daughter: You won’t. Grief doesn’t live in drywall. It lives in you.Father: That’s not comforting.Daughter: It’s not supposed to be. It’s supposed to be true.Father: Sheriff’s saying my name.Daughter: Say it back.Father: “I’m here.”Daughter: Good. Now tell him what they did with your signature.Father: My voice is shaking.Daughter: Let it. Shaking voices still count on the record.Father: If I walk out, I can’t come back in.Daughter: If you stay in, they’ll drag you out. At least this way, you’re the one moving your feet.Father: I’m scared.Daughter: So was I, remember? In that hospital bed. Machines beeping. Nurse saying, “Just breathe.”Father: They wouldn’t let me in.Daughter: You’re allowed in this room. You’re allowed into the next thing.Father: Are you coming with me?Daughter: I never left.Father: Promise?Daughter: I promise to meet you on the other side of every door you still choose to walk through.Father: Even the ugly ones?Daughter: Especially the ugly ones.Father: Okay.Daughter: There you go.Father: I’m turning the knob.Daughter: I’ll walk with you as far as the stairs.Father: And after that?Daughter: After that, you go forward and I stay where I’ve always been. Just behind your left shoulder, where you can hear me when it gets too loud.Father: One step.Daughter: Two.Father: The air is cold.Daughter: That means you’re outside. That means you’re not done.Father: I can’t see you.Daughter: You don’t have to. You just have to keep walking while I stand here, watching you go.Father: I don’t want to leave you.Daughter: You’re not leaving me. You’re leaving the place where you lost me. There’s a difference.Father: The sheriff is talking. Asking if I understand.Daughter: Tell him, “No, but I’m still here.”Father: “No, but I’m still here.”Daughter: Good.Father: This feels like the end.Daughter: It’s not. It’s just a doorway.Father: Goodbye, house.Daughter: Hello, next step.Father: You’re really staying behind?Daughter: Someone has to keep the memories from cracking when the walls come down.Father: I don’t know if I can do this without you.Daughter: You already are. You’re halfway down the walk.Father: I wish I could hold your hand.Daughter: You’re holding onto me every time you don’t let go of yourself.Father: I’m walking away.Daughter: And I’m watching you go. Opposite directions, same heart.Father: Don’t stop talking.Daughter: Then don’t stop moving.

Posted Jan 09, 2026
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