Stitch on The Hitch Ring

Fantasy Fiction Horror

Written in response to: "Write a story from the perspective/POV of a non-human or fairy tale character sharing their side of the story." as part of Once Upon a Time....

I smelled the wet wood, thick mud, and old hay. I smelled the rain, which had its own taste of stone being ground down. I smelled the wrongness under all of it.

Korax’s hands were cold through my mane. He patted the place where my neck meets my shoulder, the way he does when he wants me to believe he is calm.

“I know,” he murmured. “Every bone in me says ‘bad idea’ too.”

He said it to me like I was only a horse, like I could only understand tone. He forgot, as he always forgot when the road pressed him thin, that I understand the world the way it actually is, through vibration, energy, and heat. The little changes in the air told me something was coming before I could see it.

The lantern swung outside the inn, rocking and creaking through the rain. It was warm yellow behind the glass. The wind shoved Korax’s cloak sideways, but the lantern kept its lazy rhythm as it listened to a different force.

Korax muttered something mostly to himself. All I heard was “Need shelter… Food… Take the risks… Hyah.”

I snorted anyway. Yet still, he guided me into the yard that should have smelled like other horses, or at least like horse dung, but it didn’t. A wagon had sunk to its axles in the mud, like it had died trying to crawl away. The stable stood open-mouthed with empty straw racks. This was not a working-place.

He slid off me when we reached the inn door and draped his cloak over my back. The cloth was heavy with rain and his body heat. Comfort and burden at once.

“Stay sharp. I’ll find something for you,” he told me, and tied me close to the wall instead of far in the stables. It was good that he chose nearness. Nearness is how you live when the dark wants to take you.

Then he went inside, and the door closed.

The air in the yard pressed inward. The space itself wanted to be smaller. My ears turned toward the inn. I heard voices, but they were wrong too. Words that were even and flat, without breath behind them.

I stomped. I tossed my head. My tack creaked, and I saw that the post I was tied to was dry, like it hadn’t seen weather at all. It was a liar wearing wood.

The lantern swung above me. I felt it in my skull like a slow tug, like someone combing my thoughts with cold fingers.

That is when I saw him.

A shape in the stable’s shadow, where the dark had been briefly broken by lanternlight. He stood beside the stalls like he belonged there, and the rain did not touch him. His outline shimmered the way heat shimmers over a wet summer road.

He wore stable clothes. Apron. Rough shirt. Boots that did not sink into the mud.

His eyes found mine.

The kind of eyes you see in old animals who have seen too many winters and stopped pleading with the world.

“Easy,” he said.

Korax couldn’t have heard him. I knew that, so I let out a low, grumbling neigh as a warning. The sound of it did not travel far.

The stablehand lifted one palm. His hand was stained dark with either dirt or blood.

“You’re the one that knows,” he said. “Horses always know.”

I jerked against the hitch rope. It bit into my coat.

The stablehand’s gaze flicked up to the lantern.

“That hooked lantern,” he said. “That light. It isn’t for travelers, you know? It’s for loops.”

I didn’t know the word, but I understood the meaning. This place was like walking the same fence line until your hooves bleed and you forget there was a gate.

He stepped closer to me, slow, expecting me to ram or kick. I didn’t. He pointed to the hitch ring. The iron there was clean and polished, like it had been rubbed by a thousand hands.

“See that there?” he asked. “That’s a stitch.”

A stitch… like something holding a thing together.

I allowed the stablehand to lean in and touch the ring I was tied to. His finger passed through it like fog, and the ring vibrated. I felt the vibration through the rope and into my teeth.

“This stitch is a nail in time,” he whispered to me. “It was driven in straight, strong, and cruel…”

I tried to bite the rope. It tasted like burnt oats.

“Korax,” I thought and breathed in the language that is muscle contracted. I pressed my shoulder into the post and made the wood creak loud enough to cut through the rain.

The stablehand looked toward the door, and his face tightened.

“He’s inside talking to echoes,” he said. “They’ll be the same when he comes back out. Same hands on mugs. Same dirt under nails. Same drink half gone. It always resets.”

He said it like a confession.

“How do you know?” my body must have asked, by going very still.

“I’ve cleaned these stalls a long time,” he murmured. “Fed horses that weren’t hungry. Waited for riders that never left. One night, before any of those echoes came, I tried to walk away, and the yard got longer. I took one step, then twenty, then I was back under this roof with the lantern swinging.”

He lifted his hands for me, to help me understand that they had appeared dark before because they were thinning, disappearing into the night.

“Now I’m just an old habit what the place keeps,” he said, eyes softening as he looked at me.

“But horses don’t get caught so easily, not in the same way at least. Because your kind don’t follow stories. Your kind follow smell and sound and what is real.”

The lantern’s swing continued. The pull in my skull deepened. The light turned green, and promised warmth and safety, the way a bucket of oats promises full bellies, except I could hear the lie under it.

I looked beyond the lantern light’s edge and to the thick darkness beyond the inn.

A shape moved there and stepped forward just enough for me to see it. It was a figure wrapped in something pale, like a traveler’s cloak. Hands were held out wide. It didn’t breathe. It had no heartbeat.

I could smell cane sugar and fresh snow.

It smiled at me with too many teeth. I had seen predators smile before, but this was worse. This was a hunger pretending it didn’t need to eat.

“Don’t go to it. Don’t take what it offers.” The stablehand’s voice was sharp.

The pale figure behind the green-tinged lantern light cocked its crooked head, listening to us. I felt the yard’s air tighten around my ribs.

It offered comfort.

It offered sweet apples.

It offered the simple mercy of standing still and never having to gallop in fear again.

My legs shook with fear and rage. A horse’s rage may not be loud, but it is absolute.

I flattened my ears and bared my teeth. I stomped until the fear fell out of me.

The pale figure’s smile deepened, and I felt it push a thought toward me, sliding it along my mind like a bridle.

“Stay. Sleep. Let the rain wash you clean.”

I snapped my head back, grunted, and kicked the wood post behind me hard enough to make the iron hitch ring scream.

The stablehand flinched, like he felt the pain of my kick, too.

“Good,” he said. “Try to break something real. This place hates that.”

The post hadn’t broken as I expected. It only bore the imprint of my horseshoe. I pulled against the rope again, and it burned my skin. The post had decided it was solid.

The pale figure in the blackness beyond drifted even closer.

The stablehand stepped between us, though his body was half-vanishing, and it seemed that the pale figure did not notice him at all.

“Listen,” the stablehand said urgently to me. “Your knight will try to walk out with the other echoes tonight. He will take the lantern down. That’s when you do it. That’s when you break what you know you must.”

I pawed the mud. I threw my head.

Inside, I heard Korax’s voice rise, close. I couldn’t catch every word, but I knew he was asking questions. He was refusing the soft lie.

Good.

The pale figure shifted backward impatiently. The sweetness it promised soured. The smell of sugar turned to the smell of a mouth that hasn’t eaten in days. The lantern flickered between green and yellow.

“Knight,” the stablehand said, as if his words could pass through me to Korax. “Move, you stubborn bastard. Move before it tightens again.”

Then, just as Korax stepped outside and into the lantern light, it turned yellow, obscuring the pale figure beyond and disappearing the stablehand entirely.

Korax untied the rope on the post as if nothing had happened and walked me to the stables, into a stall with a bucket of feed. His shoulders were tense. His eyes were sharper than they were when he’d stepped inside, which meant he had seen enough to understand the wrongness. When we reached the stall, I flattened my ears and began pacing, desperate to tell him what I had seen.

“I know,” he said softly. “Something’s wrong. One night. Eat. Rest. Then we’re gone.”

He stroked my neck until my muscles stopped trying to flee my bones. His hand was warm and genuine. It anchored me.

But I wanted to tell him about the stablehand. About the pale figure and its sweetness beyond the lantern that had turned green, about the stitch in the hitch ring. But words are not a tool a horse can know.

So I did what I could.

I pressed my muzzle to his chest, hard. I huffed my breath through his leather. I shoved him gently toward the door as if the stable itself was biting at his heels.

“Easy boy,” he murmured and frowned. Then his gaze went to the lantern-lit doorway, and I saw his jaw tighten.

He left again. The inn door shut.

The stablehand, who was waiting just out of sight, appeared beside my stall.

“You did right,” he said. “He’ll understand… if the loop gives him enough time.”

I stomped an impatient question.

The stablehand ignored me and glanced down the yard to where the pale figure had retreated into the dark.

“He’s going to gather them soon,” the stablehand said. “The echoes. The woodcutter. The hooded woman. The old man. The innkeeper. The serving girl.”

The lantern swung as it always did, in the rain, not with the wind.

Time did a strange thing then. It did not move forward like a road. It moved like a hoof stuck in mud, jerking, slipping, catching again.

From inside the inn, I heard laughter continuously. A chair scraped against wood repeatedly. Something heavy, a steel cup, was being set down hard over and over, with the same weight and force.

Outside, my bucket of feed was reduced in portions, then refilled. The stablehand watched the inn door for too long, like he was waiting for a trap to spring.

“They will never know,” he said suddenly.

I flicked an ear, and time stabilized.

“You’ll break the gate,” he went on. “You’ll make a racket. They will think you panicked in chaos. They won’t know you’ll be making the right choices.”

He looked at me like he was asking permission to be honest.

“That’s the price,” he said. “Sometimes the loyal one looks like the problem.”

I snorted a bitter little sound and walked up, right against the thick stall gate. The stablehand stood across from me as I threw my shoulder against it to test its strength.

Real wood splintered. Real nails creaked.

It was breakable.

“Not yet,” he whispered. “Wait for him to carry the lantern. Wait for the others to come out with him. Then strike. Go to him. Know the yard will stretch, and you are the strength to push them all out.”

Then the stablehand’s outline wavered. I saw his face not as a man but as a tired shadow caught in the habit of a job he could not stop doing.

“One more thing,” he said, distant now.

He pointed to the lantern above the inn door.

“Remember,” he told me. “Remember its rhythm. If it changes, the loop changes, but it still has power. It will be weak as you cross the boundary. Remember to destroy it.”

My muscles coiled as I listened.

The storm picked up in fierce wind and rain. The stablehand vanished. I could barely see past the stable now, but I could see the lantern swinging wildly. It was weakening. Then the light lowered off the hook, and a figure I knew well illuminated in the dark.

That’s when I heard it.

Korax’s whistle.

A sharp command, edged with fear.

The stablehand’s voice echoed in me, “Now.”

I screamed, a full-throated stallion scream, a sound meant to shatter the courage of wolves, orcs, and men alike.

Then I rammed my body into the stall gate.

Wood exploded. Splinters sprayed. The impact ran up my bones and into my head. Pain bloomed bright across my body. Real pain, meaning I was still in the real world.

I burst into the yard in a spray of mud and broken boards.

Korax stood outside with the lantern in his hand, and around him were the echoes: hooded woman, old man, woodcutter. Their faces were people waking from a dream they didn’t choose.

The wind slammed into them, and I rushed toward the lantern with the sickly green light, barely noticeable at the edges. Once I reached them, though, time stopped. I glanced at the hitch ring, that same stitch.

The stablehand’s voice echoed again: “Now.”

I slammed a second kick, this time directly onto the polished iron ring. Metal-on-metal shrieked. It cracked in two and tarnished to rust before my eyes.

Time resumed.

Korax’s eyes snapped to me, and I met his with my own.

He saw the way I placed my body beside his, joining him in strength.

“Gate’s there!” he shouted to us over the storm. “Move!”

The yard stretched out long and fought us.

Mud clawed at my hooves. The air thickened. The gate slid farther away with every step, a joke told by the pale figure in the darkness that hated us.

Korax’s hand was steady on the lantern. His shoulder nestled into my body, with a promise of togetherness.

“Road,” he muttered. “Rain. Mud. Hoofbeats. Not patterns. Not loops.”

He was talking the way he talks when he casts a ward. Naming what’s real and denying the lies.

I felt the cracked stitch try to pull me back into the yard.

The pale figure drifted now along the yard’s edge, whispering promises of warmth, whispering stay, whispering safe.

I snapped at it with teeth that met only cold air. But it flinched away anyway.

The stablehand was a shadow at the corner of my sight, running beside us without feet touching real ground. He watched the lantern’s rhythm swinging in Korax’s hand, and he nodded sharply as we arrived at the gate.

There was a hitch in the lantern’s swing, a stumble, and an off-light.

Korax shoved the gate open, and I pushed them until we all crossed.

The moment my hooves hit the road beyond, the air snapped back to normal. The rain thinned. The smell changed to wet earth and leaf-mold instead of the inn’s stew-smoke.

Behind us, the yard convulsed like a dying animal. The inn wavered. Its walls turned thin. I saw through it, past the rooms and into an empty clearing choked with grass and saplings, as if the inn had always been gone and only the lantern had been telling the story about it.

Then it all folded inward. Lantern-light and rain sucked into a single shrinking spark that winked out in a moment of silence.

The lantern in Korax’s hand shattered. Glass sifted away like dust. The metal frame rusted and flaked apart in one breath, then blew away on the next gust.

Korax stared at his empty palm.

I nudged his cheek with my muzzle. Hot breath against his skin. It was real.

I saw the woodcutter turning slowly in a circle and blinking like a man born again into the night.

The hooded woman asked my knight questions. He spoke to her and the woodcutter and did his best to be honest if he knew the answer. He told them they were back on the road. That what they did now was their own choice again, and that they should never forget that they would always belong to this realm.

They parted from us when the fork in the road came, and Korax mounted me.

As we rode, the stablehand floated beside us for a few steps, unseen by Korax, his outline thinning with every stride.

I angled one ear back, listening.

His voice came faint, like wind through boards.

“Good horse,” he said. Then, softer, told by someone who doesn’t believe he deserves the honor: “Go. Don’t look back.”

His shape dissolved into early morning mist.

Korax’s hand rested on my neck.

“We’re not meant for loops,” he told me. “We’re meant for roads. I’d rather ride into the Veil itself than sit still and dream I’m safe.”

I snorted, because it was true, and because it was the only agreement I had left for him right now.

In my body, in the place where a horse keeps the things he cannot say, I kept another truth too:

Sometimes the loyal one looks like the problem.

Sometimes you break something and get blamed for the noise.

But sometimes, if you’re lucky, the one you’re with sees your eyes in the storm and understands that you chose what was right.

Posted Dec 24, 2025
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Rabab Zaidi
11:39 Dec 28, 2025

What a marvellous story! The touch of the supernatural makes it even better. Loved the way the story is told and loved the way they manage to escape.

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A.D. Woodhurst
23:27 Dec 31, 2025

Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it! If you are interested in more, this is actually a different POV of one of my previous stories here on Reedsy titled "The Lantern at Blackthorn Inn".

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