The Body Collector
By: Lourdes Santiago
It was pitch dark outside. The waxing crescent moon cast a dark mysterious shadow. A starless sky set the finishing touches for a haunting Halloween. Dinner was over and everyone went into the living room for hot chocolate. My Uncle Albert, my mom, my dad, Aunt Reba and I sipped on our drinks and I listened as they made small talk.
“AHHH, An eerie dark night…perfect for a spooky true story” Uncle Albert said in his imitation of Bela Lugosi. He stared down at me and cackled. “Hee hee hee heeeee. This tale will bring goosebumps throughout your entire body and make you sleep forever with the lights on.”
I shivered to think what kind of story he was going to tell.
“Now Albert don’t you dare bring up poor Anton” mom scolded.
As soon as she said that the lights in the house went out. I screamed and ran to my mother’s side. “It’s just the storm dear” she said and started to place candles all around the room.
The flames came alive and danced. Their reflections painted an eerie scene on the walls. Perfect mood for a scary Halloween story. Uncle Albert lowered his voice to a whisper and began to tell the story.
“Anton was Reba’s first husband. Some thought him peculiar but I knew what he was. In the beginning he looked quite normal. A short ordinary man, round face and beady eyes. He had dark straight hair that hung down his forehead and covered his eyes. His face was devoid of hair except for a thin line on his lip he called a mustache. I became suspicious of Anton when he would disappear for days and then return home to shut himself up in the basement. If you go down those winding stairs,” Uncle Albert pointed, you will see a huge heavy bolted door specially built to keep anyone else out except for him. One day I decided I would get him to let me see what was down there. “Come on Anton, show me what is so important that you have it locked in the basement?” His monotone robotic response was, “I can show you but then I would have to kill you.” I thought he was joking and the fact that he was being so mysterious made me even more determined to look. On one of his disappearing acts I inched my way down the dark spiral staircase and placed my hand over the door’s knob. I turned it and it flew open! I was taken aback, afraid he might be there. I peeked in looking for signs of Anton but the room was empty. I cautiously skulked forward. A light switch near the door illuminated a hanging lamp that shone on a flat wooden table. I needed more light so I grabbed a nearby lantern that hung on the wall and lit it. Holding up the lamp I peered around. The whole place looked like a laboratory. Pints of blood dated and labeled were stored in a refrigerator. Jars were placed on shelves in alphabetical order. Ears, Eyes, Hair, Heart, Tongue, all sorts of organs. What was going on I thought. Was Anton a grave robber or a serial killer? I went to his desk and looked at the books he had strewn around. Books on Frankenstein’s monster, mummies, ghouls, living dead and a diary. I picked up the diary and opened up the first page. On day one, my trip was a success. I collected many specimens. Day two, It was a hard gruesome day. After cutting and separating the different test products, I had to clean and sterilize each sample and place them in containers. At that point I slammed the diary closed, blew out the lantern, turned out the light and high tailed it out of there. My hands were shaking and I was white as a ghost. Reba came home and I told her the whole story. Of course she didn’t believe me and refused to go to the basement to see. That evening Anton returned home and he looked at me as if he knew. I averted his eyes as much as possible but at every turn his eyes locked on me and he had a weird quizzical look on his face. “Is everything alright?” He asked me “W…w…why yes” I stammered. “It’s just that you look so strange, as if you came face to face with” he paused then shook his head. “Nevermind.” I excused myself and ran home. I couldn’t shake the feeling of fear. I was worried about Reba after all she was my sister. I worried she was in danger. I decided to confront Anton. Determined to get to the bottom of it I took a deep breath, put on my coat and hat and returned to their house. I rang the doorbell and stepped inside. Anton and Reba were both surprised to see me. “I… I…. I… need to know,” I stammered. “wh… what is going on in your basement?” “I told you,” Anton said, “I can show you but I would have to kill you.” “Oh stop it Anton,” Reba said “ just tell him what you do. “I am a body parts collector”
Uncle Albert was about to continue his story when the doorbell rang. In walks Anton, hat in hand looking as creepy as my Uncle had said. “I’ve come for my body parts” I screamed and hid behind my mother. Anton looked at me and then at Uncle Albert. “Have you been giving away my secrets?” I clutched my moms apron and buried my face, afraid to look or move. “You never did tell me how you found your bodies,” Uncle Albert asked. And what’s with the jars of human parts. Anton’s face was expressionless, “You dared to enter my laboratory and I spared you because you are my wife’s brother. You need not know more, it is none of your affair.” With that, he disappeared into the basement. “I say we call the police,” Albert said. “No!” yelled Reba. Everyone sat in silence and stared at the basement door. The door flew open and there was Anton, bloody hands, a clear bag in one hand and a head in the other. “I’ve come to collect more parts,” he said and looked at me. “I have a need for child parts.” He started to walk toward me. Screaming, I ran to my dad. Everyone laughed. It turns out that Anton was a scientist and he used the body parts to experiment with different medications and surgical equipment. As for where he got the body parts, well at the morgue I hope. All I know is that Anton traveled to many places in search of just the right parts. He never would say where and how. He did ask me if I wanted to see his laboratory and of course I said no. Ghoulish or not, he still creeped me out.
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Thank you for your comment. I like stories about spectral beings and I have a few of those in my story bank but this time I thought about a movie I saw "The bone collector'" with Denzel ashington and Angelina Joli so when I read the prompt I put a family gathering and an uncle that had a goulish job.
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The family gathered around drinking hot chocolate on Halloween is a perfect set-up! I like the contrast between the warmth of the family gathering and the darkness outside.
The power outage enhances the spooky atmosphere. A creepy uncle, a mysterious basement, jars of human organs, a thunderstorm, and a sinister relative who may or may not be a murderer. Horror at its best! Great take on the prompt.
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