The Fugitive

Crime Horror Suspense

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Written in response to: "Your protagonist makes a difficult choice made for the sake of survival. What happens next?" as part of From the Ashes with Michael McConnell.

Marcus woke suddenly to the loud clatter of beer cans banging together. The room was dark, and the clock on the bedside table read 2:10 a.m. He sat up and focused on the noise from the living room. He was skeptical of digital security systems, believing they could be easily hacked and monitored, so he chose a simpler, more dependable method. He crafted a basic alarm using fishing line connected to empty beer cans placed around the room. The lines crisscrossed the wooden floor, forming an almost invisible web of protection. When one of these fishing lines was accidentally triggered, the cans connected to it would crash together with a loud noise, waking him instantly and alerting him to an intruder. When the second wire was triggered, and the cans banged together loudly again, Marcus immediately knew he had uninvited guests.

Marcus quickly grabbed his customized Clock 19 pistol from the bedside table, along with a full spare magazine. His movements were swift yet deliberate, driven by urgency. As he moved, his senses stayed alert, catching every subtle sound and vibration. He positioned himself near the door, ears tuned for whispers or signs of activity. Through the gaps in the doorframe, he heard heavy, deliberate footsteps approaching. He took a deep, calming breath, then pressed his back against the wall for better stability. Carefully, he extended his arm, keeping his hand steady, and aimed the pistol's muzzle at the door. His grip on the weapon was practiced and firm. His finger rested lightly on the trigger, ready to react instantly to whatever awaited on the other side.

The footsteps abruptly stopped behind the room's door, suggesting the intruder was assessing his surroundings and deciding his next move. Suddenly, he heard a faint, unintelligible whisper, confirming his suspicion—there was more than one intruder, but he couldn't tell how many. Engaging multiple attackers was far more challenging than facing a single opponent and demanded heightened vigilance and tactical awareness. Marcus knew that to clear a hostile room effectively, armed men would typically fire a barrage into the room first, then quickly cover both sides of the entrance to prevent retreat or surprise attacks. Remaining calm, Marcus lowered himself into a deep squat. He clutched his pistol tightly, his finger already on the trigger, ready to shoot at a moment's notice and to shift his position to gain a tactical advantage. He silently waited for his unwanted guests' next move.

Marcus was a former CIA tactical officer, part of a clandestine elite group that operated in secret, outside official records. This secretive team had taken part in many covert raids around the world, working mostly in the shadows, often infiltrating hostile territories, gathering intelligence, executing precision strikes, and assassinating or kidnapping hostile figures. Initially, Marcus felt a deep sense of pride in his work, believing he was helping to secure his country's democracy and safeguard its citizens. He delved into secret missions with dedication, trusting the official narrative. However, as he gradually uncovered more about the true nature of their missions, he realized his team was merely carrying out the agenda of a shadowy power structure, the 'Deep State,' comprising powerful individuals, high-ranking officials, wealthy financiers, and covert operatives who controlled the government and wielded most of the global influence behind the scenes. Ultimately, Marcus understood that his actions primarily served the interests of the elite few, rather than protecting democracy or the loyal citizens of his country. This realization weighed heavily on him, prompting him to resign, believing he could walk away from it all. Yet he soon discovered that his extensive knowledge of the operations made it impossible to truly disengage without risking his safety. As there was no way out, he disappeared, only to find himself targeted by the very agency he had devoted most of his professional life to.

After two thwarted assassination attempts, he was forced to go into hiding to evade his relentless pursuers. The danger was compounded by the fact that his enemies were a powerful, well-funded organization, the CIA, which had extensive resources, sophisticated surveillance technology, and a vast intelligence network. These assets enabled them to track him systematically across regions. Despite the constant threats and significant risks, he survived by adopting a highly secretive lifestyle, frequently changing locations, and staying extremely alert. So far, his vigilance and relentless movement have kept him one step ahead of his pursuers, constantly outmaneuvering them. He was determined to stay alive, but didn't know how long he could keep playing cat-and-mouse with the agency. His strength was that he was an orphan with no family, a loner with no social connections, which made it easy for him to stay low and become invisible.

As he anticipated, one of the intruders kicked the door hard. The door splintered slightly before the weak lock gave way. Without hesitation, he fired a round into the dimly lit interior. As he moved to clear the sides of the doorframe, Marcus fired two precise shots into the man's head. The men collapsed forward onto the floor with a heavy thud. Behind the fallen man, the second intruder, shocked and momentarily disoriented by his comrade's sudden demise, began firing blindly into the room. Seizing the moment, Marcus duck-walked forward with quick, deliberate steps. When he lined up his sights on the second intruder, he tapped him twice on the head with controlled, accurate shots. The man stepped back reflexively and fell onto his back with a heavy thud on the wooden floor.

Uncertain about the number of intruders and whether any more were lurking nearby, Marcus swiftly removed the half-empty magazine from his Glock and replaced it with a fully loaded spare, readying himself for whatever might come. It was rational to face his enemy with a full magazine. He quickly scanned the lounge, his eyes darting from corner to corner. The house was silent, with no sign of movement or disturbance, but he didn't lower his guard. Carefully, he checked every part of the house, even behind furniture, under tables, and in shadowed areas. Once satisfied that the interior was secure, he turned his attention outside. Through the front window, he saw a dark-colored SUV parked on the street about two houses away from his own. He then moved back toward the dead assailants, who lay motionless on the ground. The attackers were dressed in black combat uniforms devoid of insignia, including body armor, a bulletproof vest, and a helmet, similar to those he had worn for years of service. Knowing the attackers had no IDs or belongings to identify them, Marcus skipped checking their pockets. Instead, he quickly gathered their weapons: two M4 carbines, two Glock 19 pistols, and extra magazines, knowing these items could be useful later.

Carrying an M4 slung over his shoulder and still gripping his Glock 19, Marcus carefully walked out of the house. His eyes constantly scanned left to right, narrowing as he listened for any faint sounds. The air was heavy and silent, broken only by the faint hum of distant city life and the croak of frogs. With careful steps, he crept forward until he reached the rear of the vehicle. Aside from the ticking of its engine cooling after recent use, the car was silent, with no sign of movement or activity. Marcus paused briefly, then peered through the rear window of the SUV, scanning its dim interior. It was empty; no one was inside. He moved to the driver's door and tested it gently. With a dull click, the door swung open, revealing an empty interior.

After inspecting the car and finding nothing of importance, as he expected, Marcus returned to the house, exhausted yet still on high alert, adrenaline still flowing through his veins. He moved carefully toward the bodies, feeling a strange mix of relief and sadness. He couldn't help but feel grateful to be alive after narrowly escaping another assassination attempt. As he looked at the fallen figures, motionless on the floor, his voice softened with sadness and murmured, "I'm sorry, bodies. I know you were obeying orders. I'm sorry we had to meet in this tragic way that cost you your lives." Marcus wasn't a sentimental person, but he felt remorse for his attackers, as he had once been one of them.

He then moved to his bedroom, where he had concealed two large suitcases in the closet's hidden compartment. He kneeled, grabbed them, and set them on the bed. As he opened the suitcases, he revealed a carefully packed set of fresh clothes, including shirts, pants, and a jacket, along with hygiene supplies such as wipes, a small bottle of hand sanitizer, and a few bandages. Hidden among them were two neatly bundled stacks of $100 bills and extra magazines for his Glock 19. He quickly packed his newly obtained firearms into the suitcases, ignoring their weight and bulk.

Still gripping his Glock 19 tightly in one hand, he slipped into the garage. The house wasn't safe anymore, and he should leave soon. He had rented the place under an alias and paid in cash. He trudged toward his car. But before he opened the door, he slowed, crunching carefully around the vehicle, using his pocket torch to inspect every inch beneath it. His sharp eyes caught tiny fragments of wire scattered across the floor, glinting in the torchlight. He crouched, shining his torch under the car. Soon, his gaze fixed on a small, carefully concealed C4 pack connected to a wired detonator nestled under the chassis. A cold wave washed over him as he realized his vehicle was rigged with a deadly trap, a backup in case the attackers failed to eliminate him. But when had they placed the explosives in his car? He was almost certain the booby trap hadn't been set by the dead men who had attacked him; it had to have been set earlier, before they arrived. Men like them—like himself during his days with the CIA—prided themselves on meticulous craftsmanship. They ensured no trace, no telltale sign, would expose their handiwork—no wires, no cut pieces of insulation, nothing to betray their involvement. Yet this trap—the one beneath his car—felt crude and amateurish by comparison, as if it had been rigged by someone lacking expertise.

He reflected, "I should be more careful." Without hesitation, he slipped back into the house. Inside, he carefully poked through the dead men's pockets, catching the faint scent of sweat and dirt mixed with the metallic odor of blood. It was in the second attacker's pocket, where he found the car key tucked among scattered coins and a crumpled McDonald's receipt.

To distract his foes, at least for a short time, he retrieved a large container from the garage, one that held about a gallon of kerosene. He carefully sprayed the liquid over the bodies and onto the worn, faded lounge room carpet and the furniture. He then rummaged through one of his suitcases, extracting a tiny detonator with a digital timer. He walked to the garage, then to his car, set the timer for sixty minutes, and meticulously attached it to the C4 explosive pack. His goal was for the explosion to create the illusion that he had been killed, at least for a while, fooling the CIA into believing he was no longer alive.

Carrying his heavy suitcases, he made his way to the black SUV. He loaded his luggage into the back seat, slid into the driver's seat, and started the engine. Before pulling away, he cast a final, lingering glance at the house, the place he had called home for the past six months. Then he drove off, left it behind, and disappeared into the night.

Posted Apr 10, 2026
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Scott Speck
12:35 Apr 11, 2026

Super cool telling of this foiled assassination attempt! Well written and pulse pounding!

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Sasan Sedighi
12:46 Apr 11, 2026

Thank you for the kind words.

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