Submitted to: Contest #332

Silent Keys on Christmas Eve

Written in response to: "Write a story in which a character or object gets caught in a sudden gust of wind."

Christmas Fantasy Fiction

The freeway stretched black and endless beneath the starlit December sky, its shoulders rimmed with snowdrifts that gleamed under the moon. Swirls of snow from the north wind slithered like snakes across the road, hissing as they scraped against the guardrail. Inside the car, the heater hummed, but the cold pressed through the seams, frosting the edges of the windshield. Michael gripped the wheel tighter than usual, jaw set against the storm, guilt pressing in like a second weight on his chest. He had stayed late in the city to file a brief, chasing the approval of senior partners, and now they were behind schedule—running straight into the winter clipper they had hoped to avoid.

He was a junior member of the firm his father had started. One day Michael would be a senior partner, but tonight’s ambition felt hollow. He wanted to be seen as diligent, independent, determined to prove himself apart from his father’s legacy. Yet the cost of that determination sat strapped in the back seat.

Claire sat beside him, her hand resting lightly on his arm, a quiet tether against the storm. Three‑year‑old Fallan hummed in the back seat, clutching her stuffed bear with sleepy devotion. “Grandpa’s fireplace,” she whispered, half‑dreaming, her voice muffled. “That’s where Santa comes.” Claire could see her round little face reflected in the mirror mounted in front of the rear‑facing seat, a small window into innocence. For three years, they had kept the tradition alive: Santa always came down Michael’s parents’ chimney, leaving presents by the fire for Fallan to discover on Christmas morning.

Then the wind rose, a warning whispered too late. Another furious gust barreled across the freeway, spinning snow like knives. The tires lost grip. Michael fought the wheel, but the car skidded, lurched, and slammed into the guardrail.

The world blurred. Claire’s cry, the shattering glass, Fallan’s small body thrown against her car seat’s back. Then silence, broken only by the hiss of the wind. The adults absorbed the rapid deceleration, but Fallan’s smaller brain, floating in crystal‑clear fluid, struck bone. Tiny vessels tore, releasing threads of blood that unfurled like ink in water. Michael smelled gasoline and scorched rubber, the acrid reminder of how quickly control can vanish.

At the medical center, everything moved too fast. Nurses and surgeons rushed Fallan into surgery, her head injury grave but not hopeless. Her brain swelled just enough to require a drain to relieve the pressure. Claire stayed near the operating room, lips moving in prayer, her hands clasped so tightly her knuckles blanched. Michael couldn’t sit still. Guilt gnawed at him—if only he hadn’t worked late, if only they’d left earlier, if only he’d been more careful. He wandered the hospital’s corridors, footsteps echoing against sterile tile, the air sharp with antiseptic. Hospitals always smelled the same, he thought—antiseptic and fear, no matter the city. Then he heard it: faint music drifting from the atrium. A piano, playing “Silent Night.”

The atrium was dim, lit by strings of holiday lights draped across the railings. At its center stood a two‑story tree, built from small volunteer‑decorated pines arranged on a conifer‑shaped frame. The scent of evergreen mingled faintly with antiseptic, a strange marriage of festivity and fear.

At the piano sat an elderly man, clothed in a hospital gown, its fabric loose against his frail frame, an intravenous line taped to his arm, the fluid bag beside him on a pole. His fingers moved gracefully across the keys, weaving carols into something softer, almost improvised, as though the music itself was breathing. The notes rose and fell, echoing against tile and glass, filling the atrium like breath.

Michael stood listening until the man looked up. His eyes were kind, though shadowed by age. “You look burdened,” the man said. His voice was gentle, steady despite the tether. Michael swallowed. “My daughter… she’s in surgery. Head injury. Christmas Eve. And it’s my fault. I kept us late. The wind—” His words broke. The man nodded, still playing. “Sometimes the wind carries us - where we’re meant to be.” Michael frowned. “Meant to be? She’s three years old. She was waiting for Santa. And now she’s—” He couldn’t finish.

The melody shifted, flowing into a lullaby his mother used to sing. “I sat here once,” the man said softly. “Years ago, my child was in surgery too. I prayed, I blamed myself, I begged for miracles. And I learned something: there are no flawless choices. Mistakes mark us, not define us.” His hands worked independently of his words on the white and black keys, coaxing warmth from wood and wire.

Michael studied him. No nurse checked on the man. His hospital bracelet was faded, unreadable. The fluid bag hung motionless, as if untouched. And the music seemed to echo Michael’s thoughts, answering them before he spoke. “Who are you?” Michael whispered. The man smiled faintly. “Someone who knows storms,” he said, “nothing more.”

Michael sat on the bench beside him, listening. Music wrapped around him like warmth. He thought of Fallan’s laughter, of the way her eyes lit up at the fireplace each year. He realized she didn’t care about timetables or briefs. She cared about love, presents, and tradition. And suddenly, the man’s words felt less like philosophy and more like truth: mistakes had carried him here, but love would carry him forward.

The surgeon appeared. “Mr. Carter? Your daughter is out of surgery. She’s stable.” Relief flooded Michael. He turned to thank the pianist—but the bench was empty. The piano lid was closed, the atrium silent.

Fallan lay in intensive care, small and pale but breathing steadily with the help of a ventilator. A drain from her head dripped dark fluid into a bag beside the bed. Claire held her hand, tears streaking her cheeks. Michael kissed his daughter’s forehead, whispering promises he wasn’t sure he could keep.

The breathing tube and drain came out in three days, leaving only a patch of bruised scalp with tiny stitches. “Daddy,” Fallan murmured, her first words in a raspy half‑dreaming voice. “Did Santa find the fireplace?” Michael smiled through tears. “Santa finds us wherever we are.”

By the next day she was moved to a hospital floor, and two days later the family completed the journey.

The fire crackled, stockings hung, and Fallan’s eyes widened at the sight of wrapped gifts waiting by the hearth. Michael stood back, watching the glow of the flames dance across her face. “Santa came as usual; we left all the presents where he put them,” Michael senior said, smiling at his granddaughter. Outside, the wind rose again. For a moment, Michael thought he heard faint piano notes on the gust — “Silent Night,” drifting through the cold. The sound mingled with the crackle of the fire and the laughter of family. He remembered the man’s words: mistakes mark us, not define us. And as Fallan’s laughter rose above the crackle, he believed them.

Posted Dec 12, 2025
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