The Exonerate

American Drama Fiction

Written in response to: "Write about someone who gets stuck in their workplace during a blizzard and decides to explore rooms they aren’t normally allowed in." as part of Snow Day.

Mark, was a young man at his mid twenty's, he is from Atlanta and he was working in a very high and reputable company in New York City, he was very intelligent and smart and he was one among the staffs of the company, among the team of workers that are working in the marketing and advertising department, most times when they are having any challenge he is usually the one solving them, his ideas most times are the solutions the company falls back on to help them navigate through difficult situations and he appeared to be the best and untouchable.


Sometimes in January twenty sixteen,

Mark was in his office working till late at night, meanwhile snow had started falling from the previous days unknowingly to him, the snow fall became a storm, and the storm persisted for over twenty four hours, to the level that there was major traffic in virtually the entire state it got to the level that some among the people who were not fortunate to find where to hide themselves died because of the cold, flights were cancelled, people spent the night in their cars on the road, the snow fell to a record of twenty seven point five, which has never happened in New York in centuries.


While Mark was alone in the office building as the cold was getting too much and he was getting bored, he decided to engage himself in some kind of excercise and he began to act like each and every one of his colleagues that are working in the building,


First he began by acting like Jessica one of his closest colleague.

Mark speaking like Jessica, hey Mark are you through with the documentation?

Mark back to his seat, Nope,

Mark stood up again acting Jessica, why? But I have to submit it to the MD today,

Mark back to his seat, Okay don't worry, I'll be through with it before the close of today,

mark up as Jessica again, it better be ready in 2 hours,

Mark turned and began to walk like a lady towards Jessica's office, opened the door and entered, and sat on her chair.

While he was still there he pulled out her drawer and he saw some chewing gums, and he said "ladies and chewing gum" he began to chew on one of the gums, he decided to check forther and he found a list were Jessica had written

PEOPLE I LOVE

he began to read out the list and to his surprise he didn't see his name and he sank himself into Jessica's chair that he was seating in disappointment and pain,


He could remember her telling him that she loved him, as he was thinking about it he remembered what his mum had told him long time ago, "everyone have a secret"

He stood up and said everyone have a secret, he decided to take advantage of the moment to find out as many secret of the people he is working with as he could.


He began to check from office to office till he gets to the MD's office, but on reaching the door it was locked, he tried and tried it refused to open but he was adamant, and he went to his office and get some things and used it to open the door, and he entered.


He walked straight to where his MD kept his files and he began to check and he saw divorce letter that the MD's wife had given to him some days back, he said in a low tone; MD is having a divorce, mum is wright, "everybody have a secret"


He left that part of the document which was personal and went to official,

After a little search he saw a file

Staffs evaluation file, and he took it and went to a chair and sat, and began to read as he was reading about other staff he was smiling, but when he got to his page, and he saw;

Mark Roland

Time management excellent

Job delivery excellent

Dressing and neatness good

Attitude towards clients average

Attitude towards colleague bad

Immediately he saw this he was shocked and the file fell from his hands and he surmorned courage and picked up the file and check forther on the pages of other workers but non had as excellent record as him and yet non had as bad record as his and he shouted "I am finished, I thought I was the Exonerate"


Meanwhile the company was about to let go of some workers at that time, because of the economy situation as at that time, all the while Mark was hearing that the company will let go some workers, he never believed he will be among until this night,


He sluggishly put back the files and locked the door and went to his own office and sat down and began to recall how he had been rud and arrogant to both clients and colleagues and he began to cry, and he said to himself I was looking for their secrets not knowing that I was the secret, and he cried the more.


Mark eventually lost his job at the resumption of work some days after, he was blinded by what he knows about himself and he forgot about what others thinks about him.


I will conclud by saying, everyone have the right to choose how they relate with others, and if you choose to be nice or not it's your choice mind you what ever action you exibit will be seen better by another person because you that did it only know that you did it, you can not see your self like others will see you and in the case of Mark he was like a lantern that is lit in a room, it has the ability to shine and lit everywhere in the room except underneath it, bad attitude is always seen by all except one person, the one exibiting it, my senior brother once said to me, "A man can decide he actions, but can not decide the consequences of the same action, because the consequences of his actions will come from a greater power".

Posted Jan 18, 2021
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Omoru Ablous
February 23, 2021 05:36

Keep the good work

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Godwin Akor
January 22, 2021 21:41

Awesome storyline with good moral lesson

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Henry Obewhu
January 23, 2021 21:29

Thank you sir

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January 20, 2021 23:43

Woow..lot of wisdom here... nice story bro.

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Henry Obewhu
January 21, 2021 06:21

Thanks brother,

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Henry Obewhu
January 21, 2021 06:21

Thanks brother,

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Michael Harry
January 20, 2021 20:28

Very interesting and touching story u got there bro,nice one keep it up.

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 20:34

Thank you very much sir,

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Rossy Okorieh
January 20, 2021 17:32

An awesome story. Thumbs up

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:21

Thanks sist

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Okorieh Hannah
January 20, 2021 17:09

Amazing

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:19

Thanks

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Olabisi Surakat
January 20, 2021 12:38

A word for the wise

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:20

Thank you ma

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Unuigboje Friday
January 20, 2021 09:56

Nice one, if everyone will be like him this country will be a better place for all.
I appreciate u more.

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:19

Thank you bro

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Ibrahim Taofeek
January 20, 2021 08:25

This life is like a lantern, in which you can't see your underneath ! Nice1 bro
It will goes a long way .

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:21

Thank you sir

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Praise Jonah
January 19, 2021 21:26

Great piece! - A man can decide his actions but cannot decide the consequences of his actions....Beware of your actions!

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:20

Thank you very much sist

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Iniobong David
January 19, 2021 21:03

👏👏👌 wonderful, lessons learnt,kudos sir weldone

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Henry Obewhu
January 20, 2021 18:20

Thank you

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Royce Samuel
January 19, 2021 14:17

Amazing story 🙏🙏🙏

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:47

Thank you very much,

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Scottish Samuel
January 19, 2021 09:43

Wow nice story sir

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:48

Thank you,

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January 19, 2021 09:14

Don't be too satisfy of self ,mark was satisfy of himself ,good write up more of it

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:49

Thanks for your time and encouragement sir.

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Erukunuakpo Jw
January 19, 2021 09:04

Spot-on.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:49

Thanks

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Ojo Gbenga
January 19, 2021 08:44

The story is very interesting and eye opener to everyone in relationship either at workplace or family. The bad attitude is seen by all except one person, the doer.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:50

Thank you for your comment sir

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Oteni Jessica
January 19, 2021 08:44

Nice one sir

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:50

I am grateful,

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John Ebi
January 19, 2021 08:38

Good work!

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:51

Thank you brother and God bless

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Adebayo Champion
January 19, 2021 08:36

Wow. Nice story

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:59

Thank you sir, the joy of a writer is when people read what he wrote and appreciates it, I am truly grateful.

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Stephen Amula
January 19, 2021 08:33

Sweet word's, keep it up brother

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:51

Thank you sir,

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January 19, 2021 07:17

Wow! This story is very helpful to me, most time we don't know or don't care about what others think about us, I have truly learnt something.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:52

Thank you for your time and God bless.

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Kelechi Okoh
January 19, 2021 06:14

I love the statement 'bad attitude is always seen by all except one person, the one exibiting it,'

Very interesting write-up, I look forward to reading more of your content.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:53

Thank you for your encouragement, may God bless you ma.

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Godswill Shaibu
January 18, 2021 22:53

Wow! What an interesting story.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:53

Thank you sir,

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Duke Ehimika
January 18, 2021 22:32

I love this I haven't read any article as nice as this before
This is awesome.

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 15:54

Sir Duke, I am grateful, thank you.

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Sidewap TV
January 18, 2021 22:18

I really love this write-up, kudos to the writer

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Henry Obewhu
January 19, 2021 16:00

Thank you very much, you guys made my day, I am grateful.

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