The Sixth Day

Suspense Thriller

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the words “déjà vu” or “that didn’t happen.”" as part of Stranger than Fiction with Zack McDonald.

The alarm rang at 6:42 a.m.

It always rang at 6:42.

Emily slapped at the phone without opening her eyes, her hand finding the screen almost before the sound began. The vibration buzzed through the wooden nightstand, a familiar insect hum against the quiet room.

Silence.

For a moment, she lay still, wrapped in the warm heaviness of sleep.

Then something stirred beneath the surface of her thoughts.

A faint unease.

The kind that comes when you dream about something ordinary—your kitchen, your car, a conversation—and wake up feeling like the dream leaked into real life.

Emily opened her eyes.

The ceiling fan turned lazily above her.

Three slow rotations.

Click.

Three more.

Click.

She stared at it.

Something about the sound made her frown.

Have I heard that before?

Of course, she had. It was her ceiling fan. She heard it every night.

Still, the feeling lingered.

She rolled out of bed.

The floorboard beside the dresser creaked beneath her heel.

Creak.

Emily paused.

Her eyes flicked down to the floor.

“Okay,” she murmured to herself. “That’s weird.”

She hadn’t stepped there yet today. How did she know it would creak?

She shrugged it off.

People predict things all the time without realizing it.

Patterns.

Habits.

Muscle memory.

Still…

The thought slipped through her mind like cold water.

Déjà vu.

In the kitchen, the coffee maker began to gurgle.

Emily leaned against the counter and rubbed her eyes.

Through the window, she could see her neighbor, Mr. Hanley, walking his dog down the sidewalk.

The dog stopped suddenly.

Sat.

Scratched its ear.

Mr. Hanley sighed and checked his watch.

Emily blinked.

Her stomach tightened.

She knew that was about to happen.

Not guessed.

Knew.

“Okay…” she whispered.

Maybe she’d seen it yesterday.

Or last week.

The brain mixed memories like that sometimes.

She poured her coffee.

The mug slipped slightly in her hand, and a thin ribbon of coffee dripped onto the counter.

Emily grabbed a paper towel.

As she wiped it up, a thought drifted across her mind with eerie clarity.

The radio is about to say the bridge is closed.

She froze.

From the living room, the radio announcer’s voice crackled.

“And in local traffic news, the west bridge will remain closed this morning due to ongoing construction—”

Emily slowly turned toward the radio.

Her heart thumped once, heavy.

“That’s…” she said.

Her voice trailed off.

She laughed.

A nervous, hollow sound.

“Déjà vu.”

Work was uneventful.

Mostly.

Emily worked at a small insurance office downtown. Rows of gray cubicles, humming fluorescent lights, and the constant tap of keyboards.

At 10:17 a.m., her coworker Jenna walked in late with a caramel latte.

Emily knew it before it happened.

She looked up from her computer seconds before Jenna appeared around the corner.

“Morning,” Jenna said breathlessly. “You will not believe the line at that coffee place.”

Emily stared.

“You’re going to spill it,” she said.

Jenna blinked.

“What?”

The lid popped loose.

Coffee splashed across Jenna’s paperwork.

Both women froze.

Emily felt the world tilt slightly.

Jenna groaned. “You jinxed me!”

But Emily wasn’t listening.

Her hands had started to shake.

Because she hadn’t guessed.

She had remembered.

The rest of the day passed like walking through fog.

Things kept happening exactly how she expected.

The printer jammed at 11:04.

Her boss coughed three times during the staff meeting.

A man in a blue jacket asked the exact same question she’d somehow anticipated.

Each moment felt less like a coincidence.

More like…

Repetition.

Emily drove home with the radio off.

Her mind raced.

Maybe stress.

Maybe I’m just predicting normal routines.

But a small voice inside her whispered something colder.

Or maybe…

She pulled into her driveway.

A crow landed on the mailbox.

It cawed twice.

Emily’s stomach dropped.

She whispered the words before they happened.

“Then the mail truck will pass.”

A second later, the white mail truck rolled by.

Emily didn’t get out of the car.

She sat gripping the steering wheel until her knuckles turned pale.

Her breath fogged the windshield.

“That didn’t happen,” she murmured.

Except it had.

That night, she dreamed.

At least she thought it was a dream.

She was standing in her kitchen.

The clock read 6:41 a.m.

The coffee maker was already on.

The radio whispered static.

And behind her—

Someone said softly:

“You’re getting closer.”

Emily spun around.

No one was there.

The Second Morning

The alarm rang at 6:42 a.m.

Emily’s eyes snapped open instantly.

Her chest rose and fell rapidly.

The ceiling fan turned.

Three rotations.

Click.

Her stomach dropped.

“No.”

She sat up slowly.

The room looked identical to yesterday.

Same sliver of sunlight through the curtains.

Same hum of the refrigerator in the hallway.

She swung her legs out of bed.

The floorboard creaked beneath her heel.

Creak.

Emily froze.

Her pulse pounded in her ears.

“No,” she whispered again.

The day unfolded exactly the same.

Every conversation.

Every sound.

Every moment.

Mr. Hanley’s dog scratching its ear.

Jenna spilling her coffee.

The printer jam.

The crow on the mailbox.

Each event slid into place like pieces of a puzzle she had already solved.

Emily stopped speaking to people.

Stopped reacting.

She just watched.

Because the more she tried to change something—

The more the day resisted.

Once she tried leaving work early.

Her boss stopped her with a last-minute task.

Once she avoided the coffee spill warning.

Jenna spilled it anyway.

It was like the day was a train already moving.

And she was just riding along.

The Third Morning

The alarm rang at 6:42 a.m.

Emily didn’t move.

She stared at the ceiling fan.

Three rotations.

Click.

Her voice was barely audible.

“This is a dream.”

But it wasn’t.

The Fourth Morning

The alarm rang.

Emily threw the phone across the room.

It hit the wall.

Still rang.

Still read 6:42 a.m.

The Fifth Morning

Emily began writing things down.

Predictions.

Events.

Times.

Everything matched.

Exactly.

Except one thing.

Every night, in the dream, the same voice whispered:

“You’re getting closer.”

Closer to what?

The Sixth Morning

The alarm rang at 6:42 a.m.

Emily woke before it.

Her notebook sat open beside the bed.

Five days of identical entries filled the pages.

She swung her legs to the floor.

The floorboard creaked.

Creak.

She didn’t react.

She walked to the kitchen.

Coffee maker.

Radio.

Mr. Hanley.

Dog scratching ear.

Everything exactly the same.

But today, something felt different.

Not the events.

The order.

Her eyes moved slowly around the room.

Then she noticed something that had never caught her attention before.

The kitchen clock.

It read 6:41 a.m.

Emily frowned.

Yesterday it had said 6:42 when she entered.

Every day.

She was sure of it.

Her chest tightened.

She flipped through her notebook.

Every entry.

6:42.

6:42.

6:42.

6:42.

But today—

6:41.

Emily’s breathing quickened.

She whispered softly:

“That didn’t happen.”

Behind her—

A floorboard creaked.

Emily slowly turned around.

Someone was standing in the hallway.

A woman.

Same height.

Same hair.

Same face.

Emily stared at her own reflection standing in the doorway.

The other Emily smiled gently.

“You finally noticed.”

Emily couldn’t speak.

Her throat felt frozen.

The other Emily stepped closer.

“You’ve lived this day five times already.”

Her voice was calm.

Almost kind.

Emily shook her head weakly.

“No…”

“You just didn’t remember.”

The woman tilted her head slightly.

“Memory takes time to wake up.”

Emily stumbled backward against the counter.

“What is this?”

The other Emily looked almost sympathetic.

“Practice.”

“For what?” Emily whispered.

The woman’s smile widened slightly.

“For the day you die.”

Emily’s stomach twisted.

“What?”

The woman stepped closer.

“Tomorrow.”

Emily felt the air vanish from the room.

“That’s not funny.”

The woman didn’t laugh.

“You fall from the bridge at 7:14 p.m.”

Emily’s mind raced.

“That’s impossible.”

“I’ve watched it five times.”

The words landed like stones.

Emily shook her head frantically.

“No. No. I would remember that.”

“You will.”

The woman leaned close.

Her voice dropped to a whisper.

“On the seventh day.”

Emily’s hands trembled.

“Why are you telling me this?”

The woman stepped back toward the hallway.

“Because this time…”

Her eyes gleamed strangely.

“…you might finally notice who pushed you.”

Emily’s breath caught.

“Wait—”

But the hallway was empty.

Gone.

Emily stood alone in the kitchen.

The coffee maker clicked off.

The radio crackled.

“And in local traffic news, the west bridge will remain closed this morning due to ongoing construction—”

Emily stared at the clock.

6:41 a.m.

For the first time in six days…

The day had started differently.

And suddenly the thought hit her like ice water.

If the bridge was closed…

Then why—

Every night—

Did she still remember falling?

Posted Mar 05, 2026
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