Abyssal Veil

Adventure Science Fiction Suspense

Written in response to: "Write a story with more than one POV." as part of Not What It Seems.

THE ABYSSAL VEIL

The ocean at 9,000 meters did not welcome visitors. It tolerated them the way a sleeping giant tolerated insects crawling across its skin — unaware, uninterested, but capable of annihilation with the slightest shift. In the crushing dark, where sunlight had never touched and pressure could fold steel like paper, two divers descended in a reinforced submersible called The Lumen.

They were not supposed to be there. The coordinates were off-limits, uncharted, and flagged by three separate research institutions as “structurally unstable.” But divers had always been drawn to the forbidden. Curiosity was a hunger; greed was an addiction.

And tonight, both were aboard The Lumen.

Mara Vance watched the depth gauge tick downward, each number a reminder of how far they were from the world above. Her breath fogged the inside of her helmet. She wiped it with the back of her glove, annoyed.

“Relax,” said Jace Rourke from the pilot’s seat. “You’re breathing like we’re being chased.”

“We’re descending into a trench no one’s mapped,” Mara replied. “Forgive me for not feeling cozy.”

Jace smirked. “Cozy isn’t why we’re here.”

He guided the submersible through a narrow canyon of black basalt. The floodlights carved tunnels of pale gold through the water, illuminating drifting particles like dust motes in a forgotten attic.

Mara leaned forward. “Look at that rock formation. It’s almost… sculpted.”

“Nature’s weird,” Jace said. “Get used to it.”

But Mara wasn’t convinced. The ridges were too symmetrical, the grooves too deliberate. She made a mental note to photograph them on the ascent.

The radio crackled — static only. They were too deep for communication. Too deep for rescue.

Mara swallowed. “We shouldn’t be here.”

Jace didn’t answer. He didn’t need to. She already knew why he’d insisted on this dive: rumors. Whispers. A sonar anomaly that didn’t match any known species. A shape that moved with intention.

A shape that had appeared only once, yet it was discussed more amongst their group than anything else.

The trench widened into a cavern so vast the floodlights barely touched its edges. Mara felt her pulse quicken.

“Jace… do you see that?”

He leaned forward. “Holy—”

Something glided through the darkness, enormous and silent. Not a fish. Not a whale. Not anything catalogued by science.

Its body shimmered with bioluminescent patterns that shifted like constellations. Its skin was translucent, revealing a lattice of glowing veins. Its eyes — if they were eyes — were clusters of pale blue orbs arranged in spirals.

It moved with impossible grace, folding and unfolding its limbs like ribbons of light.

Mara whispered, “It’s beautiful.”

Jace whispered, “It’s valuable.”

The creature paused, hovering in the water as though studying them. Mara felt a strange warmth in her chest — awe, reverence, something close to fear but not quite.

Jace reached for the harpoon launcher.

Mara grabbed his arm. “Are you insane? We need to document it, not kill it.”

“Who said anything about killing?” Jace said. “I’m going to stun it. Capture it. Do you have any idea what something like this is worth?”

Mara’s voice sharpened. “This is a scientific miracle. We need to alert the institute. Bring in a team. This could change everything we know about deep-sea evolution.”

Jace’s eyes hardened. “Or it could make us rich beyond imagination.”

The creature drifted closer, curious.

Mara’s heart hammered. “Jace. Don’t.”

He fired.

The harpoon shot through the water, trailing a crackling web of electric current. It struck the creature’s side. Light exploded from its body — not blood, not pain, but a burst of shimmering particles like shattered stars.

The creature convulsed, its limbs folding inward. The cavern trembled.

Mara screamed, “You idiot! You don’t know what you’ve done!”

Jace was already moving, activating the containment net. “Help me secure it!”

“No!”

The creature emitted a low, resonant hum that vibrated through the submersible’s hull. The rock walls around them shifted — not collapsing but reacting.

The cavern was alive.

The creature was not alone.

Shapes emerged from the darkness — dozens of them, smaller but similar, their bodies glowing with agitation.

Mara whispered, “Oh God.”

Jace whispered, “Jackpot.”

The swarm circled The Lumen, their lights pulsing in synchronized patterns. The captured creature’s glow flickered weakly.

Mara felt tears stinging her eyes. “We need to release it.”

Jace shook his head. “We’re taking it. And we’re taking samples. And when we get topside, we’re going to sell this discovery to the highest bidder.”

Mara stared at him. “You’re talking about the black market.”

He didn’t deny it.

The swarm tightened around them.

The cavern groaned.

The ocean itself seemed to hold its breath.

The swarm began emitting sharp bursts of light — signals, warnings, maybe threats. The captured creature responded weakly, its glow dimming.

Mara grabbed the controls. “We’re leaving.”

Jace shoved her aside. “Not without the specimen.”

“You’re going to get us killed!”

“Not if you stop fighting me.”

The swarm darted closer, their bodies brushing the hull with soft thuds. The pressure sensors spiked.

Mara pushed Jace away and slammed the emergency ascent button. The engines roared.

The swarm reacted instantly, forming a barrier above them — a living wall of light.

Mara’s breath caught. “They’re blocking us.”

Jace snarled. “Then we break through.”

He reached for the manual override.

Mara grabbed his wrist. “Stop! You’re going to provoke them!”

“They’re animals.”

“They’re intelligent.”

The swarm’s lights shifted — from blue to red.

Mara whispered, “That’s a warning.”

Jace ripped his arm free and hit the override.

The engines surged.

The swarm attacked.

The creatures slammed into the hull, their bodies flashing red. The submersible shuddered violently. Warning lights flared across the dashboard.

Mara fought to stabilize the craft. “We’re going to implode!”

“Not if we get out of here!” Jace shouted.

The captured creature pulsed weakly, its glow fading. The swarm’s attacks intensified.

Mara made a decision.

She unlatched the containment net.

Jace saw. “What are you doing?!”

“Saving us.”

She released the creature.

It drifted free, and its glow slowly strengthening. The swarm paused, their lights shifting back to blue.

Jace lunged at her. “You just threw away millions!”

Mara shoved him back. “I just saved your life.”

The swarm gathered around the freed creature, forming a protective ring. The cavern walls stopped trembling.

The path upward cleared.

Mara exhaled shakily. “We’re leaving. Now.”

Jace glared at her, hatred simmering. “This isn’t over.”

The ascent was silent.

Jace sat rigid, fists clenched, eyes burning with resentment. Mara kept her focus on the controls, refusing to look at him.

When they broke the surface, the night sky felt blinding after the abyssal dark. Mara inhaled deeply, grateful for air that didn’t taste like fear.

Jace stood. “I’m reporting nothing.”

Mara stood too. “I’m reporting everything.”

He stepped closer. “You think anyone will believe you without proof?”

“They’ll believe the sonar logs. The footage. The readings.”

Jace froze.

Mara smiled coldly. “I copied everything.”

His jaw tightened. “You’re going to ruin us.”

“No,” she said. “I’m going to save them.”

Jace’s voice dropped to a whisper. “I won’t let you.”

Over the next days, Mara prepared her report. She contacted marine biologists, research institutes, and ecological preservation groups. She planned a press release.

Jace watched her with quiet fury.

One night, he confronted her on the dock.

“You’re making a mistake,” he said.

“No,” Mara replied. “You made the mistake. I’m fixing it.”

Jace stepped closer. “You’re going to destroy our careers.”

“Some careers deserve to be destroyed.”

He stared at her, something breaking behind his eyes. “I needed that money.”

Mara softened slightly. “Then find another way.”

“There is no other way.”

He turned and walked into the darkness.

Mara felt a chill.

Three weeks later, Mara joined a sanctioned expedition to the trench. She sat in a new submersible, surrounded by scientists and cameras.

The descent felt different this time — hopeful, purposeful.

When they reached the cavern, Mara held her breath.

The swarm appeared.

But this time, they did not attack.

They formed a ring around the submersible, their lights pulsing in gentle patterns. The large creature — the one Jace had captured — drifted forward, glowing brighter than before.

Mara felt tears in her eyes.

One scientist whispered, “They’re communicating.”

Another whispered, “They’re welcoming us.”

Mara whispered, “They remember.”

The expedition was a global sensation. The species was named Luminari abyssalis. Mara became a symbol of ethical discovery.

But Jace vanished.

Rumors spread — he’d joined a smuggling ring, he’d fled the country, he’d drowned himself in the trench.

Mara didn’t believe any of them.

She believed he was waiting.

Watching.

Planning.

Months later, Mara received an anonymous message.

A single sentence:

“You should have let me take it.”

Attached was a sonar image.

A shape.

Large.

Moving.

Not Luminari abyssalis.

Something else.

Something deeper.

Something awake.

Mara stared at the image, her pulse quickening.

The ocean had secrets.

And Jace Rourke had just found another one.

Posted Aug 06, 2026
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Elize Van Zyl
August 13, 2026 17:52

Absolutely captivating. The story truly draws one in and keeps their attention snagged. I wonder what forbidden creature Jace Rourke risked his life to capture evidence of at the end.

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