It was unseasonably hot in the June sun and the house felt like a swollen, airless lung, but Mary wouldn’t open the French windows—she knew what came if she did. She sank into the hall chair, watching the early evening light fall across the faded doormat, and wondered if anyone else would notice the small rhythms of a house like this.
She had crawled into the house at 6.30 p.m., her body a map of localised fires. Despite care taken, a supportive manager, and the kindness of some of the volunteers at the charity shop where she worked, the flaring fibromyalgia felt like it was cannibalising every sinew of her middle-aged body. By the time she stepped through her porch door, she was already negotiating with herself: what could be endured, what must be dulled. She followed the ritual that had evolved over years—lukewarm shower to blunt the nerves, a simple meal of fish and vegetables, no alcohol. Medication only if she had to; generally, she avoided it, hating the way it upset her stomach.
She missed drinking coffee the most. Once, years ago, she had lifted a mug to her lips at her mother’s kitchen table and tasted something burnt and bitter at the back of her throat. Her mother had been talking about exam results, about a neighbour’s son who’d done well. Having missed the grades needed to get into the university of her choice, she’d nodded, letting the heat sting her tongue so she wouldn’t have to answer. The taste had spread across her mouth, sharp and grounding. Pain had been easier to manage when it had arrived with a flavour she could swallow and move past. Even now, the taste lingered, a reminder of how she had learned to swallow disappointment and discomfort quietly—a lesson her mother never seemed to notice, but one that shadowed every ache and decision.
After washing the dishes from a meal she barely remembered tasting, she drew the curtains tight and collapsed onto the sofa. She longed to sit in the garden and catch the last of the sun, but thought better of it. Perhaps later, when next door had gone quiet, she’d check on the hedgehogs that had made a home there. She worried about the smaller one. Just last night she’d found it near the viburnum bush, its tiny chest heaving in panic.
“It’ll be okay,” she’d whispered. “They won’t always be here.”
She longed for that to be true.
Now scrunched into the settee, she flicked the remote, desperate for a nature documentary—something steady, predictable—but the screen flickered, hissed, then died with a soft pop. She’d forgotten to get batteries. The house fell into a fragile, hard-won darkness.
Then—
BARK! BARK!
BARK! BARK! BARK!
The sound wasn’t just a noise; it was a hammer striking a cold anvil somewhere deep inside her skull. The Millers’ new dog, a large, excitable breed, had taken to barking at anything—passersby, the wind, the squeak of their gate. The part that loved animals felt sorry for him: the Millers thought nothing of leaving him to bark late into the night. She wondered why the other neighbours didn’t complain—perhaps they did. She rarely saw them, avoiding conversation in case they asked why she’d let the bushes grow so long without replacing the fence panels. Every yelp rattled the framed photographs of the fish her mother had caught decades earlier. A retired teacher, her mother had bought another house in the country and rarely visited the daughter she so fundamentally failed to understand. Now, Mary pressed a hot water bottle to her stomach, willing her body to calm.
BARK! BARK!
BARK! BARK! BARK!
The dog’s voice seemed to echo through the entire house. Its paws shook the fence. Every yelp carried a metallic pulse that made her head spin. Outside, one of the Millers’ cars sat across her driveway again—a careless obstruction, or a touch of deliberate malice, as though her life was not even an afterthought to them.
When the noise first became unbearable, Mary had done what she believed decent people did. The anxiety had been crippling but she’d fought it and invited Kev and Sarah in so they could hear it for themselves. Kev had filled the room, arms folded, as the dog barked relentlessly from the yard.
“OK, mate, no need to fret. We’ll sort it,” Kev had promised.
She hated being called mate, but not wishing to antagonise him, said nothing.
Except he hadn’t.
Sorted it.
When Mary raised the issue again—voice shaking, she was forced to admit it was badly affecting her mental health—the barking only worsened. The dog seemed to respond with glee to her distress, bolstered by Kev and Sarah’s dismissive attitude.
In desperation, she turned to her mother but she had been no help. The house had been put in Mary’s name, so technically it was hers, but only because of a long-forgotten tax arrangement. Mostly, her hard-of-hearing mother lived elsewhere now, struggling with what little patience she had left.
“You always make too much of things Mary,” she’d scolded. “If you’d had any children of your own, you’d have realised families make noise. That’s life.”
Mary had hung up feeling smaller than ever. She wondered, not for the first time, how much of her pain had been quietly filed away by other people as mere inconvenience.
It was becoming clear she would have to approach the problem differently.
When the Millers went on holiday, Mary didn’t act rashly. She acted carefully.
She contacted a small firm specialising in garden screening and acoustic mitigation. She explained the shared wall and showed insulation that the neighbours had taken from the detached link to fit mechanical devices. The consultant listened, accustomed to neighbours arguing over noise, territory, and light. Measurements were taken, angles calculated, diagrams sketched.
Mary followed none of it properly; the man’s voice came to her as pressure rather than meaning, another thing her body had to endure.
“Hard, reflective surfaces can bounce sound back,” the man explained. “If insulation is missing, vibrations in the wall and floor can amplify rather than absorb it. Angling them carefully can focus that energy in unintended ways.”
Mary signed the forms with aching hands. She dipped into savings she’d once imagined might fund a different life. With minimal rent to pay in return for looking after the house, they had accumulated almost despite her.
On installation day, she waited inside while the contractors worked. Panels were fitted along the boundary—polished acoustic boards designed to redirect sound rather than deaden it. Angled mirrored surfaces were mounted to reflect light back into the garden. Nothing illegal. Nothing aggressive. Everything compliant.
The Millers returned sunburned and loud.
Within minutes, the barking began again, sharp and never ending. Only this time each yelp ricocheted off the panels, bouncing back toward the Millers’ house. The mirrors caught the sun, flaring into their living room, making every movement of the dog’s paws, every squeak of the gate, feel magnified.
The sound warped, metallic and unyielding, thumping through the house like a tortured heartbeat. Every bark carried a second echo—distorted, relentless, impossible to ignore. Kev’s shouts and the dog’s panicked yips tangled into a single, maddening rhythm. Mary listened from her sofa, the absence of noise in her own home almost unbelievably serene. Outside, the hedgehogs ate the food from their bowls, scampering playfully, free of the chaos.
Kev banged on Mary’s door.
“It’s unbearable in there,” he shouted. “The house is humming. And the glare—what the hell have you done?”
Mary kept her voice level. “I had some landscaping done. For light. And sound mitigation.”
“Sarah’s got a migraine and the dog’s terrified. It doesn’t feel like our garden anymore.”
“I did warn you about structural resonance,” Mary said smoothly, refraining from the words pot, kettle, and black. “I’ve started keeping a log. If the council investigates, they may want to look at the insulation you removed.”
Kev stared at her, colour draining from his face.
“You stupid bitch! You threatening us?”
“No,” Mary said, trying not to see the pinpricks in his eyes. “I’m protecting myself.”
That night, the house was quiet. In the distance, water murmured from a brook along the edge of a nearby playing field. In the garden, the hedgehogs moved freely. Mary lay awake, listening to the unfamiliar absence of grating sound.
Even so, the peace when it came, felt thin.
Later, her thoughts returned to her mother’s shrug when she described the situation. Then to Drake, whose eyes had radiated sympathy at the shop—he had pressed a cup of coffee into Mary’s hands after finding her slumped at a desk, unable to speak. She lifted it cautiously, the warmth seeping into her fingers, but then the burnt, bitter taste beneath the milk startled her; she was back at her mother’s kitchen table—a younger self learning to swallow pain without protest. This time, the warmth of the cup felt different: someone had noticed her struggle, and for a moment she could breathe.
“Go on, you know you want to,” he had said.
A faint smile crossed her lips. “Maybe just this once,” she agreed.
It tasted wonderful. Unlike the charred bitterness of her mother’s kitchen, this was smooth and rounded, a dark silk that momentarily silenced the firing nerves in her joints. He’d locked the door first, she remembered, flipped the sign to CLOSED without asking. For once, she hadn’t objected.
Later, she wondered if confiding her problems to a volunteer had been a mistake. Was the stress making her unprofessional? Drake had listened without interruption, his face unreadable, asking only once where the Millers usually parked.
The night after the Millers’ return, a restless Mary woke and went to the window. From the bedroom, she saw a figure in a black hoodie moving through the cul-de-sac. The person paused by the cars parked on the driveway.
Hiss.
Hiss.
Hiss.
Mary didn’t call out.
But she didn’t look away either.
The next morning brought shouting and the siren of a patrol car. She heard Kev’s voice, hoarse with rage, hammering at the door.
The police had arrived to investigate complaints from both sides. Mary tried to explain things calmly. She showed them her medication, hands shaking visibly.
“At the moment,” she said quietly, “I can barely grip a kettle.”
In the background, Kev ranted, unfocused, his words tumbling over each other. Someone had been reported for tampering with the car the night before, but officers treading carefully, treated it as an off-stage action. They took notes, asked questions, and eventually warned Kevin Miller about harassment, the importance of maintaining access on the driveway and keeping good relations with the neighbours.
By September, the Millers were tired. Other neighbours had begun to complain. The house went on the market. Mary watched them leave, relief loosening something she hadn’t realised she’d been holding.
Her mother arrived later that week, surveying the garden with distaste.
“What have you done to the place?” she demanded.
“I tried to tell you how much I was suffering,” Mary said. “You didn’t listen.”
Her mother shook her head. “You’ve always had a way of getting your own way.”
Mary almost told her about Drake and the tyres. Almost said she’d been awake that night. Almost explained how, for once, she’d chosen silence.
Instead she said: “I’ve bought the house next door.” She didn’t say they’d sold it for a song.
Her mother’s expression narrowed.
Mary stood at the window, looking into the empty property. Silent. Still. Waiting to be moulded.
That night, as she closed the curtains, her hand trembled—not from pain, but from something much colder. She thought of the coffee—how bitterness, once tasted could be endured, but never forgotten.
Silence, she realised, when chosen, sounds an awful lot like a scream.
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This is quietly ferocious. I’m really struck by how you let sensory experience carry the moral weight — sound, heat, taste, vibration — until silence itself becomes something dangerous and charged. Mary’s pain is rendered with such restraint that her actions feel both inevitable and unsettling, and the escalation is beautifully paced: nothing overt, nothing implausible, just choices narrowing. That final line reframes everything before it and lingers in a genuinely uncomfortable way. This stayed with me.
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Thank you, Marjolein.
I’m pleased the ending lingered for you. I think the situation my character has found herself in has eaten away what was once a reasonable, even kind nature, exposing another side.
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Thank you for representing Fibromyalgia and how debilitating living with chronic illness can be. 🙌
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Thank you,
I think ‘hidden’ illnesses are debilitating.
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This story is too close to home for comfort. Well, done Helen
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Thanks, John.
Scarily close.
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You do a great job of conveying emotional weight. Nicely written.
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Thank you, Eric.
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Loved this so much! I enjoyed the banter and Mary's actions towards her unruly neighbors. You did a great job, keep it up!:)
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Thank you, indigo. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome 😁
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"She wondered, not for the first time, how much of her pain had been quietly filed away by other people as mere inconvenience." IAWTC.
The mother figure is also very familiar to me. Another standout story, congratulations!
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
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This story offers me solace. Ive dealt with noisy neighbors for so long, with finding peace being quite a challenge, especially with an anxiety disorder. Thank for writing this powerful and wonderfully written story.
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Thank you, Scott. Noisy neighbours are stressful and challenging, especially when they’re not open to reason. It means a lot if my story offers solace.
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A taut gripping story which truly reveals how endless neighbourhood noise can unravel so much more than your peace of mind. Brilliant writing, Helen!
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Hi Rebecca,
Thank you. So pleased you got the unraveling.
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I really enjoyed reading this, Helen. It was truly compelling. The last line sat in the way that just sits with you, you know? Absolutely marvelous work.
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Thank you, Hazel.
If something sits with a reader and is compelling, that makes me happy.
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