For most of his life, Everett Boone had believed God wanted something from him. The problem was figuring out what.
As a boy in northeastern Tennessee, Everett attended church because everybody attended church. His mother sang alto in the choir. His father parked cars on Easter Sunday and Christmas Eve. His grandmother kept a Bible beside her recliner with so many highlighted passages the pages looked diseased.
Everett was baptized at 12. He stopped believing at 23.
There had been no tragedy behind it. No dead child. No cancer diagnosis. No unanswered prayer dramatic enough to justify a crisis of faith. He simply realized one afternoon that he didn't believe any of it.
For 14 years, that was enough.
Then his father died.
Three weeks later, Everett found himself sitting in the back pew of Cedar Ridge Community Church outside Mountain City. He couldn't have explained why he went. Grief probably. Habit. Maybe fear.
Pastor Wade Holcomb preached about the prodigal son. Everett cried in his truck afterward.
He came back the next Sunday. Then the next. Eventually he stopped sitting in the back.
He met Bethany at a church picnic. They married there two years later. He joined a men's Bible study, helped replace the fellowship hall roof, and donated when the church bought backpacks for children whose parents couldn't afford school supplies.
When Bethany miscarried, he prayed. When she became pregnant again, he prayed harder. Their son, Carson, was born healthy. Everett called it a miracle.
Carson died at four days old. An undiagnosed heart defect.
Everett nearly walked away again.
Pastor Holcomb sat beside him in the hospital chapel until three in the morning without offering explanations. He didn't tell Everett everything happened for a reason. He didn't say God needed another angel. He just sat there.
That mattered.
Everett stayed. Eventually, he and Bethany decided not to try again. For seven years, Everett didn't miss a Sunday unless he was sick.
Then came 2026.
In January, the cabinet plant eliminated his position after 11 years. In February, Bethany's mother died. In March, Everett tore his rotator cuff helping a neighbor move a refrigerator. His insurance denied the first request for surgery. In April, the transmission went out in Bethany's Explorer. In May, their basement flooded.
Everett kept praying. At first, he prayed confidently. God had carried him through Carson. He would carry him through this.
In June, Everett finally had surgery and developed an infection. In July, Cedar Ridge held a benefit dinner for his family.
Everett hated needing it. He had always been the man carrying folding tables, grilling hamburgers, slipping $50 into somebody else's envelope. Now he stood beside Pastor Holcomb while people dropped checks into a basket with his name taped to it.
"God provides," Holcomb told him.
Everett looked around at people who had known him most of his adult life. Maybe He did.
In August, Bethany's hours at the pharmacy were cut. In September, their insurance company informed them that the basement damage wasn't covered because the water had entered through the foundation. The same week, Everett received a collection notice for $7,840 in medical bills.
He prayed every night. Sometimes for help. Eventually just for an explanation.
One night, Bethany found him sitting at the kitchen table at three in the morning. "What are you doing?"
"Waiting."
"For what?"
"I don't know anymore."
She sat beside him. "Maybe we're supposed to learn something from this."
Everett laughed. It came out harsher than he intended.
"What?"
"I've apparently been a slow learner since January."
She frowned. "I'm serious."
"So am I. How much shit does He have to throw at us before I figure out the lesson?"
"Don't talk like that."
"Why? He'll get mad?"
Bethany stood.
Everett immediately regretted it. "I'm sorry."
She kissed the top of his head. "So am I."
On October 3, their water heater ruptured. Everett found it at 2:17am in the morning. He stood barefoot in cold water spreading across the utility-room floor while Bethany ran upstairs for towels.
He stared at the ceiling. He waited for anger. Instead, something inside him simply switched off.
"I'm done."
He didn't shout it. He didn't curse God. He didn't shake his fist at heaven. He just stopped.
The strange thing was how good it felt.
The next morning, the water heater was still broken. He was still unemployed. His shoulder still hurt. The medical bills remained on the kitchen counter. Nothing had improved. Except Everett no longer had to wonder what lesson God was trying to teach him.
The water heater broke because it was 17 years old. His company fired him because cutting middle management saved money. His shoulder tore because human tissue failed under sufficient force. Bethany's mother died because she had pancreatic cancer. Carson died because his heart had formed incorrectly.
That last realization should have hurt. Instead, it freed him from a question he'd carried for years. God hadn't killed his son. Nobody had. Carson's heart failed. That was horrible enough without making it intentional.
Bad things happened because bad things happened. There didn't have to be a reason.
For the first time in months, Everett slept through the night.
He skipped church Sunday. Pastor Holcomb called Monday. Everett ignored it. Deacon Curtis Mabe called Tuesday. Everett answered.
"We missed you."
"I know."
"You doing okay?"
"Better, actually."
Curtis hesitated. "Pastor said you're struggling with your faith."
"I'm not struggling anymore."
"Good."
"I don't believe in God."
The silence lasted several seconds.
"Everett."
"I don't."
"You've had a terrible year."
"Exactly."
"God tests us."
"Then I failed."
"That's not what I mean."
Everett looked at the stack of bills. "I've spent nine months trying to figure out what God wanted me to learn. Turns out shit just happens, Curtis. That's easier."
"You don't mean that."
"I do."
Curtis sighed. "We'll pray for you."
"Okay."
Three days later, Curtis Mabe died. He was 51. Massive heart attack while changing a tire.
Everett attended the funeral. Pastor Holcomb spoke about God's unknowable plan. Everett sat beside Bethany and said nothing.
At the graveside, Curtis's widow hugged him. "He was worried about you."
Everett didn't know what to say.
"He prayed for you every night."
That bothered Everett more than he expected.
Two weeks later, Gary Tolliver's hardware store burned to the ground. Gary was an elder at Cedar Ridge. Electrical fire.
The newspaper photographed him standing outside the ruins holding a smoke-blackened Bible. The picture went around Facebook.
IT'S A SIGN, someone commented.
Everett looked closer. Gary kept the Bible in the steel filing cabinet behind his desk. The cabinet was rated for fire protection.
That wasn't a sign. That was engineering.
He found himself doing that constantly now. Separating what happened from what people wanted it to mean.
A rainbow was sunlight refracting through water droplets. A tumor disappearing after chemotherapy wasn't proof of prayer. It was chemotherapy working. A drunk driver missing your car by three feet didn't mean God protected you unless you were prepared to explain why God hadn't protected the family he hit 10 miles later.
Everett had answers now. They weren't comforting. He preferred them anyway.
In November, church secretary Darlene Huxley's husband rolled his pickup on Highway 91. Dead instantly.
The following Sunday, Cedar Ridge was packed. Everett didn't attend, but Bethany did.
"Pastor says the church is under spiritual attack," she told him afterward.
"From what?"
"Satan."
"Because Gary's wiring was old and Vernon drove too fast?"
"Everett."
"I'm asking."
She stared at him. "Something's not right."
Everett almost laughed. On that, they agreed. He just didn't think Satan had anything to do with it.
Then Rebecca Sloan disappeared.
Twenty-six years old. Sunday-school teacher. Married. Two children.
Her car was found at Watauga Lake. Her purse was inside. So was her phone.
They never found Rebecca.
Cedar Ridge held a prayer vigil. Everett went because Bethany asked. More than 100 people stood in the sanctuary with candles.
Pastor Holcomb raised both hands. "We will not allow fear to shake our faith."
Amen.
"We will not allow tragedy to separate us from God."
Amen.
"Whatever trials come, we know our Lord will protect His faithful."
Amen.
Everett looked around. Something bothered him. He couldn't identify it until they got home.
Then he opened his laptop. He made a spreadsheet.
Bethany watched from the couch. "What are you doing?"
"Checking something."
Curtis Mabe. Church attendance: every Sunday.
Gary Tolliver. Every Sunday plus Wednesday Bible study.
Darlene and Vernon Huxley. Every Sunday.
Rebecca Sloan. Sunday school. Wednesday study. Women's ministry.
Everett added other people. Members who attended occasionally. Nothing. People who had left Cedar Ridge. Nothing. Christmas-and-Easter Christians. Nothing.
He stared at the screen. "That's stupid," he whispered.
"What is?"
"Nothing."
So, he added himself. Before October: Weekly. After October 3: Almost never.
Nothing had happened to him since.
Actually, that wasn't quite true. He had found work. Not good work. A maintenance job at a motel in Boone, North Carolina. The commute was miserable and the pay was less than he'd made at the plant, but it covered groceries. His shoulder infection cleared. The hospital approved a payment plan. Bethany got her hours back.
Everett stared at the spreadsheet. Coincidence. Obviously.
He had spent years believing unrelated events were connected because he wanted them to be. He wasn't going to make the same mistake in reverse.
Then Gary Tolliver died.
Carbon monoxide poisoning. His generator malfunctioned during a power outage.
Three days earlier, Gary had given testimony at Cedar Ridge. Bethany showed Everett the video.
Gary stood behind the pulpit. "I lost my business, but I didn't lose my faith. The devil can take everything I own. He can take my house. He can take my life. But he can't take Jesus from me."
People applauded.
Everett paused the video. Three days.
He added another column to the spreadsheet. Public declarations of faith.
Curtis had posted one two days before his heart attack. Darlene had posted that God would carry her family through any storm. Vernon died four days later. Rebecca had written that she trusted God's plan completely. She disappeared the next morning.
Everett searched backward. There were smaller incidents he'd forgotten. A choir member who testified about God's protection broke both legs falling from a ladder. A teenager who was baptized in August nearly drowned the following week. A woman who posted that God had healed her breast cancer learned 11 days later it had spread to her liver.
Everett leaned back. The rational part of his brain rebelled. Selection bias. Confirmation bias. Small sample size. He knew all the words. None made the spreadsheet disappear.
He called Pastor Holcomb. "I need you to stop."
"Stop what?"
"All of it. The testimonies. The vigils. Telling people to prove how strong their faith is."
"Everett, I think you should come see me."
"I'm serious."
"So am I."
"People keep declaring their faith and then something happens."
"You're seeing what you want to see."
Everett almost smiled. Six months earlier, Pastor Holcomb had told him coincidences were God's way of remaining anonymous. Now coincidence was apparently sufficient.
"Cancel Sunday service."
"I won't do that."
"Then don't ask people to testify."
"We're Christians, Everett. We're not going to hide our faith because we're afraid."
"I'm not asking you to hide."
"What are you asking?"
Everett looked at the spreadsheet. "I'm asking you to shut up."
Pastor Holcomb hung up.
Sunday morning, Everett woke to Bethany getting dressed. "Don't go."
She continued buttoning her blouse.
"Beth."
"I believe in God."
"I know."
"You used to."
"I know."
"I'm not going to pretend I don't because you're angry."
"I'm not angry anymore."
"Then what are you?"
Everett considered it. "Scared."
She sat beside him. "Do you remember after Carson died?"
He looked away.
"You couldn't get out of bed. Wade came every day. Curtis mowed our lawn. Darlene brought food. Gary paid the electric bill without telling us."
"I remember."
"Those people are our family."
"This isn't about whether they're good people."
"Then come with me."
"Bethany."
"Please."
He did.
Cedar Ridge was overflowing. Word had spread about the tragedies. Instead of frightening people away, they had drawn them closer.
Pastor Holcomb stood behind the pulpit. "We have been tested."
Amen.
"We have been attacked."
Amen.
"But today we're going to show the enemy that Cedar Ridge belongs to God."
The congregation stood. Everett remained seated. Pastor Holcomb noticed. So did everyone else.
"Everett."
Bethany squeezed his hand.
Pastor Holcomb smiled. "Would you come up here?"
Everett shook his head.
"Please."
People turned. Everett reluctantly walked forward.
Holcomb put a hand on his shoulder. "This man has suffered more this year than most of us can imagine."
Everett's stomach tightened.
"He lost his job. His health. His financial security. He lost a son years ago and somehow found the strength to keep believing. But somewhere along the way this year, Everett lost his faith."
Nobody moved.
"But we haven't lost faith in him."
Amen.
Holcomb turned toward Everett. "God hasn't abandoned you."
"Pastor."
"All you have to do is ask Him back."
"Don't."
"We'll ask together."
The congregation began praying. Not quietly. Dozens of voices filled the sanctuary.
Everett looked at Bethany. She was praying too. His pulse accelerated. "Stop."
Nobody heard him.
"Stop praying."
Holcomb squeezed his shoulder. "Let Him in."
Everett pulled away. "Everybody shut up!"
Silence. A few people gasped.
Everett looked across the sanctuary. "You think this is Satan testing you? Fine. You think I'm an asshole who lost his faith? Fine. But every person who's stood up here declaring how certain they are has had something happen to them."
Murmurs.
Holcomb stepped toward him. "Everett, that's enough."
"Gary said God could take his life. Three days later, he died."
"Coincidence."
"Rebecca said she trusted God's plan. She disappeared."
"Stop."
"Curtis posted that nothing could shake his faith. Two days later, his heart exploded."
Bethany stood. "Everett."
He looked at her.
"Please."
A woman near the front began crying.
Pastor Holcomb took the microphone. "Fear is not stronger than faith."
Everett backed away. "Don't say it."
Holcomb looked directly at him. "My faith in Jesus Christ is absolute."
The lights went out.
Someone screamed. Emergency lights flickered on. Red.
A sound came from above them. Scratching. Slow at first. Then fast.
Something moved across the ceiling. People looked up. The ceiling tiles bowed downward one after another as something crossed above them. Pastor Holcomb whispered, "Dear God."
A tile dropped. Something came through.
Everett never understood what he saw. Too many joints. Skin that looked wet. A mouth where no mouth belonged.
It hit Holcomb hard enough to tear him from the floor.
The congregation erupted. People ran. The sanctuary doors slammed shut. Someone screamed Jesus's name. The scream ended abruptly.
Another person prayed. Something moved through the red darkness. Another scream.
Everett dropped behind the pulpit. People begged God to save them. Each prayer became a beacon. Each declaration received an answer.
A man shouted that he rebuked Satan in Christ's name. Something pulled him backward between the pews so quickly his shoes remained behind. A woman raised a wooden cross. The darkness above her moved. The cross struck the floor alone.
Everett understood. Not what the thing was. Not where it came from. Only what it heard. Faith. Certainty. Declaration. He crawled toward Bethany. She was on her knees. Hands clasped.
"Beth."
"Our Father, who art in heaven…"
He grabbed her. "Stop praying."
She fought him. "Hallowed be Thy…"
"Bethany, please."
Something moved behind her. Everett clamped his hand over her mouth. She bit him. He jerked away.
"Jesus Christ, save me!"
The thing behind her unfolded. Everett reached for her. He caught two fingers. For half a second, that was all that remained of his wife. Then even those slipped away. Everett crawled beneath the pulpit. He stayed there while people he had known for years called upon God. One by one, their voices stopped.
He didn't pray. Not when something dragged itself across the pulpit above him. Not when warm blood ran over his hand. Not when something breathed inches from his face.
For the first time in his life, disbelief required faith of its own. He held onto it.
There was nobody listening. There was nobody coming. There was nothing to save him.
Eventually, the scratching moved away. By sunrise, the sanctuary was quiet.
Police broke through the doors at 7:42am. They found Everett beneath the pulpit. Alive.
Around him were things the sheriff would later order his deputies never to describe. Forty-three people were dead. Nineteen were missing.
Everett had no blood on him except Bethany's and his own. They handcuffed him anyway.
Outside, ambulances filled the parking lot. An EMT knelt beside the only other survivor. Darlene Huxley. Her face was gray. Her clothing was soaked in blood. She opened her eyes. "God saved me."
Everett stopped walking. From inside Cedar Ridge came a scratching sound. The deputy holding his arm didn't notice. Darlene clasped the EMT's hand. "Will you pray with me?"
Everett stared at the church doors.
Scratch.
Scratch.
Scratch.
The deputy pushed him toward the cruiser. Behind him, Darlene began to pray. Everett closed his eyes.
I tried to tell them…
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Wow, this one was intense! I loved how the story explored faith, tragedy, and doubt before taking such a terrifying turn. Everett's struggles felt so real, and watching him slowly piece everything together made the suspense even better. The church scene was absolutely horrifying, and that ending gave me chills! Such a disturbing and thought-provoking story that will definitely stick with me!
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Thanks. I think most people struggle with their faith from time to time.
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This is so on point for me. Last year my workmate and close friend’s 17 year old son died after a12 years battling a terminal illness.
Even though we’re both Christians, we weren’t trying find or contrive some big reason behind his death. I just worked along side him, and did the my best to help him process his grief. It was really tough going watching someone go through that, and not try to rationalise, but simply sit with it.
Thank you for having the courage to post this short story.
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Thank you. I’m sorry you had to go through that. Awful situation. That is the kind of thing that led me to write this and question my beliefs lately. Because I’m sick of seeing bad things happen to good people.
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“That wasn't a sign. That was engineering.” Brilliant. Everett’s increasingly desperate attempts to explain everything rationally make the eventual revelation genuinely unsettling. I especially liked the spreadsheet: such an ordinary, almost absurdly practical way to uncover something horrifying. And the reversal is deliciously cruel. Faith, usually the refuge from evil, becomes precisely what attracts it. The final scratching, just as Darlene begins to pray, is chilling. No elaborate explanation needed. We know.
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Thanks again. I love how you always pick up some of the subtle things I put in my stories that not many others do. You are an extremely perceptive reader and writer! I am working on my backlog of your stories. End of the term at one of my adjunct jobs this week so a lot of grading to do first. Ha.
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What a brilliant story! I absolutely loved the faith in being faithless, and how both may lead to a sense of content. It started as something that felt like a very interesting story on discovery of faith (or no faith) through difficulty, but then the coincidences started! I almost forgot the prompt while reading and was so excited to see it appear. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you! This came up during a very...interesting...time of my life. I felt a little evil writing it but the idea came and I ran with it.
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Creepy and so well written! You nailed suspense and mystery! Wow!!
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Thanks for your support!
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It may be a little dark for some people. I have been questioning my faith lately after possibly the worst year in my life, so I figured the best outlet was to write fiction and get it out of me.
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