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How long are five minutes?
Long enough to devour a sandwich.
Not long enough to put one together from scratch.
Long enough to buy a book.
Not long enough to re-read your favourite one.
Long enough to call a loved one.
Not long enough to talk to them for the last time.
I learnt the meaning of five minutes when I saw someone breathing their last. I know that being a doctor meant seeing many people's last five minutes, I was trained for that, programmed, even. But this time I was unprepared.
Possibly because this time that 'someone' was me.
1...2...3...4...5.
That's five minutes, and that's it.
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Heyyyyy
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Hiya!
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Ok, wow.
When I saw how short this was I was just like "...?" but it didn't disappoint! How you managed to pack so much into 99 words I will never know. Kudos!
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Thank you so much!
Even I don't know how it did it 😅
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P.S.: It is actually 107 words ;)
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XD
Oops, shoot lol. My bad.
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Hehee
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oh my gosh, this is one of the best short stories i've read in a long time! was not expecting that. well done :)
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Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!
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This hits hard. I was not expecting the ending.
I like how you juxtapose the ideas of eating a generic sandwich quickly and buying a generic book with eating a homemade sandwich and reading a beloved book. If I knew I was going to die, I’d much rather reread one of my favorite books than go start a new one.
I like the back and forth yes-no-yes-no-yes-no that asks me what I see as more important. The things we really want to do takes time we may not have, and that can be really sad.
[Long enough to call a loved one.
Not long enough to talk to them for the last time.]
This part is especially good.
Great job, Dhwani!
How are you doing?
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Thank you so much for this amazing comment, Guadalupe!!!
I'm doing okay these days, some highs, some lows.
What about you?
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love the story, its kind of poetic the way its written lol(and kinda reminds me of that one einstein quote on relativity)
how are you? tis been so long :)
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Thank you so much Philiaaaa!!!
How have you been? (I have no idea what quote you are talking about)
I've been great, started college year 2.
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:)
topsy-turvy haha but s'alright :) (the one which goes like if youre sitting on hot cinders 2 minutes feel like 2 hours but if youre in the company of a hot girl, 2 hours seem like 2 minutes or something like that)
thats lovely! how's college?
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Cool
(ah, I've heard that one)
It's great! What about you? You're in school (which class)?
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Nice! What are you majoring in?
Yep, I'm in 11th :] crazy how i was in middle school when i joined reedsy and now im teetering on the edge of high school :')
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I don't have a major as such. I am pursuing a BBA degree from an IIM.
XD, I was in 10th when I joined and now here I am, in second year of college! How are you liking class 11? Which stream have you chosen?
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It reminds me of that country song "Five More Minutes" by Scotty McCreery. Five minutes is a precious thing. Thanks for the reminder :)
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Heyyy
Thank you!
I haven't heard that song, but I will and get back to you.
(BTW, I wrote the story in five minutes too ;) )
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I just heard the song, and I LOVE IT!!!!!!
Thank you so much for the recommendation!
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