Submitted to: Contest #330

Splendor in the Grass

Written in response to: "Center your story around a first or last kiss, hug, or smile."

Inspirational Romance Teens & Young Adult

Splendor in the Grass

A Story of Eden

The garden had looked beautiful every day since the beginning, but this morning, it looked like it had just remembered how.

Sunlight didn't simply shine; it rested. The breeze didn't merely move; it lingered, brushing softly over skin as if trying to understand it. Even the water seemed to run more slowly, with a quiet awareness, like it had discovered that flowing was a choice.

The grass was the first to notice.

Grass never knew much, except how to be soft, how to grow toward warmth, and how to bow politely when wind or footsteps passed. But today, something in the grass stilled. Not for long, just long enough to feel something.

Something like pause.

Something like hush.

Something like waiting.

Eve noticed it too, not the grass exactly, but that same feeling. The air felt different. The garden didn't just exist around her; it seemed to be watching. Not expecting. Just paying attention.

She stood barefoot near the stream, brushing Earth from her feet. She didn't need to; it wasn't uncomfortable. But her hands needed something to do. Her steps through the grass were slow, and the grass reacted, not bending briskly like it did when she ran or danced, but slowly, softly, curving as if not wanting to forget the places she touched.

She looked across the clearing.

Adam sat near the fig trees, running his fingers through the grass the way he always did, like someone trying to read something that wasn't quite a language yet. He often traced patterns through blades, not to find answers, but to feel the question.

Eve watched him.

She had seen him a thousand times in a thousand moments: climbing trees, laughing at the playful snorts of a young goat, wading through water only to marvel at how it clung to him like it didn't want to let go. But today she noticed something else.

Not what he was. What he was becoming.

She walked toward him. Not quickly. Not slowly. Just quietly, as though movement itself should be gentle today.

The grass brushed against her ankles, but did not tug; it only bowed, then slowly rose again, as though quietly attentive.

Adam looked up before she reached him.

He didn't seem surprised to see her, though she hadn't called his name. He only blinked once, slowly, as if noticing that the garden itself felt unusually attentive.

Eve sat beside him. Not close, just closer.

"Do you feel it?" she asked softly.

Adam sat still for a moment, turned his face to the breeze, then to her. "Yes," he said. "It feels like the moment before something happens."

"What happens?" Eve whispered, almost afraid that words might interrupt whatever this was.

Adam smiled, not out of certainty, but out of gentleness. "I don't know," he said quietly. "But maybe not knowing is the point."

They fell into soft silence, the kind that does not feel empty.

Their hands rested in the grass between them. Or rather, the grass rested beneath their hands, holding itself still, as though curious.

Eve's fingers moved first, not by intention, just by instinct. They brushed the grass, then brushed his hand. Not firmly. Just truly. Like the moment itself had gently guided them.

Adam didn't move away.

He didn't move toward her either.

He simply turned his palm upward, quietly, revealing a softness that felt more about permission than about skin.

Their fingers found each other.

The grass, which normally would have sprung back into shape, stayed softly bent. As if choosing to listen.

They both looked down at their connected hands. The look was not confusion, nor certainty, but something that felt like recognition.

She noticed he had forgotten to blink.

He noticed she had forgotten to breathe.

Neither mentioned it.

The garden was quiet now. Still, but not empty. Alive, but not noisy. The kind of quiet that feels full.

Their heads tilted, just slightly. Not in decision, more in discovery.

Adam leaned in. Not because he knew what would happen, but because he wanted to know.

Eve leaned too. Not because she understood, but because something in her felt gently pulled.

Their foreheads met first.

It wasn't dramatic. It was not even fully intentional. It was just nearer.

His breath brushed her cheek. It felt different from the wind. Wind moved past you, but this seemed to stay.

Her heart beat faster.

She had always had a heartbeat, but now she felt it.

Strange, how something can exist all along, and only be noticed when it changes rhythm.

Their noses brushed, and both paused.

Not from embarrassment. From noticing.

The pause was small. The meaning was not.

Eve gently tilted her face toward his.

Adam quietly did the same.

No one taught them this.

No one had to.

Their lips met.

The grass did not breathe, grass doesn't breathe, but if it could have, it would have held it.

The contact was neither soft nor hard, neither perfect nor imperfect; it was true. And, for the first time in all of existence, that was enough.

Adam didn't think, This is a kiss.

Eve didn't think, This is the first kiss.

They only thought that if this was a thing, it felt like something that already understood them, even though they did not understand it.

When they drew back, just slightly, their faces remained close.

Eve opened her eyes first.

Adam opened his.

Neither spoke.

Not because there was nothing to say, but because words, if spoken now, might come out too small.

They sat quietly, hands still joined, hearts still stunned.

Then, something neither expected happened:

Adam looked at Eve, the way water looks at sunlight. The way the grass looks toward the sky.

Like he wasn't just seeing her, but seeing what she meant to the garden, how she meant more.

Eve, she looked back, the way a field sees the wind, not seeing the wind itself, but seeing its effect on what is already rooted.

Neither noticed their eyes filling with something that might one day be called tenderness.

Not yet, that word didn't exist.

Someday, someone would create it, and maybe that word would remember this moment, too.

They stood slowly, feeling the warmth of hand-prints still pressed in the grass where they had been sitting.

Neither mentioned it.

They walked away, but not far.

They didn't need far. There was nowhere else to go that felt more right.

By afternoon, the garden looked unchanged.

The birds still called. The trees still swayed. The stream still ran in its careful, wandering way.

There was no obvious sign that anything new had happened.

No sign, except in the grass.

The grass no longer lay perfectly upright where they had been sitting.

It stayed gently pressed down, not from weight, but from memory.

For the first time in the history of the Earth, something that had happened left a trace.

Not a wound.

Not a scar.

A softness.

The first mark of tenderness.

Something in the ground had learned how to remember.

It would remember.

Even if no one asked it to.

Posted Nov 26, 2025
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CC CWSCGS
04:19 Dec 04, 2025

A gentle, poetic reimagining. Feels both ancient and fresh. Beautiful!

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Krystal Renee
23:23 Dec 03, 2025

This was a great story! Soft, paced well, and kept me reading. I liked your storytelling :)

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