Victor's Village (Hunger Games Spinoff)

Coming of Age

Written in response to: "Write about someone who’s so obsessed with a goal that it leads to the destruction of their closest relationship." as part of To Err Is Human.

"Yield already!" He stood no chance against me. This was the final test before the games. I was the only one good enough. Or at least better than everyone else. I had him in a leglock, choking the living breath out of him, and the bastard wasn't even yielding. He'd rather die than win the Hunger Games. Finally, he tapped my leg in submission, and I withdrew.


"Amazing, as usual, Ginger. Your sister would've been proud." Ugh, everyone brought up my sister whenever they were around me. It was like her honorable performance dampened everything I did well. Well, Clove, once I win the games, no one will be thinking of your performance. Only mine.


"Next time, remember your other leg." I kicked the challenger one last time for good measure and left him whimpering there. What a pathetic mess. There was no way he belonged in that arena, let alone in honorable District 2.


"Nice job, girl!!" Kate gave me a high five. "You almost made him barf! Hah, what a weakling!" Kate was the only other sensible person in the entire training class. Everyone else was merciful and kind. Such circus monkeys.


I was going to get into that arena this year, whether I volunteered or not. No one was going to stop me. And then, I'll be the best victor that anyone's ever seen.


As I waltzed home, prowling the streets for unsuspecting freaks, I heard a scream from inside my house. Then another, only this time it was a male scream. That meant Aunt Enobaria and Dad were sparring again.


"You've gotten old, Leo." She gave him a sucker punch, laughing all the while.


"Not as old as you!" Dad swept her legs out from under her and put her in a chokehold. I held my breath. That was what real victors looked like. Finally, she tapped out. Sometimes Dad won, sometimes she won, but they could both fight better than anyone I'd ever seen. That was what happened in the arena. You grew strong.


Enobaria wasn't actually my aunt, but she was the closest victor to my Dad. She had won the 62nd Games, my Dad had won the 60th. He had known her since childhood though.


"Dad, Eno, I'm home." I threw my bag on the table, which brought their heads up immediately.


"Hey, Fox!" That was his nickname for me. Fearless Fox. Wasn't that bad, actually, compared to what it could be. Foxes were agile, clever, vicious. He'd started calling me that after I killed my first rabbit.

I walked up into my room, picking up pieces of equipment as I went. It was time to practice. I normally practiced for five hours nonstop, but this was different. Reaping was in a week. I had to practice on a target.


As I ran back out into the streets, I flexed my muscles and breathed in the fresh air. It felt good to be the queen.

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"Stop!!" The tiny kids were running away, frantically trying to escape. There was no law here against fighting, as long as you classified it under training for the games. I was training for the game so they allowed it.


I slammed the smallest with a combination of punches and kicks. He wouldn't survive, but I didn't care. I was going to be in tip-top shape up until the point that they plopped me in that arena.


"Ginger! What are you doing!" Suddenly, strong arms pulled me down to the ground. It was Kate Reynolds. "That's my brother, you freak!" She punched me a couple of times before running away with the weakling boy.


I was aghast. My only friend disapproved of my training for the games? Maybe she wasn't the honorable warrior I thought she was. I trudged along. Clove wouldn't have cared if someone was beating me up. She would've let me suffer, thinking it would make me stronger. That was what a good sister did. I hated to admit it, but Clove was a better sister than anyone who solves their sibling's problems for them.


DAY OF THE REAPING:


I stood in the crowd, knowing that even in my drab attire I stood out. I was the obvious choice. No one else would be volunteering if they knew that I was. The little cowards. As Martin Lestrade walked aboard the stage, he looked out at everyone. He did this every year, seeing who would bring honor and glory to the Capitol and their District. As his eyes swept over me, I smiled with pride. I was going to win this no matter what it took.


As President Snow's voice overtook the crowd, I listened. I imagined him telling me "Fine performance, Ginger. You have made Panem proud." That was every tribute's dream. Or at least the dream of every true warrior.


The tape stopped and Martin was silent. I immediately knew something was wrong. He would always start into his speech right after President Snow's video.


A scream sounded through the crowd. Peacekeepers were swarming everywhere, knocking down people left and right. So it was a test. I ran up to them, kicking and punching, chopping, and squeezing. They stood no chance. I had all of them down on the ground in seconds.


A sound wafted into my ears. Clapping. Martin Lestrade was clapping.


"Well done!! Now we must ship you off to jail." His smile never wavered.


"What? I thought it was a test! I thought I passed!" I started getting violent, kicking the wounded soldiers.


"No, my child. Not everything is a test. The Capitol was trying to infiltrate traitors, and you have just violated federal law." He giggled gleefully.


No, I had to go. They couldn't stop me. No, I was going to go. To be better than Clove. They can't stop me. No! My mind kept spiraling in a circle, angry and deranged. Suddenly, I turned on him.


"You can't stop me. I'm going to the games no matter what." I lunged at him, no longer caring. There was a new victor in town.



DEDICATED TO FEARLESS FOX, KATE REYNOLDS, and LEO GREER. CHECK THEM OUT PLEASE THEY'RE AMAZING!!!!

Posted Dec 02, 2020
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GREAT STORY LOVED IT HOW DO YOU MAKE MY HEART LEAP EVERY TIME?!?!

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December 02, 2020 17:30

I guess that's just what writing is lol!!

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I HOPE U WRITE MORRR I NEED MORRR
(No pressure okay?)

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December 03, 2020 12:45

Lol I will!!

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YAYAAYAYAYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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December 03, 2020 18:22

YAAAAY

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Kate Reynolds
December 06, 2020 18:48

GREAT JOB!!! And thanks so much for including me!! I really like the Hunger Games so this was just wonderful! :)

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December 06, 2020 18:51

Yay!! You finally saw it!!! I feel like, even though you were in a career district, you'd be nice and kind deep down.

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Kate Reynolds
December 06, 2020 18:52

Aw thankss!!

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December 06, 2020 18:52

No Problem!!!

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December 06, 2020 18:52

Hey Kate, can you get me to 2000?

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Kate Reynolds
December 06, 2020 18:53

Ooh sureee!!

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December 06, 2020 18:54

Yay!!! Thanks so much!!!

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Jubilee Forbess
December 09, 2020 15:15

what do you consider junk fiction??

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December 09, 2020 15:18

Pornography, Nurse Fiction, insanely crzy sci-fi, fanfics I believe are a good starting point but not the best to be published.

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Jubilee Forbess
December 09, 2020 15:21

Insanely crazy sci-fi? Hmm, okay. I'm curious as to what those would be considering you like books like Divergent and Hunger Games XD.

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December 09, 2020 15:22

No, dystopian to me is an honest genre, but insane sci-fi is like using other books inside of your own or other fandoms, and going into it with the intention of making a movie.

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Jubilee Forbess
December 09, 2020 15:27

So what do you think of the Star Wars franchise? Those were books before they were films.

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December 09, 2020 15:29

That had very legitimate worldbuilding, and I think that doesn't qualify for junk fiction, but maybe a little closer to the junky side.

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Nainika Gupta
December 02, 2020 21:08

Wow!! I loved the cleverness of this story, and how you paid tribute (loll) to the Hunger Games while spinning it to your style!!!!

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December 02, 2020 21:14

Thanks so much!!!!

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Nainika Gupta
December 02, 2020 21:15

Of course:)

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Marcail Nevaeh
December 02, 2020 18:54

Amazing Job!

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December 02, 2020 18:55

Thanks you!!

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Marcail Nevaeh
December 02, 2020 20:32

Yup!!!

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A. S.
December 02, 2020 18:08

This was great! I really enjoyed how you built your characters and incorporated bits and pieces of the original trilogy into your story. Good job!

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December 02, 2020 18:12

Thanks!!!

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December 02, 2020 17:13

WOWOWOWOW!!! AMAZING!!!
(I’m totally awesome! XD Jk.)

So... I’m guessing you like the Hunger Games?

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December 02, 2020 17:13

I am an oblongly large fan. Yeah, you're a total badass

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December 02, 2020 17:16

I’ve only read the first one so far, but I’m waiting on the other two! Haha! Yea, nobody messes with the Fox or else... XD

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December 02, 2020 17:16

There's also another prequel that she wrote. Yeah, no one messes with the Fox!! Can I call you Ginger, since that was her name??

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December 02, 2020 17:18

Oh really? Wait, was that “The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes” or something like that? I want to read that, too! XD Yeah, sure!!!

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December 02, 2020 17:19

Yeah, it was the story of Prez Snow. Yay!!

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Pippin Took
March 15, 2021 20:59

AHHHHHHH!

This is a good story!

I love the Hunger Games, and Suzanne Collins really only focuses on District 12, occasionally 11, but hot dang I wanted to know more about the Careers! I love that you made Ginger's aunt Enobaria! Such a clever idea!

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March 15, 2021 21:31

Thankooooooooooooo Peregrin!!!! That’s so kind!!!

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Pippin Took
March 16, 2021 00:53

I like that you call me Peregrin XD

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March 16, 2021 11:48

Well that's his real name XDDDDDDDDDDDD Him and Meriadoc Brandybuck!!!

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Pippin Took
March 16, 2021 13:33

Very true :D

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March 16, 2021 13:35

Heehee so happy to find another LOTR fan!!! You should check out my bestie Mira, she adores them too!! She's an Arwen fan...

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Frances Reine
January 07, 2021 13:18

I am absolutely obsessed with the hunger games and I didn't really enjoy the book that just came out but thank you SO MUCH for writing this! I loved this one so unbelievably much !!

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January 07, 2021 13:23

Awwwww Thank you!!! I really enjoyed writing this!!

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Frances Reine
January 07, 2021 13:29

No problem! ...Got any more? lol

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January 07, 2021 13:29

I don't have any more THG fanfics, but I can write another fanfic if you tell me which book you want me to write it for!!

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Frances Reine
January 07, 2021 13:34

OMG rlly? Could you please do a little one for Catching Fire? If you have time and if the prompt matches, I mean. No worries if you don't :)
Can't wait for ANYTHING you write in the future! ;)

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January 07, 2021 13:35

Ofc!!! I'll do it next contest, and a new story of mine is coming out today!!

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This character get so carried away sometimes... Kind of like me, so I'm glad I don't like in the hunger games. (I'm weird)

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January 01, 2021 21:53

Lol I’m weird you’re weird we’re all weird

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Cheers for being weird :)

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January 01, 2021 22:22

😂

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December 11, 2020 22:53

Wow, Litlover! This was great! I love the Hunger Games, and this was an interesting and awesome spin-off! -Brooke

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Phebe Emmanuel
December 06, 2020 01:10

This was amazing! #justanotherhungergamesfan

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December 06, 2020 13:30

Lol #justanotherhungergamesfan indeed!!

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Phebe Emmanuel
December 06, 2020 20:21

:)

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December 06, 2020 20:22

Also, my profile pic establishes me as #thatagathachristiesuperfan

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Phebe Emmanuel
December 06, 2020 20:25

Oh, it just gets better!

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December 06, 2020 20:25

Lol yeah

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December 03, 2020 01:55

Ouuu, this was interesting tooo! It was kinda different from your other stories, or maybe I have just read all of your sad ones, but this one had action, you have always been good at showing the emotions of your characters through your writing and this one just showed that! I enjoyed this one! And the ending was sorta surprising but I know her pride would be crushed in the end! I wanted to know the backstory though, like what happened to Cloveeee. But eh I think that was another thing unique about this one, you didn't add a back story! Not all stories need one to be great!
I also think its great how you dedicate your stories to your friends! Thats so sweet!

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December 03, 2020 12:45

Yeah I really love sad stories!! Thanks so much!!! I'm glad you like that I'm branching out!! You'll be in my next one!!!

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December 03, 2020 13:31

Of course!!
Oh really😲, thank you soooo much🤧can't wait to read it!
Have a great day!

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December 03, 2020 13:32

U too!!

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Ari Berri
December 02, 2020 17:28

This is awesome! Great job!

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December 02, 2020 17:28

THG unite!!!

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Ari Berri
December 11, 2020 17:45

Is your name hunger games??

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December 11, 2020 17:47

Yeah, but someone else got it first...

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December 11, 2020 17:47

Yeah, but someone else got it first...

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Ari Berri
December 11, 2020 17:49

Eh, it's fine. It's the first one I've been able to guess in a while, though.

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December 11, 2020 17:50

True... true... I did scythe once but no one got it.

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Mira Caplan
December 02, 2020 17:02

...wow. I am seriously impressed. Great job, you have outdone yourself yet again.

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December 02, 2020 17:03

Do you think I captured the family essence of Clove?

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Mira Caplan
December 02, 2020 17:04

Yessss!

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December 02, 2020 17:05

This was in only 30 min. I had school, so it took a little longer.

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Mira Caplan
December 02, 2020 17:12

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December 02, 2020 17:13

lol I wanted to try a spinoff/fanfic

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Sunny 🌼
January 09, 2021 18:26

A character that actually WANTS to be in the Hunger Games, very interesting... That's such a new idea, I liked it!

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January 09, 2021 18:28

Thanks so much!! I thought it was too!!

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Jasey Lovegood
December 29, 2020 01:27

Yes, yes, yes, yes. Once again, I love the dedication you put in your writing, and I love how you dedicated another story to a few more amazing writers! I liked how it was a HG spinoff, amazing job! XD

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December 29, 2020 12:36

Thanks so much!!! You have a lot more dedication to read allllll oofffff myyyyyy storiessssss

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Jasey Lovegood
December 29, 2020 22:17

YES I was so determined lmao

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December 29, 2020 22:34

Ha lol

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Mira Caplan
December 04, 2020 14:26

Hiii! (Can't stop reading this...it's SO GOOD. And can't stop listening to Eclipse. I've listened to it 6 times this morning XD) I also upvoted you a ton... in advance, you're welcome.

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December 04, 2020 14:29

Lol me tooooooo. Thanks so much!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
December 04, 2020 14:51

Np! (ECLIPSE)

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December 04, 2020 14:53

Moonstar....

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Mira Caplan
December 04, 2020 14:56

AAHHHHHHHHH IT'S SO GOOD

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December 04, 2020 14:57

Listen to Spit it Out that's amazing too but yeah they're awesome!!

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I like the tying in of Clove, and Enobaria. Your character definitely seems like a District 2 tribute for the Hunger Games!

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December 02, 2020 21:07

Lol I agree!! Thanks!!!

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Of course! Are you going to do a part 2?

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December 02, 2020 21:26

Prob not, cause she went crazy and I like it on it's own!

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oh, ok! is this what would have happened if Katniss hadn't offered the berries?

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December 02, 2020 21:29

Yeah, she wins and it's just like any normal games.

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Avery G.
December 02, 2020 19:36

Noice!!! This was good!!! I have to admit this...I've never read The Hunger Games...
But I really want to now!!! This was soo good!!! I really liked the characters!!! Amazing job, Luke!

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December 02, 2020 19:37

YOU MUST IF YOU HAVE NOT!!! THanks tho

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Avery G.
December 02, 2020 19:38

I KNOW RIGHT!?!?! My friends keep on telling me to read it... No problem!

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December 02, 2020 19:39

IT"S AMAMAMAMAMAMAMAMAZING!!!!!

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Avery G.
December 02, 2020 19:39

Ahh, and please give me a clue for the emojis...I'm stuck

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December 02, 2020 19:42

An über famous classic, the star face is famous and the horse is a knight's horse. Also, the country of the flag is the country the knight is from.

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