A Flickering Ember

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Written in response to: "Set your story in a place that has lost all color." as part of Better in Color.

PROLOGUE

The forest of Aethelgard ran on a special kind of energy. It wasn't electricity; it was Silver-Spring water. This glowing, metallic liquid acted like a battery for the trees. Without it, the forest would lose its color and turn to stone.

Vesper was the village’s best engineer, but she was greedy. Frustrated and brilliant. She built a secret mill hidden in a cave. She wanted to use that silver water, connected to the Heart Root, the life of the forest, to power her machines and create Glass-Steel—the strongest, most expensive material in the world.

Vesper stood at the riverbank, a dim time of night— with fireflies buzzing and the hum of the woods beneath her, with a heavy iron pickaxe. She swung it into the rock, breaking the river’s path. She shoved a pipe into the crack, stealing the glowing water and all the color along with it—- the color from the forest manifesting into that water— translucent with beauty and the shimmering of a different color each moment casting shadows on the woods, and sending it toward her mill.

As the water stopped flowing downstream, the change was instant. The bright purple moss near her feet turned a sickly, papery white. Life was being drained out of the ground. Vesper didn't care. She reached into her pocket and felt the cold, hard shards of glass she had already made. She felt powerful.

CHAPTER 1

The forest of Aethelgard, a small fantasy town hidden beneath brush, did not breathe like a man; it pulsed like a machine of moss and light. At its center sat the Heart-Root, a colossal, glowing tangle of ancient wood that distributed the Silver-Spring to the furthest reaches of the valley. For centuries, the villagers had treated the spring as a god. Vesper, however, saw it as a wasted battery.

Before the silence and the gray, the village of Aethelgard was the beating heart of the forest. The homes in Aethelgard were grown, not constructed. A song based on magic. At night, the village didn't need torches. The Feeder Veins did it all. The bark of the trees pulsed with a soft, rhythmic amber light, following the heartbeat of the forest’s magical spark. Paths weren't made of stone, but of hardened, iridescent lily pads that drifted in the air between branches.

It was lively to the outsiders, but a glitch to Vesper.

Deep in the western ridge, where the ferns grew thickest, Vesper stood over the Feeder-Vein. The one connected to the Heart Root after all. In the moonlight, the spring didn't look like water; it looked like liquid mercury, glowing with a soft, bioluminescent hum. It was the lifeblood that kept the colors of the forest vivid. Without this mineral-rich flow, the emerald of the moss would tarnish, and the gold of the willow leaves would flake away into ash.

Vesper gripped the handle of her heavy iron pickaxe. She was an engineer in a village of poets, a woman who preferred the logic of the gear to the mystery of the root.

"Just a small detour," she whispered. "The forest is infinite. It won't miss a sip."

With a grunt of effort, she brought the pickaxe down. The sound was high and sharp, vibrating through the soles of her boots. As the rock split, she shoved a heavy, lead-lined bypass into the wound. The glowing silver water shunted violently to the left, diverted into a hidden trench she had spent months digging. A mile away, in the dark, her Refraction Mill began to groan. The massive grinding stones, carved from volcanic glass, started to spin, powered by the stolen momentum of the earth’s blood.

Vesper wiped a streak of dirt across her forehead. She felt a sudden, inexplicable chill. She looked down at the stream bed below her bypass. For the first time in a thousand years, the stones were dry. Within seconds, the vibrant colors clinging to the rocks began to turn a sickly, papery white.

She reached into her pocket and pulled out a handful of the first Glass-Steel shards the mill had produced. They were beautiful—colder than ice and harder than diamond. She told herself the trade was worth it. She didn't notice that her own fingertips, pressed against the shards, were starting to lose their flush, turning gray.

Vesper wasn't born a villain; she was a brilliant, frustrated engineer.

She felt the village’s reliance on prayers to the trees was primitive. She built a hidden Refraction Mill in a cavern. Her goal was to use the Silver-Spring to power a series of grinding stones that could produce Glass-Steel, a legendary material that would make Aethelgard the richest city in the world.

She told herself that a few dead trees were a small price for progress. She viewed the forest's vibrant colors as a byproduct of inefficiency—energy that could be better used for industry.

The walk back to the village square felt longer than usual. The silence was the first thing Vesper noticed. Usually, the woods at night were a symphony of clicking insects and rustling leaves. Tonight, the forest felt brittle.

As she crested the final hill, she stopped. Below her, the Grey-Wash, who had just started from the palm of her hand, was spreading. It moved like a slow-motion ink blot in reverse. Where the silver water had ceased to flow, the vibrancy was leaching out of the world. The deep indigo of the night-blooms was turning to wood-smoke gray. The fiery orange of the fox-lilies was fading into the color of a winter sky.

It looked as though someone had spilled bleach across a painting.

Vesper’s heart hammered against her ribs—a dull, heavy thud that felt increasingly out of place in the thinning air. She saw the villagers gathered in the square, their lanterns flickering with a strange, dying light.

"The springs have gone quiet," she heard a voice cry out. She stepped into the light of the square, forcing a look of concerned surprise. She didn't see Elder Thorne watching her. He stood perfectly still, his hand resting against the bark of the Great Willow.

Thorne didn't need to see the bypass. He could feel the thirst of the tree in his own marrow. He looked at Vesper—at the way she held herself with a rigid, metallic pride—and he didn't see a girl. He saw the very glass she so desperately craved.

"Welcome, Vesper," Thorne said, his voice a low vibration that made the silver coins in her pocket ring. "We’ve been waiting for you to join the circle. It is time we gave the forest back what was stolen."

She looked out over the valley and saw the Grey-Wash. It looked like someone had poured bleach over a painting. The deep blue flowers were now dull grey. The bright orange lilies looked like old ash. The vibrant green trees were turning into colorless skeletons.

Vesper felt a chill. She hid her hands—which were starting to look pale and waxy— and looked Thorne, the town council leader in the eyes.

CHAPTER 2

In the square, the villagers were gathered around the Great Willow, the center piece of the fantasy town— and the largest tree around. The tree was drooping, its golden leaves turning to silver-grey dust, which fell to the ground. The world was slowly becoming something she hadn't expected, in just a matter of minutes.

Elder Thorne, the village leader, was waiting for her. He didn't look angry; he looked calm, which was scarier. He knew that when the forest hurt, he felt it in his own bones. He knew exactly what Vesper had done..

"The springs have gone dry, Vesper," Thorne said. His voice sounded like grinding stones. "You have become very rich while the woods have become very poor with grey. It is time for a celebration."

He handed her a large wooden cup filled with dark wine. It was filled with a shimmering, crystalline dust—the same Glass-Steel dust Vesper had been making at her mill. Vesper doesn’t remember much after that– she remembers the faint silence of blacking out.

CHAPTER 3 - THE TRAP

Vesper woke to the sound of her own breathing. It didn't sound like a breath; it sounded like steam passing through a crystal flute. The colors in front of her--- were gone. Gone as the day and soon to be night. Her eyes blinked straight ahead, had shifted in some sort, and the glass was transparent, reflecting the forest she had once trampled ahead of her.

She was in the Solarium, a massive circular room built of mirrors and reinforced glass. Every time she moved, her cloven glass hooves made a sharp tink-tink on the marble floor. She looked at her reflection—hundreds of them, stacked in the mirrors. She was beautiful. Her body was a masterpiece of flowing, transparent curves, and her heart sat behind her ribs like a glowing orange coal.

But as she walked toward the window to see the forest she had destroyed, she realized the horror of her new eyes. The sky was no longer blue. It was a flat, dead Slate. The trees were not green; they were the color of Old Bone.

By now, the Grey-Wash was total. Outside the glass walls, the forest looked like a graveyard of white bone and ash, evident of her destruction. The trees, once tall and proud, stand as twisted skeletal figures, their bark a shade of ash gray, their branches bare and brittle. An absence of a magical spark was evident. The river-- once glimmering with beauty, now taken with greed, was the only thing that held the bridge together.

Vesper was starving, a kind of starving that left a chill inside her brittle bones. The keepers brought her piles of the finest moss and sweet fruits, but to her glass eyes, they were just lumps of colorless clay. Because she had destroyed the Green and the Red of the world, her body could no longer taste the nutrients.

She chewed on the moss, but it felt like eating dry paper. Color wasn't just a word, she found. It was the energy that made food taste like food and water feel like life. Without color, she was fading away, becoming more transparent every day, and the council was reaching for their goal to take back the woods from her destruction every moment.

CHAPTER 4.

The village square was a masterpiece of desperate lies.

To any outsider, the Gala was a riot of celebration. Silk banners in violent violets and screaming magentas were draped from every rafter, swaying in the evening breeze. But the banners weren't there for beauty; they were there to hide the trees. Behind the fabric, the Great Willow’s leaves were no longer gold, they were the color of wet ash, crumbling into dust wherever the wind touched them.

"The woods will be fine," a merchant whispered, his voice cracking. "Vesper’s heart will bring us enough light to buy back the forest," a woman replied, her eyes darting toward the western woods where the Grey-Wash was thickest.

Vesper moved through the crowd like a shark through a shallow reef. She wore a dress of shimmering slate-grey, her mind heavy with the Glass-Steel shards she had spent the week manufacturing. Every time someone laughed, the sound was a bit too sharp, ringing through the square like a warning bell. People parted for her, their eyes a mix of envy and raw, unspoken terror.

A creature who was truly trapped into her mistakes.

"Vesper! A drink for our savior!" a man shouted, though he didn't lean in to touch her, as he tipped the drink up into the air. Nobody wanted to touch her. There was an ozone smell clinging to her skin—the metallic, electric scent of her hidden machinery that made the air around her feel thin and cold.

On the raised dais, the Elders sat in a row of terrifying silence. While the villagers drank and danced to the thin, whistling music of brittle flutes, the Elders were listening. She was a perfect color to restore the woods— to take back what she had taken in the first place.

Elder Thorne stood up, his hand resting on the grey bark of the dying Willow. The buzz of the Gala died instantly. The silence that followed was worse than the noise—it was a hollow space.

"Vesper," Thorne said, his voice a low, grinding vibration that made the silver coins chime. "You have brought us so much progress into saving the woods. It is only right that we give you your reward."

He held out a chalice of elderberry wine. It didn't look like juice; it looked like liquid shadows, swirling with a fine, crystalline dust that caught the flickering light. Vesper reached for it, her fingers pale and waxy. As she took the cup, the music started again—but this time, the flutes played a single, agonizingly high note that sounded exactly like glass beginning to crack.

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Elder Thorne entered the Solarium. He didn't look at Vesper as a person; he looked at her the way a jeweler looks at a diamond. He walked around her, checking for cracks or impurities in her glass skin. Something that would harm her fiery heart.

"The villagers love you, Vesper," he whispered, his voice vibrating through her crystalline ears. "They pay five silver pieces just to stand near the glass. You are the only light left in this grey world you created."

Vesper tried to charge him, to shatter his ribs with her new, hard head. But Thorne didn't move. He simply held up a small, rusted iron needle.

"Don't be difficult," he said. "The forest is dying, and our trade is down. We need you to glow brighter. The people want to see a miracle, not a tragedy of what you caused."

3 MONTHS LATER.

Vesper noticed the change in her glass skin first, the first few months agonizing torture of being trapped as a fawn— no voice, no color. Just glass. It wasn't just becoming more transparent; it was becoming cloudy, striking into her veins with an awful feeling.

The Council had grown impatient. The forest was dying too fast, and the Glass-Steel profits were slowing down. They didn't want a living fawn anymore; they wanted a raw source of power.

Every night, under the cover of darkness, he came. He brought a needle made of rusted iron. He would poison her glass veins with a Corrosive Catalyst. This liquid was designed to break down her internal structure, forcing her heart to pump out its orange glow at a faster, more violent rate.

CHAPTER 5

To the villagers outside, Vesper was a rainbow. In the gala, people buzzed and watched as she struggled with agony. But inside her glass head, the world was being erased. It was a slate gray from her view. She realized that because she had stolen life from the woods, her mind could no longer process the colors those woods produced.

But she was the color now.

Vesper looked out past the cheering crowd of the second gala. In the distance, she saw the Heart-Root. No longer pulsing with vibrancy. The root that controlled the life of the forest— the color, its life. It was almost entirely white now, brittle and dying. She knew that if the Root died completely, the world would never have color again.

She looked at her own glass chest. Her heart, that dim orange ember, was the very last bit of True Color left in the valley that she had taken for her own gain in the first place. Vesper didn't wait for the next note.. She hadn't realized what it meant to be transparent—- no color at all.

Just the sickening feeling of glass in her veins and a dim pulse, like the light flickering in dim woods.

She gathered all her strength into her spindly glass legs. She remembered the feeling of Green—the smell of the moss she had betrayed, the earthy woods that shifted when you walked through it.

She charged. She didn't run away from the glass wall; she ran straight at it.

The Shattering

Vesper hit the reinforced glass of the Solarium with a sound like a thousand falling chandeliers.

She didn't just break the wall; she shattered herself. But she didn't die. Because she was made of the Glass-Steel and the Silver-Spring, her body exploded into a million tiny, glowing prisms.

The shards didn't fall to the ground. They caught the sunlight and turned into a cloud of pure, blinding rainbows. The cloud drifted out of the Solarium and flowed toward the Heart-Root.

As the shards touched the dying wood, the Grey-Wash began to reverse, trapped in the lantern that the elders had scooped up. The moss turned deep, vibrating green. The spring water turned glowing Silver. The sky turned a rich, deep blue.

Vesper was gone as a girl, and gone as a fawn. She had become the bridge she had broken out of greediness. She brought life in the lanterns—- a glowing ember that spread through the forest like wildfire. She was now the color in the leaves and the sparkle in the water. She was no longer a masterpiece to be watched—she was the life that allowed everyone else to see.

AFTERTHOUGHT

Only then, she realized the importance of color, the green on the trees, the moss beneath her feet, the fireflies buzzing around her. The color kept the magical forest alive. With the help of her last burning ember of a heart— the flames caught in the lanterns— set in the forest and gave the moss, gave the woods back its color again. To walk through the gray wood is to feel your own memories thinning. Without the spark to reflect your soul, you begin to wonder if you were ever colorful at all.

They had turned her into the very thing she tried to destroy; and then used the last dying ember to light the colors.

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