(PLOT:)As Mildred Bellefaire approaches her 25th birthday, a sense of unease creeps within her, she knows the family lore as to why they are forever immortal. Her grandfather Thomas Bellefaire made a promise to an entity to grow poppy flowers in the family lot in order to never age past 25 years old and live forever. Mildred hates this concept so much, but the rest of the family doesn't seem to care, Mildred thinks that dying is just as natural as breathing. On the eve of her 25th, she and her brother Oscar destroy the garden in exchange to live to an natural and fair age.
(Characters: Mildred Bellefaire, Oscar Bellefaire[brother], Rosey Bellefaire[mother of Mildred and Oscar], Aunt Agnes, Uncle Dunvey, Grandfather Thomas Bellefaire.)
The field forever flourishes, it can never die, nor blossom and become new again. We are forever in debt to beautiful, yet bound to their horrible stems. Stems that feel like chains onto my hands and sense of self. Never truly able to live and experience, but keep repeating the same cycle over, and over, until we get sick of repeating; we move on. But the poppies stay the same.
I can talk to them y’know? They have endless stories, I like to listen. They tell me what it's like to grow and then die, they’ve truly experienced it. I want to also. But me and my family are forever stuck in time. Never to age past 25.
It’s my grandfather’s fault really, many, many decades ago. He and the entity made a pact, “If you plant the seed, you and your family will live for all of time, never to age again.” Grandfather was truly ecstatic when it told him this.
He asked him how old are you? He replied: “twenty-five, sir.”
The rest is truly history, my grandfather fell in love and married. Our grandmother, whom I’ve never known, died after she gave birth to my mother. Agnes likes to talk about her all the time, she said: “Her hair was a beautiful dark brown, she had green eyes, and freckles. Just like you… how…Odd.” And then she walked away. That’s when I was 7, apparently immortality doesn’t work for those who marry outside the family, maybe that’s why we never knew our father either. Pushing him away before anymore damage can be done.
I push the thought out of my head, I have bigger issues to attend to. I’m almost 25 now. Then I will be stuck at 25 for all time.
How pathetic.
Two days before my birthday, I was watering the flowers like I normally do. When my brother stopped me from working, “hello Mily,” he smiled, he was holding the wheelbarrow, in which bags filled with plant feed were delivered to me.
“Hey Oscar, what is? Harold is telling a hilarious story to me.”
He raised his eyebrows, “You know Harold’s just a poppy, right?” Oscar chuckled, lowering the handles of the wheelbarrow with a heavy thud.
I glared at him, wiping a stray smudge of soil from my cheek. “Harold has more personality than Uncle Dunvey, and at least he doesn’t repeat the same story about his 25th birthday party for thirty years straight.”
Oscar’s smile faded a bit, replaced by a quiet, contemplative shadow that mirrored my own thoughts. He looked out over the endless sea of vibrant red petals. To anyone else, the lot was a breathless masterpiece—a vibrant, glowing marvel of nature that never wilted, never faded, and never needed replanting. But to us, it was a colorful imprisonment.
“Mildred,” he said, his voice dropping low as he glanced back toward the main house where Aunt Agnes was hanging laundry in the exact same sequence she had for half a century. “You’re turning twenty-five in forty-eight hours.”
“Don’t remind me,” I muttered, plunging my trowel into the rich, dark soil. “I’m already feeling the imaginary chains tightening around my ankles. Mother was admiring her face in the mirror again today, boasting about how she doesn’t have a single wrinkle. She’s turned twenty-five thirty-four times, Oscar. Thirty-four times! Doesn’t that terrify you?”
Oscar stepped closer, leaving the wheelbarrow behind. He reached down, brushing his fingers lightly over the top of a blooming stem. “It used to just annoy me. But watching you dread your own life... it makes me realize how hollow the rest of them have become. Grandfather thinks he gave us a gift. He thinks living forever is the ultimate triumph.”
“It’s not living,” I whispered, looking up at him. “It’s just existing. Dying is as natural as breathing, Oscar. How can we ever appreciate the sun if we never know the night? How can we value our years if they never run out?”
Oscar looked back at the house, then down at the shears resting in my belt, and finally at the gallon jug of salt-vinegar mixture sitting near the shed—a concoction we’d spent weeks experimenting with in secret.
“Then let’s end it,” Oscar said, his eyes locking onto mine with a fierce, quiet resolve. “Tomorrow night. On the eve of your birthday. We tear up the roots, we burn the soil, and we break Grandfather’s pact.”
I felt a surge of hope, sharp and thrilling, cut through the dread that had weighed on me for years. “They’ll be furious,” I said, though a smile began to touch my lips. “Grandfather might never speak to us again.”
“Let him be mad for the next fifty years,” Oscar grinned, offering me his hand. “At least then, those fifty years will actually mean something.”
“Mildred,” called Aunt Agnes, “not done with those flowers are you?”
“No auntie, not just yet.” I plaster on a fake smile to ease her own nerves. She's a drunk. They all are, maybe I’m not the only one who dreads this sad existence to live forever too. They are just so good at hiding it, but not for long.
Aunt Agnes lingered on the porch for a moment, swirling the amber liquid in her glass before taking a slow, long sip. Her eyes drifted over the radiant, unyielding red blooms, hollow and unseeing, before she turned on her heel and glided back inside without another word.
Oscar watched her go, then nudged a heavy bag of salt off the wheelbarrow. “She knows,” he murmured, his voice barely audible above the rustle of the leaves. “In her own way, she knows this isn’t a life. None of them are truly happy, Milly. They just drank enough to forget the passage of time.”
I knelt back down, taking a handful of the soil—the soil that held us all captive—and let it sift slowly through my fingers. Harold the poppy whispered a soft, rustling story in the light breeze, a story about the changing of seasons, about falling leaves and frozen roots that wake up changed in the spring. A story about ending, and beginning again.
“Tomorrow night, when the moon reaches its peak,” I said, looking up at my brother.
“Tomorrow night,” Oscar agreed, his jaw set with quiet determination. “We dig up the entity’s roots, pour the mixture, and burn the patch to ash. Whatever comes after—wrinkles, grey hair, old age—we’ll take it all.”
I chuckled, “can you imagine? Our mother, old? The very thought baffles me.”
“Well yes, it does seem weird.
“...considering she’s looked twenty-five since before we were even a thought,” Oscar added, a dry laugh escaping his lips as he kicked a loose stone into the dirt.
“She’ll throw the mother of all tantrums,” I said, imagining Rosey Bellefaire discovering her first gray hair or a delicate crowd's-foot around her eyes. She had spent decades obsessing over her eternal youth, making mirror-gazing practically a second career. “She might never forgive us.”
“Let her rage,” Oscar said softly, his demeanor shifting back to serious. “She’s been frozen in time for so long she forgot what it means to actually grow. Growth requires change, Milly. And change means letting go of youth eventually.”
I looked down at the vibrant red petals of the poppies around my boots. They stood perfectly upright, unnatural in their flawless beauty. No fading edges, no fallen leaves, no wilted stems. They were statues pretending to be flowers.
“I wonder what it feels like,” I whispered, almost to myself. “To wake up one day and notice time moving forward instead of looping backward.”
Oscar reached out, clapping a reassuring hand on my shoulder. “We’ll find out soon enough. Forty-eight hours, sister. Just forty-eight hours until we finally get to grow up.”
The next day went on as normal, mother cleaned the house, Aunt Agnes helped around the barn with Uncle Dunvey, while Grandfather watched everyone doing their part.
He always carried his father’s own cane around. Our Great- Grandfather, he died because of old age. How lucky.
He leaned and rocked, it was a smooth piece of wood, with a cardinal carved into the side, soaring and flying it’s wings to freedom.
I sat on the porch step, watching Grandfather’s hand trace the polished wing of the wooden cardinal. It was a cruel irony—a carving of pure, unrestricted freedom held in the hand of a man who had bound our entire lineage to an unyielding cage of youth. Great-Grandfather had known the quiet dignity of a life fully lived, a story with a beginning, a middle, and a natural end. He got to soar away like that bird. We were trapped in the nest forever.
Grandfather paused his rocking, his sharp blue eyes drifting over toward me. Even after decades, his gaze held the terrifying clarity of a man who believed he had outsmarted fate itself.
"Looking at the sky again, Mildred?" he called out, his voice smooth and unnaturally young, devoid of the gravelly rasp a man his true age should possess. "Nothing up there changes. Best keep your eyes on the ground."
"I was just looking at your cane, Grandfather," I replied, keeping my tone perfectly even. "It's a beautiful bird."
He looked down at the handle, his expression unreadable for a fleeting second before a distant, cold smile touched his lips. "Your great-grandfather made it before the seeds were sown. He was attached to old ways. Thought ending was part of the beauty." Grandfather shook his head, a faint touch of pity in his eyes. "He didn't understand the glory of keeping what you have forever."
He resumed his steady rocking, the rhythmic thunk of the wooden legs against the porch boards sounding like a ticking clock—one that counted down to nothing.
I looked past him toward the barn, catching Oscar's eye as he hauled another heavy sack from the doors. He gave me a brief, barely perceptible nod. The hours were bleeding away. The sun was already beginning its slow descent, painting the sky in fiery shades of orange and violet.
By tomorrow night, the clock would start ticking for real.
The evening drifted on by, at dinner, we ate Sunday Supper, the meal consisted of bean and ham hock soup, with a side of simple frosted biscuits. A meal my family has learned to master over decades of practicing.
As we mostly ate in silence, Uncle Dunvey decided to break the ice. “So sprout? Excited for your last birthday ever?” He smiled, but when he did, it looked as if a crazed look in his eyes.
“Yes.” I lied, “Looking forward to never having to count another year again,” I added, forcing a tight, polite smile as I dipped a piece of biscuit into the broth.
Uncle Dunvey let out a booming laugh that didn't reach his eyes, slapping his hand onto the table so hard the spoons rattled. “That’s the spirit! Welcome to the golden age, kiddo. Twenty-five forever. No creaky knees, no gray hairs, no fuss.”
Across the table, Mother patted her flawless cheek with a napkin, a distant, dreamy look in her eyes. “It really is a blessing, Mildred. You’ll see. You’ll look back on your fears and realize how silly they were.”
Aunt Agnes didn't say a word. She just quietly poured herself another full glass of wine, her gaze fixed on the crimson liquid as it swirled to the rim.
I felt Oscar’s boot lightly nudge mine beneath the wooden table—a subtle, grounding reassurance amidst the madness. I swallowed my soup, the taste of salt and ham heavy on my tongue, and counted down the remaining hours in my head. They thought tomorrow night was my entry into their eternal trap. They had no idea it was our execution of it.
“Psst! Mildred!” I heard whispering in my right ear, I opened my eyes to see Oscar in my face, so close his freckles creased and moved all around his face. “Wake up, sleepy head, let’s go on with the plan.”
“I’m sorry, I don’t know how I even slept, I’m so worried to death.”
“It’s okay, I’m here. I made sure that everyone is asleep, mother’s wearing her eyemask, Aunt Agnes is out in drunk passing, Uncle is snoring his butt off and Grandfather is practically dead.” He laughed, “that’s not funny Oscar, he could potentially die. How old is he really supposed to be anyways? 60? 74? 89? The possibilities are practically endless!”
"Eighty-nine, easily," Oscar whispered, a lighthearted grin cutting through the dark of my bedroom. "And trust me, if the magic breaks, they won't just turn to dust instantly—they'll just finally start aging like normal human beings."
I sat up, swinging my legs over the edge of the bed and slipping into my sturdy garden boots. My heart was pounding against my ribs like a trapped bird, but the dread was completely gone, replaced by a sharp, focused adrenaline.
"Did you bring the salt mixture?" I whispered, pulling my shawl around my shoulders.
"It's already out by the shed," Oscar said, stepping back toward the open hallway door. "Along with two spades and the lantern. We have about four hours before the sun starts to peak. If we're going to uproot an immortal pact, we need to move now."
We crept down the stairs, every creaking floorboard sounding like a thunderclap in the silent house, until we finally stepped out into the cool night air. Across the yard, bathed in the pale glow of the midnight moon, the field of red poppies stood completely still—waiting for us.
As Oscar mixed the concoction, I stayed back a bit and looked towards the house. The house that stayed in this generation forever The old wooden siding, the chipped paint on the porch rail, the exact placement of the rocking chair—it had all remained completely untouched by time. Standing out there in the midnight chill, looking back at the dark windows, it was striking how much the house felt like a museum, preserved under glass while the rest of the world kept turning.
Oscar set the jug down with a muffled clink against the dirt, wiping his brow with the back of his sleeve. "Ready, Milly?" he whispered, handing me one of the heavy iron spades.
I took the handle, the cold metal solid in my grip. I looked down at the first row of deep crimson petals glowing softly under the moonlight, then over at my brother. "Ready."
We thrust the spades deep into the rich earth at the edge of the patch, breaking the soil to finally let the night in.
Instantly, they died. They withered and turned nasty shades of brown. The instant the iron bit into the soil and the salt touched the roots, a quiet shudder rippled through the earth.
The vibrant red petals lost their glow, curling inward as a dark, sickly brown crept up from the stems. One by one, the immortal blooms withered, dropping their papery leaves into the dirt like ashes. Decades of frozen time collapsed in a matter of seconds, leaving the field silent, broken, and barren beneath the pale light of the moon.
Oscar lowered his spade, his breathing heavy in the cool air, his eyes wide as he looked over the ruined patch. The heavy, invisible chains that had wrapped around us for as long as I could remember seemed to snap, leaving behind an eerie, heavy stillness.
Then, a sharp click echoed from the porch.
I froze. Oscar’s gaze snapped toward the house.
Slowly, without a sound or a gust of wind to move it, the heavy wooden front door swung wide open into the dark hallway.
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