The Dragon Races- Part 21

Fantasy Teens & Young Adult Thriller

Written in response to: "Start your story with a character struggling to remember the date, because every day is like the last one." as part of A Year In.

---Contains violence---




Raya Castor tucked the arrow-shaped pendant back under the collar of her gray shirt, a shiver traveling down her chest and arms as the cold obsidian touched her skin. She watched as a blue-eyed brunette turned into the long and wide high-ceilinged corridor and sat down on the deep marble window seat next to her. 


"It's only me." Katya said with a soft smile, reaching our to place a comforting hand on Raya's. 


"I know, but I wish-" she couldn't complete the sentence. "How long has it been?" she asked, instead. 


"Only a day." Kate replied, exhaling a slow breath. "And a few hours. But it'll pass just like last year, and the year before that." she gave a confident nod. "He'll be back." 


"I've given up counting." 


Kate gave a small nod, gaze following her best friend's out to one of the many courtyards of the Sinistrian palace. The theme of white and gray with bloodred was sickeningly common. The stone paths were spotless, cutting sharply around the even layer of grass. A tall white fountain craned for attention in the center, the water barely rippling as streams of water crashed down on it's pristine surface. 

Raya tore her eyes away from the fountain; it reminded her too much of the hidden cave behind a waterfall not to far from their location. It was one of the only places no one could find her- except for Therin. 


She looked out at the flower-filled hedges, instead. The bright scarlet roses stared back at her, the color screaming that they were dyed. Fake. 


"Not even the roses are left untampered with." Raya muttered, brining her left leg up and wrapping her arms loosely around her knees. 


"But they still bloom." Kate squeezed her hand in an act of reassurance. "You have to make the best of whatever the situation is." 


"My sister used to say that." Raya ran her fingers through her short-cut hair, hand drifting down to the silver chain, then to the pendant which she gripped in a tight fist. "But she's gone now. And so's Therin." Her voice cracked at his name, tears filling her eyes that she desperately tried to blink away. "And I-" 


"You aren't gone, Raya." she whispered with a small shake of her head. "Not now, not ever." 


Raya met her friend's eyes, a tear slipping down her cheek and staining her shirt with a small drop of misery. "Not yet." 



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Alaric furrowed his eyebrows, tilting his head. "A what?"


Vatra didn't respond, but lifted a hand and shot a beam of bright orange fire to Alaric's left. He flinched as it grazed his already worn jacket, quickly brushing off the layer of ice on his sleeve. "A Frostfire."


She leapt towards him, and Alaric scrambled away. There weren't any plants in the tundra- maybe a frozen weed or two at best. 


Vatra chuckled as he threw a hasty punch, swiftly turning and brushing her fingers across his arm, then pressed her hands to his back as she shoved him away. "What- no magic?"


He screamed as the flames ate away at the fabric, slowly crawling towards his neck. Alaric gritted his teeth as he threw the lump of burning fabric to the side, the flames extinguishing as it hit the ground. He tried his best not to tremble as the arctic temperature hit his skin, the fine hairs on his arms raising as a blast of piercing wind shot through the cave.


Eriene stood, eyes narrowed as the wind coiled around her hands in pale silvery-white streams. The hair in her now loose ponytail curled around her shoulders. The fire in the center of the cave went out, though the sun reflecting off the ice-sealed cave provided enough light for everyone to see.


"Ooh, fancy." Calder said with a smirk- a very attractive smirk, Alaric had to admit, though it compared nothing to the expression on a particular blonde. Alaric glanced over at Everlys, who bit her lip to keep from smiling and turned back to the two Riverdeenian cousins. 


"I know, right?" Eriene remarked, voice heavy with sarcasm, lifting an arm to meet Calder's beam of blue energy. 


Everlys tried to make it as not-obvious as she could that her right wrist was injured. Her eyes narrowed in focus as she tugged one of the pins out of her hair, tossing it in Alaric's direction, immediately grabbing the other and lunging at Vatra.


"What am I supposed to do-" He was cut off with a loud shriek as a tall, looming figure pounced from the shadows. He skirted to the side, gripping the previously-hairpin-now-knife tightly in his hands. It wouldn't have any chance against the snarling black, white, and red dragon. It's eyes were two different colors- the right one a deep, deep blue, and the other close to white.


Vatra shoved Everlys away, shooting a blast of freezing fire towards her right arm. The blonde grit her teeth, hissing in pain even after the ice faded into a cold mist. She glanced down at the Sinistrian's right arm, a smirk creeping on to her face as noticed the way Everys held her arm.


Alaric turned to aid her, but was met with the same two eyes. The blue and white contrasting with the dark scales crated an eerie effect, and he stilled as the creature stared.


His confusion and curiosity slipped away as a sharp scream echoed through the cave. It faded as black tendrils crept up the stone walls and door of ice, blocking all the natural light the snow offered. 


The cavern silenced. No one- not Vatra, Eriene, or the dragons moved as coils of black energy twisted around the two cousins. Therin slowly walked over to Calder. His eyes flared with anger at something the contestant must have earlier said. 


"Say that again." he hissed, twisting the energy to squeeze Calder's body like a long, black snake. "I dare you."


He shook his head, smiling. "I don't need to repeat it for you to know it's true."


Silently, the he was lifted off the ground, withering in agony as the coils furiously pressed into and burned into his flesh. Vatra screamed as her cousin was thrown against the stone wall, falling limp with open, glassy eyes as his body hit the floor.


"No wonder Raya hates you." The Frostfire hissed. "That's her name, right? Raya Castor? Lady Raya Castor? Who's ranks above you in the Sinistrian Nobility?"


"You have no right to say her name." Therin's voice shook as his eyes flickered to black.


Vatra smiled, tearing her arm free of the black coils and sent a beam of bright blue fire around the room, bouncing off the walls until it hovered in front of Therin's ghostly pale face. 


It coiled around his ear, illuminating the side of his face as Vatra's voice quietly echoed from it. "And you have no right to love her."


Eriene exhaled a shuttering breath, white dancing around her fingertips. "Therin, wait-"


He didn't pay any attention to whatever Eriene was going to say. The whites of his eyes swirled to black as he lifted both arms towards Vatra.


The last thing they heard from her were screams. 


Therin stilled, the blackness fading as his face returned to normal. He looked at Calder, at the blood staining the gray wall crimson. Then at Vatra's mangled body, her defiant smirk faded as her mouth gaped in a scream.


Alaric made his way towards Everlys, reaching out to tightly squeeze her hand. Therin's eyes traveled around the cavern; he looked terrified at what he had done. 


No one said anything as he quickly swept past and turned to enter the branching tunnel. But he froze. In the place where two two dragons had been were two people.


The male, who looked barely sixteen, shivered as he coughed up blood. His dark brown hair was matted, sticking to his forehead with sweat. He collapsed on the ground, jerking with spasms. He lifted his head, meeting Alaric's eyes. One was blue, the other white.


The girl looked a year or two younger than him, back pressed against the wall as her dark, narrow eyes flickered from contestant to contestant. She looked over at the bodies of Vatra and Calder, sharply turning away as her breathing grew heavier.


Eriene slowly towards the girl, and she looked back with an expression full of curiosity.


She looked to Alaric, eyes widening with recognition. "You're the Emrys everyone's been talking about." she said, voice all but a whisper. 


He tilted his head, confused, but quickly looked over at the male as Everlys made her way towards him.


She held her pin tightly, kneeling down and meeting his eyes for a few moments before pressing the tip to his blood-soaked shirt. The fabric was the same color a the dragon's scales. The blonde whispered something in his ear, and he managed a small nod. His breathing grew more erratic, and he focused on her blue eyes. His next breath was cut short as she plunged the knife upwards into his chest. 


Eriene knew, despite all that she had learned in the cave with Veradis, that he was dead. Truly. 


Everlys stood, hand trembling as she wiped the blood off on her jacket. "We should leave." she whispered, walking out of the cave and into the twisting tunnel. Alaric immediately followed her, Therin waiting before Eriene gave him a nod that she had everything under control. 


"Come with us." She said to the girl, taking off her jacket and offering it to the Shifter. 


"You don't even know me." Her voice was soft, but had an edge to it. A reminder that she was strong, despite her shivering, pale frame.


"I barely know anyone here." Eriene whispered, pressing the lump of fabric into the girl's hands. "But trusting each other our best chance of getting out alive." 


Posted Mar 12, 2021
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March 13, 2021 19:23

Hiyiyiyiyiiiiiii, Mira!

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 19:30

Hiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!! How are you???

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March 13, 2021 19:31

Good!!!!!!!!! This is kind of an exciting week because today is the 1-year anniversary of quarantine (not much to celebrate but still funny), tomorrow is Pi day, and the 17th is St. Patrick’s day/my b-day!! Wbu?

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 19:41

LE GAAAAAAAAAASP!!!! That's awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Early Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Um... I've just been writing (insanely cute) Alarys scenes and fangirling over Alaric, Evelrys, and Therin... and... I'm probably going to re-watch The Dragon Prince for the 20th time with my sister. XDDD

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March 13, 2021 20:01

THANK YOUUU!!!!!!!!!! (Le gasp...I love that lol)

Haha, nice! I have zero idea who any of those people are but COOL. 😎 ohh, I’ve been meaning to watch that show but whdjedndjdern I haven’t gotten around to it yet. XD

Read any good books lately?

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 20:07

(It's le Fancais!!! XD)

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I read The Selection two days ago, and OHMYGWARD. It has REVOLUTIONIZED my writing. I am thoroughly obsessed with the love triangle, too.

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 20:07

(It's le Fancais!!! XD)

They're in TDR (The Dragon Races), lol. IT'S SO GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!! You NEED to watch it.

I read The Selection two days ago, and OHMYGWARD. It has REVOLUTIONIZED my writing. I am thoroughly obsessed with the love triangle, too.

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 19:41

LE GAAAAAAAAAASP!!!! That's awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Early Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Um... I've just been writing (insanely cute) Alarys scenes and fangirling over Alaric, Evelrys, and Therin... and... I'm probably going to re-watch The Dragon Prince for the 20th time with my sister. XDDD

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 19:30

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April 12, 2021 13:29

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March 22, 2021 20:42

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 00:31

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Kate Reynolds
March 13, 2021 14:51

:)

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Sapphire 🌼
March 12, 2021 20:03

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I SHOULDN'T SAY THAT CONSIDERING ALL THE MURDER AND DEATH IN THIS PART BUTTTTT

AFTER READING THE WAY THERIN SAID "And you have no right to love her." AND AFTER HE KILLED FOR RAYA

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

TRU LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

XDD

i HAVE MELTED XD

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH THERINNNNNNNNN

oNE THING- Everyls's Murder was so clean XD

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 20:08

IKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

MAH HEART

It broke SO MANY TIMES WHILE WRITING THIS

My sister legit said this after she read it:

"Only one word can describe how's I'm feeling. Tilt this down (the laptop) and look me in the eyes." (stares intently)

"GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR"

we are very much related

TRU LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Like Therin murders two people but.... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HE'S....PERFECT.

It wasssssssssssssssss. It was also REAL sad, though.... Like....REAL sad

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 23:19

But like seriously though, thank you.

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Sapphire 🌼
March 13, 2021 19:21

LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

ITS NO PROBLEMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES SO MUCH LOL

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 19:39

AWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! You'll love it even more after you read the Alarys scene I'm writing...
(I've already written the INSANELY CUTE AND SWEET AND VERY ROMANTIC KINDA PART AND AM TYPING IT UP ALONG WITH THE INTRO!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK I CAN'TTTTTTTTTTTT OHMIGWARDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!! If you thought ANY of the Alarys scenes you've read were good, they compare NOTHING to this one.)

(They don't kiss or anything, but it kinda starts off with a 20 Questions (it's only one, really, lol) about Alaric then Everlys's love life. (SHE'S BIIIIIII) AND THEN HE SAYS SOMETHING~

context:

so this is after they were brought to Forane by the anti-TDR/Lady Catsor group and met up with Raya (who was very sad and angry to see Therin not there), Kate, Saphi, and... yeah. The Foranian royals found out and had them called to the palace, obviously in private because their apperance could literally start the inevitable war with Sinistra, Alcator, and Alderon. And so... Alaric learns about his parentage after Elliane says she knows about his parents, then confesses to be his mother. Alaric basically locked himself in his room for a few days, and Everlys is SUPER worried.)

And so... first it's a lil bit of comforting, then Alaric wanting to change the topic and asking Evelrys questions about her life in Sinistra. (He is half Sinistrian, after all.) And... then her asking whether he's ever kissed Eriene, him saying no with the most GORGEOUS hand-through-hair thing if you know what I mean.

Thennnn Everlys changes the convo top a more seriosu one and says that everyone else needs to know "if we're going to stop this damn war" or something like that. And then... Alaric says the most emotional line ever.

"Can you... I don't want you to abandon me like my parents did."
Everlys shook her head. "I-"
"I want you to stay."

Basically a tribute to Catradora.

And then... JPIHTUDRYGFJHKLFTUDRFGJHKRYISDXKFHCGJFRYIOSDKHXFCGJFTUDFKJC.

Sorry.

I read The Selection two days ago, and... it has revolutionized my writing.

As I said, they don't kiss or anything cringy, but... it's just REALLY cute. (You know that thing where two obviously in love charcaters do during that super emotional moment in a book or movie while they give each other a hug and touch their foreheads together and you just... MELT??? THAT.)

I still can't function properly.

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Sapphire 🌼
March 13, 2021 21:31

*Sapphire is unavailable as a result of turning into a puddle of goo after a brain/heart explosion*

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Upvotey Girl ✨
March 26, 2021 18:19

Hi! I’m about to upvote you [more] as a request of someone on my story. If you want to, you can also spam replies to this comment instead, because then I can comb over this string with my real account to upvote you more! :D

Have a great day! 💛

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Mira Caplan
March 27, 2021 01:13

awe, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

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Upvotey Girl ✨
March 27, 2021 13:56

Oki, I finished!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 29, 2021 14:43

Thank you!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 29, 2021 14:44

...now I'm down to 821 karma points. -_- :(

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March 29, 2021 22:03

Noooooo 😭😭😭😭😭

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Mira Caplan
March 27, 2021 01:13

awe, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 27, 2021 01:13

awe, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sapphire 🌼
March 16, 2021 17:26

HIYA!

MIDDLE NAME BRAINSTORMING SESH!

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Mira Caplan
March 16, 2021 18:14

YES IT ISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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Sapphire 🌼
March 16, 2021 18:34

XDDDDDDD

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Mira Caplan
March 16, 2021 20:38

Soooooooooo any middle name ideas??????????????

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Sapphire 🌼
March 16, 2021 21:09

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

what sort of name are you thinking of? like ~personality ish~

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Mira Caplan
March 16, 2021 22:00

well..... something that goes with Esceri, obviously, and has the same kind of gorgeous-yet-mysterious vibe as the last name Caius. And that sounds kinda... idk. Exotic. Like Therin and Raya.

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Mira Caplan
March 16, 2021 22:00

well..... something that goes with Esceri, obviously, and has the same kind of gorgeous-yet-mysterious vibe as the last name Caius. And that sounds kinda... idk. Exotic. Like Therin and Raya.

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Sapphire 🌼
March 15, 2021 17:48

YOUR WELCOMEE!!

I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW AND HOW HE WAS LIKE "YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO CALL HER THAT" AND AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

OH WOW

oOOOH! They would! AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YES YES YESSS ITS PERFECT! AND MAYBE THERIN (the dark-haired mysterious handsome guy- a work of perfection if I may add) LIKE VERY OBVIOUSLY CRUSHES ON RAYA TOOOOO oml YOUR JOB IS SO FUN YOU GET TO MAKE THERIN BLUSH XDDD And when he sees her he can't take his eyes off herrrrrr aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 17:57

YES OHMIGWARDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

YES HE MUSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT (oh yes. The dark-haired mysterious handsome guy is his second nickname to Pretty Boi)

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 17:57

YES OHMIGWARDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

YES HE MUSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT (oh yes. The dark-haired mysterious handsome guy is his second nickname to Pretty Boi)

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Sapphire 🌼
March 15, 2021 18:00

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

(YESYESYES LOL DHMHG would be the abbreviation XDDDDD)

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:01

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DHMHG/Pretty Boi. Gotcha. XDDDDDD

BUT OMHYGWARDDDDDD I SHIP THEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

with this and Alarys... I CAN'T FUNXCTION AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:01

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DHMHG/Pretty Boi. Gotcha. XDDDDDD

BUT OMHYGWARDDDDDD I SHIP THEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

with this and Alarys... I CAN'T FUNXCTION AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Sapphire 🌼
March 15, 2021 18:05

XDDDDD

GNWIGLNWGIWUKNGWIKJWRNGIRWKUNGWRIKLGWNRGIWKRNWR

This ship is so powerful, I bet if you made this series into a published book, there would be a thousand wiki fandoms about it XD

EXACTLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:11

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, it will beeeeeee!!! It's gonna be a trilogy. We're about... a third-ish of the way through the first. Or a quarter way through. Idk. Something like that. The very cute Alarys scene's gonna be in the second, and the third's gonna be the warrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!! And assasinationssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the Spirits having their own warrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Therin's brother being drafted to fightttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!! (Just made that up, it is now happening) And Therin kinda going crazy and getting taken over by Adrazelle like Lady Castor while Lady Catsor suffers in her pain and guilt and stufffff!!!!!!!! Or Lady Castor still being Adrazelled, and Therin being taken over by someone else. And.... not good stuff happening to Raya. And heartbreak and anguish and death and drama and ROMANCEEEEEEEEE and... more death. And battling for kingdom territory and betrayals and SeCrEtS being found out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:11

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, it will beeeeeee!!! It's gonna be a trilogy. We're about... a third-ish of the way through the first. Or a quarter way through. Idk. Something like that. The very cute Alarys scene's gonna be in the second, and the third's gonna be the warrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!! And assasinationssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the Spirits having their own warrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Therin's brother being drafted to fightttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!! (Just made that up, it is now happening) And Therin kinda going crazy and getting taken over by Adrazelle like Lady Castor while Lady Catsor suffers in her pain and guilt and stufffff!!!!!!!! Or Lady Castor still being Adrazelled, and Therin being taken over by someone else. And.... not good stuff happening to Raya. And heartbreak and anguish and death and drama and ROMANCEEEEEEEEE and... more death. And battling for kingdom territory and betrayals and SeCrEtS being found out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 01:19

NDIWNEKEKEJEJEJE YESSSSSS ANOTHER BATTLE SCENEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love how Theron lost control, really shows how much he lives Raya!!!!!!!!!!!
(Btw sorry this is so late ToT)

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 12:37

Is okkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 22:30

LSKDGNLSDGNLSDNGLSDGNLSKDBGLDBGLSDBGLSDKBGL
IT WAS SO GOODDDDDDSNGLSDKNGLSDNGLSD

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 22:30

LSKDGNLSDGNLSDNGLSDGNLSKDBGLDBGLSDBGLSDKBGL
IT WAS SO GOODDDDDDSNGLSDKNGLSDNGLSD

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 12:37

Is okkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 12:47

I literally killed three charcaters off in...like... ten minutes XDDDDDD

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 22:29

XDDDD I LOVE KILLING OFF CHARACTERS

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 22:29

XDDDD I LOVE KILLING OFF CHARACTERS

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 22:57

SAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

AND THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 23:24

IKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

OFCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

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Kate Reynolds
March 15, 2021 23:24

IKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

OFCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 22:57

SAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

AND THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

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Sapphire 🌼
April 09, 2021 22:06

*new thread has been requested*

*request has been fulfilled*

*thread #1000 has begun*

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Mira Caplan
April 09, 2021 22:08

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

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Sapphire 🌼
April 09, 2021 22:20

HIIIIIIIIII

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Mira Caplan
April 09, 2021 22:27

BONJOUR, FRIEN

Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Part 21111111111111

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Sapphire 🌼
April 09, 2021 22:30

CA VA?

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

You made me blush and cry in one story what is your secret-

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Mira Caplan
April 09, 2021 22:31

TRES BIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

XDDDDDDD Uh... contrast?

I'm listening to the Kiran + Nivi cover of Lovely, and ohmigod-

IT. IS. RAYA. IT. IS. HER.

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Kate Reynolds
March 30, 2021 00:30

MIRA WTH LUKE'S LEAVING?????????????????? (Please don't leave as well...)

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Mira Caplan
March 30, 2021 13:05

I'M NOT LEAVING, DON'T WORRYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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Kate Reynolds
March 30, 2021 14:39

OKAY GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Mira Caplan
March 30, 2021 16:38

YEAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! ERGGG I GOT DOWNVOTED EVEN MORE

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Kate Reynolds
March 30, 2021 16:55

SDGNLKSDNGSD OH NOOOOOOOOOO
Wait, but I thought they caught the downvoter... wonder who the other one's are..

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Mira Caplan
March 30, 2021 17:13

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
yeha...

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Liling Wei
March 26, 2021 22:34

OMG YOUR POINTS MIRA!!!! OMGOMGOMG
*upvotes furiously*

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Mira Caplan
March 27, 2021 01:13

THANKS YOUUUUUU!

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Katie May
March 26, 2021 15:28

HeWoOo qUeEn!!!

PURE ON TALENT!!!! I enjoyed this story so much! Good job! Keep up the good work! :D

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Mira Caplan
March 26, 2021 15:52

HAIIII!!!!

Aweee, thank you!!!! (I won't be posting another today, though... ya know, life.)

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Katie May
March 26, 2021 15:59

Life. Gross. (lol)

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Mira Caplan
March 26, 2021 16:02

XD exactly. BUt the prompt about a trickster pixie or god is PERFECT to expand on Fyjun and the Spirits. (And Lady Castor and Adrazelleeeeeeeeeeeeee)

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Katie May
March 26, 2021 16:06

YESSS!! I'm trying to think of something for this week's prompts! Have any ideas? (don't worry you will get credit :))

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Mira Caplan
March 26, 2021 17:07

Hmmm.... it really depends if you want to go Fantasy or not. You could always do your own version of a Norse Mythology story featuring LOki!

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March 24, 2021 21:22

If you need to talk, I'm here.

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Mira Caplan
March 25, 2021 00:46

Awww, thanks!!!

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Kate Reynolds
March 24, 2021 19:01

Omg Mira so many people got downvoted...
To think that someone took the time and effort to press a little button thousands of times is kinda flattering though

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Mira Caplan
March 25, 2021 00:46

Yeah XDDDDDDDDD

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Kate Reynolds
March 25, 2021 11:39

Lmaooooo

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Mira Caplan
March 25, 2021 13:31

ARE YOU THE UPVOTER???

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Kate Reynolds
March 25, 2021 13:39

Nope I've been inactive

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Mira Caplan
March 25, 2021 13:42

ohhhh yeah XD

Anywayyyyyyyyy hi!

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mira imm so sorry about karma points :(

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Mira Caplan
March 23, 2021 17:08

thanks... it really doesn't matter (i like to think that, lol) but thanks

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Sia S
March 23, 2021 15:30

Wth... im off the leaderboard.Wth... im off the leaderboard.

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Mira Caplan
March 23, 2021 15:42

... AAAAAAAAHHHHH NOOOO

I got downvoted to 1600.

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Sia S
March 23, 2021 15:49

Oh gosh, I upvoted you, by- i think 60 pts. Its good to see you on the lb though!

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Mira Caplan
March 23, 2021 16:02

thank you!!!!!!!!!!

I'm upvoting you rn. I'm getting you back up there!

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Sia S
March 23, 2021 17:25

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Misti Davidson
March 18, 2021 13:34

yes i did just binge-read this entire series and get zero sleep in the process. very very very awesome story. im new to this site and you and litlover are the only people ive checked out so far, but you both have incredible skills lol

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Mira Caplan
March 18, 2021 13:34

ohmygwarshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow.

THANKS!!! You, too!!!!!!!!!!

Who's your favorite TDR character??????????????????????

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Mira Caplan
March 18, 2021 13:34

ohmygwarshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow.

THANKS!!! You, too!!!!!!!!!!

Who's your favorite TDR character??????????????????????

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Misti Davidson
March 18, 2021 13:39

very hard question. probably raya but therin is a valid candidate for my fav character as well lol. it reminds me of hunger games but more fantasy and much better writing (hunger games is written for like 8 year olds with themes for 15 year olds)

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Mira Caplan
March 18, 2021 13:42

Therin and Raya are my faves, too. Everlys, Alaric, and Eriene ARE awesome, though. Lollllll. It was based off THG. Really? I think THG is MUCH better

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Mira Caplan
March 18, 2021 13:42

Therin and Raya are my faves, too. Everlys, Alaric, and Eriene ARE awesome, though. Lollllll. It was based off THG. Really? I think THG is MUCH better

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Misti Davidson
March 18, 2021 13:46

noooo i remember as a kid when i read hunger games i was like 'omg so freaking awesome i love it. Talanted, brilliant, incredible, amazing, showstopper, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before' but i read it in high school and i was like 'wow. this writing isn't at all advanced or anything, it's just the idea that makes the story so incredible, because the actual writing is almost primative.'

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Mira Caplan
March 18, 2021 15:54

I think the writing is actually really good. It's different than anything i've read, honestly.

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Maddie's Closet
March 13, 2021 15:22

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 16:04

AWEEEEEEEEEE thank you!!!!

YASSSSSSSSS, Warriors is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 13, 2021 16:04

AWEEEEEEEEEE thank you!!!!

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Maddie's Closet
March 15, 2021 18:44

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:47

LE GASP!!! sure!

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Mira Caplan
March 15, 2021 18:47

LE GASP!!! sure!

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March 15, 2021 18:48

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 23:03

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 23:03

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

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March 12, 2021 21:25

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:46

Aaaaaaawwwwwww, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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March 12, 2021 21:12

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Spam this to everyone (Isaac's idea lol)

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:13

This is the third one I've gotten!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Felicity Anne
March 12, 2021 21:22

No problem!! Have a great day!! <3

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TJ Squared
March 12, 2021 21:00

wowowowowwoowwowoowowowowwowow! The death scenes were dramatic and...yeah dramatic and well, dramatic XDDDD My brain is confused XDDDDD

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:08

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! I am, too, LOL.
Who's your favorite TDR charcater???

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TJ Squared
March 12, 2021 21:11

hmmmmmm idk, I would say Alaric or Luke or possibly Raya or Eriene idk there are so many!

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:12

Ooooh, yesss!!! Raya's my favorite, Alaric second, and Everlys third. Eriene's probably fourth, honestly...
But I TOTALLY agree!

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TJ Squared
March 12, 2021 21:12

:))) How you doing?

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:14

I'm doing really well!!! It was great to publish Part 20 today and relieve myself of the angst and stress of wondering if I wouldn't finish XDDD How about you??

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:08

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! I am, too, LOL.
Who's your favorite TDR charcater???

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March 12, 2021 20:09

Ok... this was a LOT.
First of all:
"Only a day." The noble replied, exhaling a slow breath. "And a few hours. But it'll pass just like last year, and the year before that." Kate gave a confident nod. "He'll be back."

Why do you call Kate "the noble" and "Kate" in the same paragraph? You don't even need the extra clutter of "The noble replied, exhaling a slow breath."

Next, you really just set us down in the next scene with no idea of what's happening... so maybe give some background or start at the beginning of the scene?? Next, why does Everlys kill the boy?? I understand you're trying to be suspenseful, but you need to fill the reader in.

Positives!!!! Raya's emotions have never seemed better, and I could really feel you writing her feelings better. Ceilinged still isn't a word lol. Also your description of action is lovely!!!!

Touch up on description and suspense or stuff like that. You have improved so darn much thoooooooo... I be crying over here at how amazing this storyline has become!! Remember the first story of yours that I critiqued??? THE VERY FIRST TDR??????

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 20:15

Yeah, I'll take that out. (I didn't really edit at all, so.... yeah.)

Well............it takes place in the arena, as a continuation of Part 17. Vatra said she was a Frostfire right at the end, and by Alaric not knowing what hat is and Vatra repeating it lets the reader know what the scene is. (I think.)

Weeeeeell... she killed him because he was going to die anyway and...she wanted to end his suffering. I mean, he was coughing up blood and clearly wasn't going to survive out in the cold for long. So...after all that fighting, I guess she wanted to bring what little peace to him she could.

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! REally? I think my description of action is horrible...
I know ceilinged isn't a work XDDDDDDDD Butttttt...I'mma make it a word!!!! (I've actually used it quite a few times throughout TDR, lol)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! OHMYGWARD- AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH Now I'm laughing for no reason at all. THAT WAS IN NOVEMBER. LIKE... LITERALLY 4 MONTHS AGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now... it's a legit novel. (Trilogy in the making, really. By yours truly, The Fantasy Queen.)

And get Jen in here because that Shifter introduced at the end is her.

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March 12, 2021 20:44

THATS GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT YOU GOT IT PLANNED OUT IT SEEMS I A LOYAL FANNNNN

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:08

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 12, 2021 21:08

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
March 14, 2021 20:52

CEILINGED IS A WORD

AHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

https://www.google.com/search?q=ceilinged&rlz=1C1EJFC_enUS944US944&oq=ceilinged&aqs=chrome..69i57j0j0i10i433l2j0i10j0i10i433l5.1623j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

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April 02, 2021 22:15

Henlooo

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