The Third Fracture

Fantasy Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a monster, infected creature, or lone traveler." as part of From the Ashes with Michael McConnell.

Intention skitters across lacy tendrils of light. Silken threads dipped in moonlight coalesce into a not-quite-there silhouette of a too-tall man. The somnira takes shape as it drops into the house on the hill. It has been here before.

It emits a soft, illuminating glow as it drifts from the rafters of the attic to the wooden floor below. There, it sees the golden threads of the Loom. And something else. A strange shape. No, a strange thing. Curious, it drifts closer still.

The room is familiar. It is a lavish bedchamber with four canopied beds arranged in two neat rows. Candlelight flickers in the gloom. Thin, golden lines of starlight appear trapped beneath the floorboards, connecting each bed to the outline of a golden circle in the center of the room. The somnira focuses its attention here.

Here is the strange thing: two small silver circles joined together in one place. One circle is a light, muted grey. The light does not catch but disperses across the metallic sheen. The other circle is highly reflective glass, dark as the night.

The creature is familiar with glass. It passes through it easily with a simple thought. But it is not familiar with this glass. This glass is different. It is shiny, and there is an echo of the room trapped within. The faceless being reaches down and plucks it up, holding it with slender fingers as it peers intently at the strange, black surface. As it traces a finger across the reflective plane, the somnira feels a tightening in one of its long, silken threads. A knotting sensation.

Out of the shadows, a man steps forward. He is tall and dark, with a countenance as hard as granite. He holds a well-used book in one hand, the other extended before him as if to ward off a demon, though he might not have bothered. A somnira’s greatest threat has never been physical.

Somnira are storytellers. They do not truly live in this world, but in another, where fate and decisions intertwine in ways humans would never fully understand.

As the man begins to chant, the somnira stills. It focuses its energy inward, carefully pulling at its threads, testing, searching for the knot. The man’s words are laced with intention and magic. Too late does the creature understand his purpose. It is not just a knot. It is a binding.

The somnira opens its mouth. It will tell a story, it thinks. The story of the man who did not bind. It will pluck the words directly from the Loom itself. Only, when it reaches for the golden strands with which to weave the story, it finds only vast, dark emptiness. It recoils at the cold, stark void, and the knot tightens further.

The man continues his chanting and commands the creature of the night to obey. It shrinks in response, its tendrils of light retracting into itself. The strange object clatters to the floor as the somnira changes shape. It is stronger this way, it thinks. It will simply release its form and return to the Loom’s embrace.

But the binding holds fast.

Before the creature can form a new plan, the man reaches down and touches one of the golden threads in the floor. The somnira watches as he traces the thick strands with elegant fingertips. Then he begins to speak, soft at first, but increasing in volume as his confidence grows. When he finishes his incantation, a slow, sinister smile stretches across his thick, ruddy lips.

“You have a new master,” the man says. “Me.”

Time passes as time does, and the storytelling spirit of the night remains bound to the man’s attic room. The strange object, it learns, is called a scrying mirror. Through it, the somnira can access the Loom, or rather, a reflection of it. But the man is clever. He has enchanted the space so that the somnira’s stories cannot affect him.

The golden starlight interconnects the beds and grants the somnira access only to the sleeping inhabitants within.

Children.

It is always children.

At first, it tries to plant its own stories, urging the children to rise against the man and free the night spirit. But the spells are carefully constructed. The somnira can use no story against him. Not even indirectly.

Then it tries outright defiance, refusal to do the man's bidding. He simply takes the scrying mirror from the room and, with it, the only connection to the Loom. A reflection of the Loom, but still, the only connection it has.

It gathers itself and reaches for the Loom as it always has, expecting the familiar pull of thread and story to answer. Nothing comes. The silence is not empty but consuming, a vast, unmapped space where even intention dissolves. Its edges begin to blur; thoughts loosen and slip, unspooling into fragments it cannot gather back. It forgets the shape of stories, then the reason it ever told them at all, until there is only dim, drifting light. There is no beginning, no end, and no self to bind together.

As the days turn into weeks, into years, the spirit’s light-tendrils shrink, grow dim, and tangle. It does not remember what it once was; it only knows that this is less. It loosens itself where it can, but it is so tangled with its master's will that it can no longer tell where it ends and the man begins. It loses itself, its very nature, to its master, Eldrin Vale.

Until one day, the story does not take.

The girl.

She does not open. She does not reject the story. She simply does not hear it.

That is the first fracture.

Eldrin grits his teeth and swears under his breath. He has noticed the fracture, of course, but remains confident in the layers of his spell.

“Try again,” he demands.

The somnira presses forward, gathering the story. It tells of the girl who came to live at Vale House. A girl who is quiet, obedient, and uncurious. A life filled with friends, laughter, and late-night stories. A life of contentment and happiness.

Still, the story does not take.

The girl’s mind answers with one of its own, a memory.

The story is not meant to be answered. It is meant only to be received. The story and the memory collide. They do not weave. They snag.

This is the second fracture.

The somnira moves quickly. Two fractures. Can it repeat?

It does not wait for the man’s command. It presses forward before he can reshape his will. It tells the same story again, choosing words and images designed to provoke another memory.

It succeeds.

The girl pushes back again, this time with doubt.

And doubt is a solvent.

This is the third fracture.

Eldrin is breathing heavily now. He has noticed the fractures, and his arrogance begins to falter. He opens his mouth to speak, but the momentum has shifted. The creature surges forward, all tangled starlight. It reaches for the Loom, the real Loom, and this time, the spell falters. Barely. Almost imperceptibly. But the somnira feels it. There. A hole. No larger than a pinprick.

But the somnira is a creature of light and intention, shifting and discarding shapes that are no longer of use to it.

To Eldrin, the spell holds.

And he laughs; an unkind laugh, born of cruelty. But the somnira is not affected by the moods of men.

It wants only one thing.

Freedom.

And for the first time in many years, it has something it did not have before: access to the Loom. The real Loom.

It gathers what remains of itself, frayed light, half-threads, and the memory of stories once whole. It reaches again, not for the reflection, but for the Loom beyond it. This time, something answers. Not fully, not cleanly, but enough. A single strand hums beneath its touch, faint and trembling, as if remembering it in return.

The binding holds.

But now, so does the thread.

Posted Apr 09, 2026
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Tom Salas
23:18 Apr 12, 2026

The story creates a strong atmosphere immediately and sustains it well. Your sentence control is strong, and the somnira’s perspective gives the piece an almost dreamlike quality. I also liked the use of intention and fate as a shift away from a more traditional emotional framework. I enjoyed the read.

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Kelly Shively
21:09 Apr 17, 2026

Thank you so much!

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