The Last Showing

Fiction Horror Thriller

This story contains sensitive content

CW: Violence, gore, and/or abuse and Child abuse

Written in response to: "Start your story with someone being followed." as part of What Lingers.

*All Prompts Included*

The woman had been followed for six blocks before she realized the footsteps behind her weren't making any sound.

She noticed the man first in the reflection of a pharmacy window. Tall, narrow shoulders, dark coat. Nothing remarkable except that his face seemed blurred by the rain.

She crossed the street.

He crossed behind her.

She stopped beneath a flickering streetlight and pretended to search her purse. In the dark glass of a parked car, she watched him stop too.

But the puddles around his shoes remained perfectly still.

Her name was Evelyn Marsh, and twenty-three years earlier, she had helped bury forty-seven people without digging a single grave.

Now, apparently, someone had come to collect.

She hurried toward the abandoned St. Bartholomew Psychiatric Hospital, its silhouette rising beyond the neighborhood like a rotten tooth. The building had been condemned after the fire, though the city had never found enough money to demolish it.

Evelyn had worked there as a night nurse.

She had also been the last employee to leave the building alive.

Behind her, the silent footsteps continued.

She reached the rusted entrance gate and squeezed through a gap in the chain-link fence.

"Please," she whispered. "Not tonight."

The gate creaked behind her.

Someone had followed her inside.

Arthur Vale had spent twenty-three years looking for his daughter.

Every police report, every newspaper clipping, every witness statement had been copied, categorized, and arranged in boxes throughout his apartment. Photographs covered the walls. Maps were marked with colored pins. His daughter's seventh birthday card sat beneath glass on his kitchen table.

He had never been married.

He had never had a daughter.

But he remembered her.

He remembered the weight of her sleeping head against his shoulder, the smell of strawberry shampoo, the tiny scar beneath her chin where she'd fallen from a bicycle.

Her name was Lily.

He remembered everything except the day she was born.

Doctors called it a delusion. The police called it harassment. His sister called it grief for a life he never lived.

Arthur called it theft.

And Evelyn Marsh, according to a newspaper photograph he'd discovered three weeks earlier, had been standing beside Lily on the night St. Bartholomew burned.

The photograph was grainy, taken during the hospital's annual summer picnic. Evelyn stood near a folding table, smiling at someone outside the frame.

Beside her was a little girl in a yellow dress.

On the back, someone had written:

August 14. The last good day.

Arthur had stared at that photograph until his eyes watered.

He knew the girl.

He knew her smile.

And now he knew who had taken her.

Evelyn entered the hospital through a service door that should have been welded shut.

Inside, the air smelled of wet plaster and something sweeter, like burnt sugar.

Her flashlight illuminated peeling walls, broken wheelchairs, and a long corridor lined with patient rooms.

She knew exactly where she was going.

Room 217.

The room where it had started.

Behind her came the soft scrape of a shoe.

"Arthur," she called without turning around. "I know you're there."

A voice answered from the darkness.

"Then you know why I came."

Evelyn closed her eyes.

"You don't understand what happened here."

"Then explain it."

"I tried. Twenty-three years ago. Nobody believed me."

"Where's my daughter?"

Evelyn turned.

Arthur stood twenty feet away. His coat hung loosely from his shoulders. His face looked exhausted, the skin beneath his eyes dark and hollow.

"Arthur," she said gently, "you never had a daughter."

His expression didn't change.

"That's what you told everyone."

"Because it's true."

He withdrew a photograph from his pocket.

"Then who is she?"

Evelyn looked at the image and went pale.

"Where did you get that?"

"Your picnic. August fourteenth."

"That's impossible."

"Who is she?"

Evelyn backed toward the stairwell.

"Arthur, listen carefully. That photograph was destroyed."

"Who is she?"

"Everyone in that picture died in the fire."

The hospital seemed to settle around them.

Arthur looked down at the photograph.

Evelyn's smiling face stared back.

Beside her, the little girl in yellow held a red balloon.

And behind them, barely visible in the window of the hospital, stood Arthur himself.

"I can't sleep."

Arthur said it quietly, almost apologetically.

Evelyn watched him from the stairwell.

"I know."

"Every time I close my eyes, I hear her."

"Arthur—"

"She says she's cold."

Evelyn swallowed.

"That's because you keep bringing her back."

He looked up.

"What?"

"You've been here before."

Arthur shook his head.

"Not since the fire."

"You come every year. Sometimes twice. You find me, ask the same questions, show me the same photograph."

"You're lying."

"And every time, you forget."

A door slammed somewhere upstairs.

Arthur flinched.

Evelyn didn't.

"Twenty-three years," she continued. "Twenty-three years of the same conversation."

Arthur stared at her.

"Why would I forget?"

"Because you don't want to remember what you did."

The lights flickered.

Arthur looked toward the ceiling.

There was no electricity in St. Bartholomew.

There hadn't been for twenty-three years.

Yet fluorescent tubes were beginning to glow, one after another, illuminating the corridor in a sickly white light.

From upstairs came the sound of children laughing.

Arthur whispered, "Lily?"

Evelyn began to cry.

"Please don't follow them this time."

But Arthur was already climbing the stairs.

The second floor looked exactly as it had before the fire.

Clean white walls. Polished linoleum. Fresh flowers on the nurses' station.

A radio played softly behind a closed office door.

Arthur stopped beneath a sign reading PEDIATRIC OBSERVATION.

He had no memory of the hospital having a children's ward.

A little girl stood at the far end of the corridor.

Yellow dress.

Red balloon.

"Lily?"

She turned.

Her face was hidden behind a curtain of dark hair.

"Daddy?"

Arthur's knees weakened.

He moved toward her.

She retreated.

"Wait!"

She slipped through the doorway of Room 217.

Arthur followed.

Inside was a narrow bed, a wooden chair, and a television mounted high on the wall.

The television displayed nothing but gray static.

Lily stood beside the bed.

"Why did you leave me?" she asked.

Arthur dropped to his knees.

"I didn't. I looked everywhere."

"You said you'd come back."

"I tried."

"You locked the door."

Arthur stopped breathing.

The room grew warmer.

A faint orange glow appeared beneath the door.

"No," he whispered.

Lily raised her head.

For the first time, he saw her face clearly.

There were no burns.

No wounds.

Only the expression of a child who had waited far too long for someone to tell her the truth.

"You said it was a game."

Arthur remembered a hallway.

A set of keys.

A small hand slipping from his.

He remembered smoke.

He remembered screaming.

And he remembered laughing.

Not because anything was funny.

Because he'd been frightened beyond reason.

Because his mind had broken under the weight of something it couldn't understand.

"No," he said again.

Lily pointed toward the television.

"Watch."

The static disappeared.

On the screen, Arthur saw himself standing in the hospital corridor twenty-three years earlier.

He wore an orderly's uniform.

In his hand was a ring of keys.

Patients were pounding against locked doors.

Smoke rolled across the ceiling.

Arthur watched his younger self run toward Room 217.

He watched him unlock the door.

He watched him reach inside.

And then—

The television went black.

"Are you kidding me?"

The voice came from somewhere beyond the darkness.

A remote control clicked.

"Right at the good part."

A man sat in a worn recliner, surrounded by the blue-gray glow of a television screen.

An empty bowl of popcorn rested on his lap. A half-finished soda stood beside a stack of old DVDs.

He was perhaps sixty, with thinning hair and a faded sweatshirt.

His name was Daniel Mercer.

He had been watching The Last Showing, a forgotten horror film from the late 1990s, after finding it in a box of secondhand movies.

The disc had frozen at the climax.

Daniel pressed PLAY.

Nothing.

He pressed STOP, then PLAY again.

The screen returned to the film's menu.

"Cheap garbage."

He ejected the disc and ran his thumb along its underside.

A deep scratch curved across the plastic.

He laughed.

"Well, that's what you get for fifty cents."

Daniel placed the disc back in its case and switched off the television.

The room fell silent.

No hospital.

No Arthur.

No Lily.

Just an old man watching a horror movie.

Daniel stretched, rubbed his temples, and reached for the cane beside his chair.

"Time for bed."

He stood carefully.

His left knee ached.

He knew the distance from the recliner to the hallway by heart. Twelve steps to the doorway, four to the bathroom, seven more to the bedroom.

He'd memorized the apartment years earlier.

It was necessary.

Daniel Mercer had been blind for twenty years.

The accident happened on a rainy November evening.

A delivery truck had run a red light, striking Daniel's car broadside. He survived with broken ribs, a fractured skull, and permanent damage to both optic nerves.

His vision never returned.

He'd learned to navigate by touch, sound, and memory.

He'd also learned to enjoy movies differently.

Dialogue.

Music.

Footsteps.

The delicate changes in a character's breathing.

Sometimes, with films he'd seen before the accident, he could picture the scenes from memory.

But The Last Showing was different.

He'd never seen it before.

And the disc had played without sound.

Daniel hadn't noticed.

That was the strangest part.

He had watched the entire film in absolute silence.

Yet he knew what Evelyn looked like.

He knew the exact shade of Lily's yellow dress.

He knew Arthur's exhausted expression, the hospital's peeling paint, the orange light beneath the door.

He knew things no blind man could know.

And as he stood in the darkness, something inside him began to understand why.

Daniel reached for the hallway wall.

His fingers found the familiar crack in the plaster.

Then he stopped.

There was a light.

Not a memory of light.

Not the imagined shape of a room.

Actual light.

A thin, pale line stretched across the floor.

Daniel turned his head.

He could see the television.

It was off, but he could distinguish its black rectangular shape against the wall.

He could see the popcorn bowl.

The soda.

The faded blue upholstery of his recliner.

His heart began pounding.

"Hello?"

His voice sounded impossibly small.

He blinked.

The room remained visible.

Tears filled his eyes.

Twenty years.

Twenty years of darkness, and now—

He laughed.

Then he sobbed.

Then he laughed again.

He stumbled toward the bathroom, reaching for the mirror above the sink.

He wanted to see his face.

To see how much he'd aged.

To see the world he'd been denied.

His reflection appeared slowly as his eyes adjusted.

Gray hair.

Deep wrinkles.

A crooked nose.

And behind him, standing in the bathroom doorway, was a little girl in a yellow dress.

Daniel froze.

She held a red balloon.

"Daddy?"

He couldn't move.

The girl tilted her head.

"Why did you leave me?"

Daniel turned.

The doorway was empty.

He looked back at the mirror.

She was still there.

Smiling.

Then another face appeared beside hers.

Evelyn Marsh.

Her lips moved.

Daniel couldn't hear her.

He leaned closer.

She repeated the words.

Don't look behind you.

Daniel's breathing quickened.

The bathroom light flickered.

He felt something brush against his shoulder.

A hand.

Small.

Cold.

He turned despite the warning.

Nothing.

He looked back at the mirror.

The reflection was no longer his bathroom.

It showed Room 217.

A narrow bed.

A wooden chair.

A television mounted high on the wall.

And Arthur Vale standing in the center of the room, staring directly at Daniel.

Arthur raised one hand.

Daniel raised his own.

Arthur touched his face.

Daniel felt his fingers move against his cheek.

Arthur opened his mouth.

Daniel heard his own voice whisper:

"I can't sleep."

The television in the living room clicked on.

Daniel heard static.

Then a man's voice.

"Are you kidding me?"

A remote clicked.

"Right at the good part."

Daniel staggered into the hallway.

The living room was visible again, but something had changed.

His recliner was occupied.

A man sat there with a popcorn bowl in his lap.

Daniel recognized the faded sweatshirt.

The thinning hair.

The cane leaning against the chair.

It was himself.

The other Daniel reached for the remote.

"Cheap garbage."

He switched off the television.

Daniel tried to scream.

No sound came.

The man in the recliner stood, stretched, and reached for his cane.

"Time for bed."

Daniel backed against the wall.

He watched himself walk toward the hallway.

Twelve steps.

Exactly twelve.

The other Daniel passed him without looking.

Without seeing.

Then disappeared into the bathroom.

Daniel followed.

He watched the man touch the sink.

He watched him lean toward the mirror.

He watched his face change from confusion to wonder.

And he understood.

He was watching a movie.

Not the one on the television.

Not the one about Arthur and Evelyn.

This one.

His life.

His apartment.

His blindness.

Every moment had been arranged for someone else's entertainment.

Somewhere beyond the walls, beyond the ceiling, beyond anything Daniel could comprehend, an audience was watching him.

Waiting.

He heard a faint rustling.

The sound of someone settling into a chair.

Then a quiet voice, impossibly distant.

"Now this is getting good."

Daniel looked upward.

The ceiling disappeared.

Above him was darkness.

And in that darkness, a single enormous eye opened.

It blinked.

Daniel felt the movement inside his own skull.

Then the eye narrowed with recognition.

A voice whispered:

"I remember this part."

For the first time in twenty years, Daniel saw the room around him.

He wished he hadn't.

Because there was no room.

There never had been.

Only a screen.

And beyond it, someone sitting alone in the dark, watching a horror movie.

That someone leaned forward.

A hand reached for the remote.

The picture froze on Daniel's terrified face.

A voice said, "I can't sleep."

And pressed PLAY.

Posted Nov 04, 2026
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17 likes 8 comments

Michael Breton
November 08, 2026 15:29

As we all adapt to the omnipresent, nearly stifling, AI-ruled world, I wonder how much longer it will be before we all live in some version of Daniel's apartment? A prequel to reality masquerading fiction? Nicely done. -M

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DC Farley
November 08, 2026 18:24

Yes Michael! Yes.

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Akihiro Moroto
November 06, 2026 17:54

Love the breaking of the fourth wall, and things are not how they seem for any character. I don't know which is more terrifying: being Evelyn, Arthur, or David. The layers of this horror are so vivid, and you've managed to incorporate all the prompts into this story.

Well done, DC! Thank you for sharing.

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Barbara Burgess
November 06, 2026 17:15

I too read this story to the end. I liked the way you set it out - it actually made it easier to read. and follow. Interesting and intriguing.

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Björn Flerkorn
November 06, 2026 07:10

This confused me at the end. How does a blind man know he is watching a silent movie?

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DC Farley
November 06, 2026 14:45

That's a fair question, and actually touches on the second twist. Daniel wasn't experiencing the movie through his physical eyesight. Something else was providing the images, which is why he could perceive details he had no possible way of knowing. The idea was to make the reader question whose perspective they were experiencing all along. That said, I can see where the distinction wasn't clear enough in the story. Thanks for pointing that out!

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Björn Flerkorn
November 09, 2026 04:03

You are welcome.

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Ron Sewell
November 04, 2026 15:27

Round and round it goes. An interesting tale, which is why I read it to the end. And then he pressed play.
An ending I did not expect. Well done.

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