Lab Rats (Pt 1)

Adventure Friendship Fantasy

Written in response to: "Start your story with a character taking a leap of faith." as part of The More Things Change....

if you would like to be included in this series... Go to my bio and copy the link! Thanks for all who did, and enjoy the story! -JJ











Lab Rats




?????’s POV: All alone. In one cage. How dumb are they? Pretty dumb if there keeping me, a girl with powers unthinkable locked up. If I wanted to, I could escape but I won’t, not yet, anyway. I smiled and watched as they hurt my friends. They weren’t going to get away with this. 




Ray’s POV: Olivia was our leader. She helped us in the hardest of times. She was strong and we were too. If she was weak, we’d help her out. But that was then, and this is now. Now, we’re in a lab, trapped for all of eternity. We will never get out. Until Olivia knows it’s time.




Michael’s POV: I feel a migraine and a knife stab me. The knife was in my arm, and the migraine was in my head. Everytime they stabbed me, I couldn’t control their hopeless little minds. Blood pours everywhere and I look at them as I go back to my tank. They throw me in the gooey water. I snarl and look at Tiana. She was the lab expert. She was always testing us. But her assistant, Coral, she’s nice. She always helps us. She makes sure we’re comfortable. I just wish I could say something.


Tiana’s POV: I stab Michael and look around. No Coral to be seen. It was weird that she always cared for them. I never did. They're freaks. No one would want… them. My pet owl named Finn, lands on my shoulder. I smile and scratch underneath his beak. He hoots and then closes his eyes. “Night Owl…” I manage to say.


Coral’s POV: I planted a Blue Star in my flower garden. I smile and look at the beautiful flowers I had planted. Maybe one day I’ll be able to get enough money to get a garden for myself. The freaks, (I don’t like calling them that but if I didn’t I’d be fired… boss is kinda rude…) intrigued me. They fascinated me with all their powers and magic. I switch my books to my shiny white slippers. I walk inside and my boss is mad.


((Fun fact! Blue Stars are real flowers! Sometimes in story’s you have to include some real elements to it as well, that way it’s not all made up.))


Jarita’s POV: I look at the flower garden. Coral had made it beautiful so far. I loved it. I smile and touch the glass of my cage I was kept in. Coral slips on her shiny shoes, walks out, and gets yelled at. Everyday is the same. No matter how many times she gets yelled at, she’ll always be in the garden. But sometimes she sculps. One time she made me a grey bowl, that way my food isn’t on the floor. She goes to my cage and asks, “what to sculpt today Jarita?” I look at her and then tap the glass in our secret language. She nods, and gets sculpting.





Author’s note: Helloooo! I hope you like how it’s going so far! I tried to make it as close to the character you gave me as possible. Now I’ll answer a few questions for you guys.


Q: Who is my favorite character so far? 

A: Probably Coral! She’s super cute when she’s a scientist. It gives the happy vibes.


Q: Why do some of them have bigger paragraphs? And why isn’t mine bigger?!

A: I wrote what was necessary for this section here. If you want it bigger, ask! I’ll try and have something happen!


Q: Who’s your least favorite?

A: Sorry Lone Wolf! Tiana is my least favorite. Well, it’s kinda a tie… I also am kinda eh on Michael?


Q: Why are there question marks on the first character POV?

A: You’ll find out next time! (Literally everyone: NUUUUUUUU)


Special thanks to,


Hehe hedgehog 🦔🦔🦔

💜Amethyst💜

Bucky Barnes

W.W. Skybelle

Lone Wolf 🐺 

Powerful Thanos

And myself! 


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Posted Apr 15, 2021
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🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥

HE'S SO CUTEEEEEEe

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April 15, 2021 22:40

YUSSSSSS!

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April 15, 2021 22:41

NUTELLA HAS BLESSED U!

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Thank you! To both you and Nutella!

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April 15, 2021 22:51

YUUUUUSSSSS! NUTELLA LOVES U

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Valerie June
April 15, 2021 22:01

There’s so many mysterious vibes here! This series is off to a great start, and I can’t wait to read more. (And yes, I agree with all of the answers in the Q&A section. XD)

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April 15, 2021 22:02

XD

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Valerie June
April 15, 2021 22:03

You weren’t kidding when you said that you reply quickly!

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April 15, 2021 22:04

HEHEHEHEHEHE

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Valerie June
April 15, 2021 22:04

Also, 🦥 is really such an adorable emoji.

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April 15, 2021 22:05

OMG ISNT HE! I NEED TO NAME HIM.

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J The Hedgehog
December 10, 2021 17:46

Bestie i love the story 😄

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December 13, 2021 19:59

Love yah too!!!!!!!!!!!!

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J The Hedgehog
December 14, 2021 22:26

I see you still love to write 😃

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December 15, 2021 14:49

Of course I do! :) I miss you, Evan, and Blake sooooooo much! But the people here are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much nicer then those at Leo. I will now give you invisible hug *huggo* I love you so much and wish you a very Merry Christmas. (remember the vibe tree? lol I miss it)

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J The Hedgehog
January 14, 2022 13:31

I miss you too

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January 14, 2022 18:36

:((((

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Riya 🌺
April 24, 2021 00:38

I really enjoyed reading this story. Also, 🦥.
Like, ohmygod, how have I never seen this before!!!
🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥
I love him!!!!

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April 24, 2021 10:28

YUSSSSSS HE SO CUT

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Riya 🌺
April 25, 2021 01:17

Ikr!

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Tanay Jain
April 24, 2021 00:33

Oooh! I really like this story! Also, I agree with you, this emoji is soo adorable🦥!!!

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April 24, 2021 10:28

YUSSSSSS

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Tanay Jain
April 25, 2021 01:23

And this one https://cultofthepartyparrot.com/

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TJ Squared
April 15, 2021 23:37

wow, nice first part!
(it's alright, my characters aren't often liked poor mason lol)
Nutella is so cute! 🦥🦥🦥
;)
can't wait for the next part!

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May 07, 2021 17:00

:) XD

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TJ Squared
May 07, 2021 17:16

hehehe
how have you been?

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May 07, 2021 18:12

Gooooood

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TJ Squared
May 07, 2021 18:13

that's good :)

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Dhwani Jain
June 26, 2021 08:50

Sorry Alone Warrior, I didn't understand the story much right now..maybe it'll be clear in the next part...
Where are you from?

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July 29, 2021 20:09

Ok! Thank you for being honest! I really love when people say what they really think about my story’s so thx! And I am from Indiana, you?

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Dhwani Jain
July 30, 2021 02:33

Welcome!
I am from the same place as your state, just drop the last 'na'...

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August 16, 2021 18:06

lol

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Akshara P
June 14, 2021 00:19

OMG! I am already obsessed with Nutella! 🥰 Eeeeeeeek! 🦥 🦥 🦥 🦥 🦥 🦥

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June 17, 2021 18:46

🥰🥰🥰🥰

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🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🐁🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🐁🐁🦥🐁🐀🐀🐀🐁🐁🐁🦥🦥🐁🐁🐁🐁🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐁🐁🦥🦥🐁🐁🐀🐁🦥🦥🐁🐀🐀🐀🐁🦥🦥🐁🐀🐀🐀🦥🦥🐁🐁🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥🦥
Lab rats and Nutella!

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April 28, 2021 11:47

YESSSSS!

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April 28, 2021 16:46

:>

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April 21, 2021 15:58

I just realized I never gave you any feedback! Sorry for being so late!

The character traits were very well done, and the concept of this is great. This series is such a good idea. Can't wait for the next part! Great job!

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April 21, 2021 16:34

Thanks! And np for being late!

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April 21, 2021 16:49

No problem.

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AntMan 🐜
April 19, 2021 20:08

I love it! Love the 3rd person and different perspectives! all the character traits and work you had to put into this story played out beautifully!

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April 19, 2021 20:09

Thank uuuuuuu!

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April 16, 2021 15:47

Please read my stories, don't just like them.

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April 16, 2021 15:50

Oki!

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April 15, 2021 23:10

YAHOOOO LET'S GO FIRST PART-
The concept is super cool :)
Critiques:

since the POV's switch very quickly, the reader might be confused, so you could make them each a bit bigger for the next part :)

In your note about the blue stars, you could just get rid of the part after "Fun fact! Blue Stars are real flowers!" because after that, people already know what you're talking about :)

" “what to sculpt today Jarita?” " add a comma in between 'today' and 'Jarita' :)

GRATE 🧀🧀🧀 job!!! lmk when the next part comes out :D

~ Amethyst

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April 16, 2021 11:50

:D Thanks!

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April 16, 2021 21:09

np! :D

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April 15, 2021 17:51

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April 15, 2021 17:53

OOOPS- big mistake! I’ll fix it!

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