The Whistling Man

Creative Nonfiction Horror Suspense

Written in response to: "Write a story with the aim of scaring your reader." as part of A Fright to Remember.

August 26, 2026 5 am

The morning was cold and still. Nothing made a sound, not even the crickets that usually chirped. The soft breeze cooled my face as I stared out into the darkness that stretched to the mountains before me. I sipped my coffee, awaiting for the sun to rise. The silence was interrupted by the unmistakable sound of footsteps crunching against the gravel.

“Hello? Is anyone there?” I called out.

The world stilled again. I stared down at my cup, my hands shaking. A man whistled loudly as if taunting me. I closed my eyes, hoping all this was just a nightmare, but I could still hear the man whistling in the night. 

Who could be out here so early? My teeth gritted and my hands were far from stable. The man whistled, in a rhythm, as if singing a nightly tune like a broken record.  Sweat beaded down my neck. The whistling had stopped, but I continued to listen. I strained to hear anything that might tell me whether the man was still outside. The silence that followed did not bring me any comfort. Instead, I found myself paying closer attention to every sound, wondering whether he was still there. Heavy footsteps were planted in the house. Thump. Thump. For a split second, my heart stopped. Thump. Thump. I couldn’t breathe. My body didn’t have fight or flight, to direct my course of action. Oh, God, what do I do? A dark figure moved across the room. Creeping closer and closer. My heart thumped faster. In the moonlight, Daley crossed over the room and peered outside.

“What are you doing?” She whispered.

My breath slowed.

“You scared me,” I managed to say.

“What’s wrong?”

Daley sat on the couch beside me and stared out to the darkness.

“I heard someone,” I whispered.

“Who?”

“I don’t know.”

“Maybe it’s a ghost,” she giggled.

“Can you please just listen?”

For a moment, we were left with complete silence. Neither of us uttered a single sound. 

“You’re probably just imagining things,” Daley crossed her arms. 

I tried to accept her explanation. It was early, and I had been sitting there in the darkness, listening to sounds I couldn't explain. Maybe the fear had gotten the better of me. I wanted to believe there was a reasonable explanation for what I had heard. If Daley didn't think anything was wrong, perhaps I had frightened myself over nothing. She's right. It's early. I'm just imagining things. There's no one out there.

"Yeah, your probably right."

I smiled softly and unclenched my coffee cup. I was about to close the window when all of a sudden I heard the whistling again. 

“Did you hear that?”

Daley frowned and put her ear on the screen. The man whistled once more as if teasing us. Maybe it’s just a prank. The idea didn’t seem logical. I didn’t see a car. A light. All I could hear was the man. 

“Who’s out there?” She spoke softly.

“I don’t know.”

Almost in tears, I couldn’t help, but worry. Is someone here to kill us? We listened until the whistling grew further and further. Eyes wide, Daley looked at me then grabbed the keys.

“What are you doing?” I hissed.

Daley looked at me with a flashlight in her hand.

“I’m just going to check it out. I’ll be right back.”

“Don’t leave me here!” I panicked.

“Lock the door.”

Daley shut the door and drove away. I locked the door, my hand shaking unsteadily. I waited, unsure how much time had passed. Maybe twenty minutes or more. I kept watching for the lights of her car, hoping to see some sign that she was okay. I wanted her to come back with an explanation for what we had heard, something that would make the whole situation seem less unsettling. I called her cell phone, wondering whether she had found anything. The phone vibrated against the counter. Oh, God, please. I breathed easier when Daley's car lights finally came back into view. Oh, thank God. Her steps were slow as if she was afraid to alert anyone outside. I quickly unlocked the door and let her in. She stepped inside and stared at me blankly, as if her soul had left her body.

“What is it?”

“I found a boot print, a large one…I’ve never seen it before,” she trembled.

“What should we do?”

“I called the neighbors, they’re going to check the barns. They’ll come right over with their shotguns.”

***

Hours passed, yet there was no other sign of life. Barn after barn, inside and out, nothing that told us anything. No forced entry. No car tracks. Just one single boot print. Our neighbor across the street came as soon as she heard.

“I checked my cameras. It showed someone walking. No car. Nothing, just walking,” she told us.

My spine shivered. There was someone here. Someone watching. Someone listening. What if this isn’t the first time? 

***

 I keep thinking about the man. The whistling, the footprint and the video. What did it mean? Did he slip up or did he want us to know he was out there? That we wouldn’t find him. Perhaps, he thought he was clever, maybe he was. There was no clear explanation, and nothing else seemed to show that anyone had been there. Why was there only one footprint? Did he know where the neighbor’s cameras were? Is that how he avoided showing his face? Has he been closer to the house before? Is he testing his limits like a child? Seeing how I'll react? It would have been easier to dismiss the entire experience as my imagination if Daley hadn't heard the whistling too. I wasn't the only one who had heard it, and I couldn't simply convince myself that nothing had happened. 

***

Months have passed. No whistling. No footsteps. But the mornings are just as quiet and dark, which brings me no comfort. Even now, I was left wondering what we had actually encountered that morning. Maybe it wasn’t even human. We’ve placed cameras everywhere, though I can’t help, but wonder if it’s enough. How much longer can all this keep him out? 

Posted Oct 24, 2026
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David Sweet
November 02, 2026 22:13

That is creepy. I would be freaked out. Thanks for sharing.

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