Submitted to: Contest #337

THE PLANET THAT KNEW OUR NAMES

Written in response to: "Set your story on a remote island, a distant planet, or somewhere faraway and forgotten."

Romance Science Fiction

THE PLANET THAT KNEW OUR NAMES

Chapter One-The World That Listened

Ilyra did not spin the way other planets did.

Its rotation lagged, like it was thinking things over. The scientists called it gravitational drag from its twin suns. The Ilyrans called it consideration.

Elian Marek arrived on Ilyra with two suitcases, a contract that promised three years of hazard pay, and a grief he hadn’t bothered unpacking since Earth. His wife had died in a shuttle malfunction above Mars-quick, they said, merciful, they lied-and since then Elian preferred places that were loud enough to drown memory.

Ilyra was not loud.

It hummed.

The sound lived in the soles of his boots and the back of his skull, a lox vibration that followed him through the Resonant Plains where the first human settlement had been erected. The planet didn’t echo-echoes implied emptiness. This was different. It was response.

The native plants leaned when he passed, translucent leaves shifting color like indecision made visible. Gold. Violet. Then pale blue.

“Great,” Elian muttered. “Even the flora thinks I’m sad.”

“You are.”

The voice came from behind him-soft, unaccented, dangerously calm.

He turned.

She stood barefoot on the glass grass, unharmed by edges sharp enough to cut exposed skin. Her hair fell dark and straight down her back, threaded with faint luminescence that pulsed in time with the ground beneath them. Her eyes were not any color he knew how to name. They look like weather.

“I-sorry,” Elian said, instincts kicking in. “Didn’t see you there.”

“I was listening,” she replied.

“To… me?”

She nodded once. “You are loud.”

That was how Elian Marek met Saelis of Ilyra-not with sparks or drama or fate screaming its intentions, but with the quiet certainty that something essential had just shifted.

The planet hummed deeper.

Chapter Two-Forbidden Frequencies

The Accord briefing came two days later.

No emotional entanglements with native Ilyrans.

No biological bonding.

No prolonged physical contact.

“Why?” someone asked.

The commander hesitated.

“Because the planet reacts.

They showed footage: Storms forming in seconds, seismic fractures following arguments, entire forests crystallizing, and shattering after a recorded incident of grief.

“Ilyra mirrors emotional resonance,” the commander said. “The Ilyrans evolved along-side it. Humans did not.”

Elian didn’t ask the question burning in his chest.

What happens when love take roots?

He already suspected the answer.

Chapter Three-The Space Between Touches

Elian and Saelis did not mean to fall in love.

They told themselves that constantly.

They met at the edge of the plains, then at the boundary stones where human structures stopped and the living world began. They talked-about stars, about sound, about the way humans named things they didn’t have to feel.

Saelis taught Elian how to listen without words. Elian taught Saelis how to laugh.

When she smiled, the planet warmed. Gold light rippled through the grass, gentle and curious.

“This is dangerous,” Elian said one evening, standing close enough to feel her heat, far enough not touch.

“Yes,” Saelis agreed. “But not for the reasons they think.”

He reached for her hand before he could stop himself.

The ground sang.

Not violently. Not chaotically.

Harmonically.

Saelis inhaled sharply. Her veins flared bright as sunrise.

“The planet knows your name now,” she whispered.

Elian’s chest ached. “Then I’m not leaving.”

She looked at him with something like fear for the first time. “Then neither am I.”

Chapter Four-When the Sky Breaks

The Accord ships arrived without warning.

Steel shadows eclipsed the suns. The hum of Ilyra deepened into something older-waking, remembering.

“Human, Elian Marek,” the transmission cracked. “You are in violation- “

The ground split.

Not in rage.

In grief.

Saelis grabbed Elian’s hand, pressing it to her heart where light pulsed wild and fast. The planet responded instantly-storms pausing mid-spiral, flora turning molten gold.

“They will take you,” she said. “They are afraid.”

Elian cupped her face, fully breaking every rule that had ever mattered less. “Then let them be afraid of love.”

When the Accord fired-meant to stun, meant to separate-the planet rose.

Not as a weapon.

As a shield.

Energy arced like a living thing, wrapping Elian and Saelis in resonance so pure it rewrote physics. The weapons failed. The ships powered down, silence fell, stunned and absolute.

Ilyra spoke not in words, but in truth.

This bond does not destroy.

It heals.

Chapter Five-A World That Chose Us

The Accord retreated.

Humans stayed.

The rules changed.

Elian and Saelis stood together at the center of the Resonant Plains as the suns aligned, light spilling across a world no longer divided between native and foreign.

“I thought love would cost us everything,” Elian said.

Saelis smiled, resting her forehead against his. “It did,” she said gently. “And it was worth it.”

The planet hummed-a deep, steady sound now like a heart at peace.

Ilyra spun a little faster.

Chapter Six-What the Planet keeps

Peace on Ilyra did not arrive all at once.

It came in increments-small allowances, uneasy compromises, and long silences where no one was quite sure who should speak first. The Accord withdrew its ships, but left behind observers, data collectors, and rules softened just enough to appear humane. Humans were permitted to stay. Ilyrans were permitted to interact.

Love, however was still considered a variable.

Elian felt it in the way officials watched him and Saelis, when they stood too close. In the pauses before questions. In the subtle recalibration of sensors whenever Saelis’s light brightened in response to him.

“You’re a theory to them,” Elian said one evening as they walked along the river of bioluminescent silt that cut through the plains. “A possibility that they don’t want to test.”

Saelis knelt, trailing her fingers through the glowing water. The light climbed her skin like it recognized her. “They are listening for disaster,” she said. “But the planet is listening for truth.”

Elian stopped walking.

The plants ahead of him went clear.

“What is it?” he asked.

Saelis looked up slowly. Her eyes had gone distant, unfocused-not fear, not pain, but depth. When she stood, the ground vibrated in uneven waves.

“The planet is keeping something from us,” she said.

Elian’s pulse quickened. ‘That doesn’t sound comforting.”

“It isn’t meant to be.”

That night, Ilyra dreamed.

Elian had grown accustomed to the planets low hum beneath sleep, but this was different-louder, insistent, threaded with images that were not his. He saw Ilyra as it once was: unbroken plains, no human structures, no boundary stones. He saw the Ilyrans before they learned to listen instead of speak, before grief taught the planet caution.

And he saw loss.

Not death-severance. Bonds torn apart. Lovers separated across continents. A world that learned, slowly and painfully, that love could unmake if it held too tightly.

Elian woke gasping.

Saelis sat upright beside him, light flickering beneath her skin.

“You saw it too,” he whispered.

She nodded. “The planet remembers a choice it made long ago.”

“To survive?”

“To endure,” she corrected. “It dulled itself. It asked its people to do the same.”

Elian reached for her hand. The planet did not sing.

It listened.

“What happens now?” he asked.

Saelis looked at him-really looked, as if memorizing a future that might not survive the night.

“The planet is awakening,” she said. “And it will ask something of us.”

The request came at dawn.

The stars aligned earlier than predicted, their combined light igniting the plains in a wave of color so intense it drove humans from their shelters. Saelis stood barefoot at the center of the resonance field, Elian beside her, sensors scrambling in protest around them.

A voice-not sound, not language-pressed into Elian’s mind.

Balance requires choice.

Connection requires cost.

Saelis stiffened.

“It wants an anchor,” she said softly. “A bridge between worlds.”

Elian’s chest tightened. “What does that mean?”

“It means,” she said, turning to him with tears gathering like starlight, “that one of us must remain… always.”

Human observes shouted. Instruments spiked. The planets hum rose to a near-painful pitch.

Elian didn’t hesitate.

“Then it’s me.”

Saelis’s breath broke. “You don’t understand.”

“Then help me,” he said, taking her face in his hands. “I’m not afraid of staying. I’m afraid of leaving you.”

Her light flared bright enough to blind.

“If you bind yourself to Ilyra,” she said, voice trembling. “You will not age as humans do. You will belong to the planet. You will outlive everyone you’ve ever known.”

Elian smiled, sad and certain. “I already loss my past. I choose my future.”

The planet’s hum softened.

It accepted him.

The ground wrapped him in warmth-not restraint, not erasure, but welcome. Saelis pressed her forehead to his, light and breath, and tears mingling,

“I will stay too,” she said.

The planet pulsed-surprised, pleased.

Then you will change together.

The suns rose fully.

And the world remembered how to love without breaking.

Posted Jan 15, 2026
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