The headphones were heavy, pressing the sweat against Deidra's temples like a vice. Through the static, the voice on the other end sounded less like a monster and more like a boy who had broken a window. "Tell him," the boy whispered, "tell him I have the flowers."
Three hours in the command unit and the air had turned to soup. Thick, electronic, hard to swallow. General Halloway loomed behind her chair, his breath hot against her neck. Three years in this desert had taught Deidra the weight of words, how a single mistranslation could turn a wedding into a funeral. But this voice, this child pretending to be a warlord, spoke in the northern valley dialect she knew from her first tour.
"What's he saying?" Halloway's fingers drummed against the metal desk.
Deidra pressed the headphones tighter. The boy spoke again, his words tumbling over themselves. "The flowers are fragile. They need water. Please, I cannot let them wilt."
Zahra. The word echoed in her mind. In the valleys, mothers called their children zahra when they tucked them into bed. Flowers. The innocent ones.
"Morrison!" Halloway barked. "I've got a Reaper drone circling with two Hellfires ready. Is this punk threatening us or not?"
On the thermal display, orange blobs clustered in the tenement's upper floors. Could be fighters. Could be families. The resolution was garbage at this altitude.
"He says he has something valuable," Deidra said carefully. "He's using coded language."
"Weapons?"
The boy's voice cracked through the static again. "They cry at night. The flowers cry."
Deidra's stomach turned. She remembered Kandahar, where her hesitation had cost seventeen civilians their lives. The official report blamed faulty intel, but she knew the truth. She'd doubted her translation. She'd stayed silent when she should have spoken.
"Two minutes until cloud cover blocks our laser," Halloway said. "What does he have?"
The boy kept talking, and Deidra caught fragments between the interference. "Seventeen," he said. "Seventeen flowers in the garden."
Halloway's patience snapped. "Either this kid has weapons or he doesn't. Which is it?"
Deidra pulled off the headphones and turned in her chair. The General's face was carved from stone, eyes like bullet holes. Behind him, Lieutenant Carson watched the drone feed, his hand steady on the joystick.
"He's not threatening," she said. The lie came easier than she expected. "He says, 'I surrender the flowers.' It's an idiom from the northern dialect. He wants to lay down arms."
"You're certain?"
"He's terrified. Listen to his voice."
Halloway grabbed the spare headset. Through the speakers, they could all hear it now: the quaver, the rapid breathing. A boy trying to sound brave.
"Could be an act," Carson said.
"Could be." Deidra stood, her legs unsteady. "But if we level that building and there are kids inside, CNN will have it by morning. The whole region will turn against us."
Halloway's jaw worked like he was chewing glass. The drone circled on the monitor, a patient vulture.
"You're gambling with my men's lives," he said finally.
"Let me go with the extraction team. I'll talk him out myself."
"If this goes sideways, Morrison, it's your career. Your conscience."
"I know."
The General picked up his radio. "Eagle One, abort strike. I repeat, abort strike. We're going in soft."
The relief hit Deidra like cold water. She'd done it. This time, she'd chosen humanity over protocol.
Twenty minutes later, she sat in the back of an MRAP, her vest too tight across her chest. Staff Sergeant Mills checked his rifle for the third time. The other soldiers were quiet, that particular silence before a breach.
"You sure about this?" Mills asked her.
"He's just a scared kid."
"Scared kids shoot straight too."
The vehicle stopped. Boots hit pavement. Deidra followed them through the rubble-strewn street, past a burned-out car, up three flights of stairs that groaned under their weight. The building smelled like piss and concrete dust.
Mills counted down on his fingers. Three. Two. One.
The door exploded inward.
They swept into the room with practiced precision, rifles tracking corners, voices shouting "Clear!" But there was nothing to clear.
The room was empty.
No boy. No hostages. No flowers.
Just a military-grade transmitter sitting on a wooden crate, its red power light blinking steadily. A loop recorder connected by black cables. The voice Deidra had heard, that terrified child, still whispered from the speakers.
"What the hell?" Mills lowered his weapon.
Deidra moved toward the transmitter as if pulled by wire. Her boots crunched on broken plaster. On the table beside the equipment lay a worn ledger and a map of the city, marked with red ink. Next to them, positioned carefully in the dust, sat a child's shoe. Red canvas, barely worn. The kind sold in the market for two dollars. The price tag was still attached.
"It's a recording." The words came out hollow. "The whole thing was a recording."
The shoe had been placed there for her to find. A prop. They'd known she would come, known she would need to see evidence of children. Known exactly what kind of person would hear a scared boy and choose mercy.
Mills grabbed his radio. "Command, we've got an empty room. No hostile, no civilians. Just some radio equipment."
Deidra opened the ledger. The pages were filled with Cyrillic script and Arabic annotations. Shipping manifests. Chemical formulas. Her hands started shaking when she saw the inventory list: forty canisters, each marked with the designation Z-4. Below it, someone had written in English: "The Flowers bloom at noon."
She looked at her watch. 11:47.
The room tilted. The world went silent the way it does after a mortar hits. She could see Mills' mouth moving but heard nothing. Her knees locked to keep her standing.
Zahra.
The word reformed itself in her mind, shifting like a kaleidoscope from one meaning to another. Not the tender word mothers used. Not children. In the chemical warfare manuals she'd translated last year, buried in appendices about Syrian weapons programs, Zahra was something else entirely. A nerve agent that smelled sweet in the seconds before it shut down your lungs.
The silence broke all at once. Sound crashed back: Mills shouting, boots on stairs, that damned recording still playing. Her legs came alive again.
The map showed their sector, but the red X wasn't on this building. It marked the Central Plaza, three blocks south. Where Halloway's men would be gathering after the successful "surrender."
"Oh God." She grabbed the map, her throat closing around the words.
Through the window came a sound that made her blood freeze. Cheering. Celebration.
Her earpiece crackled. Halloway's voice, triumphant: "Good call, Morrison. The locals are coming out to celebrate. My boys are handing out water bottles in the plaza. Hearts and minds."
Deidra lunged for her radio. "General, you need to evacuate the plaza. Now!"
"What? Why?"
"The flowers aren't children. It's gas. Chemical weapons. They're going to—"
Static exploded through the channel. The transmission cut to nothing.
Mills was already moving, shouting orders, but Deidra stood frozen at the window, watching the plaza below. Soldiers removing helmets, shaking hands with locals, children running between their legs.
The recording played on behind her, the boy's voice an endless loop: "Tell him I have the flowers. Tell him I have the flowers."
Deidra pressed the transmit button so hard the plastic cracked. "Evacuation! Evacuation now!"
Nothing. Dead air.
Mills was at her shoulder, looking at the ledger. His face went white. "Noon deployment?"
"Thirteen minutes."
"We can make it." He started for the door, then stopped. "The jammer. They're blocking our comms."
Deidra scanned the room desperately. The transmitter. If she could break the loop, switch frequencies, maybe she could punch through. Her fingers flew across the dials, searching for a clear channel. Static. Static. Then, faintly, Halloway's voice.
"...Morrison? Say again? You're breaking up."
"Chemical weapons in the plaza! Get them out! Get them all out!"
"What? I can't... you're not..."
The signal died. Through the window, she watched a soldier toss his helmet to a local boy. The child put it on, grinning, too big for his small head.
Mills had his men racing down the stairs. Deidra followed, her legs weak. They burst onto the street, sprinting toward the plaza. Three blocks. They could see the crowd now, maybe two hundred people. Soldiers posing for photos. An old woman offering bread.
Deidra screamed until her throat burned. "Gas! Gas attack! Run!"
A few heads turned. Most couldn't hear her over the celebration.
She checked her watch. 11:58.
One soldier saw them running, saw their panic. He reached for his radio, found static, started waving his arms. Others noticed. Confusion rippled through the crowd. But confusion was slow. Too slow.
Somewhere in the city, forty canisters were waiting for their timers to reach zero. Forty metal flowers ready to bloom.
Deidra stopped running. She stood in the street, fifty yards from the plaza, watching the beautiful chaos of human beings trying to understand danger they couldn't see. The soldier had given his helmet to the boy. The old woman was still holding out her bread. Halloway was probably watching from his monitors, proud of his decision to trust her.
She'd wanted so desperately to save them. To be right just once.
The air tasted sweet.
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This is not the type of story I usually get into. Read a line or two, then move on. But this…wow. Just brilliant. And what a punctuated last line. Hits like a mortar. Well done.
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Thank you, Nina! I'm happy you took the time to read it!
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Oh, no!
I don't understand why you don't win every week you enter!
Thanks for liking 'Doing the Limbo'.
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That means more than you know. Thanks for reading with such open eyes.
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Your glorious descriptions with such a thrilling plot. Impeccable, as usual!
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