The first time Emma saw the woman in the mirror, she assumed she was her mother.
It was an easy mistake to make.
The woman stood behind her in the upstairs bathroom, wearing a pale blue sweater and brushing her hair. Her face was turned slightly away, so Emma could only see the curve of her cheek and the dark sweep of her hair.
“Mom?”
The woman stopped brushing.
Emma turned around.
The bathroom was empty.
She looked back at the mirror.
Empty.
Only Emma stared back at her, pale and wide-eyed.
She laughed once.
“Okay.”
Then she went downstairs.
She did not tell her mother.
There were already too many things to tell her mother.
The house had been in their family for almost a hundred years, and Emma had never understood why nobody wanted it.
Her great-grandmother had died there. Her grandmother had grown up there. Her mother had spent most of her childhood there.
And yet, when Emma had asked why the house had been left empty for so many years, her mother had always given the same answer.
“I don't like it.”
That was all.
Until August, when Emma's mother announced that they were moving in.
“It will only be temporary,” she said.
Emma looked at the enormous cardboard boxes filling the hallway.
“You said you hated this place.”
“I was twelve.”
“You said Grandma wouldn't let you go upstairs.”
Her mother stopped unpacking.
“Your grandmother was very strict.”
“You said she locked the upstairs bathroom.”
Her mother smiled faintly.
“Did I?”
“Yes.”
A pause.
“Then I suppose I did.”
Emma frowned.
There was something strange about the way her mother talked about the house.
Not fear.
Not exactly.
More like someone trying very hard not to remember something.
The first thing Emma noticed was the mirror.
It stood at the end of the upstairs hallway, nearly seven feet tall, surrounded by a frame of dark wood carved with flowers, birds, and dozens of tiny human faces.
Her mother had specifically told her not to touch it.
“Why?”
“Because I said so.”
“That is not an explanation.”
“It is enough of one.”
Emma crossed her arms.
“What happens if I touch it?”
Her mother looked at the mirror.
For a moment, her face changed.
Then she looked away.
“Nothing.”
Emma waited.
“Then why can't I touch it?”
Her mother picked up another box.
“Because some things are better left alone.”
Emma rolled her eyes.
Adults loved saying things like that.
So she left the mirror alone.
For three days.
On the fourth morning, she saw the woman.
And now, standing downstairs with her mother, Emma wished she had said something immediately.
Instead, she kept quiet.
She had no idea that the mirror had already noticed her.
Or that it had been waiting.
Three days later, Emma went upstairs again.
She stood in front of the mirror.
The woman was there.
This time, Emma could see her face.
She looked young.
Maybe twenty.
She had dark hair and very pale skin.
And she was staring directly at Emma.
Emma stared back.
The woman slowly raised one finger to her lips.
Be quiet.
Then she pointed behind Emma.
Emma turned.
Nothing.
She looked back.
The woman was gone.
Emma stepped closer to the mirror.
There was something written into the wooden frame.
A sentence so faint she almost missed it.
DO NOT LET IT LEARN YOUR FACE.
Emma touched the letters.
The mirror was cold.
She pulled her hand away.
Behind her, the bathroom door creaked open.
Emma turned.
Her mother stood in the doorway.
She was staring at the mirror.
Not at Emma.
At the mirror.
Her face had gone completely white.
“Mom?”
Her mother didn't answer.
“Mom?”
Finally, she whispered:
“Did you see her?”
Emma's stomach dropped.
“Yes.”
Her mother closed her eyes.
“Then we have to leave.”
“What?”
“Pack a bag.”
“Why?”
“Now, Emma.”
“Who is she?”
Her mother looked at the mirror.
The woman was no longer visible.
But her mother's voice trembled when she answered.
“She is the reason your grandmother never looked away.”
Emma stared at her.
“What does that mean?”
Her mother didn't answer.
Instead, she took Emma downstairs.
They packed.
They reached the front door.
And the car wouldn't start.
They tried again.
Nothing.
Her mother called a mechanic.
While they waited, the lights inside the house went out.
Then came three knocks at the front door.
Slow.
Even.
Three knocks.
Emma looked at her mother.
Her mother shook her head.
“Don't open it.”
“Why?”
“Because nobody is supposed to be here.”
Another three knocks.
Emma moved toward the door.
Her mother caught her wrist.
“Emma.”
“What?”
“Whatever you hear, don't answer.”
The knocking stopped.
Then came footsteps.
From upstairs.
Emma looked toward the ceiling.
Someone was walking across the hallway.
Slowly.
Back and forth.
Her mother squeezed her hand.
“We're going to the basement.”
“Why?”
“Because the basement has no mirrors.”
They hurried downstairs.
The basement smelled like dust and stone.
Their flashlight swept across old furniture, boxes, shelves, and piles of photographs.
Emma stopped.
There were hundreds of them.
Photographs of the house.
Photographs of families.
Photographs of people standing in front of the mirror.
She picked one up.
A little boy stood beside a woman.
The woman was young.
Dark-haired.
Pale.
The same woman Emma had seen.
Emma turned the photograph over.
She picked up another.
Another.
The woman appeared in every photograph.
She never aged.
Emma found another.
Her grandmother.
Seventeen years old.
Standing beside the mirror.
And beside her was the woman.
Emma turned it over.
Four words had been written across the back.
SHE LOOKED AWAY ONCE.
Emma stared at the sentence.
“What does that mean?”
Her mother sat down.
“I never wanted you to know.”
“Know what?”
Her mother looked at the photographs.
“The mirror doesn't show ghosts.”
Emma frowned.
“Then what does it show?”
“People.”
“That's not an answer.”
“No.”
Her mother swallowed.
“It shows people before it takes them.”
Emma looked toward the stairs.
“What does that mean?”
“Your great-grandmother discovered the mirror's secret.”
Her mother picked up one of the photographs.
“Everyone who lived in this house eventually saw the woman. She would appear in the glass. She would look exactly like someone they trusted. A mother. A sister. A friend.”
“Why?”
“To make them look closer.”
Emma felt a chill.
“Closer to what?”
“The mirror.”
Her mother turned the photograph over.
“Once the mirror has your face, it can make a copy of you.”
Emma stared at her.
“A copy?”
“It learns your face. Your voice. Your mannerisms. The things you remember.”
Her mother looked at the mirror-shaped outline reflected faintly in the basement window.
“Then it sends the copy back.”
Emma's throat tightened.
“What happens to the real person?”
Her mother didn't answer.
She didn't need to.
Emma looked at the photographs again.
All those people.
All those faces.
All those missing years.
“That's why Grandma never looked away.”
Her mother nodded.
“She believed that if she watched the mirror, it couldn't finish learning her.”
Emma stared at the photograph of her grandmother.
“She watched it her whole life?”
“Yes.”
“Why didn't she destroy it?”
“She tried.”
Emma looked up.
“What happened?”
“She looked away.”
Silence.
“What happened when she looked away?”
Her mother whispered:
“The mirror changed.”
Emma felt a chill move through her.
“What did it become?”
Her mother looked directly at her.
“It became her.”
The basement door slammed shut.
Emma jumped.
Her mother stood.
The flashlight flickered.
Once.
Twice.
Then the basement filled with a faint whispering.
Names.
Dozens of them.
One after another.
Emma heard names she didn't recognize.
Then her grandmother's.
Then her mother's.
Then her own.
“Emma.”
She froze.
Her mother grabbed her hand.
“Don't answer.”
“Mom?”
“Don't.”
The voice came again.
This time, it sounded exactly like her grandmother.
“Emma, look at me.”
Emma's mother began crying.
“That isn't her.”
“But it sounds like her.”
“I know.”
The whispering stopped.
The basement became completely silent.
Then Emma heard her mother's voice from behind her.
“Emma?”
She turned.
Her mother was standing beside her.
But another voice came from the stairs.
Her mother's voice.
“Emma, come here.”
Emma looked at her mother.
Then at the stairs.
Then back at her mother.
Her mother whispered:
“Don't look at it.”
Emma understood.
The mirror did not need to look like a stranger.
It needed to look like someone she loved.
She looked toward the basement door.
A thin strip of light had appeared beneath it.
And in that strip of light stood a pair of feet.
Emma's mother's feet.
Except her mother was standing beside her.
Emma's heart stopped.
The feet disappeared.
Then a face appeared in the small basement window.
Her mother's face.
Smiling.
Emma's mother pulled her backward.
“Don't look.”
The woman in the window smiled wider.
Then she spoke.
In Emma's mother's voice.
“You already have.”
Emma looked down.
A shard of glass lay on the floor.
She could see her reflection in it.
But her reflection was not looking back at her.
It was looking toward the window.
Emma dropped the glass.
Her mother grabbed the old iron lamp from a shelf.
“Move.”
Together, they ran upstairs.
The mirror waited at the end of the hallway.
The woman stood inside it.
Behind her were all the people from the photographs.
Her grandmother.
Her great-grandmother.
Children.
Parents.
Strangers.
All watching.
The woman smiled.
Emma's mother raised the lamp.
“Don't look away,” she whispered.
Emma stared at the mirror.
“What?”
“If we break it, don't look away.”
Her mother swung the lamp.
The mirror cracked.
A sound came from inside the glass.
Not a scream.
Hundreds of voices.
The woman slammed both hands against the other side.
Cracks raced across her face.
Emma's mother struck the mirror again.
The glass shattered.
Every piece reflected something different.
A bedroom.
A kitchen.
A staircase.
A little girl.
A family.
A woman standing alone.
Then Emma saw herself.
Not as she was now.
Older.
Standing in the same hallway.
Looking into the same mirror.
Emma stepped backward.
The reflection smiled.
Then it whispered:
“Don't look away.”
Emma understood.
The mirror hadn't been showing the future.
It had been showing what would happen if she let it learn her.
She closed her eyes.
The glass shattered completely.
The house became silent.
For several seconds, neither of them moved.
Then her mother whispered:
“It's over.”
Emma opened her eyes.
The mirror was gone.
Only broken pieces remained.
Her mother looked at them.
For the first time in years, she seemed to breathe normally.
They left the house before sunrise.
The car started on the first try.
Neither of them spoke for almost an hour.
Then Emma asked:
“Did Grandma know what would happen?”
Her mother nodded.
“She knew the mirror would keep trying.”
“Then why did she stay?”
Her mother looked out the window.
“Because somebody had to watch it.”
Emma looked down at her hands.
“And now?”
Her mother didn't answer.
Emma turned toward the side mirror.
For a moment, she saw her own reflection.
Then another face appeared behind her.
Her grandmother.
Emma's breath caught.
Her grandmother wasn't frightened.
She was smiling.
And behind her stood the woman from the mirror.
But the woman wasn't smiling anymore.
She was staring at Emma's mother.
Emma slowly turned toward her.
Her mother was driving.
Her hands were on the steering wheel.
Her eyes were fixed on the road.
Everything looked normal.
Then Emma noticed something.
Her mother hadn't blinked.
Not once.
Emma's heart began to race.
“Mom?”
No response.
“Mom?”
Her mother slowly turned her head.
She smiled.
It was her mother's smile.
Exactly right.
Except for one thing.
Her eyes looked empty.
Emma looked into the rearview mirror.
Her grandmother was still there.
She raised one finger to her lips.
Be quiet.
Then she pointed at Emma's mother.
Emma understood.
The mirror had not been trying to get Emma.
It had been trying to get her mother.
And while Emma had been watching the mirror, something else had been watching them.
Emma looked back at the road.
Her mother smiled again.
“Are you all right?”
Emma swallowed.
“Yes.”
The word barely came out.
Her mother reached over and took her hand.
Her fingers were ice cold.
Then, in the rearview mirror, Emma saw her grandmother shake her head.
Do not let it learn your face.
Emma stared straight ahead.
She understood now why her grandmother had spent her entire life watching the mirror.
Why she had never looked away.
Why she had warned everyone else.
The mirror did not need to trap you forever.
It only needed you to look away long enough to become someone you trusted.
And Emma had just realized something even worse.
She had no idea how long her mother had been sitting beside her.
You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.
This is so creepy in the best way! You had me engrossed by the first paragraph. And this next sentence gave me chills! "DO NOT LET IT LEARN YOUR FACE." A very clever take on the prompt! Ghostly through and through till the very end! Kudos.
Reply
Thanks! I usually start my stories by choosing the character, an object, and a certain electrifying sentence such as this one.
Reply