The Last storm

Drama Friendship Romance

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the first and last sentences are exactly the same." as part of Hello and Goodbye with Chersti Nieveen.

The storm had come early that year.

Not the kind that split trees or overturned bins, but the quieter kind—the one that arrived inside people, rearranging them in ways the outside world never noticed. For months, Maya had felt it settling into her ribcage, a weight she couldn’t put down.

But this wasn’t about her.

This was about the boy who had lived two doors down since she was seven—the boy who climbed her garden fence the day she cried over her parents’ first big fight, the boy who taught her how to ride a bike, the boy who grew into the man she loved long before she admitted it to herself.

Ethan.

The name still hurt in her throat.

They hadn’t spoken properly for weeks. Not since he told her he was leaving—six months away in Canada for work, a chance he said he couldn’t turn down. And she’d tried to be supportive. Tried to smile. Tried to say all the right things.

But something inside her cracked the night he broke the news, and she couldn’t hide it. She’d walked away mid-conversation. He’d let her. And the silence between them had thickened like fog since.

Tonight was his last night in the city.

The message came at 8:14 p.m.

Are you home?

Her heart thudded once, too hard. She stared at the screen. Then typed, deleted, retyped.

Yeah.

The typing bubbles appeared immediately.

Can you come outside?

She hesitated only long enough to grab the oversized hoodie he’d left at her place months earlier. Its sleeves still carried a faint scent of cedar and something warm—something him.

When she stepped outside, he was leaning against the lamppost near the edge of her garden, hands tucked into his jacket pockets. The street was quiet, washed in the faint glow of streetlights and the thin drizzle that had started moments earlier.

He looked up as she approached.

And he smiled.

That smile—crooked on the left, soft on the right—had undone her heart a thousand times growing up. Tonight, it did something different.

It broke her wide open.

“Hey,” he said gently.

She swallowed. “You shouldn’t be out in the rain.”

He shrugged. “It felt wrong leaving without seeing you.”

“You leave tomorrow.” Her voice cracked on the last word; she hated how fragile it sounded.

He nodded. “Yeah.”

Silence stretched—a familiar silence, but heavy now.

“I didn’t mean to leave things weird,” he said.

“You didn’t,” she lied.

He huffed a quiet laugh. “Don’t do that.”

The drizzle grew steadier, misting across his hair. She suddenly realised he looked tired—beyond tired. Like he’d been carrying something heavy too.

“Maya,” he said softly, “I didn’t tell you everything.”

Her breath hitched. “What do you mean?”

He stepped closer—slowly, as if giving her time to step away. She didn’t.

“I’m scared,” he said simply. “I know I said I was excited, that this job was everything I wanted, but…”

His jaw tightened.

“…but it doesn’t feel right leaving without knowing.”

“Knowing what?” she whispered.

He exhaled, long and shaky. “Whether there’s something between us. Whether I imagined it.”

Her heartbeat stuttered.

“You didn’t imagine anything,” she said, barely audible.

His eyes closed for a moment, relief flickering across his expression before he opened them again.

“I thought so,” he murmured. “But then you walked away that night. And I figured maybe I’d read it wrong.”

“I walked away because…” Her throat tightened. “Because the thought of losing you hurt more than pretending I didn’t care.”

The confession hovered between them, trembling, fragile.

Ethan stepped closer still—near enough that she could feel the warmth of him in the cold rain.

“Maya,” he whispered, “look at me.”

She did.

And his next words changed everything.

“Before I go… I need one moment with you. Just one. Something real. Something I can take with me.”

Her breath faltered.

He didn’t reach for her.

He waited.

Ethan always waited for her.

Maya lifted a hand slowly, fingers brushing his cheek. He leaned into the touch, eyes softening in a way she’d seen only a handful of times—after his father died, after she got into university, the day she told him she didn’t feel safe walking home and he insisted on escorting her for months.

That look.

The look of someone who cared more than he could say.

Her voice trembled. “Just one moment?”

His answer was almost a whisper. “As many as you’ll give me.”

Something inside her broke and healed at the same time.

She stepped closer—so close that she could feel his breath against her lips, warm against the cold.

He didn’t move.

He let her close the distance.

The kiss—when it came—wasn’t the fiery, breathless kind she had imagined in quiet moments over the years. It was slow. Deliberate. Full of all the words they’d swallowed and all the moments they’d almost had. His hand slid gently to the back of her neck, hers curled into the fabric of his coat, holding him as if she were afraid he’d vanish.

When they finally pulled apart, she leaned her forehead against his.

His eyes were wet—whether from rain or emotion, she couldn’t tell.

“That was…” he whispered.

“Late,” she finished.

He nodded once. “Yeah. But perfect.”

She swallowed hard. “I don’t want this to be our last time.”

He closed his eyes as though the words physically hit him. When he opened them, she saw the truth reflected there.

“It doesn’t have to be,” he said. “But I can’t ask you to wait for me. I don’t even know what life will look like there.”

She pressed her lips together, fighting the swell of emotion. “Then don’t ask me. Let me choose.”

“Maya—”

“Let me choose,” she repeated, stronger this time.

He took her hands in his. Rain soaked their sleeves, their hair, the world around them, but neither moved.

“Okay,” he whispered. “Then choose.”

She looked at him—really looked. At the boy who had grown beside her, the man who now stood trembling in the rain, asking for something he was terrified to receive.

And she smiled.

A soft, aching, beautiful smile.

The kind you give only once, because it belongs to a moment that won’t ever come again.

“I choose,” she said softly, “to believe this isn’t our ending.”

His breath caught.

That was the last time she saw him before he left.

And though she didn’t know it then, that smile—her smile—was the one he carried with him across an ocean, tucked into every lonely night, every new beginning.

The first kiss they shared became the memory he reached for.

But the last smile she gave him…

That was the piece of home he never let go of.

Posted Nov 21, 2025
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