The Choice

Fiction Science Fiction Speculative

Written in response to: "Set your story in/on a car, plane, or train." as part of Gone in a Flash.

Rain slid down the windows of the last train out of the city. Inside the carriage, most of the lights were dim. A few passengers slept with their heads against the glass. Others stared at their phones, faces glowing pale in the quiet.

Lisa sat near the back with a small suitcase tucked between her boots. The train rocked gently as it moved through the dark countryside. Every few minutes the wheels screeched against the rails, then settled back into their steady rhythm.

She checked the time on her phone.

11:47 p.m.

Still two hours to go.

Across the aisle, an old man folded a paper map. Not scrolling on a screen. An actual map. The paper looked older than the train itself.

“You’ll wear that thing out,” he said without looking up.

Lisa blinked. “Sorry?”

“Your phone,” he said, glancing over. “You’ve checked the time about twenty times.”

She gave a small laugh. “That obvious?”

“Only to someone who’s been watching.”

That made her pause.

Outside, the train passed a lonely platform that flashed by in a blur of yellow light.

“Heading somewhere important?” the man asked.

“Maybe,” she said. “Or maybe I’m leaving somewhere important.”

The old man nodded slowly, as if the answer made perfect sense.

“Same thing sometimes.”

The train hummed along the tracks.

Somewhere ahead, a door slid open and shut again. The carriage shifted as someone walked through.

Lisa leaned back in her seat.

For the first time all night, she stopped checking the time.

The train curved along the track, jolting slightly. Lisa’s suitcase tipped over and she reached down to steady it.

When she looked up again, the old man was studying her with a quiet kind of interest.

“First time leaving?” he asked.

Lisa hesitated. “Is it that obvious too?”

“Not obvious,” he said. “Familiar.”

He tapped the folded map on his knee.

“I used to do the same thing. Late train. Small bag. Look like you’re running from something but hoping it doesn’t follow.”

The words hung in the air.

Lisa glanced toward the dark window. Her reflection stared back at her, faint and tired.

“I’m not running,” she said.

“Of course not,” the old man replied gently.

“No one ever is.”

A faint smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. It wasn’t mocking. If anything, it felt understanding.

The train slowed as it approached a small rural station. The brakes hissed softly.

Outside, a single lamp lit the empty platform.

No one got on.

No one got off.

After a moment the train pulled forward again, easing back into its steady rhythm.

“Where are you headed?” the man asked.

“North Ridge,” Lisa said.

The man’s eyebrows lifted slightly.

“Small place.”

“That’s the point.”

The old man nodded slowly.

“Most people get off there.”

Lisa shifted in her seat. “What about you?”

The man looked down at his map. His finger traced a line along one of the printed rail routes.

“I’m not really going anywhere,” he said.

Lisa frowned. “But you’re on the train.”

“Yes.”

“That usually means you're going somewhere.”

The man chuckled quietly.

“You’d think so.”

Before Lisa could ask what he meant, the intercom crackled overhead.

“Next stop - North Ridge. Ten minutes.”

Her chest tightened.

Ten minutes.

Across the aisle, the old man folded the map again.

Funny thing about trains,” he said. “You can step off anytime. But once they start moving, it gets harder to change your mind.”

Lisa swallowed.

“You sound like you’ve changed yours before.”

He looked at her for a long moment.

“More times than I should have.”

The train roared through a dark stretch of forest. The windows turned black again.

Lisa pulled her suitcase upright.

“North Ridge,” the speaker repeated faintly from the next car.

The old man stood, slower than she expected, and tucked the map into his coat pocket.

“You might want this,” he said, pulling something else from the pocket.

He handed her a small paper ticket.

It looked old. Much older than the electronic tickets everyone used now.

Lisa turned it over in her hand.

“This isn’t mine.”

“No.”

“Then why give it to me?”

The man smiled - the same quiet smile he’d had all night.

“In case you decide not to get off.”

Lisa looked up.

But the aisle was empty.

The old man was already walking toward the door between the train cars, disappearing into the dim light.

Lisa stared at the empty aisle.

The door between the cars swayed slightly as the train moved, but the old man was gone.

She looked down at the ticket in her hand.

The paper was thick and stiff, like the kind conductors used decades ago. The edges were worn smooth.

Across the front, faded ink read:

Open Destination.

No station name.

No date.

No expiration.

Just that.

The intercom crackled again.

“North Ridge in five minutes.”

Lisa walked to the door between the cars and pushed it open. Cold air rushed through the narrow gap. The next carriage looked almost identical - dim lights, quiet passengers.

But no old man.

She stepped inside and scanned the aisle.

Nothing.

“North Ridge approaching.”

The train began to slow.

Brakes groaned. Station lights appeared in the distance.

Lisa stood there for a moment, unsure why her chest felt so tight.

Maybe it was nerves.

Maybe it was the thought of stepping off somewhere no one knew her.

Or maybe it was the strange feeling that something had just happened that didn’t quite make sense.

She looked down at the ticket again.

Open Destination.

The train rolled past the first signal light outside the station.

Two minutes.

Lisa returned to her seat and grabbed her suitcase.

Passengers began waking up.

Someone yawned.

Someone stretched.

Outside, the platform of North Ridge slid into view under a row of tall white lamps.

The train slowed to a crawl.

Lisa stood near the door now.

Suitcase beside her.

Heart pounding.

The train stopped with a soft jolt.

The doors slid open.

Cold night air rushed in.

“North Ridge,” the speaker said quietly.

Lisa stepped forward.

Her foot hovered above the platform.

Then she stopped.

She looked down at the ticket again.

Open Destination.

For the first time since boarding the train, she realized something.

The old man never had a suitcase. He never checked the time.

And somehow… he already knew where she was getting off.

Behind her, the doors chimed.

Closing in ten seconds.

Lisa took a breath.

Then she stepped back inside the train.

Posted Mar 08, 2026
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Hazel Swiger
21:14 Mar 08, 2026

Great story, Rebecca. This genuinely left me speechless. I have no words. The way you crafted the characters- it felt so real. You have a gift for that. Beautiful, gut-wrenching, and lovely, truly.

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