The Train Between

Fantasy Horror

Written in response to: "Include the line “We don't have time for this” in your story." as part of In Real Time.

The station clock had stopped at 11:42.

Star noticed because everything else was still moving. Rain rattled against the glass roof. The departure board flickered between destinations. Somewhere down the platform, a vending machine hummed like it had all night to wait.

But the clock's second hand didn't move.

“Rashid,” she said. “Look.”

Her brother barely glanced up. “Broken clock.”

“It was working when we came in.”

“So?”

Star pointed at the tracks.

Their train was sitting fifty feet away, doors open, lights glowing. They had been walking toward it for what felt like two minutes.

They weren't any closer.

Rashid finally stopped.

Behind them, the station entrance had disappeared into darkness.

“Okay,” he whispered. “That's new.”

A voice crackled over the speakers.

“Passengers for the 11:42 service should board immediately.”

Star grabbed Rashid's arm.

The announcement repeated.

“Passengers for the 11:42 service should board immediately.”

Then again, louder.

“Passengers for the 11:42 service should board immediately.”

Rashid pulled out his phone. No signal. The screen showed 11:42.

“We should go back,” Star said.

“To where?”

A door slammed behind them.

Footsteps followed.

Slow. Heavy. Getting closer.

Rashid stared into the darkness, then at the train that somehow remained impossibly far away.

“We don't have time for this,” he said.

Star looked at the frozen clock.

“I don't think we have time at all.”

The footsteps stopped.

Every light in the station went out.

Except the ones inside the train.

And suddenly, it was right in front of them.

The doors waited open.

From inside came the conductor's voice.

“Last chance.”

Star stepped aboard.

Rashid didn't.

For one second, they stared at each other through the open doors.

“Rashid!”

He tried to move, but something in the darkness had wrapped around his ankle.

He looked down.

A hand was gripping him from beneath the platform.

Then another appeared.

And another.

Star lunged for him, but the doors snapped shut between them.

Rashid slammed both palms against the glass as the hands dragged him backward. His mouth opened in a scream Star couldn't hear.

The train began to move.

“No!” Star pounded on the door. “Stop the train!”

The conductor stood at the far end of the carriage.

“You can't stop here,” he said quietly.

Outside, Rashid disappeared into the darkness.

The station clock ticked.

11:43.

The train entered a tunnel, and Star's reflection appeared in the window.

Behind her reflection stood Rashid.

His clothes were soaked. His face was pale.

And one blackened hand rested on her shoulder.

Star stopped breathing.

The hand on her shoulder was cold enough to hurt.

She stared at Rashid's reflection in the window.

“Don't turn around,” he whispered.

His voice sounded wrong. Distant, as though he were speaking through several closed doors.

Star kept her eyes on the glass.

“Are you dead?”

Rashid almost smiled.

“I don't know.”

At the far end of the carriage, the conductor lifted his head.

He had heard them.

Until now, Star hadn't looked closely at him. His uniform was old-fashioned, dark wool with brass buttons. A cap shadowed most of his face.

But there was something stranger.

He had no reflection.

The conductor started walking toward them.

Rashid's fingers tightened on Star's shoulder.

“When I tell you to run, run.”

“Where?”

“Forward.”

“There are only more train cars.”

“I know.”

The conductor moved closer.

Twenty feet.

Fifteen.

Star could finally see beneath his cap.

Where his eyes should have been were two small, perfectly round holes.

“Ticket,” he said.

Star searched her pockets. “I don't have one.”

The conductor stopped.

“Then you don't belong on this train.”

Behind Star, Rashid whispered, “Neither does he.”

The conductor's head snapped toward Rashid's voice.

“Run.”

Star bolted.

She threw open the door to the next carriage and stumbled through.

Empty.

Another door.

Another empty carriage.

She kept going.

Behind her came a terrible metallic shriek.

Then footsteps.

Not one pair.

Dozens.

Star glanced back.

People were pouring through the train behind the conductor.

Passengers she hadn't seen before.

A woman carrying a suitcase with stickers from cities that no longer existed. A soldier in a mud-covered uniform. A little boy clutching a wooden airplane. An old man wearing hospital clothes.

They ran together, but not like strangers caught in the same panic.

The soldier kept one hand behind him, guiding the little boy without looking back. The woman caught the old man when he stumbled. None of them spoke. None of them needed to.

Whatever this place was, they had been here together for a long time.

And Rashid was running with them.

“Star!”

She reached the next door.

Locked.

She pulled the handle again.

Nothing.

The conductor was getting closer.

“Ticket,” he called.

The other passengers repeated it.

“Ticket.”

Star kicked the door.

“Ticket.”

She slammed her shoulder against it.

“Ticket.”

Rashid reached her first.

He grabbed the handle.

His hand passed straight through it.

Star stared at him.

Now she understood.

“You're dead.”

Rashid looked at his transparent fingers.

“I think so.”

The conductor entered the carriage.

“Passengers without tickets must leave the train.”

Star backed against the locked door.

Rashid stepped between them.

“She has a ticket.”

The conductor tilted his head.

“No.”

Rashid reached into his jacket.

He pulled out a small rectangle of yellow paper.

Star recognized it immediately.

Their father had given it to Rashid when they were children, after taking them on their first train ride. Rashid had kept it in his wallet for years as a joke.

An expired ticket.

The conductor held out his hand.

Rashid placed it in his palm.

For the first time, the conductor hesitated.

Then the locked door behind Star clicked open.

Rashid looked at her.

“Go.”

“What about you?”

“I already missed my train.”

Star shook her head. “I'm not leaving you again.”

“You didn't leave me.”

The conductor's fingers curled around the old ticket.

It began to burn.

His eyeless face turned toward Rashid.

Rashid shoved Star through the doorway.

“GO!”

She fell forward.

There was no train car on the other side.

There was a platform.

Morning sunlight streamed through the station windows.

People hurried around her carrying coffee and bags. Phones rang. Shoes clicked against concrete. A baby cried somewhere nearby.

Everything was normal.

Star spun around.

The doorway was gone.

A regular commuter train stood beside the platform.

Its doors opened.

Passengers stepped out.

No Rashid.

No conductor.

Star looked at the station clock.

8:16 a.m.

Her phone vibrated.

Thirty-seven missed calls.

She unlocked it with shaking hands.

The date made her stomach drop.

Three days had passed.

Then another notification appeared.

A voicemail.

From Rashid.

Received one minute ago.

Star pressed play.

Static filled her ear.

Then Rashid's voice.

“Star, listen carefully. I was wrong.”

A long pause.

“The conductor wasn't trying to keep you on the train.”

Behind his voice came the distant screech of metal wheels.

“He was trying to keep something else from getting off.”

The voicemail ended.

Star slowly looked up.

Across the crowded platform stood the little boy with the wooden airplane.

He smiled at her.

Beside him stood the soldier.

Then the old man.

Then the woman with the suitcase.

One by one, the impossible passengers appeared among the living.

And at the very end of the platform, something wearing Rashid's face stepped off the train.

Star knew immediately it wasn't her brother.

It had Rashid's face. His jacket. Even the small scar above his left eyebrow from when he'd fallen off his bike at nine.

But Rashid never smiled like that.

The thing stepped onto the platform.

Around Star, commuters kept moving.

A man walked straight past the soldier without noticing the mud dripping from his uniform. A woman hurried through the old man as if he were smoke.

Star backed away.

The thing wearing Rashid's face followed.

“Star.”

She froze.

It sounded exactly like him now.

“It's okay,” it said. “You got out.”

Star looked at the little boy with the wooden airplane.

He was staring at Rashid too.

Not smiling anymore.

“What are you?” Star asked.

People brushed past her, annoyed that she was standing in the middle of the platform.

Rashid's face tilted slightly.

“Your brother.”

“No.”

Its smile disappeared.

The station lights flickered.

For half a second, morning vanished.

Star saw the station as it had been at 11:42. Empty. Dark. Rain hammering the roof.

Then daylight returned.

Nobody else reacted.

The thing took another step.

Star ran.

She pushed through the crowd toward the exit.

Behind her came footsteps.

Not hurried.

It didn't need to hurry.

She reached the stairs.

The lights flickered again.

Darkness.

11:42.

Daylight.

8:16.

Darkness.

11:42.

Each flicker lasted longer.

The station was changing.

Or something was pulling it backward.

“Star!”

Rashid's voice came from behind her.

This time it sounded frightened.

Real.

She almost turned.

Then she remembered what he'd said on the train.

When I tell you to run, run.

She kept going.

The exit was twenty feet away.

Ten.

Five.

The lights went out.

When they came back, Star was standing on the empty platform again.

The station clock read 11:42.

The exit was gone.

“No.”

The impossible passengers stood in a circle around her.

The soldier.

The old man.

The woman.

The little boy.

And dozens more.

Hundreds, perhaps.

People from different decades. Different countries. Different lives.

All trapped at the same minute.

The thing wearing Rashid's face walked through them.

They moved aside.

Star understood.

They weren't following it.

They were afraid of it.

But there was something else in the way they watched it.

The soldier's hands had curled into fists. The woman had moved in front of the old man without seeming to realize she'd done it. The little boy clutched his wooden airplane against his chest and stared at the thing wearing Rashid's face with an expression that wasn't quite fear anymore.

They had seen this thing before.

Maybe they had been afraid of it for years.

Maybe some of them had been afraid of it for much longer than that.

But for the first time, Star had the strange feeling that they weren't only watching the creature.

They were watching her.

Waiting.

“What do you want?”

The thing stopped.

“To leave.”

“You already did.”

“No.”

It looked around the station.

“This is still his memory.”

“Whose?”

It pointed at itself.

“Rashid's.”

Star's stomach tightened.

The thing touched its chest.

“He died here. So I needed him to get out.”

“What are you?”

Its smile returned.

“Something that has been waiting much longer than your brother.”

The station speakers crackled.

“Passengers for the 11:42 service should board immediately.”

The thing looked toward the tracks.

The train had returned.

Its doors stood open.

And inside, the conductor was waiting.

Star stared at him.

The eyeless face.

The old uniform.

The burned ticket still clenched in one hand.

Then she understood Rashid's message.

The conductor hadn't been hunting the passengers.

He had been guarding them.

Keeping them together.

Keeping this thing contained.

The conductor lifted one hand.

Not toward Star.

Toward the creature.

“Ticket,” he said.

The thing laughed.

“You lost.”

The conductor didn't move.

“Ticket.”

“I crossed over.”

“Ticket.”

“You can't take me back.”

The conductor slowly opened his burned hand.

A piece of yellow paper remained inside.

Rashid's childhood ticket.

Only now there was writing on the back.

Star stepped closer.

One word had been scratched into it.

Star.

Her brother had known.

He hadn't given the conductor a ticket to save himself.

He'd given him a ticket for her.

The conductor looked at Star.

Then toward the train.

She understood what he was asking.

“No,” the creature said.

For the first time, it sounded afraid.

Star grabbed the ticket.

The station shook.

Every clock began ticking at once.

The creature charged.

Star ran toward the train.

It grabbed her jacket.

She tore free.

The little boy stepped between them.

For one second, nobody moved.

The boy was trembling. He held the wooden airplane in both hands, pressed tightly against his chest.

The creature stared down at him.

Then the boy shook his head.

“No.”

The creature struck him aside.

The soldier moved before the boy hit the ground.

He grabbed the creature's arm.

The woman dropped her suitcase and seized the other.

The old man joined them.

Then another passenger.

And another.

The platform erupted.

People who had spent years — decades, perhaps longer — running from this thing stopped running.

One by one, the trapped passengers threw themselves at it.

They couldn't hold it for long.

But they didn't need long.

Star reached the train.

The conductor stood beside the open door.

“What do I do?”

He pointed inside.

Star climbed aboard.

The creature screamed.

Not with Rashid's voice anymore.

With hundreds of voices.

The windows shattered.

The lights exploded.

The passengers holding it were thrown across the platform.

It came for her.

The conductor stepped into its path.

The creature drove a hand through his chest.

He didn't fall.

Instead, he wrapped both arms around it.

Then he looked at Star.

“Now.”

Star stared at the ticket.

There was a small metal punch hanging beside the driver's compartment.

She grabbed it.

The creature realized what she was doing.

“No!”

Star punched a hole through the ticket.

The clock moved.

11:43.

The train doors slammed shut.

The creature screamed.

The entire station folded inward.

Walls stretched.

Lights became streaks.

The platform disappeared.

For one terrible second Star felt herself falling through years instead of distance.

Then everything stopped.

Silence.

She opened her eyes.

She was sitting alone inside the train.

Sunlight filled the carriage.

Outside the window was a green field.

No station.

No city.

No conductor.

Star looked at the seat across from her.

Rashid was sitting there.

Her real brother.

She knew before he spoke.

His smile was tired and crooked.

The way it had always been.

“Hey.”

Star couldn't answer.

She crossed the aisle and hugged him.

This time he was warm.

She started crying.

“So you're alive?”

Rashid held her tightly.

“No.”

Star pulled back.

He looked toward the window.

The landscape outside wasn't moving.

“I think this is my stop.”

A door appeared at the end of the carriage.

Beyond it was sunlight.

Not harsh or blinding.

Just morning.

Star understood.

“No.”

Rashid smiled.

“You always were terrible at goodbyes.”

“Then don't make me say one.”

“You don't have to.”

She held his hand.

“What happens to you?”

“I don't know.”

“Are you scared?”

Rashid thought about it.

“A little.”

Star nodded.

“Me too.”

They sat together for a while.

There was no clock in the carriage.

No announcements.

No footsteps.

For once, nothing was counting down.

Finally Rashid stood.

At the doorway, he looked back.

“Star?”

“Yeah?”

“You need to wake up now.”

He stepped into the sunlight.

And disappeared.

Star opened her eyes.

She was lying on the crowded station platform.

Paramedics surrounded her.

Someone was asking her name.

Another person said she'd collapsed for less than thirty seconds.

Star sat up.

The station clock read 8:17.

Only one minute had passed.

Her phone was in her hand.

The voicemail from Rashid was gone.

So were the missed calls.

She searched his name.

There were dozens of old messages.

Photos.

Videos.

And a final text from three days earlier.

The police would later tell Star that Rashid had died before she ever entered the station that morning.

A late-night accident.

11:42 p.m.

She had learned the news over the phone.

Then somehow forgotten.

Or refused to remember.

Star sat on the platform for a long time.

Eventually, she noticed something beside her shoe.

A yellow rectangle of paper.

Rashid's old train ticket.

There was a hole punched cleanly through the center.

On the back, beneath her name, someone had written four more words.

Not Rashid's handwriting.

The conductor's.

DEBT PAID IN FULL.

Star kept the ticket.

Years passed.

The station was renovated. The old clocks were replaced. The 11:42 service was eventually removed from the timetable.

Star grew older.

She stopped fearing train stations.

Mostly.

But every year, on the anniversary of Rashid's death, she took the last train home.

And sometimes, just before midnight, the lights would flicker.

For a fraction of a second, she'd see an old conductor standing at the far end of the carriage.

Still watching.

Still guarding the door.

Then he'd be gone.

Star never saw the impossible passengers again.

She never saw the thing that had worn her brother's face.

But once, many years later, as her train passed through a dark tunnel, the carriage lights went out.

Someone sat down beside her.

Star didn't look.

A familiar voice whispered.

“Still terrible at goodbyes.”

She laughed.

The lights came back on.

The seat beside her was empty.

Outside the window, dawn was beginning.

And for the first time since 11:42, Star understood that some trains aren't meant to bring people back.

They're only meant to carry them far enough to say goodbye.

Posted Sep 03, 2026
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Kelsey Heyel
September 07, 2026 16:56

“I don’t think we have time at all” is such a scrumptious follow-up to the sentence you based the story around. This was so good!!

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