Annabella

Drama Historical Fiction Creative Nonfiction

Written in response to: "Write about a character who’s obsessed with an era they never lived through." as part of Blast from the Past.

Annabella

A small Victorian cottage sat on the shores of New Hampshire, the last one in the row, with nearly endless views of the ocean and it’s shores. Two brothers approached the house with an unending discussion about the conversation they needed to have with their father. 

“You know I can’t stand talking to him.” said Andrew. 

“Yes, but he’s Father, and you know how he is,” said Michael.

“Well, you’ve known him longer than I have, why don’t you tell him?” said Andrew. 

The two men stopped at the top of the steps to the porch as Michael looked back at his brother.

“I’m 2 years older than you. It’s not like Dad and I go way back,” he replied. This didn’t stop Andrew from trying to argue his point. 

“He’s always liked you more.” he griped.

“Hardly. You’re the youngest. You were always spoiled.” answered Michael

As Michael turned his back, Andrew grimaced. “Just knock on the door,” said Andrew.

Three firm knocks were all their father would allow. You were to stand patiently and wait. If no one answered in two minutes, you were to knock three more times and repeat the process. In most cases, the door was answered on the first try. Andrew’s desire was to wait the least amount of time possible and leave. 

“Oh dear, he’s not home. Let’s go,” said Andrew

“Wait. It’s not even been the correct amount of time.” protested Michael

Rolling his eyes, Andrew stood by counting the seconds in his mind until the second knock was required. Secretly he was planning his escape if the door did not open after that. To his disappointment, the door opened, and a healthy silver-haired man stood before them in a white dress shirt and charcoal grey slacks. 

“Good evening gentlemen.” said the man

“Good evening, Jeffrey, how are you?” said Michael

“Copasetic, Sir, and yourself?” The man’s voice was deep and smooth, but to Andrew so boring he nearly fell asleep upon introductions.

“Excellent! Thank you!” Michael replied cheerfully.

“What’s up, Jeff!” said Andrew

Jeffrey looked unblinkingly at Andrew and without a smile of greetings said. “Sir.” 

Andrew knew this annoyed Jeffery, but he did it anyway. Andrew believed he lived in the 21st century, not the late 19th as his father did. 

“Michael Senior is in the study,” Jeffrey assured the two men. 

“Magnificent, Jeff, do be so kind as to take my cloak and hat while I sashay to the lavatory,” smirked Andrew.

“Not so fast brother.” retorted Michael, a hand reached out and pulled Andrew closer. 

“Oh, alright. We might as well get it over with.”

The two men, with their dark hair combed to perfection, dressed in their finest suits, walked into the study. As they entered, their father looked up from his desk and took notice of the men’s clothing. Michael wore an Italian cut, navy blue single-breasted one-button lapel with matching slacks, a bright red tie, and a crisp white shirt. Andrew chose a more casual and less approved American cut, smoky grey standard notch jacket, no tie, and grey shirt, with black slacks. Disapproving his younger son’s appearance, he was nevertheless proud of their handsome features. Both had medium skin tone, perfect white teeth, and chiseled features. They had their mother’s brown eyes but their father’s handsome facial attributes. Michael had a square clean-shaven jawline with a dark beard only now giving a shadow in the evening hours, where Andrew’s face was more triangular, with at least half a week’s dark brown beard. His father was clearly annoyed by that as well. Michael’s hair was full and thick around all sides and just above the ears. Andrew kept his hair in a classic quaff, short on the sides and long on the top, and to his father’s disgust, a tattoo streaked up from his shoulder onto his neck. Michael Senior saw his sons at the summer picnic in Miami last year. Where Michael was strong and tan, Andrew was strong, tan, and covered in tattoos. Both sons were successful in their own right. Michael was engaged, and Andrew was still looking for a “Perfect Match” as he called it. 

“Good evening, Father,” said Michael

“Good evening, son” 

“Hey, Dad!” 

“Andrew.” 

Their father’s deep baritone voice seemed to contradict his outward appearance. His figure was lean and fit. His face was a diamond shape with a medium forehead and slightly receding hairline. Dark grey hair, streaked with the occasional silver hair, trimmed over the ears with a slight wave on top. Dark intense eyebrows hung over grey steely eyes and a salt and pepper beard trimmed to a point without a hair out of place. The entire family was genetically born to be male models. Their mother was the heir to a now unheard of Baron of Austria who fell into obscurity after the second world war. It was often said in her younger years she could have been an Audrey Hepburn look alike. She was the reason for Michael and Andrews’ visit. 

“Prey tell what brings you boys here this evening?” Michael Senior asked pretentiously. “I understood you were with your mother.”

“Well Father, that’s what we’re here to talk to you about,” answered Michael. “ Mother….” Michael gave a pause because he wasn’t sure how to say it. 

“Mom wants to get remarried,” blurted out Andrew.

Michael looked at his brother from the corner of his eyes. “Yes, that is correct.” said Michael

Michael Senior tried not to look shocked, but the momentary pause and fake smile revealed his true emotions. It was well rehearsed, and something his sons had seen him do a hundred times in their lives. Michael Senior stood up from behind his mahogany desk and walked towards the fireplace. Warm flames crackled beneath the mantle as their father stopped in front of a portrait of their mother on the wall above. The lights in the room seemed to dim as Michael Senior focused on Annabella. He felt his heart race as he thought back on the early days of their marriage. Acid began to burn in his stomach. He turned slowly and asked. “When?”

“Next March,” said Michael. 

Michael Senior hadn’t felt the same desperate loss in his heart since the day she left. As time went on, they kept in touch, and they were cordial about their meetings. Yet in his heart and mind he’d hoped somehow they’d come back together. Now, she was going to marry someone else. His sons watched him as he walked around the room as if lost. The rich colors of thick red and white carpet muffled his steps, and he walked from the fireplace to the wall lined with teak bookshelves. He strode slowly past a closet door and marble bust of Abraham Lincoln, past the french doors that lead to the study from the hallway. Ornamental columns holding cut glass framed the french doors as stained glass decorated the partition above. Back to the window and behind his desk. All this time Michael Senior didn’t say a single word. He sat down in his high back leather chair and steepled his fingers. Just as quickly he stood up and walked to the small drink bar in the corner and asked his sons if they’d like a drink. 

“I’m fine Father,” said Michael

“Yeah, dad I’d love some,” said Andrew. His brother Michael turned and gave him a sour look. 

Michael Senior turned and walked with two tumblers of Elija Craig, an inch of the amber liquid in the bottom of each glass, and handed one to Andrew. Andrew took a mouthful and gently swirled the oaky flavor around his mouth, then let it slide down the back of his throat. Michael Senior sipped slowly and returned to his thoughtful daze and walked to the desk. 

“Father, are you alright?” asked Michael.

He looked up quickly and gave a sad smile. “I didn’t expect she’d fall in love again.” He sipped his glass once again. Andrew shot forward to say something, but Michael put his arm across his chest and held him back. 

“It’s been nearly 8 years, Father,” said Michael. walking a few steps closer.

“You know WHY she left, don’t you!” Andrew belted out loudly. Both men looked at him in consternation. 

“Andrew, please! This is not the time,” said Michael.

“Well, big brother, when is the time!” he shouted. “Don’t you know the truth, or do I have to spell it out for you. She’s moved on after what he did!”  

Michael looked down at his hands and went to remove his coat. The room was warm, but the rapid emotions building in his body made him hot. “So you know?” said Michael.

“Well, of course I do. He cheated on Mother and she left him in shame!” 

Michael looked down once again, shame in his eyes. He knew, but he didn’t know Andrew knew the truth. 

“You both have it wrong,” said Michael Senior. “She did.”

Posted Sep 25, 2020
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September 29, 2020 05:17

OH SNAP THAT ENDING!!
Wow, this is a really good story! I read in your bio that you want to publish a book. That's a really cool goal, and I recommend using Reedsy's inbuilt book-writing software! It's a bit iffy at first, but is actually an amazing tool. I hope you can share sneak peeks of the success story every once in a while :)
Thank you for your service in keeping everyone safe <3

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September 29, 2020 05:26

Any time, you bet, thank you, I’ll give it a try, and you’re welcome! Hahahaha! I’m looking forward to sharing with everyone when I finish my first book.

Robert

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September 30, 2020 05:26

Haha, thanks! :D

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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<inactive> .
October 24, 2020 14:28

Ooooooh thanks for letting me know! I’ll check it out right away!

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Jo Axolotl
September 28, 2020 23:12

I really liked the surprise ending, Robert. I loved how you emphasized the picture-perfection of the family only to reveal that it’s falling apart; and not from the expected end.
Watch the order of your adjectives. It’s a tiny detail, but it seems off and distracts from the story.

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September 29, 2020 01:46

Thank you Sam! I’ve considered rewriting some of these stories at a later time after I’ve had a few more years of practice. I hope to see a difference. I’m glad you liked the story and I hope you will follow along with others. If you are interested, check out “Just Say it Already.” I hope you like it too.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 02:00

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Tammy Pieterson
September 28, 2020 19:09

Oh snap! I love the ending:0 You painted such a vivid picture with the imagery and the brothers having such contrasting personalities. Very enjoyable read.

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September 28, 2020 19:11

Thank you! Isn’t writing the best thing we can do?

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:59

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Mihret Adal Gidi
September 28, 2020 18:41

Great story.

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September 28, 2020 19:12

Thank you!

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:56

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Mihret Adal Gidi
February 26, 2021 17:33

Great, will definitely check it out

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September 28, 2020 14:24

This is a great story. Not only are the descriptions beautiful, but they feel relevant to both the characters and the plot. Nicely done!

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September 28, 2020 14:44

Thank you! I enjoy writing, it's something new every time. I can't wait for the next prompt.

Robert

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September 28, 2020 14:56

Me too, I'm so happy I found this site. I'm excited to see your next story!

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 16:53

okay, I'll go read it as soon as I can!

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October 23, 2020 18:39

I've posted a new story of my own from the same set of prompts. If you have the time, I'd be really grateful if you checked out "Rebecca"!

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February 26, 2021 01:52

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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PK Spice
September 28, 2020 13:40

Great descriptive writing.

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September 28, 2020 14:22

Thank you, it was an exercise in using descriptive language to show more and tell less. I found that's not always as easy as it sounds. Thanks for the like and I appreciate the follow.

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:53

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Lee Jay
September 28, 2020 05:33

This is such a suspenseful story that reveals a deep truth: both about Michael senior and about the mother.

Your descriptions are so rich: they lure the reader in.
Keep them coming!

Check out my stories if you like :)

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September 28, 2020 13:30

I definitely will, I’ll be busy reading a lot of stories from now on.

Looking forward to seeing your work!

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:56

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:49

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Karin Venables
September 28, 2020 03:04

I really like this one. Everyone assumes a certain truth, but it takes an upsetting event to bring out the truth. Mom was the cheater, and she was clever enough to hide it for years.
Great on the technical side, so kudos there.
I love the descriptive passages. The three men are distinct, but also alike enough to be family.
Good job!

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September 28, 2020 03:30

Thank you, Karin! I'm glad you liked it. If you liked this story, I think you'll like another one I've submitted called "Just Say it Already." I'm interested to know what you think.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:47

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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P. Jean
September 28, 2020 01:47

I felt the richness in your descriptive passages. I would have been happy to read on for another hour. I also had to reread the first sentence three times before I could finish the story. I thought New Hampshire was landlocked but after a quick look, I see it has ocean frontage. Crazy the things you learn!

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September 28, 2020 01:57

That's awesome! It was one of my shorter stories and I'm happy you liked it. Please check out my story "Just Say It Already" It's a little longer. I really tried to put the reader in the shoes of the main characters. Tell me what you think.

Robert

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P. Jean
September 28, 2020 02:04

Will do!

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Zatoichi Mifune
July 16, 2023 19:31

Great writing. Got to love historical fiction. Very clear and interesting. So, which was it? Was it the 21st century and the father living in the 19th, or was it the 19th and the children (or Andrew at least) were living in the 21st?

One thing. Sorry, it seems unnecessary but: What does the last line, 'She did', mean exactly?

You read the classics? Pretty wide field, which author(s) mainly, which book is your favourite?

Noticed most or all of your replies are copied. (Not sure where I was going with that but that sentence is going to stay there.)

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February 02, 2024 01:19

It is a 21st century story with a father stuck in the past.
The boys suspected the father of being unfaithful to their mother. What the father told them in the end was that their mother was the unfaithful one. The father didn't cheat "She did."

I've read through almost all the classics. Like anyone else I liked some and not others. Alexander Dumas, Daniel Defoe, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, Daphne DU Maurier, F. Scott Fitzgerald, James Joyce, John Steinbeck, Ernest Hemingway, Oscar Wilde, Edgar Allen Poe, Robert Luis Stevenson, these are the authors I can think of right now. I hope you find some you like.

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February 06, 2024 10:04

Thanks for the reply!

I think I was quite stupid then... I should've got the 'She did.' 😅

Ooh, I like your list of authors. The only two I haven't read are James Joyce and Daniel Defoe - should I check them out? :)

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February 06, 2024 10:05

Oh gosh, sorry, I forgot about the profile change. 😅 Just take it from me that Zatoichi is me, my old account :)

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June 21, 2024 21:17

Hey Khadija, I'm bad at responding on this site. I haven't visited here in awhile. I'm glad you liked the story and I have others if you are interested. I had several posts on this site but I pulled them down for rewrites. What kind of stories are you interested in reading? Catch ya later!
Robert

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Bonnie Clarkson
April 02, 2021 14:38

Once again well, written. Differences of the sons are very clear.
But when the butler answered the door, I thought it was the father. They had just been talking about their father and I didn't catch the hint the man was a butler by the word "gentlemen".
I know this is minor, but it needs some periods.

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Cole Lane
March 31, 2021 04:35

Whoa, wait a minute, who was at fault here??

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April 01, 2021 02:06

The wife cheated.

Robert

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Cole Lane
April 01, 2021 03:26

There is always two sides, right? This story needs a continuation!

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April 01, 2021 05:56

Perhaps but it served its purpose for this story. My reply’s get locked up too and I’ve had to delete as many as 8 repeats.

It is what it is.

Robert

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Cole Lane
April 01, 2021 03:27

There is always two sides, right? This story needs a continuation!

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Cole Lane
April 01, 2021 03:27

There is always two sides, right? This story needs a continuation.

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B. W.
November 07, 2020 10:39

Hm, i dont think youve checked out some of my recent stories but I could be wrong, if ya haven't could ya check out "Saving a friend" and then leave some feedback for it?

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Keerththan 😀
October 09, 2020 15:25

I love your descriptions. That was really wonderful. I love this story!
Keep writing!

Would you mind reading my new story? Thanks!

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Amy DeMatt
October 09, 2020 14:44

This ended with a bang. I really enjoyed it—so much so that I wished I knew a little more of the backstory. I wonder how a flashback or reminiscence would work here. . . Anyway, we’ll done! :)

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October 09, 2020 15:49

So, I feel, writing is full of infinite possibilities. There is a back story and a future to discover. This is a possible future rewrite.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Writers Block
October 09, 2020 00:24

Great imagery! The dad sounds like he has been around in the world :)

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October 09, 2020 15:37

Thank you, the more I read the story I see I could have spread a few things out in the beginning. I like the story thought and I appreciate you taking the time to read my stuff.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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James Offenha
October 07, 2020 21:57

Good job!! I wish the description was more relevant to the story. Why does it matter that they’re wearing these specific clothes? The purpose of detail is to move the plot. Also, I wish I’d felt the tension of knowing the secret before they entered the house. This would create more suspense. What will Dad say? Also, in today’s age adultery and remarriage are common. If it’s a big deal, make the father react strongly. Good job.

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October 07, 2020 22:05

I know there are improvements to be had but it was an attempt to improve on character development. I think I did a better job on my other story “Just Say it Already.” Check this out and see what you think. Thanks!

Robert

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October 06, 2020 02:51

Thank you, this was a fun story to write.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:53

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Brandon Rich
October 05, 2020 18:30

My favorite part of this contest is the way in which we can use them to practice a new technique or tool of story writing. For me, this week was about plot pacing. I see in a previous comment that your focus for this story was around character descriptions. I've got to say Robert, you did a really great job. After I read the description of the brothers I found myself saying, "Suit up!" in a Barney Stinson voice.

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October 05, 2020 20:22

Thank you! I used a picture of two guys who could have been brothers and used them to describe my characters. Then I found an older mans photo and used it for the father. I think it came out well.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Princemark Okibe
October 04, 2020 14:45

You got description powers man. You sure can describe, I am a baby in description when it comes to you. The description overpowered the narration but what ais shocking is that it did not overpower the dialogue. How you managed to do that is beyond me. This is because this level of description is rare in short stories and more in use in lengthy novels where the author has a lot of word count to use.

Your work is also well edited as I can see you took your time ironing it out.

Being a newbie writer who only started writing this year, I cannot say if your lenghty description is necessary to the essence of the story or not but I know that that lengthy description part where the father appraised his two sons and what they wore is necessary to the story as it reveals something about his character.

My only complaint is that I didn't see so much relevance to the prompt you are writing for.

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Charles Stucker
September 30, 2020 07:16

is copacetic spelled differently in England?

"features. Both had medium skin tone, perfect white teeth, and chiseled features." Change one of the features to a different word.

"a tattoo streaked up from his shoulder onto his neck." try, "from under his collar along his neck." The irked father cannot see the shoulder.

"Baron of Austria" - Austria had barons in their borders, but I cannot find any indication the kingdom of Austria was a baronial title. If it did, they would all be gone as the last Hapsburg heir died in 94.

Is this a part 1? It feels incomplete and you only used about half the word count. Who is the main character? You start with the sons, but the father is the one who lives in the past. He also seems the main character to the conflict- his estranged wife is remarrying. I see your goals was to explore giving character descriptions. You achieve this, but it's a bit stiff in places. If you practice going back and rewriting sentences with one or two variations, you get in the habit of questioning your first word choices. This makes it easier to go back and quickly edit. You can practice on your own older works, or look at other author's writing.

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September 30, 2020 14:59

This is an earlier writing of mine and I understand it could use some polishing. It's a story of fiction. Any information here is only my imagination. I plan on rewriting some of these stories someday. Thanks for your feedback.

Robert

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October 23, 2020 15:57

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Hriday Saboo
September 28, 2020 10:25

A very good story line. Beautifully written. Liked it

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February 26, 2021 01:50

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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September 28, 2020 13:27

Thank you! I like these prompts.

Robert

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Hriday Saboo
September 28, 2020 16:15

👍

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October 23, 2020 15:58

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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Hriday Saboo
October 24, 2020 05:47

No problem. I will surely read your story Robert.

Hriday

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 01:36

I really loved this story and i think that ya did a really great job with this ^^ so ya know what i'm gonna do? this gets a 10/10 :)

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September 28, 2020 01:52

Many thanks! Check out my story "Just Say It Already" I'd like to know what your thoughts are on this one. I really appreciate your comments!

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 01:59

No problem and sure i will

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October 23, 2020 15:58

Hello, thank you for reading this story. I'm excited to say I've posted one for this week and I'm looking for some feedback.

Your opinion really matters to me and I appreciate you taking the time.

Robert

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B. W.
October 23, 2020 15:59

alright ^^

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October 23, 2020 16:28

Thanks again!

Robert

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February 26, 2021 01:40

Hello, I can’t thank you enough for following me and commenting on my stories. I’ve started a website. If you’re interested in keeping in contact, please visit me at robertgrandstaffhomepage.com

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Ari Berri
November 11, 2020 18:26

Awesome story! Also, happy veterns day!

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November 11, 2020 18:56

Thank you and thank you!

Robert

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Ari Berri
November 11, 2020 19:02

No problem!

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November 03, 2020 20:30

I take it you liked the story?

Robert

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