The Secret Organisation { part 4 }

Adventure Thriller Mystery

Written in response to: "Write a story where the power goes out on a spaceship or submarine." as part of Lights Out.

As the days past by, the mission came up.


The mission is that Kane Richard was going to Atlantis with his companion Hannibal Lectre, but Hannibal was the best agent of Spectre.


They were going to Atlantis after a week.


Mr. Bond went to Amogh's cabin.


"There is a serious mission."


"What's the mission?"


"The mission is that Kane Richard the son of Luke Richard is going on an adventure to Atlantis."


"So what's the harm?"


"The harm is that Luke Richard organized an audition to select a companion, who will go with Kane. The companion which was selected is Hannibal Lectre, the best agent of Spectre. He is going there to take all the treasure of Atlantis."


"What is Spectre?"


"Spectre is an evil organization formed by Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No."


"Oh, I see. So, let's start planning."


"Let's go to the research room."


The went to the research room.


"By the way Mr. Bond, how many days are left for the mission?"


"We have just a week for the mission."


" If I am not wrong, Atlantis should be in the Atlantic Ocean?"


"Yes, but we will follow what the Greek Philosopher Plato has mentioned, that Atlantis is located in the Strait of Gibraltar”


"We would need a submarine for following the submarine of Kane."


"Yes, I have told the designer to make a submarine which could be driven, it could fly and it could go inside the ocean."


"Can you add one more thing in the submarine?"


"What?"


"Can you add some weapons in it?"


"Yes, I will."


The days past by.


Two days were left for the mission.


They started collecting the instruments, which were required.


The submarine's design was ready. The mechanic started developing the submarine.


It was the day for the mission.


They went inside the submarine and touched the flying button. The wheels went inside and the wings came outside.


Their journey started.


"Mr. Bond, how we will follow the submarine of Kane?"


"Don't worry yesterday night I went to their house and stuck a tracking device on their submarine. So, where they will go I will get their location."


"That's good."


They tracked Kane's submarine.


They got a notification that Kane has gone underwater.


They also went underwater.


When they went into the water, there was a huge splash!


Some ice-bergs came in front of them. They used the torpedo to blat them.


Suddenly, a huge ice-berg came in front of them. They couldn't launch the torpedo. It hit the submarine and the power of the submarine was cut off.


They were worried, how would they complete the mission.


Mr. Bond went to check the batteries.


There he saw that the batteries were working but because of the hit, the wires had got some issues. They needed a huge amount of current to start the submarine again.


He went into the pilot cabin.


"Amogh we need a huge amount of current to restart the submarine."


They started thinking about how could they get the current.


At that time a huge electric eel was passing their submarine.


Mr. Bond saw it and got an idea.


"Amogh bring the extra wires and connect with the batteries then attach to a poll. The pole should be electric proof."


Amogh did the preparation.


"But why did you want all these instruments?"


"I need it to start the submarine."


"How?"


"Can you see the electric eel?"


"Yes, what will you do with it?"


"I will go outside and stand on the submarine. Then when the eel would be passing again that time I will point the pole towards the. So, when the eel will touch it the current will flow inside the wires and reach the batteries. Then the submarine will start."


"What if you are injured?"


"If I get injured, you go according to our plan."


"Ok."


Mr. Bond went outside.


The electric was coming towards them but Mr. Bond could not connect the pole with the eel.


He was thinking how would the eel come towards me.


He got an idea. He threw an ice-berg towards the eel. The eel was furious and came towards Mr. Bond.


When the eel came toward the pole, Mr. Bond connected the pole with the eel. The current came and the submarine started but unfortunately Mr. Bond also got current and he died.


Amogh remembered what Mr. Bond told him, that if I get injured please go according to the plan.


He saw the tracking device and followed the other submarine. 


He saw that they reached Atlantis. They were collecting the treasure.


Amogh wears his scuba gear and goes outside. He went inside the submarine of Kane and hide a place where no one cant's find him.


He stayed there till Hannibal doesn't show his real face.


Hannibal was going to trick Kane and go to his headquarters, that time Amogh jumped out from his place and shot him on his head.


"Who are you?"


"I will tell you, first take me to your home."


They reached Kane's home.


Luke had many questions in his mind.


He started asking one by one.


"Who are you?"

"Where is Hannibal?"


"Hannibal is dead."

"I am an agent of MI6."


"Who killed Hannibal?"


"I killed Hannibal because he was an agent of Spectre."


"What is Spectre?"


"Spectre is an evil organization formed by Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No."


"Who are they?"


"They are the evil people who destroy everything."


"Thanks for saving my child."


"Don't say thanks, it's my work."


"What's your name?"


"My name is Amogh."


Amogh went to the headquarters of MI6.


There he told the full incident. He also told how Mr. Bond died.


The days past by. Amogh had killed Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No. 


Then all the evil people had died and MI6 was closed.




















Posted Sep 07, 2020
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Nandan Prasad
September 07, 2020 13:36

This is a great ending to an enjoyable series. But one thing I noticed, you've written 'The days past by' for 'The days passed by.' You might want to change that, but otherwise, great story and keep writing!

Also, I read some of your previous requests for upvotes, so I have done that for a couple of your stories. I would appreciate it if you could do the same. Thanks!

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Amogh Kasat
September 07, 2020 15:52

ty
thanks

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September 07, 2020 12:27

Ooh, nice 4th part! Good jo!

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Amogh Kasat
September 07, 2020 15:50

thanks

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Doubra Akika
September 07, 2020 11:15

A very wonderful way to end the quartet! I think you could do a bit more with showing and not telling but, you still have a while to edit.
Just a few suggestions...
The went to the research room. I think this line is a bit unneccesary, but maybe it's just my opinion. If you choose to leave it, you should change the to they.
So, where they will go I will get their location."
This should be so, wherever they go, I will get their location."
Overall the idea you had with the prompt was great!
Keep writing! Hope you're staying safe!

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Amogh Kasat
September 07, 2020 15:49

Thanks and I will work on it

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Doubra Akika
September 07, 2020 16:01

My pleasure!

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B. W.
October 22, 2020 22:50

i'll give this a 10/10 :)

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October 08, 2020 13:18

Awesome story! Does this sound right, "Mr. Dr. No."? I think it's just "Dr. No" no "Mr" in it. But anyway, it great!

PS. Would you care to read my new story? Thanks!

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Amogh Kasat
October 09, 2020 02:10

Thanks and sure

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 22:42

Okay, this was a good story and i think that you did a great job with it. i'm not really that good at giving advice but mine should be that you should continue to make more stories. though really only when you aren't busy or if you can think of ideas for a story. So do ya want to know what i'm gonna go ahead and give this story? a 10/10 :)

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Amogh Kasat
September 29, 2020 15:19

Thanks

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B. W.
September 29, 2020 15:21

No problem ^^ if it's alright could ya maybe help me with something?

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Keerththan 😀
September 24, 2020 02:57

Hey Amogh,
I have written a new story. Please read it if you can buy some time.

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Amogh Kasat
September 24, 2020 14:32

Yes I will but after sometine

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Keerththan 😀
September 24, 2020 14:40

Okay!

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Jesna Anna S.
September 07, 2020 10:52

Nice story! Keep writing!

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Amogh Kasat
September 07, 2020 15:49

thanks

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Hriday Saboo
October 08, 2020 10:51

Pls read my new story

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Amogh Kasat
October 09, 2020 02:10

ok

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Hriday Saboo
September 27, 2020 07:21

Hey Amogh
I think you should remove that question from ur bio abt reading ur stories. Its not appropriate to ask such a question to anyone. And if u still want to keep it,its upto u
And it’s stories not srories

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