A strange lover (part 3)

Fantasy LGBTQ+ Romance

Written in response to: "Write a romance where your character falls in love with the last person they expected to." as part of Shocking Developments.

I've really only been at the school for about a week or so, but it feels like I've been here for almost a year. Sometimes it feels like everything is going incredibly fast or just extremely slow.


The classes haven't started yet either, at least for me. I've seen Moon and Blue be at their own classes off and on during the day or night. I guess the headmaster and the other teachers are still sorting things out.


It was around midnight while I was waiting for Blue and Moon to come and visit, either of them would be fine. Actually no, I think Moon would be better, she's great.


Where was I? Oh, it was around midnight when I started to hear a small buzzing noise coming from one of my pockets. It was probably Amber.


I pulled out my phone and the text read, "Hey kiddo, you haven't been talking to me for the past few days...are you alright? Should I be worried, do you want me to come and get you or something??"


Hah, looks like I was correct. The phone keeps lightly buzzing as more texts keep popping up like, "Ember answer me, is something wrong?" and, "Did I maybe do something? You can talk to me about it..."


It almost feels like an eternity as the phone keeps buzzing with more text messages, why is she even doing any of this? I know how she actually feels.


This continued to happen for much longer until it finally hits me. I open up the phone again and stare at Amber's contact, then my finger pressed down hard on the delete button.


Her name and everything else she made me put on the contact disappears within a blink of an eye, a small smile spreads across my face. "Finally...at least I don't have to worry about this part..."


Now some of you may be wondering, "Ember why did you do that? She's your mother, why do you seem to hate her so much?" That's a long story, my friends, you'll all eventually learn it...


There was suddenly a knock on the dorm door and Moon's sweet voice said, "Ember we're back, do ya wanna come with us?" Wait, sweet voice?? Ember what are you even saying?


Well, I could assume from her saying "We're" and "us" that Blue with her, this should be a bit interesting. I'm not really sure if he likes me that much, I swear it sometimes looks like he's going to bite me or something.


Speaking of Blue, I hear his muffled voice say from the other side of the dorm door, "The other monsters are already starting to come out, so you may want to hurry up so they don't find out."


I carefully walk out of my dorm where Moon is sitting on Blue's head, though luckily she's a bat again and not her human form. I'm not sure Blue would be able to support that if she wasn't a bat, they'd both probably tumble over.


"Why don't we all go up to the roof again and just have some fun or something?" Bat Moon suggested.


We had all silently agreed to do so when I then asked, "What would really happen if any of them found out I was a human?"


Bat Moon shrugged slightly with her wings and then said "They'd probably just kick you out?"


"I guess that's not really bad so maybe-" I wasn't able to finish my sentence, Blue seemed to fall over and start laughing. What was so funny to this dude?


"Moon, you seriously don't know? They told us what would happen if a human did eventually get in here, they'd kill them!"


"What...??"


"Yeah, so you better stick with us if you don't wanna die or something."


Bat Moon nudged him with her wing, it actually kind of looked cute since she was a Bat. She flew over to me and managed to give me a hug as she spoke, "Don't worry Ember, we'll protect you!"


Aw, she really seems so sweet and cute for wanting to protect me, don't you all think? "Thank you..." Wait, sweet and cute? Again, what the heck am I doing?? Dang it...


Blue then awkwardly coughed a bit loud to get our attention, "Ember, what's that?"


"What's what...?"


He walked over to the two of us as he gently shoved Bat Moon away and pointed to my face. "What is going on with your face?" He raised an eyebrow with a small smile.


I wasn't entirely sure what he was talking about, though he pointed towards a mirror that was nearby. "Go look in it..." he nudged me forward towards it a bit.


He seemed to be grinning a lot for some reason while I walked over to the mirror and looked at it. I...was blushing?? "Now come on, let's go on the roof finally."


The two of them started to go up to the roof and I called out, "I'll...I'll be out there with you soon!" I've been having a strange feeling towards Moon for a little while...could it be what I think?


I didn't want to stay down there that much longer, so I quickly sprinted up the stairs and up onto the roof where the other two were. "The moon looks pretty tonight..." Bat Moon mumbled.


"Ember could you please come over here real quick?" I hear Blue say from the other side of the roof. It almost looked like he was one with the shadows, I could barely see his eyes.


"What is it, Blue?"


His little grin seemed to appear again as he pointed towards Bat Moon who was still staring up at the sky, I don't think she noticed us over here. "Do ya mind telling me what's been going on? You've been acting a bit weird with her."


I look towards her and can faintly hear her humming a song as she looked at the sky, it sounded great. I turn back to Blue and say with a small sigh, "I...I think I love her..."

Posted Dec 11, 2020
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Hello B! I loved this story a lot! Don't say that your stories are bad, because they are AMAZING! I think this is such a nice part 3! :)

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 22:04

thank you, im glad that ya liked it ^^ did ya have a favorite part or anything like that?

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 05:19

I'm gonna ask you again, could you maybe delete all of this and anything you did to the others? I'm not sure if its just with me or not.

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Sera Phina
December 16, 2020 20:23

i didnt spam chill

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 20:29

Well im just making sure, okay? A lot of spamming has been going on recently and all that.

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Sera Phina
December 16, 2020 22:14

wowww

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 22:35

what

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Riddhi Shedge
December 12, 2020 04:29

Hey! So, what's up with this Riley thing? She's spamming a lot of stories including mine?

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:31

I have no idea, but shes annoying and stuff. I have no idea what to do man.

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Jubilee Forbess
December 11, 2020 22:08

Nice continuation to your series.

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 22:33

thanks ^^ did ya have a favorite part?

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Jubilee Forbess
December 11, 2020 22:47

I like the last line, it was cute.

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 23:15

do you plan to make a new story?

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Jubilee Forbess
December 12, 2020 00:53

I do, yes, for the romance prompt.

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 02:03

tell me whenever its out ^^

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B. W.
December 23, 2020 22:55

Zilla doesn't hate me. We've been friends and stuff for a while. I have a lot of questions, though I apparently only have one left, are you going to leave this place and never come back? or at least stop doing this stupid stuff.

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 13:47

Hi, B! Your stories are GREAT!!! Want to do an upvote spree? :)

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:47

Maybe, and thanks ^^

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 19:39

why did you say this so many times.

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 19:54

.~. .-. :) (:

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 20:46

what.

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 20:54

i think so but i m not sure

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 21:25

"I think so but im not sure" of what?

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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✨Abby ✨
December 13, 2020 05:30

Hey, could you please stop spamming these? It's kinda really annoying.

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 05:52

hi please look up the definition of spamming ty

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✨Abby ✨
December 13, 2020 05:54

I know what it means hun. Thanks tho!

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 19:20

cool

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 17:48

Can you please tell me why you sent so many of these though? you keep changing the subject as well each time I ask about something, can you at least delete some of them?

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 19:21

she said so but u shud confirm just in case

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✨Abby ✨
December 13, 2020 19:25

Who said what?

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 19:39

what?

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 05:31

So far its only with me, but I think it'll go onto the others or something

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Orenda .
December 12, 2020 16:02

-- "That's a long story, my friends, you'll all eventually learn it..."
-> omit all. It sorta sounds better without 'all'.

-- "I'm not Blue would be able to support that if she wasn't a bat, they'd both probably tumble over."
-> I believe you missed 'saying' after 'not'.

This was lovely. I like how Ember keeps interacting with herself about Moon. It's funny. And I love Blue's character. I feel sad for third wheelers, but they always bring a fun element to the story. The last line has to be my favourite. Grreat job, pal! :)

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 18:09

Actually no, i'm going to fix that stuff but it wasn't "saying" i need to put there, its "sure" because it would be "Im not sure blue would be able to support that if she wasn't a bat, they'd both tumble over." that sounds better to me. Though thanks, I'm glad that ya liked the story ^^ whats something you'd wanna see in the next part?

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Orenda .
December 12, 2020 18:12

oh, that makes sense. That didn't cross my mind otherwise it's the exact word. No problem :)
I have no idea. Perhaps a confession or something? Or if you wish to be a sadist, make Moon uninterested in her lol and Ember's all teary.

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 18:15

would Blue have to comfort her or something then?

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Orenda .
December 12, 2020 18:15

yeah, cool.

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 18:16

wait, do you remember that thing i had you doing for a little while with some of my characters? like id have you do a scene of something I said, then you'd do it and put it in a thread?

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Niveeidha Palani
December 12, 2020 06:26

Hi B. Long time no chat. :)

This was a lovely sequel, nicely penned together. I loved the end, so sweet and adorable. A part four coming up?

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 06:41

Oh, heya there ^^ and thanks, im glad that ya liked the story, did ya maybe have a favorite part or anything like that? besides maybe the ending, and a part four will eventually be made.

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Niveeidha Palani
December 12, 2020 07:05

Yeap! My favourite part was the end, :)

Meanwhile, could you look at my latest story? I'd appreciate it, as I finally got a story out. :)

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 08:20

I'll check it out soon, i promise ^^ did ya have a favorite character?

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Niveeidha Palani
December 12, 2020 11:54

Hmm? Maybe Blue. :)

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 17:55

so, would you still like to talk?

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Sia S
December 12, 2020 04:57

;)

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:59

?

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Sia S
December 12, 2020 04:09

Loved it! Could be your best one yet! I just loved the part where Ember kept asking herself. :)

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:11

aw thanks :)

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Sia S
December 12, 2020 04:12

:D

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:12

anything else?

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Sia S
December 12, 2020 04:15

Maybe a title change? No offence, but maybe something more related to the story... like?

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:16

I could change it to "A strange Crush" ?

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December 11, 2020 22:53

OOH! Romance! Well, not yet, just big crushes until they acknowledge each other. Great word choices, when Ember is like "Moon? Sweet? Again? Why am I thinking like this?" I really like this new part! Just maybe, if you can edit titles, you should mention what it's a continuation of, since you have several part 3's already. :)

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 23:16

Thanks, im glad ya liked it ^^ did ya have a favorite part or anything like that?

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December 11, 2020 23:21

The ending. "I think I love her".

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 23:29

would ya wanna see another part?

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December 11, 2020 23:32

For sure!

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 00:19

so what did ya think of the new prompts? do ya like em?

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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Orenda .
December 13, 2020 07:40

Excuse me, you leave me no option but be curt with you. We already have a lot going on over here, so we don't need your contribution to it. It's not funny. Stop or you're getting kicked out. Go and do the house chores instead if you're so unemployed.

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 19:21

thank you so much! lots of love from here <3

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Orenda .
December 13, 2020 19:28

Having trouble coming up with better comebacks? Just go away, dearest.

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 23:27

oh im not doing "comebacks" or whatever but if u wanna do it then go ahead!

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B. W.
December 14, 2020 00:58

Oh wow- you actually said something related to what she said.

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 20:14

why are you doing this?

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 23:28

i think so

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B. W.
December 14, 2020 00:57

Stop doing this. Its annoying.

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Sera Phina
December 14, 2020 07:10

cool

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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Sera Phina
December 12, 2020 18:25

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 20:15

No. Stop now.

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Orenda .
December 13, 2020 20:33

Hey B, don't bother. Don't. They're not going to listen, so don't put your time into calling them out anymore. I called out twice, nothing happened. Just let them be, okay? Also, don't demoralize yourself with this. I don't know, but I've been upset so much even though none of this's personally happened to me. You and I have been on Reedsy for quite a while now, nothing happened then. It was peaceful and fun, but it's surprising to see how foul a vibe these idiots give off. Just don't dispirit yourself.

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 20:36

Reedsy was at first mostly calm and all that I guess, though then a lot of stupid crap started happening with the downvoters, these spammers, and then some of the other stuff :/ its angering me a lot.

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Orenda .
December 13, 2020 20:38

It angers me a lot too, but what can you even do? I feel like cussing lol but I won't. But most importantly, never think about leaving, okay? You're prolific and we, your friends, know what and how you are, so don't let others change it otherwise for you.

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B. W.
December 13, 2020 20:40

I don't even know what Prolific means though :/ I sometimes feel like cussing, not because of this, but just in general on here and stuff. But little kids that are on here (maybe like 10 or something years old) will see it and go "OoOO tHaTS bAd" or something.

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Sera Phina
December 13, 2020 23:28

ur choice

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December 12, 2020 04:05

Oo I loved this story! (I'm all for LGBTQ+ stories 🏳️‍🌈) I forgot if I've read the other parts, I'll have to check! This story was amazing, you've improved with your romance writing!! 😁

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:07

thanks ^^ did ya maybe have a favorite part or anything like that?

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December 12, 2020 04:07

Definitely when she finally realised she liked Moon

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 04:08

I'm glad ya liked it

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Laiba M
December 12, 2020 00:40

Good job, I liked the story a lot~!

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 00:51

thanks :) did ya have a favorite part or anything like that?

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Laiba M
December 12, 2020 01:19

Hmm, I liked the end a lot, with the confession~

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 02:08

would ya wanna see another part?

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Laiba M
December 12, 2020 02:37

Of course!

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 02:41

what would you want to happen in it?

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 21:44

This is probably a bit bad, so sorry if it is :/ I completely support LGBTQ and everything like that though, so again if you don't like this then don't even read it or put hate comments.

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. .
December 11, 2020 22:14

Hey B.!! Loved it!! You said Amber to start with and switched to Ember, tho, so maybe fix that!!

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 22:34

when it mentions Amber, thats the mother of Ember. She was talking about Amber/her mother because she (Amber) was texting her and stuff, so it wasn't a mistake or anything.

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. .
December 11, 2020 22:47

Ohhhhhhhhh, so sorry. Great job!!

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B. W.
December 11, 2020 23:15

thanks ^^ did ya have a favorite part or anything? and its fine

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. .
December 12, 2020 14:04

I loved the beginning because you did that really well.

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B. W.
December 12, 2020 18:07

i did?

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