Lucy B

Lucy B – Editor

Romance, Fantasy & commercial fiction editor with 6 years experience at a Big Five publisher, working with NY & Sunday Times bestsellers.

Overview

Hi! I’m Lucy, an experienced and passionate commercial fiction editor. With six years experience in the publishing industry, most recently as Commissioning Editor at Pan Macmillan, I specialise in romance, fantasy and all kinds of contemporary commercial fiction.

Throughout my career I’ve worked with authors who range from established New York & Sunday Times bestsellers to successful breakout debuts, so I have a sharp sense of what both raeders and publishers want, and how to ensure your manuscript stands out to them.

I offer editorial assessment, developmental editing and copy editing, as well as assistance with query packages and book proposals. My editorial approach is encouraging and creative - I’m here to help elevate your words with focused, insightful editorial guidance, and I’ll be sure to tell you everything you’re doing right, as well as everything that needs work!

I’m happy to work with writers at any stage of their publishing journey - whether you're polishing your manuscript for submission, reshaping a work-in-progress, or simply figuring out the heart of your story.

If you have any questions, please just get in touch - I can't wait to work with you!

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Contemporary Romance Fantasy Paranormal Romance Romantic Comedy
Languages
English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Pan Macmillan

Aug, 2024 — Present
Acquiring and publishing widely for the Pan Fiction imprint, commissioning romance, fantasy and commercial fiction titles, and working closely with my authors to take their manuscripts from submission stage through to publication.

Pan Macmillan

Feb, 2023 — Aug, 2024 (over 1 year)
Acquiring new titles and building my own commercial fiction list, while also working on some of Pan Fictions' biggest and best-loved brand authors.

Orion Publishing Group

Jul, 2022 — Feb, 2023 (7 months)
Supporting the busy Orion Fiction editorial team and managing their titles throughout the production process, while also commissioning and taking the lead on a select number of titles of my own for the crime and thriller list.

Orion Publishing Group

May, 2021 — Jul, 2022 (about 1 year)

Orion Publishing Group

Apr, 2019 — May, 2021 (about 2 years)

Portfolio

Rewitched

Wood, Lucy Jane

Ace

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Uncharmed

Wood, Lucy Jane

Ace

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Dishonestly Yours (Webs We Weave)

Ritchie, Krista

Berkley

Editorial Assessment
Destructively Mine (Webs We Weave)

Ritchie, Krista

Berkley

Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Copy Editing
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
My Big Fat Fake Marriage

Stein, Charlotte

St. Martin's Griffin

Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
When Grumpy Met Sunshine

Stein, Charlotte

Griffin

Editorial Assessment
No Greater Love

Margaret Dickinson

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Broken Light: A Novel

Harris, Joanne

Pegasus Crime

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Napoleon's Spy

Kane, Ben

Orion

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching

Lucy has 6 reviews

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Kelly L.

Kelly L.

Jun, 2026

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Lucy was an absolute delight to work with for a developmental edit of my novel! She was a true professional in every aspect of the project - from communication, edits, to quality of work delivered. I was nervous about my first time working with an editor but it could not have been easier. Lucy cl...
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Lucy B.
Thank you so much, Kelly - I loved working together too, and can't wait for next steps on the novel! x
Domitilla C.

Domitilla C.

Apr, 2026

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I had a fantastic experience working with Lucy. Her developmental feedback was very detailed, thoughtful, and constructive. She has a real talent for identifying both what’s working in a story and where it can be strengthened, and she communicates her insights in a clear and encouraging way. She...
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Lucy B.
Thank you so much for these kind words, Domi - I loved working with you too! Best of luck with your next steps for the novel x
Khris A.

Khris A.

Feb, 2026

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Working with Lucy was truly wonderful. One of my biggest goals was to make the prose feel smooth, natural, and emotionally strong, especially since English isn’t my first language. She elevated the manuscript beyond what I had hoped for. Her explanations were always clear and spot-on, and her ind...
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Lucy B.
Thank you so much for these lovely words - I had a fantastic time working on your MS, and I already can't wait for Book 3! x
Amanda L.

Amanda L.

Jun, 2026

I absolutely enjoyed my time working with Lucy! She explained the entire coaching process to me on our first call and broke a whole novel down for me into bite-sized chunks. She asked great reflective questions during each coaching session that led me to making the appropriate edits to my first d...
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Lucy B.
Thank you for such a kind and thoughtful review, Amanda - it's been a pleasure! Wishing you all the best with the next round of revisions x
Jaye C.

Jaye C.

Nov, 2025

I absolutely loved working with Lucy on my novel. She was polite, professional, and extremely approachable. Her insight was so valuable that I honestly couldn't imagine having come this far without her. From day one, she was a consistent cheerleader for the project, which made the whole process f...
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Lucy B.
Jaye, thank you so much for this kind review - I loved working with you too! Wishing you lots of luck and success with your next steps in the process :)

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