Lucy B

Lucy B – Editor

Romance & commercial fiction editor with six years experience at a Big Five publisher, working with New York & Sunday Times bestsellers.

Overview

Hi! I’m Lucy, an experienced and passionate commercial fiction editor. With six years experience in the publishing industry, most recently as Commissioning Editor at Pan Macmillan, I specialise in romance, women's fiction and all kinds of contemporary commercial fiction.

Throughout my career I’ve worked with authors who range from established New York & Sunday Times bestsellers to successful breakout debuts, so I have a sharp sense of what publishers want and how to ensure your manuscript stands out to them.

I offer editorial assessment, developmental and line editing, as well as assistance with query packages and book proposals. My editorial approach is encouraging and creative - I’m here to help elevate your words with focused, insightful editorial guidance, and I’ll be sure to tell you everything you’re doing right, as well as everything that needs work!

I’m happy to work with writers at any stage of their publishing journey - whether you're polishing your manuscript for submission, reshaping a work-in-progress, or simply figuring out the heart of your story. If you have any questions, please just get in touch - I can't wait to work with you!

Services
Fiction
Contemporary Fiction Contemporary Romance Fantasy Paranormal Romance Romantic Comedy
Languages
English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Pan Macmillan

Aug, 2024 — Present
Acquiring and publishing widely for the Pan Fiction imprint, commissioning romance, fantasy and commercial fiction titles, and working closely with my authors to take their manuscripts from submission stage through to publication.

Pan Macmillan

Feb, 2023 — Aug, 2024 (over 1 year)
Acquiring new titles and building my own commercial fiction list, while also working on some of Pan Fictions' biggest and best-loved brand authors.

Orion Publishing Group

Jul, 2022 — Feb, 2023 (7 months)
Supporting the busy Orion Fiction editorial team and managing their titles throughout the production process, while also commissioning and taking the lead on a select number of titles of my own for the crime and thriller list.

Orion Publishing Group

May, 2021 — Jul, 2022 (about 1 year)

Orion Publishing Group

Apr, 2019 — May, 2021 (about 2 years)

Portfolio

Rewitched

Wood, Lucy Jane

Ace

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Uncharmed

Wood, Lucy Jane

Ace

Developmental Editing Copy Editing Editorial Assessment Query Letter Review Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Destructively Mine (Webs We Weave)

Ritchie, Krista

Berkley

Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Dishonestly Yours (Webs We Weave)

Ritchie, Krista

Berkley

Editorial Assessment
My Big Fat Fake Marriage

Stein, Charlotte

St. Martin's Griffin

Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
When Grumpy Met Sunshine

Stein, Charlotte

Griffin

Editorial Assessment
No Greater Love

Margaret Dickinson

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Broken Light: A Novel

Harris, Joanne

Pegasus Crime

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching
Napoleon's Spy

Kane, Ben

Orion

Developmental Editing Editorial Assessment Book Coaching

Lucy has 2 reviews

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Jaye C.

Jaye C.

Nov, 2025

I absolutely loved working with Lucy on my novel. She was polite, professional, and extremely approachable. Her insight was so valuable that I honestly couldn't imagine having come this far without her. From day one, she was a consistent cheerleader for the project, which made the whole process f...
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Lucy B.
Jaye, thank you so much for this kind review - I loved working with you too! Wishing you lots of luck and success with your next steps in the process :)
Madeleine H.

Madeleine H.

Oct, 2025

For self-published authors, particularly in the romance space, I cannot recommend Lucy enough! Lucy assisted me with developmental edits (two rounds) for a contemporary romance novel at an extremely reasonable rate AND with thoughtful yet constructive/useful criticism. Her notable background in t...
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Lucy B.
Thank you so much for the kind words, Madeleine - it was a joy working with you! Best of luck with the upcoming publication, and I can't wait to see your novel out in the world :)

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