Overview
Most authors who come to me have been circling their real argument for years.
They know something is there. They can't quite name it yet.
I find it. Then I show them exactly how to build around it.
My name is Whitney and I'm an expert developmental editor, narrative consultant and story coach. Authors trust me with the messy version of their thinking, and I take that seriously. Cultivating that trust is the part of this work I love most.
Professional ghostwriters consult me and I'm frequently hired by authors *after* other developmental editors have already worked on their manuscripts. Authors I've worked with have been distributed by Penguin Random House, Simon & Schuster, Macmillan, and Wiley.
Berrett-Koehler Publishers keeps me on their roster for special projects that need a keener eye:
- "[Whitney] has the capability to dig well beyond the basics (which not many editors and writers can do) to go deep into nuances […] and though they can not always be seen, they are certainly felt.
She engages deeply and comprehensively, taking apart everything and sharpening and polishing the parts before putting them back together[....] and that is a skill few have.” - Jeevan Sivasubramaniam, VP of Editorial at Berrett-Koehler Publishers
I primarily work with subject matter experts: scientists, professionals, academics, and thinkers who have something genuinely new to say.
I read a manuscript asking three questions: what is this author really trying to say, why should anyone care, and is the argument being made effectively. Then I give clear, actionable recommendations with explanations, so the author understands their own work better coming out than going in.
I'm trained with an MBA and think like an acquisition editor. I know what gets picked up and why. When I recognize talent, I root for it, and when I see a resonant idea, I build toward it.
Authors who work with me tend to stay in touch.
If you have real thinking and need someone to help you see it clearly, please reach out.
SERVICES
🌉 Concept Structure Testing
📜Full Developmental Edits
CLIENT PROFILE
I work best with authors who have something genuinely original to say and know it, but can't yet see their own argument or narrative clearly enough to make it land. Subject matter experts. But also fantastic fiction writers, screenwriters and documentarians. Writers serious about contribution.
I invest my time in projects and authors I like.
If you're looking for line edits, grammar polish, or a fast turnaround on a cleanup job, I'm not the right fit.
NOTE I don't offer ghostwriting services. I can work with your ghostwriter on concept and structure, but I am not a ghostwriter.
Services
Non-Fiction
Fiction
Languages
Work experience
Self-employed
Berrett-Koehler Publishers