Submitted to: Contest #332

Weather the Storm

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the weather takes an unexpected turn."

Bedtime Fantasy Fiction

The storm did not begin with thunder.

It began with a whisper.

Mara was alone on the hillside, cutting herbs for her mother’s remedies. The sky had been clear moments earlier, a lazy blue stretching over the valley. Now clouds gathered over the ridge, coiling inward like a hand preparing to close into a fist. She heard the voice before she saw the storm—soft, curling through the grass like smoke.

“Child… come closer…”

Mara spun, basket pressed tight to her chest. No one stood behind her. Only the slow-building bruise of cloud overhead.

Her breath caught. She should have run home; she meant to. But the whisper slid into her mind like a cold fingertip.

“I’ve been waiting for you…”

The wind rose, not blowing from any direction, but lifting from the earth itself. Grass slithered upward, leaves spinning into a halo around her boots as though the ground were exhaling.

Mara backed away, heart hammering. Something moved in the storm clouds. Not cloud-shaped. A tall, shadowy form turned within the spiral, watching her.

Thunder cracked—thick, heavy, like a giant clearing its throat.

Then the storm lunged.

Wind slammed into her, knocking the breath from her lungs. It didn’t push—it pulled. The air roared, a living howl wrapping around her legs, her waist, her ribs, trying to lift her. Mara clawed at grass, at stones, anything. The whisper became a voice, layered and echoing from everywhere at once.

“Little heart… little bones… come with me.”

A violent gust tore her off the ground. Her scream vanished into the storm, swallowed whole. She kicked, twisted, but the wind treated her like a rag. Her nails scraped stone, tore on roots. Something darker than wind tugged at her chest, as though it were trying to pull her spirit free.

Lightning split the sky.

For a heartbeat, she saw them—thousands of shimmering shapes inside the storm. Tiny winged forms like moth-spirits, translucent, eyes glinting like raindrops.

They whispered:

“Let go. Let go. Let go…”

But Mara wasn’t made of surrender.

With a desperate twist, she caught a thick tree root protruding from the slope. Pain sliced through her shoulder but she held on. The wind shrieked, furious. The shadow in the clouds leaned closer, stretching an arm of lightning toward her.

Mara howled back at it, not words—defiance.

Something ancient stirred beneath her fingers. The root pulsed faintly, like a slow heartbeat. A deep rumble rose from the earth, older than storms.

And the wind faltered.

For one breath, the storm loosened its pull.

Mara tore herself free and rolled down the hill, mud smearing her arms and face. She threw herself over her family’s stone wall just as lightning struck where she’d been. The storm reached for her one last time, shadow stretching like claws.

Then something in the valley resisted it. The wind recoiled with a shriek, dragged back into the clouds. The moth-spirits fell lifeless, dissolving into dust.

Silence rushed in, thick and ringing.

---

Mara healed slowly, but no one believed what she’d seen. When she tried to describe the storm’s hunger, its voice, its shape, her mother only murmured that she must have panicked, that storms could frighten anyone. Her father muttered about wild winds from the northern ocean. Her uncle laughed, saying she should be proud she’d survived a nasty squall.

But outside, the wind sometimes whispered her name.

---

On the seventh night after the storm, a soft knock tapped at her window. It wasn’t the sound of fingers on wood—it was a rhythmic brushing against the glass, gentle but purposeful, as though the wind itself were knocking.

Mara froze.

The shutters creaked open on their own.

A coil of mist hovered outside the window, swirling with tiny silver-winged shapes. One moth-spirit fluttered forward and landed in her palm, glowing faintly blue.

“Return,” it whispered, its voice no louder than breath.

Mara snatched her hand away. “No.”

The moth-spirits chimed in unison:

“Not snatch. Not steal. Learn.”

The mist gathered into a figure, tall and cloud-like, eyes flickering with faint lightning. It did not reach for her this time.

It bowed.

And a whisper filled her mind, soft but steady.

“Child of the earth… come.”

Mara hesitated only a moment before climbing through the window. She didn’t go because she trusted them. She went because she needed answers.

---

The spirits led her back to the hillside. The storm clouds churned softly above, restless but contained. The mist condensed again into a towering figure. Lightning lined the outline of its form, not threatening, but curious.

“We are the Windbound,” it said. “Storm given mind. We call those who can hear us.”

“And you tried to drag me into the sky,” Mara replied, folding her arms.

“We tried to choose you.”

A thousand moth-voices whispered:

“The valley chose you first.”

Understanding prickled through her. The root. The pulse. The earth that fought the storm.

“What does the valley want with me?” Mara asked.

The ground beneath her hummed, a deep vibration like stone purring. Grass bent toward her feet. Dew glowed faintly.

“Balance,” the Windbound answered. “The earth mends. Storms break. Rain feeds. Wind spreads seed. We are not enemies. We are cycles. We are change.”

Mara’s heart steadied. She thought of her parents praying for rain every summer, their crops desperate for clouds. She thought of floods washing fields away. She thought of the storm’s raw force, terrifying but life-giving.

“You want me to… control storms?”

The Windbound’s eyes brightened.

“No. Weather them. Speak with us. Guide us.”

Mara pictured that violent wind lifting her, tearing at her, and the old root grounding her. She pictured the shadow bowing to her. She pictured the valley pulsing with calm beneath her feet.

“If I agree,” she said, “then storms must listen as much as they speak.”

The cloud-being nodded, thunder rolling softly in its chest.

“Balance,” it repeated.

The moth-spirits fluttered around her, brushing her skin like cool sparks.

“She accepts.” “She hears.” “She anchors.”

Warmth spread through Mara’s limbs, not lightning-hot, but steady as rainfall. She felt the earth at her back and the wind before her—two forces meeting.

“Then let’s learn from each other,” she said.

The Windbound bowed deeply, like a knight kneeling. The sky rumbled—not in hunger, but in greeting.

---

After that night, storms no longer frightened Mara. She felt them gather on distant horizons, tugging at her senses like distant songs. When wind rose too fiercely, she whispered back to it, coaxing it into gentler currents. When rain refused to fall, she listened until she understood what the sky needed to let go.

She didn’t command storms. She reminded them of the valley they fed.

The moth-spirits became her messengers. Roots hummed beneath her hands. Farmers noticed weather changing more kindly around their crops. Birds followed favorable winds. The valley breathed easier.

Mara carried scars on her knees, and an ache in her shoulder. She carried whispers in her blood.

Whenever fear crept in, whenever life bent her low, she remembered the truth she carved into herself:

She did not obey storms.

She weathered them.

And storms, living and wild, remembered her name.

Posted Dec 11, 2025
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Brooklyn O'Brien
02:13 Dec 18, 2025

Very touching and powerful story! Absolutely a great read that puts you right in the action with her!

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Kimberly Sweet
04:04 Dec 18, 2025

Thank you

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Cody Hicks
09:52 Dec 16, 2025

Wonderful story & writing, thank you for sharing with us!

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Kimberly Sweet
04:04 Dec 18, 2025

Thank you

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