The snow globe

Christmas Fantasy

Written in response to: "Write about a character who receives an anonymous or unexpected gift." as part of Winter Secrets with Evelyn Skye.

The snow globe

The Mils mansion always looked haunted. At the end of the street, the old building loomed with weathered walls, ivy crawling up to a brown roof where tiles were missing, and branches scraping against rattling windows. Across from it stood the village church — a strategic location, as Mrs. Bloom often said, since the church provided food and clothes for the orphans. On the other side was the school, close enough that the children could walk there in minutes.

Mrs. Bloom, one of the two women caring for the orphans, was a sweet, chubby lady who always wore black. Her colleague, Mrs. Prudence, dressed the same but carried herself differently: strict, cold, and obsessed with silence. She allowed little play and demanded long study hours. The children feared her.

Then Maya arrived. A five‑year‑old girl with golden‑blonde hair and blue eyes, she appeared at the mansion door in a red dress, clutching a tiny suitcase. Her parents, too poor to feed her, begged the women to keep her until they could return. But Maya cried at the sight of the mansion.

“Mummy, daddy, please! I don’t want to go!” she sobbed, tightening her fist around the suitcase.

“Maya, please. It’s only for a few days. We’ll come back, we promise,” her mother said.

“Oh, they’re never coming back…” Mrs. Prudence muttered as they stepped inside, earning a furious look from Mrs. Bloom.

Maya heard her. Tears streaked her cheeks. “They promised!” she cried. “They will come back!”

Mrs. Bloom knelt beside her. “Of course they will, Maya,” she said warmly, hugging her.

But days passed, and her parents did not return. Maya wandered the mansion, listening to her ballerina music box to feel close to them. She wasn’t sent to school yet, so she spent long hours alone, waiting for the other children.

One afternoon, Maya sat in her rocking chair by the window, legs tucked beneath her, the ballerina box resting gently in her lap. She wound it up, and the delicate tune filled the room, soft and persistent, echoing through the mansion’s empty halls.

Mrs. Prudence’s footsteps approached — sharp, deliberate, echoing against the wooden floor. She stopped in the doorway, her eyes narrowing at the sound.

“Maya,” she said coldly, “turn that off.”

Maya hugged the box closer. “But I like it…”

The music tinkled on, fragile and defiant. Mrs. Prudence’s jaw tightened. She stepped forward, each stride heavy, until she leaned over the girl.

“I said enough.” Her hand shot out.

Maya shrank back, clutching the box against her chest. “Please… it’s all I have.”

For a heartbeat, the room held still — the music playing, Maya’s breath quickening, Mrs. Prudence’s shadow falling across her. Then, with a sudden motion, Mrs. Prudence seized the box.

The ballerina spun once, twice. Then came the sound — a sharp crack as the box hit the floor. The tune cut off, leaving only silence.

Maya froze, staring at the shattered pieces scattered across the floorboards. Her lips trembled, and then the sobs broke free.

Mrs. Bloom rushed in, alarmed. “What happened?”

“The mean lady destroyed my toy…” Maya cried, tears streaking her cheeks.

Mrs. Bloom knelt, gathering the broken fragments with shaking hands. “Oh, Maya… I’ll get you a new one, I promise.”

“Like my parents promised?” Maya wailed, before fleeing to her room.

Mrs. Bloom turned on her colleague, fury in her eyes. “She’s just a child! How could you?”

“You can’t afford it,” Mrs. Prudence replied flatly, and walked away, leaving the silence heavier than before.

Later, Maya sat again by the window in her rocking chair, waiting for the children to return. Alison, the oldest girl, was kind to her. Betty, a little bit younger, usually played hide‑and‑seek with her. Jack, the oldest boy, painted pictures for her. They noticed something was wrong the moment they saw her pressed against the glass.

“What happened, Maya?” Alison asked.

“Where is your ballerina box?” Betty added, as she noticed the box missing from her hands. An item that was always there like an extension of her hand.

“The lady in black broke it…” Maya whispered sadly, as more kids gathered around them.

Jack frowned. “They both wear black. You mean Mrs. Prudence?”

Maya shook her head firmly. “No… Mrs. Bloom wears pink.”

“She always wears black!” one boy laughed. “Delusional Maya…”

“Maybe, she wore pink today!” Alison exclaimed, winking at them to play along.

“She wears pink all the time… When she smiles at me, when she hugs me…”

The children exchanged puzzled looks. And the nickname stuck.

*********

Months passed and her parents hadn’t returned. Christmas approached. The children decorated the old tree with ornaments donated by the church.

On Christmas Eve, near midnight, Maya sat alone in her rocking chair beside the frosted window. A candle flickered beside her, warming her hands. She wore a burgundy beanie and matching scarf, her thin white jacket barely keeping out the cold. But she didn’t care. She wanted only to watch the snowflakes. There were no snowfalls where she used to live.

It had been snowing for five days, yet she stared as if seeing it for the first time. The garden lay under a thick blanket of snow, branches creaking under the weight. Outside, villagers in coats and boots walked to and from the church. Children laughed, throwing snowballs at each other, while Maya watched in silence, mesmerized.

Suddenly, as Maya sat watching the endless fall of snowflakes, the candlelight flickering beside her face, she felt herself drifting into reverie. Then she noticed something strange: footsteps appearing in the snow outside, illuminated by the streetlights — yet no one was there.

An invisible hand traced an arrow across the rattling window, pointing toward the mansion’s door. Soft knocks followed. Maya crept to the tall wooden door but couldn’t reach the handle. She dragged a chair, climbed up, and turned the knob. The door swung open. No one stood outside. Was her mind playing tricks again? Like the pink dress she swore Mrs. Bloom wore, though no one else had seen it. Like waiting for her parents, refusing to believe they had left her forever. Such things had earned her the cruel nickname “delusional.” She hated that no one believed her. And now — what would she say? That an invisible man’s footsteps had appeared in the snow?

She began to push the heavy door closed when something caught her eye — a small shape half‑buried in the snow.

Maya froze. The wind whistled through the doorway, carrying flakes onto the floor. She climbed down from the chair, her breath clouding in the cold, and crouched low.

There, resting against the threshold, was a rectangular box. Its surface was crusted with frost, edges glittering faintly under the streetlight. She brushed at it with trembling fingers, the ice biting her skin. Beneath the frost, a pale blue shimmer appeared, like glass.

Her heart thudded. What was it? A present? A trick? She turned it over carefully, searching for a button. For a moment, nothing happened. Then — a soft click.

The lid sprang open.

Inside lay a snow globe, glowing faintly as if lit from within. Maya lifted it with both hands, the cold seeping into her palms. She held it close, staring.

Within the globe stood a tiny red‑roofed house, two reindeer harnessed to a sleigh, and a plump man in red with a long white beard.

Her breath caught. “Santa…” she whispered.

She shook the globe gently. Snow swirled inside, as it did around her. The world shifted. The mansion vanished.

Maya blinked. She was standing in the snow itself, face to face with the reindeer, the globe still clutched in her hands.

“Maya! Finally, you’re here! I need your help!” the old man in red called.

“My… help?” she stammered.

“Yes, yes! Hurry! Inside the house — the presents!”

She ran to the little house, opened the low door, and stepped inside. Her eyes widened: a majestic Christmas tree glittered in the corner, candy hung from the ceiling, colorful drapes framed the windows. And there, on a table between two couches, sat a massive red bag spilling over with presents.

She set the snow globe down, rushed to the bag, pushed the tumbling gifts back inside, and tugged at it. To her surprise, it was lighter than it looked.

“Maya! Hurry!” Santa urged. She dragged the bag to him and he lifted it onto the sleigh.

“You’re very strong, Maya! Hop in!”

She climbed beside him. “Let’s go spread some joy, boys!” he turned to the reindeer.

The reindeer leapt forward, pulling the sleigh into the sky. Maya clutched the side, eyes squeezed shut in fear.

“Look, Maya, look!” Santa said. She opened her eyes. Below stretched white rooftops, chimneys smoking into the night, streetlights glowing, children laughing in snowy playgrounds. Her nose was red from the cold, but her face glowed with happiness.

“Hurry up, Maya! Pass me the wooden train!” Santa called. She dug into the bag, found a green package, and handed it to him. He dropped it neatly into a chimney.

“Maya, what’s next?” Santa asked. She reached into the bag, her eyes glowing as she saw through the wrapping. “It’s a toy dog!” she exclaimed.

“Perfect — chimney ahead!” Santa laughed, tossing it down.

She reached again. “A doll with golden hair!”

“To the right, boys!” The sleigh swerved, and the package vanished into another chimney.

Package after package revealed treasures — books, puzzles, teddy bears — each one exactly what children below were wishing for. Package after package vanished into chimneys as the sleigh darted across the rooftops.

“You can talk?” Maya gasped when she heard the reindeer whispering to each other.

One of the reindeer turned its head, eyes shining like stars. “Of course we can, little one. We carry the wishes of children through the skies.”

And the other added, his voice deep and calm. “And only those who truly believe can hear us.”

Maya’s eyes widened. “Then… that’s why I can hear you?”

“Yes,” the first reindeer said gently. “You see what others cannot. That is your gift. This is why Santa chose you!”

“My friends in the orphanage can’t tell colors apart…” Maya said.

“What’s next Maya?” Santa asked and she nearly dove into the bag to find it.

“A toy carousel!” Maya beamed.

At last, the bag was nearly empty. Santa laughed, pulling her into a hug.

“Ho! Ho! Ho!” Santa laughed. “Maya, you are the most brilliant assistant I’ve ever had!”

“Thank you, Santa!” she said, her heart racing with joy.

“And because we finished early this year,” he added, “you may choose where we go next. Then I’ll return you to where I found you.”

Maya thought hard.

“My parents’ home…” Maya whispered.

Santa’s face grew serious. “Boys! You know the address!” he said and the reindeer dipped.

“Very well, little one. Let us see.”

The sleigh glided over rooftops, the snow thinning as the air grew warmer. Maya leaned forward, her eyes wide, scanning every street below.

“There!” she cried suddenly, pointing at a small house with a crooked chimney. “That’s it! That’s where they live!”

Santa slowed the sleigh. They hovered above the roof. Maya’s heart pounded. She searched the windows, hoping to see her parents inside. But the curtains were drawn, the rooms dark. No smoke rose from the chimney.

“Why is it so quiet?” she whispered. “Where are they?”

Santa’s voice was gentle. “Sometimes homes are empty, but families are never gone forever.”

Maya’s throat tightened. “But they promised to come back.”

He placed a hand on her shoulder. “Promises endure, Maya. Your paths will meet again.”

Her eyes filled. “So… they didn’t forget me?”

“Never,” Santa said firmly.

Maya sniffled, clutching the sleigh as the house below blurred through her tears.

“Come,” Santa said gently. “It is not time to stay here. Tonight is for joy. And I have something special for you.”

He pulled the reins, and the sleigh rose back into the sky, leaving the silent house behind.

Soon they were back at the little red‑roofed house, snow falling thick again.

“Time for your present, Maya!” Santa said as they stepped down.

“I have a present, too?” she asked, wide‑eyed.

“Of course, you do.” He placed a small pink box in her hands.

“My ballerina!” she gasped, seeing through the box package. She tore it open eagerly and held her music box in her hands— not broken, but restored, gleaming, with her initials carved on the side.

“You fixed it!” she cried.

“My elves did,” Santa chuckled.

“Thank you!” Maya said, throwing her arms around him.

“And one more thing…” Santa added. He disappeared into the house and returned holding the snow globe she had found on the mansion’s doorstep.

“This is yours,” he said, handing it to her. “You only have to shake it… to see the magic.” He winked.

*********

The children woke to Mrs. Bloom’s frantic cries. “Maya! Maya!” she shouted. Alison rushed to her side. Mrs. Prudence, pale, hurried after her.

Maya lay on the floor near the open door, a thin layer of snow creeping inside.

“Is she alive?” Alison cried.

“She’s breathing… She’s just sleeping!” Jack said, kneeling beside her. He rocked her gently until her eyes fluttered open.

“Where is Santa?” Maya asked sleepily.

Mrs. Bloom laughed in relief. “Maya, I see you already opened your present! What were you doing out here? Wanted to thank Santa?” she said and she glanced at Mrs. Prudence with a grin.

Maya looked at the ballerina box in her hands. She wound it up, and the familiar tune began to play as the ballerina spun. For the first time, Mrs. Prudence smiled.

“I’m sorry I broke your music box,” Mrs. Prudence said quietly.

“It’s okay, Mrs. Prudence. I forgive you,” Maya said sweetly. Jack laughed in surprise at her kindness.

“Well thankfully, Mrs.…” Mrs. Bloom almost slipped. “Santa replaced it.” She continued.

“Come on, children! Breakfast!” Mrs. Prudence called. Alison took Maya into her arms and carried her to the table.

“Ali,” Maya whispered, “last night I gave away presents with Santa. He gave me this!”

“You’re a dreamy little girl, aren’t you?” Alison said and smiled, to Maya’s disappointment.

Suddenly, a knock echoed through the mansion. Mrs. Bloom hurried to the door, and when she opened it, her breath caught.

“Maya… your parents are here!” she cried.

Maya froze. For a heartbeat she couldn’t move, her mind refusing to believe. Then she ran — her little feet pounding across the floor — and threw herself into their arms.

Her mother bent low, pulling her close, tears streaming down her cheeks. Her father wrapped them both in his arms, his face pressed against Maya’s hair.

“Mummy! Daddy!” Maya sobbed, clinging to them as if she would never let go. Her heart raced, her chest aching with joy.

“We’re here, sweetheart,” her mother whispered. “We’re so sorry we left you.”

“We promised, and we’ve come back,” her father said, his voice breaking.

Maya buried her face against them, breathing in the familiar warmth, the scent she had missed for so long.

“Santa told me everything would be fine,” Maya murmured through her sobs.

Her parents exchanged a tender smile. “Then Santa was right,” her mother said softly.

Together they went to pack her things, but Mrs. Bloom noticed something strange: a pink‑wrapped box still sitting unopened on Maya’s nightstand.

“Maya, haven’t you opened your present?” she asked carefully.

Maya turned, eyes wide. “Another present!” She tore it open. Inside was another ballerina box — the one Mrs. Bloom and Mrs. Prudence had bought for her.

“Now you have two!” Maya’s mother smiled.

“Maybe Santa knew how much I loved my box,” Maya said softly, clutching both ballerina boxes to her chest. She winked at Mrs. Bloom, her eyes sparkling, choosing to keep her magical adventure hidden from her parents.

Mrs. Bloom held her gaze, a knowing smile spreading across her face. “Yes,” she said firmly, “he knew.”

“Thank you for taking care of her,” her parents told the women. “We will be forever grateful.”

“Come visit as often as you like,” Mrs. Bloom replied.

Mrs. Prudence’s gaze drifted to the window beside the rocking chair. Something rested there. A snow globe. She picked it up slowly. She didn’t remember buying such a gift. What struck her as strange was the snow inside. It was still falling, as though someone had just shaken it moments before.

“Maya, is this yours?” she asked, holding it out, her sternness gone.

Maya’s eyes lit up. “My snow globe!” she exclaimed. “My magic snow globe!”

Mrs. Prudence studied the globe in silence. For the first time, she looked not skeptical, but curious — as if she, too, wondered whether magic might be real.

Posted Dec 05, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
23:33 Dec 23, 2025

Thank you for this joyful Christmas tale. Merry Christmas.🎄

Thanks for liking 'Moon Over Miami'.

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Lena Elsher
07:34 Dec 24, 2025

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas to you too 🎄 And you’re very welcome—Moon Over Miami was truly delightful.

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