The Last Sunset

Drama Fiction Holiday

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the lines “Why should I believe you?” or “Give me one good reason to trust you.”" as part of Two Sides to Every Story with Emily Martin.

The sun over Dalmatia wasn't a gentle thing. It was a brute, a hammer of gold that beat down on the white stone of the riva, the coastal promenade, until the very air shimmered with heat. I was sitting at a café in Split, nursing a macchiato that was already lukewarm and staring at the ancient Roman columns of Diocletian's Palace, feeling the delicious, foreign weight of being on my own.

I was twenty, from Kraków, and this was my grand adventure. Two weeks of Adriatic sun, cheap wine, and pretending I was worldly and independent. I’d booked a day trip to explore the hills behind the city, a history tour that promised breathtaking views and ancient ruins. The brochure had pictures of wild lavender and crumbling stone walls, not a whiff of the 90s.

Our guide was an older man named Marko. He was lean and weathered, with skin like cracked leather and eyes the sharp, unwavering blue of the sea on a winter’s day. He wore a linen shirt that had seen better days and spoke English with a thick, melodic accent that turned his words into a kind of song.

"There," he said, gesturing with a gnarled hand as our minibus snaked its way up the narrow, winding road. "Up there. You see the hills? They look like the back of a sleeping dragon, yes?"

We all craned our necks. The hills were a dusty, scrub-covered green, rising sharply from the turquoise water. They were beautiful, wild, and serene. The tourists in the van, a couple from Germany and a family from America, nodded appreciatively and snapped photos. I just stared, feeling a strange pull.

Marko was a well of information, but his stories were different from the guides in the city. He didn't talk about the Venetians or the Romans with the same passion. He had a different kind of reverence. When we reached a small, abandoned village high on the mountain, he stopped talking about architecture. He just stood in the middle of the overgrown square, looking at the empty, windowless houses.

"My family," he said, his voice low, "they lived here. Before." He paused, letting the word hang in the air. The silence was broken only by the chirping of crickets. "In the war, the Homeland War, the village was a front line. It was a place of… fear."

He led us to the edge of a cliff where the view was spectacular. You could see the islands scattered across the sea like pieces of a shattered mirror. Below us, a patch of earth was marked by a small, plain cross.

"This is where I found my father," Marko said, his voice barely a whisper. "And my brother. And my sister. They were… they were just here. They were watching the sun set. It was the last time."

My heart clenched. The sun was still a blazing orb, but a coldness was spreading through me. The wind, which had been a warm breath on my skin, now felt sharp and sad. The others shifted uncomfortably. The American father cleared his throat, but no one spoke.

Marko continued, his gaze fixed on the distant horizon. "They didn't make it to the next day. The shelling came from the other hill, the one we just passed. It was… a different kind of war. A war of neighbors. A war of… forgetting."

He turned to face us, and his eyes met mine. There was a profound sadness in them, but also a flicker of something else – a question. He was looking at me, the only other person in the group with dark hair and pale skin, a face that was familiar yet foreign.

"Most people from this region died in the wars," he said, his tone shifting, becoming more pointed. "But you, young lady. You have the look. The look of the mountains. Where are you from?"

The question hung in the air, heavy and strange. "I'm from Poland," I said, my voice feeling small. "Kraków."

Marko tilted his head, a faint smile playing on his lips. "Poland. Ah, our Slavic cousins. Always suffering, always surviving." He studied me for a moment longer. "There are stories in a face. Lines that are not yet written. You have the eyes of a girl who is searching for something."

The rest of the tour was a blur. I couldn't shake the feeling that Marko was seeing something in me that I couldn't see in myself. He was a kind man, but there was a weight to him, a gravity that pulled at me. As we were getting back into the van, I lingered, pretending to tie my shoelace.

He noticed. "You are thinking," he said. It wasn't a question.

"I was just… looking at that village. It’s so quiet now. It’s hard to imagine."

"It is hard to imagine," he agreed, his voice soft. "But it is the truth. My family's memory is in the stones." He looked at me again, that sharp blue gaze piercing right through me. "My family's story, it is not just a story for me. It is a ghost that follows me. And sometimes…" He trailed off, then started walking towards the van.

On the drive back, he had the driver pull over at a small cemetery on a lonely hilltop. The gravestones were simple, mostly white marble, with the names of men and women and children. Some had the dates 1991, 1992, 1993 etched into the stone.

Marko walked among them like he was in his own living room. He stopped at a grave and knelt down, brushing a few dried leaves from the base of the headstone.

"My sister's child," he said, gesturing to the grave beside it. "She was only a baby. She didn't even know what was happening."

Something stirred in my chest. A vague, uncomfortable familiarity. I had a family tree at home, painstakingly researched by my grandmother. It was full of names, dates, and faded photographs of people with serious faces. I never connected with it. It felt like a list of strangers.

As the others drifted back to the van, Marko remained behind with me. He pulled a worn, old photograph from his pocket. It was creased and yellowed, and it showed a group of people in front of a stone house, the same kind of house we’d seen in the abandoned village. They were smiling, their faces full of a simple, pre-war happiness.

"This is my family," he said, his finger tracing over the tiny, faded figures. "My father, my mother, my brother, my sister. My aunt and uncle. And their children." He pointed to a young woman in the back. "This is my cousin. Her name was Ana."

My gaze fell on her. She had dark hair and a serious, intelligent face. And for a moment, a disorienting moment, I felt as though I was looking at a photograph of myself.

"She looks…" I started, but the words died in my throat.

"She looks like you," Marko finished for me, his voice soft and steady. "Yes. I saw it the moment you got off the bus. The same eyes. The same shape of the face."

He put the photograph away. The sun was beginning to dip towards the horizon, casting long, dramatic shadows.

"You know, there is a name that is common in these parts," he continued. "A Polish name. Many people from Poland came here, centuries ago. They settled and married, and they became Croatians. But they kept their names, their traditions. They did not forget where they came from." He looked at me directly. "Your name, it is Wiśniewska, yes?"

I nodded, my mind reeling. How did he know? He must have heard me introduce myself.

"My grandmother," he said slowly, his voice dropping to a near-whisper, "her mother was a Wiśniewska. She married a man from this village. They had children. One of them was my aunt, Ana." He pointed to the woman in the photograph. "Ana had a daughter. She was a young mother. Her husband, he was a Serb, from the other side of the mountains. When the war started, he… he was drafted into the Yugoslav army. He had no choice. But it was his unit, his own people, who came to this village. Ana was killed in the hills, in the shelling. Her husband… no one knows what happened to him."

My mind was spinning. It was too much of a coincidence. A story that felt like it was written for a film, not for my real life on a tourist bus.

"Marko," I said, my voice trembling. "This is… this is a nice story, but it's a story. I don't think – "

"You do not think it is true?" he cut me off, his eyes suddenly blazing with an intensity that made me take a step back. "I have lived with this for thirty years. I have seen their faces every day. And now I see her face on you."

He reached into his other pocket and pulled out a small, worn leather pouch. He loosened the string and tipped a small, tarnished silver ring into his palm. "This was Ana's," he said. "Her husband gave it to her before they were married. She was wearing it when they found her. I have kept it, hoping one day to give it to someone who would understand."

He held it out to me. The metal was cool and simple, with a small, etched cross.

I stared at it. This was a stranger. A man I had met just hours ago. And he was telling me he thought I was related to a woman who died in a war I had only ever read about in a few, brief articles. A war that was, to me, a world away, a footnote in a history book.

My heart was pounding. I felt a wave of vertigo, of being swept away from my safe, tidy life in Poland. This was not the adventure I had signed up for. This was messy, painful, and real.

"Give me one good reason to trust you," I finally said, my voice cutting through the heavy, still air. My own words felt sharp, a small shield I had erected against the storm of his story.

Marko looked at me, and I saw a flicker of hurt in his eyes, quickly replaced by a deep, weary understanding. He wasn't a con artist; he was a man trying to connect a broken thread of a tapestry.

He sighed, a long, slow release of breath. He didn't seem angry. Just tired.

"Because," he said, his voice quiet and measured, "I have no reason to lie to you. Why would I? For a few kuna? For your pity? I am an old man. I live with ghosts. I am giving you the choice to believe me or not. I will not beg."

He turned and started walking towards the van. I stood frozen, the wind whipping my hair around my face. The sun was a huge, bleeding orb sinking into the sea, and the air was turning a bruised purple.

I looked down at the photograph he had left on the wall next to the grave. It was a newer one, of a young girl with a big smile and my eyes. My grandmother had a picture like this. A picture of a girl she was sure had died in the war.

My grandmother never talked about it. She just had the photograph, tucked away in a drawer, a silent testament to a sister she had never known.

I ran after Marko. "Wait," I called out. "Wait."

He stopped and turned.

"Tell me more," I said, the words leaving my mouth before I could think. "Tell me about my cousin. Her daughter."

Marko looked at me for a long moment, the ghost of a smile on his weathered face. "I will tell you everything," he said. "But it's a long story, and the sun is setting. And the wine at my house is better than anything you'll find in the city."

I looked at the hills behind us, now cloaked in a deep, velvety twilight. They no longer looked like sleeping dragons. They looked like guardians, holding secrets. And one of those secrets, it seemed, had my name on it.

I didn't have my answer to "Give me one good reason to trust you." But as I walked towards the van with Marko, I realized I was done asking for reasons. I was ready to listen.

Posted Jul 27, 2026
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Marjolein Greebe
August 06, 2026 20:33

I really enjoyed how this became much more than a travel story. The gradual shift from beautiful scenery to buried family history felt natural and engaging, and Marko came across as a wonderfully authentic character. The ending left me with exactly the right feeling—that some journeys begin only after the destination has been reached.

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