Surviving Sunday

Christian Drama Fiction

Written in response to: "Your character makes a life-changing decision. What happens next?" as part of Not What It Seems.

Home was warm, smelling of green tea with honey and ginger.Our Sunday morning family study was winding down. My husband, Nephets, closed his Bible as our three boys scattered, debating who got the last muffin while the dark sky outside promised a historic blizzard.

"Clear off the table, boys," I said, checking the cabinets. "I'm making a quick run to Midwest Fresh before the roads lock up. Just basic storm supplies—milk, bread, peanut butter."

"Get the marshmallow cereal!" the oldest yelled.

"And Pop-Tarts!" the middle one added.

"I’m not stocking a slumber party," I laughed, zipping my pink coat.

Nephets stood up. "I’m coming with you."

"No thanks, honey, I just want to get in and out," I smiled, grabbing my keys. "It's only three miles."

The drive took three minutes, but the parking lot was already gridlocked. Drivers crept down the slushy aisles like predators, backup lights flashing as anxious shoppers loaded trunks. I snagged a spot near the hardware store, pulled up my hood, and headed inside.

The entryway cart corral was dry, and the main concourse looked like an evacuation center. I grabbed a hand basket and made a beeline for Aisle 6.

The bread shelves had been picked clean. White bread: gone. Honey wheat: vanished. But tucked on the bottom shelf, I spotted a sliver of blue plastic—one solitary loaf of whole wheat.

As I reached down, a cart wheel squeaked. A middle-aged woman was speed-walking straight for it.

"Excuse me," she said, angling her cart to block me.

Not today. I dropped into a smooth squat and scooped the loaf into my basket before her cart stopped. "All yours if you want the hot dog buns!" I offered with a bright smile.

She gave a thin-lipped nod and pivoted away. One down.

I navigated the bottleneck to grab a jar of Jif, swiped the last container of almond milk from dairy, and raided the snack aisle for strawberry Pop-Tarts and chocolate chip cookies. On the top shelf, I stretched on my tiptoes to hook two fingers around the final box of marshmallow cereal.

Mission accomplished.

I joined the back of the massive express checkout line and pulled out my phone to text Nephets. The screen flashed 4% before going black.

Outside, the wind hit the glass doors with an ominous rumble. Then, BZZZZZT.

The fluorescent lights went pitch black. A second later, heavy backup generators thudded on, bathing the store in an eerie orange glow.

The static intercom crackled: "Due to severe line failures and a county-wide travel ban, all store exits are locked until further notice."

Panic erupted. People rattled the locked automatic doors and yelled for a manager. Realizing I was stuck, I backed out of line and headed toward Seasonal. Tucked between lawnmowers, I found the jackpot: plush patio lounge chairs with a sample fleece throw blanket.

I sank into the cushions, wrapping the blanket around my shoulders. Hours dragged by. The auxiliary power sputtered out, and the temperature inside plummeted. Near the registers, an elderly man trembled violently. Nearby, a young mother rocked a red-faced, shivering toddler.

I couldn't just sit there.

I walked over to the customer service desk, where Gary, a fixture at Midwest Fresh for twenty years, was methodically counting his drawer by flashlight.

"Gary," I said, my teeth chattering. "There are thermal blankets and propane heaters inside the display case. You need to unlock it."

"Corporate protocol," Gary grunted without looking up. "Locked down after hours. Unlocking without regional clearance is grounds for termination."

"People are freezing, Gary! There’s a baby over there!"

"I said no!"

Looking at that mother, I’d had enough. I marched over to the pegboard, grabbed an iron crowbar, and stepped up to the hardware display.

"Hey! What are you doing?!" Gary yelled, scrambling after me.

I raised the bar over my shoulder and brought it down hard.

CRASH!

Safety glass shattered like thunder. Shoppers gasped as Gary backed away, his face red with rage as he slammed the silent hold-up alarm. Ignoring the sharp shards, I hauled down armfuls of thermal blankets, sleeping bags, and lanterns, handing them to two teenagers to pass out to the elderly man and the mother.

Before the first blanket reached the child, blinding red and blue lights strobed against the front glass. Sirens wailed over the wind.

"This is the police! The building is surrounded! To the woman holding the crowbar—drop the weapon immediately and step outside!"

"She’s out of her mind!" Gary yelled from behind the desk.

I looked at the iron bar in my right hand. I couldn't let them storm the building. Taking a deep breath, I tossed the crowbar onto the tile. CLANG. A drop of blood fell with it—I’d sliced my palm on the glass.

"Stay low," I whispered to the mother in the blue parka. "I’m going to talk to them."

I raised my hands, palms out, and walked slowly toward the automatic doors. Spotlights washed through the glass, blinding me.

Over a tactical radio, a voice crackled: "—visible blood on her hand... subject is weapon-adjacent and covered in blood..."

Three red laser dots settled on my chest. Panic froze my nervous system solid. My toes and fingers went completely numb.

Suddenly, a loud metallic screech echoed as officers outside used hydraulic spreaders to force the jammed sliding doors apart.

"Don't shoot! She saved us!"

The mother in the blue parka pushed through the opening, shielding her toddler from the spotlights.

"Get back inside!" the lead officer bellowed, rifle raised.

"No!" She stepped into the light beside me. "We were locked in without heat! She broke the display case to give us blankets! That blood is from the glass—she cut herself saving my baby!"

An elderly man wrapped in fleece pushed into the breach behind her, shouting to confirm her story.

The lead officer kept his rifle at low-ready, eyes darting between me and the crowd. "Command, multiple non-compliant civilians at the breach point. Stand by." He looked back at me. "Ma'am, drop to your knees!"

I tried to obey, but the adrenaline dump and freezing air had locked my muscles. My body refused to bend.

"Secondary team, move in!"

Two officers charged through the snowy buildup. One grabbed my uninjured wrist, pinning it behind my back, while the other swept my legs. I hit the frozen floor hard as plastic flex-cuffs zip-tied my wrists together. From all the body cam videos watched, I remembered this was standard procedure: clear the threat first, ask questions later.

As the officer pulled me upright into a sitting position, he caught sight of the blood-soaked towel wrapped around my right hand.

He tapped his shoulder mic. "We've got a heavy bleeder on the primary suspect. Requesting a medic to the entry point, priority."

The red laser dots were gone, replaced by the bite of cold plastic around my wrists. As the world began to tilt, I finally let my eyes close.

Posted Aug 06, 2026
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David Sweet
August 09, 2026 15:59

Good for her! It's amazing that cops and medics were so quick to the scene and not helping stranded motorists. Manager also a jerk. That was definitely an adventure that didn't have to go down that way.

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DeSean Develle
August 09, 2026 19:53

Thanks for taking the time to read ! Feedback is much appreciated.

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