The Lass We Found In London

Thriller

Written in response to: "Write about a character arriving in a place unlike anywhere they’ve ever been." as part of Location, Location, Location.

I couldn't breathe through the burlap sack over my head. It was suffocating me. My arms were tied behind my back and my legs were tied at the ankles. They had forced me to my knees and left me here. I had no way of telling what time it was.

After what felt like an eternity, I heard the door open, then shut. Someone with a strong grip cut the rope on my ankles and forced me to my feet. They led me to a different part of the room, and forced me to sit in a chair. Someone took the sack off of my head and the room had one light, and was barely brighter than the sack that was over my head. In front of me, sat an older man. He looked about fifty years old and he had a gray comb-over. He glanced at me up and down, then he licked his lips. It was unnerving. I was alone in a room with a creep.

"You're a very pretty girl. Do ya know that, Lassie?" His Irish accent was very thick. After being in a vehicle for so long, I realize that I could be in any one place rather than just England.

"Where am I?" I asked. I probably wasn't in the States, considering the fact that I was on vacation in London.

"Why, Lassie. Ye have found yer way to Ireland. An' ye have the pleasure o' meeting the Brennan O'Connor. I am lookin' for a new mate." He leaned back in his chair and looked off at something behind me. "Wesley, put yerself into good use and find this Lass a new set o' clothes." I looked behind me and saw a tall man, with ocean blue eyes and full lips. He had high cheekbones and hair that laid perfectly on his head. Wesley nodded, but gave me a quick grin that made my heart flutter, before leaving the room. My cheeks were hot from blushing, so I looked at my lap to hide the redness.

"So might I know yer name? I told ye mine." He asked hopefully.

"No. You don't need to know my name." I said, annoyed. I just wanted to go home.

Brennan got up from his seat and walked towards the door. I felt relieved that he was leaving. But then, I heard a click and realized that he was only locking the door. My heart sank.

"Now, Lassie. Friends know everything about each other. Tell me your name, or I will learn about you another way." He threatened. He was so short that it was hard to be scared of him. But he was still a creepy old man.

"We are not friends." I said with venom in my voice. I glared at Brennan and he smiled evilly.

"Oh. So ye want to do it the hard way, eh?" He walked toward me and put a hand on my shoulder. He turned my chair to face him. I looked away from him. He grabbed my jaw and forced me to look at him. His eyes were an ugly gray color, and they were sunken in.

"Ye have lovely violet eyes, Lassie. So innocent. What a shame." He glanced down at my lips, then back up to my eyes. He leaned in so close to me, that I could smell the stank of his breath.

Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. Brennan grunted and released my jaw. He unlocked the door and let in Wesley. I looked at Wesley, and for a second, our eyes locked. He glanced at me in sympathy and continued over to me.

"Here are some clothes, Miss." He said. He didn't have an Irish accent, but he did have a very proper English accent. "We are going to leave you to get dressed." He grabbed Brennan by the wrist, and led him out the door. I sighed in relief, but then I realized that I was still tied to the chair. So I tilted my head back and made a noise of frustration.

A few minutes later, Wesley and Brennan came back in and looked at me in confusion.

"I can't get dressed without my hands." I stuck my head out like a turtle and Brennan began to walk towards me. Since my ankles weren't strapped down, I scooted myself backwards and away from Brennan.

"Not you. Don't come near me, you perverted creep." I said. He tilted his head and furrowed his brow.

"Well, then I guess ye don't get to enjoy fresh clean clothes then." He said. He backed up and stood near the door.

"I'll do it, Miss." Wesley said. He walked over to me and flipped open a pocked knife. He slipped behind me and cut the rope. I jumped up from the chair and threw my arms around him. He seemed surprised that I was hugging him.

"Thank you, Wesley!" I whispered in his ear. He accepted the embrace and hugged me back.

"You're welcome, Miss."

"It's Kaleida. Call me Kali." I said, in a whisper only he could hear.

"Only If you call me Wes." He released from the hug and grabbed my hand. He gave it a quick squeeze before letting go and walking toward the door. Brennan was red with anger. He glared at me before slamming the door shut.

I put on the black, long-sleeved shirt first. It was too long for my short arms, but It was fine because I could just roll up the sleeves. Then I put on the jeans. They fit fine, although they were very short. I then put on the crew socks that Wesley had provided. Lastly, I put on the black Nike tennis shoes. I was all dressed so I sat back down in the chair that was provided to me.

I looked around the dull gray room. The only furniture that was there was the two chairs and a table. There was no decor, and no windows. It was kind of creepy. I don't think that I ever want to come back to Ireland after I get home. If I ever get home again.

I sit in the chair for a moment, pondering my past hour, when the light shut off. I didn't see the door open, but someone else was in the room. They put the bag back over my head, and tied my arms before I could escape their grasp. I felt a poke in my arm, then a few seconds later, I only saw the darkness of sleep.









To Be Continued...


Posted Sep 15, 2020
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September 15, 2020 01:07

Ooh, cool story! Interesting...part 2 now!

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Artemisia Pearl
September 15, 2020 03:05

Yes! I am working on a part 2! I am glad you liked it!😁

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Ru .
October 30, 2020 18:29

Sorry, this is the most random thing but: You like Red Queen? Ha, I've found you, fellow fan. Also, I love your name :)

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Amaya Reddy
October 30, 2020 22:17

I love Red Queen too! (sry I'm going through ur comments to upvote them and can't stop myself from butting into the convos so bear with me)

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Artemisia Pearl
November 02, 2020 23:42

Ps. I don't remember if I commented on both of your guys's comments, but I gave you both upvote and I love both of you!😄

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Amaya Reddy
November 03, 2020 02:37

aw, you did? thank you so much <3

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Artemisia Pearl
November 02, 2020 23:40

Omg! Thanks! I'm so glad I found another fan! I gave you an upvote!💗

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Ru .
November 02, 2020 23:46

Thank you, I did too :) Now, I have to ask, thoughts? (favourite book, characters, powers,)

Temi: Oh my gosh! Cal is my second husband! (After Jace from the Mortal instruments) And I absolutely love Shade's teleportation, and Mare's lightning!

Ru: Mare's lightning has been my dream ability forever. Shade's is amazing and I absolutely cried when.... you know. Cal is pretty cool too, but I also like Maven, haha. May I call you Temi? I know everyone says Arte so I wanted to use a different one.

Temi: Absolutely! I love unique names! Also I cried for like three days straight when Shade......Ugh!

Ru: Same, he literally just came back, like give me some time to love him and then... bam. There were so many others too. On a side note, Evangeline is a literal queen. Really mean but still awesome.

Temi: At first I hated her, but as the books started to put her point of view into the story, I began to like her more.

Ru: Same here. But now the whole fandom likes her. Not because she's bad, but because despite everything she is loyal and fierce. Have you read Broken Throne? And have you heard about Victoria's upcoming one?

Temi: I have not read Broken Throne. I haven't even heard of it. Is it part of the series? A book or a novella? I knew there was going to be another book, by her, but I didn't know when.

Ru: Broken Throne came after War Storm. Search it up — it's purple and has some short stories from the RQ universe, maps, little history bits, politics, and some scenes from after War Storm ended (it's actually pretty big). The new book is a new series called Realm Breaker (not part of RQ at all) and comes out next year.

Temi: Oh my gosh! I had no idea that the other book in RQ came out already! I'm way behind! My library hasn't gotten it yet, so that's probably why I didn't know. I will upload it to my phone! And since Victoria is one of my favorite authors, I have to read Realm Breaker once it's out. I'm so excited!

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Artemisia Pearl
November 03, 2020 13:30

Oh my gosh! Cal is my second husband! (After Jace from the Mortal instruments) And I absolutely love Shade's teleportation, and Mare's lightning!

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Zea Bowman
October 07, 2020 02:19

Hey, Artemisia! First of all, great story! Second, I wanted to let you know that I wrote a "Zombies Sound Safer Than My Family - Part 2." You had read the first and seemed to enjoy it, so I was just letting you know that I had made a second if you wanted to check it out. :)

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Artemisia Pearl
October 07, 2020 10:50

I'd love to! That was such an amazing comedy! I will read it as soon as I can and I will give ya some feed back!

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B. W.
September 21, 2020 19:17

Hey if its alright, could ya maybe help me with something?

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Artemisia Pearl
September 22, 2020 14:22

Yes! Of course!!

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B. W.
September 22, 2020 14:43

So ya know the novel i think i mentioned right?

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Artemisia Pearl
September 22, 2020 19:31

Yes! I also saw that you mentioned in your bio.

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B. W.
September 22, 2020 20:27

oh wait, ya know my demi-god series right? i made something for it, go check out "It has begun" and tell me what you think

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Artemisia Pearl
September 23, 2020 11:56

In my free period I will! That is third period so it might take a while, though!

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Lily Kingston
September 17, 2020 22:15

great story! i love the tense atmosphere created by Kali's reaction to Brennan. It's great for a thrilling story! keep up the good work and keep writing!!

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Artemisia Pearl
September 17, 2020 23:51

Thank you!

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Jade Young
September 16, 2020 21:05

This was an interesting and nicely written story😊 I was able to visualize everything in every sentence through your descriptions. I kinda wanna find out what happens next, so hurry up with that part two😂❤ Keep up the great writing😉

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Artemisia Pearl
September 17, 2020 00:51

Thank you!!😄

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B. W.
October 12, 2020 23:26

Hey ^^ i'm working on a new novel lately and i could use your help for it, if thats alright with you?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 13, 2020 02:22

Of course! Whatcha need!

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B. W.
October 13, 2020 02:24

I need help with the romance, though could i tell you the plot and stuff so it would be easier for you to help?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 13, 2020 16:27

Of course:)

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B. W.
October 13, 2020 16:32

Here: Mika and Ryder have been best friends for a long time and they kind of have a future to free and save the demi-gods who are kind of enslaved by the mortals and some of the gods which kind of don't like that (Ryder doesn't like it either but he'll change at some point) and so they free Harmony (daughter of iris) and Arren (son of Apollo) and all of them are kind of on the run while trying to stop this enslaving.

what do you think? The characters are all about 18 and i'd wanna get Mika and Harmony together and get Ryder and Arren together.

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Artemisia Pearl
October 15, 2020 12:10

So first of all, is Mika a boy or girl? I've heard both ways, so I'm confused on that. I'd say add another demi-god character. Just to make it even in an odd way. Also you could make that demi god the third wheel.

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Meggy House
October 11, 2020 23:28

Hi Artemisia!
First of all, this was a wonderful story, your writing is so beautiful and suspenseful and I'm super excited for your next part!
Also, is this the right time to say bird beak?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 12, 2020 03:37

It always is! Is there any two specific stories you would suggest or can I read any of them?

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Meggy House
October 12, 2020 13:59

You can read any of them! I will tell you that any of the ones beginning with "Cracked" in the title are sequels (which I did explain in the authors note) and go in a particular order, so if you're going to read any of those I would recommend that you would read the ones prior, but outside of that, anything works!

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B. W.
October 11, 2020 20:19

Hey, what do ya think of the new prompts?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 12, 2020 03:36

I think they are kinda cutesy. Not my favorite tho. Perfect for a romance story, however.

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B. W.
October 12, 2020 03:40

You gonna do one then? maybe you could do a plot twist as well?

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B. W.
October 03, 2020 14:43

Hey, what do you think of this weeks prompts?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 03, 2020 20:52

Like the ones they just sent out?

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B. W.
October 03, 2020 21:03

yeah those ones

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Artemisia Pearl
October 04, 2020 00:40

I think that they are better than last weeks, but not my favorite. I like the ones that are more fantasy, not the sci-fi.

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B. W.
October 04, 2020 00:48

i made a new story ^^ could you go check out "Crossover: the traitor" and leave some feedback?

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Artemisia Pearl
October 05, 2020 12:55

I sure can!

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 15:45

I really enjoyed this and ya did a great job with it ^^ i'm not sure if i already checked this one out or not. Though this is still a 10/10 from me :) also could ya check out "Betrayed" and tell me what ya think?

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Artemisia Pearl
September 25, 2020 16:07

Thanks! I will check it out after my ELA quiz.

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 16:08

No prob and alright ^^

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Roger Scypion
February 26, 2023 02:33

Great story, very intriguing with a well delivered, anticipatory plot leading to more.

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Aman Fatima
March 03, 2021 17:42

Interesting story!!
I'm really invested in the story now. What happens next?? Part 2?

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Ariadne .
October 25, 2020 02:14

This is such a beautiful story. The descriptions were amazing and I felt swept into the tale. I can't wait for the next installment!
Also, am I supposed to say bird beak now?
P.S. I LOVE your name. Mind if I use it in a story? It's so unique and pretty. :)

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Felicity Anne
October 21, 2020 19:21

Wonderful job, Arte! I really enjoyed the suspense in this one! I hope there's going to be a part two! There were a few grammatical errors I saw that I'd thought I'd let you know about:

They led me to a different part of the room, and forced me to sit in a chair. - remove the comma after 'room'

Someone took the sack off of my head and the room had one light, and was barely brighter than the sack that was over my head. - remove the comma after 'light'

Wesley nodded, but gave me a quick grin that made my heart flutter, before leaving the room. - remove the comma after 'nodded'

"We are not friends." - replace the period with a comma

He leaned in so close to me, that I could smell the stank of his breath. - replace 'stank' with 'stink'

Since my ankles weren't strapped down, I scooted myself backwards and away from Brennan. - replace 'backwards' with 'backward'

"I'll do it, Miss." - replace the period with a comma

He walked over to me and flipped open a pocked knife. - replace 'pocked' with 'pocket'

The only furniture that was there was the two chairs and a table. - remove the 'the' between 'was' and 'chairs'

There was no decor, and no windows. - remove the comma after 'decor'

I sit in the chair for a moment, pondering my past hour, when the light shut off. - replace 'shut' with 'shuts'

They put the bag back over my head, and tied my arms before I could escape their grasp. - remove the comma after 'head'

I'm not trying to hurt your feelings or discourage you by pointing these things out to you, only trying to help you improve as a writer. ;) Wonderful job! Keep up the good work!

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Artemisia Pearl
October 22, 2020 11:41

Thank you!!

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Ari Berri
November 19, 2020 16:17

This is awesome!

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Artemisia Pearl
November 19, 2020 18:39

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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Artemisia Pearl
November 19, 2020 18:39

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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Ari Berri
November 19, 2020 18:46

No problem.

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