Vlad

Horror Speculative Suspense

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with a character letting go of something, or deciding to keep it." as part of What We Carry.

Walt watched from the kitchen window and let his coffee go cold in his fist.

Below him, Jacob sat cross-legged in the grass. The dog sat beside him, black and still. Neither moved. The boy's hand lay flat on the dog's back, and both heads turned together, slow, tracking something in the treeline Walt couldn't see.

Ten minutes. Not one sound.

When Walt was ten, this same yard had been a racetrack. His father's hounds wore ruts in the dirt chasing nothing at all. Jacob sat beside a dog that had never once chased a stick. Walt drained the cold coffee anyway and opened the back door.

"Jacob. Breakfast."

The boy stood. The dog stood. They came up the porch steps in step, two left feet, two left feet.

----

Eggs and toast. The dog lay by the back door and watched. It never begged. Duke had been a criminal at the table, a mooch with a felon's grin. This one kept its chin on the floorboards, patient as furniture, its eyes on Jacob and nothing else.

Duke's collar still lived in the junk drawer, under the twist ties. Some mornings Walt took it out and rubbed the worn brass tag with his thumb. He'd meant to throw it away a dozen times. His hand never finished the job.

"What's the rule?" Walt said.

"Stay out of the water." Jacob forked his eggs. "And tell you where I'm going. I know the rules, Dad. Duke taught me."

The mug stopped halfway to Walt's mouth.

"Duke?"

Jacob looked at the dog. The dog looked at Jacob. Something passed between them with no sound in it.

"He doesn't come to that name anymore," Jacob said. "He comes to Vlad."

"Vlad." The word sat in Walt's mouth like a pebble bitten into bread. "Since when?"

"Since the pond." Jacob went back to his eggs. "Since always, I guess."

By the door, the black tail thumped the floorboards once. One beat. Measured. Like an answer.

Walt set the mug down. The ceramic rattled against the table, and he put both hands flat to quiet it.

Two years since the pond. Two years since the boy went under and the dog went in after him and only one of them came out.

He had begged the water that day, on his knees in the mud, and the water had answered. He was still learning the price.

----

April brought the birds back loud. Walt was re-nailing a porch rail when a fawn stepped out of the treeline, all spots and elbows, and folded itself into the raspberry canes at the garden's edge.

Jacob crouched ten feet off. He didn't move. Neither did the black shape sunning beside him.

The fawn pulled a cane down and nibbled.

Vlad crossed the yard. No growl. No bark. No hurry. One grab, one shake, a sound like a wet branch snapping, and the morning went still. Even the birds quit.

"Jacob!"

Walt was over the rail and halfway across the grass before his brain caught up. The fawn lay twisted in the dirt, one hoof raised. Its ribs worked twice. Then they didn't. Walt knelt and touched its side. Still warm. Vlad sat beside the body with his tongue out, and the blood on his muzzle.

Jacob stood and brushed dew off his knees.

Walt took his son by the shoulders. "Are you hurt? Did it touch you?"

"It wasn't close enough."

"It was a baby. It was eating berries."

"It came toward me." Jacob said it like a math fact. "Vlad doesn't take chances."

"Chances." Walt's voice climbed. "It had spots."

"He didn't know that."

"He knew. Dogs know."

"Look at me. Does any of this bother you?"

Jacob glanced at the fawn. Then at the dog. The dog's head tilted. Jacob's tilted after it, same angle, same lag, and Walt couldn't say which of them was copying which.

"You weren't supposed to see," Jacob said. "He does it far away. Usually."

Walt's hands were still on the boy's shoulders. He let go.

----

The shovel came out of the shed. Walt dug past the garden, at the treeline, and the turned earth smelled like rain. Vlad lay at the edge of the hole and supervised every shovelful.

Duke's whole career had been one live gopher, carried proudly to the porch for applause.

Jacob came to the edge of the hole. "I can help fill it."

"Go wash up."

"Are you mad at him?"

Walt looked at the dog. The dog looked back, tail beating its single slow measure.

"No," he said. It came out smooth, and that scared him more than the kill had.

Jacob went inside. He didn't look back at the fawn.

Two years of far away. Walt did the math against his will: every dusk outside, every stillness in the woods. He looked up from the grave into the trees.

Quiet. Full.

----

The bus took Jacob at seven-forty. By eight, Walt was at the pond.

The water lay flat and muddy. The winter had pulled the bank down, and the dead willow's roots stood out of the mud like ribs. Something glinted between them.

A tobacco tin, rusted at the hinges. Inside, wrapped in stiff oilcloth, a dime-store tablet. Pencil, half of it water-stained to nothing.

June 1931. The dog came home three days after we buried it. It lets nothing living near Ruthie. She claps her hands and calls it a miracle.

August. She has stopped clapping. She sits at the water and tells it things. Her mother's mouth. A stranger's eyes.

The last entry was pressed so hard the pencil had torn the page.

If anyone finds this, it is not a dog. Send it back to the water before the child is all used up.

Walt sat down in the mud. How many had knelt at this bank before him?

His grandmother had a sister nobody mentioned. A girl in one photograph, cut out of every other one. Scissors, neat and patient, through a whole album.

Ruthie.

----

Saturday, Walt opened the truck door and whistled.

Vlad crossed the yard and jumped in. Duke had hated the truck, had to be bribed with bologna. This one rode shotgun and watched the road, a man catching a ride to work.

Thirty miles. Past the county line, past the river, to a gravel pull-off at the edge of state land.

"Out," Walt said.

The dog dropped down. Walt pulled a U-turn and checked the mirror. The black shape sat at the edge of the gravel, smaller and smaller, never once looking away.

He got home at dusk. The porch light was already on.

Jacob sat on the top step. The black dog lay at his feet.

Walt's keys stayed in his fist.

"How."

"He's fast when he wants to be." Jacob picked at a splinter on the step. "You can't leave him somewhere like a bag of kittens, Dad."

"It's good woods. Deer. Water."

"He doesn't care about deer."

"Jacob."

"He asked me what you were doing." The boy looked up. The porch light caught his eyes, and they gave nothing back. "He asked if he should stop you."

The yard went quiet. A bird settled its wings somewhere in the trees.

"I said no." Jacob stood and put his hand on the dog's head. "This time."

The tail thumped the boards. One beat. Measured.

----

Sunday, before light.

Walt whistled like it was any other morning, and Vlad came off the porch and fell in beside him through the woods. The following had a wrong feel to it. Less a walk, more an escort.

At the bank, Walt knelt in the cold mud where he'd knelt two years before.

"Take him back."

The water lay flat. Listening.

"I know what he's costing. Take him back and stop collecting."

The growl came up out of the ground, up through his knees, and Walt had time to think not furniture after all before the teeth found his forearm.

He didn't pull free. He wrapped his other arm around the black neck and leaned for the water, and the dog's whole weight came with him. They went down the bank in a tangle of mud and snapping.

Pain opened his arm to the elbow. He held on. He was bigger than the dog and heavier than the dog and he held on.

"Dad!"

Jacob at the treeline, pajamas and boots, no coat. He was already running.

"Stay back!"

The dog redoubled. The teeth closed again and again, a leg-hold trap working. Walt got one foot in the water. Then a knee. The cold climbed to his waist.

"Duke!" Jacob's voice cracked on it. "Duke! Come here, boy!"

The teeth eased. For one breath the black head swung toward the boy, ears up, and it was Duke's head, Duke's crooked ear, Duke.

The water rose and pulled at them both.

Walt uncurled his fingers, one by one, and let go.

No splash. The pond settled, flat and brown, like a mouth closing.

He crawled out on the one arm that still worked and lay in the mud, breathing.

----

Jacob didn't speak on the walk back. Halfway he took Walt's good hand, and his fingers were small and warm and they didn't let go.

Eleven stitches. The scar healed into a rope of it, wrist to elbow.

That evening Walt took Duke's collar from the junk drawer and stood over the trash a long minute. His hand didn't finish the job this time either.

Instead he nailed the collar to the porch post, where a good dog's collar belongs.

Jacob watched from the steps, blanket around his shoulders, tear tracks drying. First tears in two years.

"Can we get a cat?"

Walt laughed until the stitches pulled. "We'll see, kiddo."

Inside, he made eggs and toast.

Nobody watched the door.

Posted Aug 25, 2026
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August 26, 2026 05:39

I really enjoyed the atmosphere you created around the pond and in the woods, and the slow-building sense of mystery and unease. Vlad was a truly memorable and chilling character. I liked how you crafted him as more than just a dog, making him both a protector and a source of danger. The way you explored grief and healing through the relationship between Walt, Jacob, and the dog was moving and felt very real. The ending was powerful and touching. I liked how letting go of Vlad at the pond and Duke's brief return allowed Walt and Jacob to finally begin healing after so much tension and uncertainty. Great work!

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Jim LaFleur
August 26, 2026 06:29

Thank you, Veronika! I always love your feedback!

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August 26, 2026 06:42

You're welcome.

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