The shape-shifter.

Fantasy

Written in response to: "Write about someone who has a superpower." as part of Superpower.

She radiated light just like her name. Her beautiful skin glistened in the neon light coming from the paved court through the slits in the blind, her soot-black lashes matted, and her gray beady eyes mischievous more than ever. Her long jet black hair fell in loose waves past her shoulders, with a few black peekaboo strands. “Haya. . . .?” called her mother. She quickly hid her diary under her pillow and marched off to her mother, anxious to see what came next.


Dear diary,

Ma still doesn’t know of my shape-shifting. It has been three days since I last changed shape. I changed into Yusuf, my brother last time because he knows. How funny it was when I became a young boy, dressed loosely in a drab green T-shirt and baggy green trousers. I had a green army jacket tied around my waist and a green canvas bag slung over my shoulder. The only non-green thing about me was the pair of scruffy black walking boots on my feet. Do you know as to why did I change into him? It is because he was having a high degree of fever. Very high! And, he couldn’t attend his school’s function in such a condition. Could he?


“Ma, you called?” asked Haya.


“Yes. Could you please peel the potatoes and chop the onions.”


Oh, no. Not the chores again! She visualized of being a cat and . . . . Woah, her powers never disappointed her. Smiling, she meowed and left the scene.


“Haya. . . .? Where’d she go?”


Haya was strolling around on the newly paved street, as a cat of course when she saw him. There was her uncle. He wasn’t as slight as Haya first thought him to be: he wasn’t exactly muscular, but he wasn’t weedy-looking either…there was an air of hidden strength about him, a graceful strength that showed in his balance, the way he held himself, the way he walked. . . . Changing appearance, she approached him. 

“Hello!” 

“Hello,” he replied, his voice hoarse. But, without saying anything further, he vanished into thin air, leaving not even a trace behind him. So her powers were definitely genetic. 


Dear diary,

My powers are proving to be no good to me. Except for helping in avoiding the hectic house chores, of course. Oh, I hope I get to be Maryse Rills tomorrow. The center of attention in our class. Good night.”


Haya woke up to something really strange. She wasn’t feeling like herself at all. Her blond hair was suddenly a different color. She bounced off her bed and headed over to the mirror, anxious to see what the matter was. She gasped. Her wish had been heard. There, in front of her stood Maryse Rills. No wonder she was called the “star" – her amber eyes shone like orbs in the night. Her hair, deep hues of fierce crimson against her angelic face Haya smirked. Things were about to get spiced up!


At her school, things kept going on crazily in her favor. Maryse was on leave and so the people who once followed Maryse now followed her. Haya never thought that her dream would come true in such a way. The dance crew captain arrived. 

”Maryse? Will you be coming for the practice this afternoon?” 

“Of course, I will.”

“What happened to your voice?”

Instead of replying to the unexpected question, Haya quickly hurried away.


Back at her home, she changed back to her usual self. She kept on playing and then replaying her day’s highlights. She was smiling to herself when her mother arrived. 


“You always get away with the chores one way or the other. But, today. The chores have arrived for you themselves. Chop the onions! Quick. Quick. . .”


“Ma. . . I’m really tired. I promise I’ll do the chores once I wake after taking an afternoon nap.”


“No! You’re doing the chores, now!”


Defeated, she got busy with the work. Chop, chop, chop. . . Peel, peel, peel . . . Chop, chop, chop. . . Peel, peel, peel . . .


The sunlight poured into her room through the crevices of her room’s window. A brand new day meant a brand new appearance. . . . She had never tried to pull off an appearance in front of her Abba. She thought of Mina, the new neighbor, and her mum. Abba detested them for their never-ending talks. What if Haya changed into Mina this time? She giggled, Abba was about to get furious.


Abba arrived late that afternoon, around 7:05. But, Haya was already ‘in Mina’s shoes.’ She now had bright, dark eyes and satiny brown skin. She wore a pale blue hoodie with grey capri pants. Her eyes were Fremen blue, staring out of a soft, round face. 

“Hello. . .” she began, hoping Abba wouldn’t recognize her.

 “Hello. . . .young lady.” He smiled.

 Young lady? Was her secret out, already? Her heart started sinking. Nevertheless, she continued. 

“Uncle, I’m here to meet Haya. Is she at home?” 

“She is everywhere but home, young lady.”

Haya’s face turned pale. Everywhere but home? So, they all knew it. Yusuf must’ve given her away. She wanted to cry. 

“All good, young lady?” Abba wasn’t going to go easy.

“Yessir,” and she quickly left the house.

Once outside, she breathed heavily. How dare they play with her emotions? She wanted to shout at the top of her lungs at the sudden betrayal. But then again, why did she expect them to be fair with her when she, herself had been playing with their emotions. A wave of guilt passed over her like fog on a beach party.

Guilt-stricken, she headed home.


Who would Haya want to be now? There was a long queue of people for Haya to change appearance into. 

Yusuf – done.

Mina—done.

Maryse—done.

An animal—done.

Abba—nope.

Ma—nope.

Amena— . . . .? Oh, how had she forgotten Amena?


She was about to shape-shift into Amena when suddenly there was a. . . Whoosh. Haya was now drenched in ice-cold water. “Hello, hello? My daughter is dreaming of having a superpower again?” her Mom smirked. The bucket of cold water, still in her hand.


Dreaming . . . ? Had this been a dream all along? Oh, no! Not again.

Posted Jun 29, 2020
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Elis I.
July 05, 2020 01:32

aaahhh it was but a dream... i absolutely loved this, especially the way you described the characters!

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Batool Hussain
July 05, 2020 05:24

Thank you so much. It means a lot!

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Jen Park
July 04, 2020 23:37

It kept my focus from beginning to the end! It was a pleasant read. Thank you for sharing it with us!

The ending was quite unexpected. I loved the last "not again" because it nicely displayed the character of the protagonist. I think it also would have been nice if you wrote this in second person.

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Batool Hussain
July 05, 2020 05:25

I'm planning to write my next story in second person so it would be great if you give it a read:)

Also thank you so much for reading and liking this story!

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Jen Park
July 05, 2020 07:44

Oh! I really look forward to it:)
And thank you very much for sharing your story as well!

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Batool Hussain
July 05, 2020 14:00

I just posted it. If you don't mind, would you share your views on it?

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April Summers
July 04, 2020 18:22

I really liked this. It was fun and creative. I laughed when her mom splashed water on her and that she'd just been dreaming :)

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Batool Hussain
July 05, 2020 05:34

Thank you so much. It means a lot !

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Emma Lin
July 04, 2020 17:19

I wish that I had shift-shaping powers to avoid my chores and homework! Nice job with the story. The ending was unexpected.

Thanks for liking my story! :)

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Batool Hussain
July 04, 2020 17:23

Thank you so much for liking the story.
And you're welcome:)

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Emma Lin
July 04, 2020 17:35

:D

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Swati Sharma
July 04, 2020 08:31

wonderful story!

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Batool Hussain
July 04, 2020 08:44

Thanks

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Arya Preston
July 03, 2020 18:33

First of all, the beginning was beautifully described, I love the imagery with all the light and colour - it really helped paint the character and scene. I'm not sure if anyone pointed it out but I feel as though there are too many ellipses. I find that excessively using them could distract readers. I suggest when writing about hesitation or pauses to use action beats, that way it also builds the scene! Overall, I really enjoyed the story :D

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Batool Hussain
July 04, 2020 05:59

Thank you🌸

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Arya Preston
July 04, 2020 06:02

No problem! Could you please read my story if you get the time?

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Batool Hussain
July 04, 2020 07:00

Sure. If you don't mind I'll do that in a while.

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Jessie Nice
July 03, 2020 08:53

This is a very cute story. Her mum clearly knows her daughter too well ;)

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Batool Hussain
July 03, 2020 08:54

Aww, thank you so much:)

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July 03, 2020 07:17

Hi Batool!
GREAT story! Your stories are really good! The ending was unexpected!

Keep writing and have a great day Batool! :))))

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Batool Hussain
July 03, 2020 07:23

Thank you so much!
Have a great day:)

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Angelina Valencia
July 02, 2020 16:44

Wow, i almost hate you for how you ended it :). Lol, I'm kidding, I really loved the story! You really have some true skills!

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Batool Hussain
July 02, 2020 16:46

I'm glad that you liked it! However, you worried me up a bit. Was the ending too obvious which made you not like it? Please give your true opinion. It'll be highly appreciated. Thanks:)

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Angelina Valencia
July 02, 2020 16:53

It wasn't obvious at all! I do like it! I actually love it! I was joking and its hard to sound sarcastic on here but that's what I was going for, I loved the way you ended it and it made the story even better how she was dreaming the entire time! You did a great job overall!

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Batool Hussain
July 02, 2020 16:56

Oh, thank you so much. So glad that you liked it!

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Jordan De La Garza
July 02, 2020 07:47

What a fun story! Who wouldn't do what Haya does with shape-shifting powers? One thing that I would love is if you could also describe the height and the weight of the people she transforms into, just to show how different their forms are. Or maybe something about how Haya starts to forget what she looks like. Your writing is light and fun, definitely a lovely read!

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Batool Hussain
July 02, 2020 08:12

Thanks for the feedback, Jordan!

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Jordan De La Garza
July 02, 2020 08:55

Please let me know what you think of my stories too! I'd love to hear your opinion ^_^

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Batool Hussain
July 02, 2020 11:19

Sure!

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Ayla W
July 02, 2020 05:24

Wow, Batool! An amazing story🌻

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Batool Hussain
July 02, 2020 05:33

Thank you🌸

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June 30, 2020 15:43

Hey, Batool! You asked me to give you feedback, so here I am! :)
I really liked the moral of the dream. I really loved that it was all a dream and that it wasn't the first time; very cute! I can't wait to read more of your works! Keep writing and stay safe! :) -Brooke

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Batool Hussain
June 30, 2020 15:45

Aww, thank you so very much, Brooke. Can't wait for more of you works either:)

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June 30, 2020 15:51

You're welcome! :)

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Sparrowhaven Press
June 29, 2020 22:37

I liked the detailed descriptions of characters! But it was a bit sad that she was only dreaming

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Batool Hussain
June 30, 2020 04:24

:(

Thanks for the feedback though🙃

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Sparrowhaven Press
June 30, 2020 14:13

you're welcome!

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July 09, 2020 18:39

Nice story! Wold you mind checking out mine? If you leave some feedback I would really appreciate it!

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Batool Hussain
July 10, 2020 06:01

Thank you! I've already given feedback on your story:)

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Adah M.M
July 16, 2020 08:07

This is beautifully written. I didn't even expect the ending

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Batool Hussain
July 16, 2020 09:08

Ahaha! Thanks:)

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Eric Smiley
July 06, 2020 22:10

Lots of fun, good story, I also wondered how jet black long hair became blonde hair which became a different color.

Because I my "Waiting" story I must tell you how this is the best story ever, and ask how many books you've published. I will also offer you money and sexual favors in the story and make up responses for you.

Please accept my true gratitude for your fine work.

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Rafeeq TK
January 10, 2021 17:01

It flows very smoothly...

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August 11, 2020 20:24

Great story! I particularly liked the part where my name was mentioned. (Even if it wasn't spelt the same...)

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Batool Hussain
August 12, 2020 04:18

Hehe! Glad that u liked it:)

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J.L. Schuhle
August 10, 2020 01:55

I enjoyed your approach to this prompt. A day in a life of an average girl with a special gift (at least in her head) and what common teenage problems she would solve with it. I especially enjoyed the end- as an avid day dreamer myself, i know it is easy to get carried away. Very relatable and spirited. Thanks for sharing!

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Keerththan 😀
July 23, 2020 14:44

What an ending! Never expected. Nice story and I loved it thoroughly. Waiting for more of yours.

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Batool Hussain
July 24, 2020 05:30

Thanks.

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Orenda .
July 22, 2020 11:51

I legit didn't expect the ending to turn out like that and I found Haya really cute hehe...Good Job
Would you mind giving a feedback on my new story? Thanks💚

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Batool Hussain
July 22, 2020 13:43

Thanks. And, sure;)

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Orenda .
July 22, 2020 13:44

thanks a lot!!

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