Afternoon Pick Me Up

Coming of Age Fantasy Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a magical being or creature." as part of Everyday Enchantment with Lynn D. Jung.

I am Tempus, appearing to mortals as a vintage walnut clock hanging directly over the espresso bar. Zahra is a kind, patient college student constantly working double shifts. My purpose is to slow down the rush of time so she can truly embrace each moment without rushing or burning out.

On the surface, this neighborhood coffee shop sells lattes and drip coffee. However, between crunches of freshly ground beans and hisses of the steam wand, Zahra and I quietly weave stolen, stretched-out pockets of minutes directly into the brews. A single sip of her signature drink softens the frantic calls of the outside world, magically expanding a customer’s rushed five-minute break into one hour of unhurried moments of pure peace.

During a quiet Tuesday afternoon, the brass bell above the door jingled as Zahra’s mother, Amara, stepped inside to drop off a forgotten cardigan, only to freeze mid-stride by the pastry case. The shop was empty, so Zahra let her guard down, and the impossible secret was laid bare: two silver pitchers hovered three inches above the drip tray, quietly frothing almond milk in midair inside a localized loop of suspended seconds, while Zahra calmly wiped down the counter at triple speed. Before her mother could drop the sweater in absolute shock, I caught my heavy brass pendulum between two invisible fingers, locking the room in a golden stillness and extending the silent cafe threshold to grant her one single wish across time.

The dust motes above the espresso bar halted their lazy descent, glowing like captured fireflies in the afternoon light. Zahra froze with a damp microfiber cloth gripped in her fist, her wide eyes darting from the floating pitchers to her mom, then up toward my walnut perch on the wall. For five decades, I have watched humans offered endless possibilities stumble over their own greed—wishing for mountains of coin, the reversal of old regrets, or the power to rewrite history itself. Yet, Zahra’s mother simply exhaled a breath she seemed to have been carrying for twenty years, looked past the floating items, and stared at the dark circles resting beneath her daughter's eyes.

Given the chance to wish for anything, Amara set the folded cardigan down onto an empty wooden table, walked behind the counter, and whispered her demand into the stillness. She asked only for a single, infinite afternoon—an interval that would allow mother and daughter to sit side by side over two warm mugs of vanilla chai without the outside world knocking on the glass. I let my pendulum settle into brass agreement, locking the golden quiet firmly into place. Zahra tapped the steam wand back down with a natural click and pulled two matching ceramic mugs from the rack, finally letting time take a break for the two of them.

From my post, I watched the steam curl from the two cups, coiling into air that refused to let it dissipate. Zahra carried both mugs to the corner booth by the window, setting one down before Amara with an uneasy gentleness. The silence between them wasn’t cold, but it carried the brittle weight of weeks spent trading rushed voicemails and polite, one-word reassurances.

"You didn't return my call on Sunday," Amara said softly, wrapping fingers around the ceramic handle. There was no anger in her voice, only the tired ache of a mother who had been left staring at a glowing screen, wondering if her daughter had eaten dinner.

Zahra slumped back against the leather cushions, her rigid posture finally easing. "I got off at nine, Mom. By the time I finished my anatomy reading, it was past midnight. I didn't want to wake you." She stared down into the cinnamon that sprinkled her chai. "I feel like if I stop moving for ten minutes, everything I'm working toward is just going to fall apart."

Amara reached across the narrow table, placing her palm over Zahra’s trembling hand. Outside the window, a cyclist remained tilted mid-turn and an oak leaf hovered motionless above the sidewalk, but inside, the tension began to loosen. "You’re running so fast trying to build a life that you aren't living one, baby," Amara whispered. For the first time in months, Zahra didn't check the digital watch on her wrist or glance at the ticket machine. She simply let out a shuddering breath, gripped her mother’s hands in return, and took her first slow, unhurried sip.

Minutes drifted past without a single tick to claim them. They talked through the small things first—the quiet humor of burnt scones, the quirky neighborhood regulars who ordered triple-shot espressos at dawn, and the anatomy chapters Zahra had reread three times just to make the terminology stick. Then, layer by layer, the deeper fatigue melted away. Amara spoke of her own young adulthood, of the mistakes she made thinking endurance was the only virtue worth practicing, while Zahra listened without the phantom itch of an interrupting alarm calling her to be somewhere else.

Zahra looked past her mother toward the front window. A pigeon was suspended three feet above the asphalt, wings flared wide in mid-glide. A golden retriever was frozen mid-stride beside an owner whose disposable cup tilted dangerously in hand, not a single droplet spilling onto the concrete. Held back by brass and grace, the responsibilities of the world were waiting for them.

"I forgot what quiet actually sounds like," Zahra murmured, inhaling and smiling. The purple shadows under her eyes hadn't vanished, but the tightness in her jaw had completely softened.

Amara smiled, reaching out to trace the rim of her own cup. She gave a single, knowing nod—the unmistakable signal that the gift had served its true purpose. I loosened the invisible grip on my pendulum, and a deep, clear chime broke the silence.

Outside, the leaf drifted down to meet the pavement, the cyclist finished his smooth bank around the corner, and the pigeon snapped its wings into a landing atop the bakery across the street. Inside the cafe, the coolers buzzed back to life, the two silver milk pitchers settled onto the counter with a gentle tap, and the brass bell over the door gave a cheerful ring as the five o'clock rush began. Zahra stood, smoothing down her apron with calm, steady hands, ready for the world to start turning again. 

Posted Aug 21, 2026
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Elizabeth Hoban
August 26, 2026 13:13

This is such a beautiful story about simply wanting to spend more time with our loved ones. Gorgeously rendered and full of heart. So odd too, because I am literally sitting in a coffee shop as I read this, and now I find myself looking around for Zahra, but more importantly - a walnut clock with a pendulum that at any moment could stop time and grant me the gift of slowing down. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!

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DeSean Develle
August 26, 2026 18:38

Thank you so much for taking the "time" to read:) yes thats what inspired the story, just wanting more hours in the day to just embrace the moments. How ironic that you are sitting in a coffee shop, if you find Tempus, please ,let me know I need to pay him a visit myself! LOL

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