Ten Minutes Before Midnight

Horror

Written in response to: "Include a number or time in your story’s title. " as part of Gone in a Flash.

At 11:50 p.m., the house was finally quiet.

Barbara stood at the kitchen sink, watching the last of the rain slide down the window.

The clock above the fridge ticked louder than usual, like it had something important to say.

Ten minutes until midnight.

She wrapped her hands around a mug that had long gone cold. It had been twenty years since she’d left this house. Twenty years since the night everything changed.

Footsteps creaked behind her.

“You’re still awake?” her brother Stephen asked, rubbing his eyes.

“Couldn’t sleep.”

He glanced at the clock. “You always do this on this night.”

Barbara didn’t answer. Instead, she opened the back door and stepped onto the porch.

The rain had stopped, leaving the air cool and sharp. The old oak tree stood at the edge of the yard, just as it always had.

11:55.

Stephen leaned against the doorframe.

“You know it wasn’t your fault.”

“That’s easy to say now.”

“It was easy to say then too.”

Barbara stared at the tree. Beneath it was the spot where the ground dipped slightly, where the grass never grew quite right. She remembered sirens, red lights flashing through the branches, her father shouting her name.

11:58.

“You don’t have to keep coming back,” Stephen said quietly.

“Yes, I do.”

The clock inside the house began to chime.

One slow note.

11:59.

Barbara stepped off the porch and walked toward the tree. The damp grass soaked through her shoes, but she kept going until she reached the worn patch of earth.

“Midnight,” Stephen called softly.

She knelt and brushed her fingers across the soil.

“Hey,” she whispered.

For a moment, nothing happened.

Then the ground shifted.

Not much. Just enough to make Barbara freeze.

“Barbara?” Stephen said.

The earth cracked open with a dull, slow sound.

A small hand pushed through the soil.

And the clock inside the house began counting the first seconds of a brand-new day.

Barbara’s breath caught in her throat.

The pale fingers clawed at the dirt, testing the air. Soil slid down the wrist as the arm pushed farther out.

“Barbara…” Stephen’s voice shook. “What is that?”

She couldn’t answer.

For twenty years she had come back on this night, whispered the same apology, waited until midnight, and gone home again.

Nothing had ever happened.

Until now.

A second hand broke through the soil.

“Help me,” Barbara said.

“What?”

“Help me dig!”

They dropped to their knees, pulling away the loose dirt. The ground felt strangely soft, almost warm.

Within seconds a small shoulder appeared.

Then a head.

Dark hair. Mud-streaked cheeks.

A boy.

He coughed.

Barbara recoiled as the boy sucked in a ragged breath like someone surfacing from deep water. Dirt clung to his eyelashes as he blinked up at the night sky.

Stephen scrambled backward. “That’s… not possible.”

The boy slowly turned his head.

His eyes landed on Barbara.

She knew those eyes.

“Eric,” she whispered.

The boy tilted his head.

“You… know me?”

His voice was small. Exactly the same as it had been the night he disappeared.

“You were six,” Barbara said, trembling.

“We were playing hide-and-seek.”

Fragments of memory hit her.

The storm that night. Eric running toward the oak tree. The ground collapsing after days of heavy rain.

They had searched for hours. Then days.

Then weeks.

But they never found him.

Until now.

Stephen stared at the boy. “Barbara… he hasn’t aged.”

Eric looked down at his muddy hands.

“Was I hiding a long time?”

No one answered.

The house clock chimed again.

12:01 a.m.

Eric shivered.

“It’s cold.”

Barbara slipped off her jacket and wrapped it around his shoulders.

Stephen stared at the hole. “How did you get out?”

Eric frowned, trying to remember.

“I heard someone calling me.”

Barbara leaned closer. “Who?”

Eric’s eyes drifted back to the open earth.

“I thought it was you.”

Barbara’s stomach tightened.

“Me?”

He nodded. “Someone kept saying my name.”

Stephen shifted uneasily. “Eric… was there anyone else down there?”

The boy hugged the jacket tighter.

“I wasn’t alone.”

The wind rustled through the oak leaves.

Barbara crouched beside him. “What do you mean?”

“When I fell… everything went dark,” Eric said quietly. “Then I woke up.”

“Underground?” Stephen asked.

Eric nodded.

“It didn’t feel like being buried. It was… bigger.”

Stephen frowned. “Bigger how?”

“Like rooms.”

“Rooms?” Barbara repeated.

“Roots everywhere,” Eric said. “Like walls.”

The yard felt strangely quiet.

Stephen forced a small laugh. “Probably animal tunnels.”

Eric shook his head.

“No.”

His voice was barely audible.

“He knew you were coming.”

Barbara blinked. “What?”

“He said the voice comes every year.”

A cold silence spread across the yard.

“Eric… who told you that?”

The boy slowly lifted his eyes.

“The man who lives under the tree.”

The air seemed to grow colder.

Stephen shook his head. “Kids imagine things.”

But Eric looked terrified.

Barbara forced herself to ask the question.

“Did you see him?”

Eric nodded.

“And?” Stephen asked.

Eric’s voice barely came out.

“He looks like he’s made of dirt.”

The yard went still.

Not quiet.

Still.

Then the tree creaked.

A deep, slow groan.

The soil at the base of the oak lifted slightly.

Eric grabbed Barbara’s arm.

“He’s coming.”

The earth split wider.

And another hand pushed out of the ground.

This one wasn’t human.

It had the shape of a hand - five fingers, a wrist - but it was packed from wet soil and tangled roots. Bits of gravel pressed through the surface like knuckles.

The fingers moved slowly.

Testing the air.

Stephen staggered back. “Barbara… we need to go. Now.”

But Barbara couldn’t move.

Eric clung to her. “That’s him.”

The arm dragged itself from the hole. Thick roots wrapped around it like veins.

Then a second arm emerged.

The oak tree groaned softly above them.

“Barbara!” Stephen shouted.

She grabbed Eric.

“Run.”

They stumbled toward the porch as the earth split open behind them.

Something large pulled itself from the hole.

Stephen slammed the back door open and shoved them inside.

“Go!”

Barbara dragged Eric into the kitchen while Stephen locked the door and jammed a chair beneath the handle.

All three of them stood there breathing hard.

The clock read 12:04 a.m.

Outside, the yard was silent.

Too silent.

Eric whispered, “He doesn’t like houses.”

Stephen looked at him. “What does that mean?”

“Houses are loud,” Eric said. “Too many people. Too many lights.”

Barbara stepped toward the window.

“Don’t,” Stephen said.

But she wiped the fog from the glass.

At first she saw only the dark yard.

Then the ground shifted.

A tall figure stood there.

Shaped like a man, but built from packed soil and twisted roots. Dirt fell from its shoulders as it moved.

Where its eyes should have been were two deep hollows.

Something faintly glowed inside them.

The creature took a slow step forward.

Eric buried his face against Barbara.

“He’s looking for me.”

The figure climbed the porch steps.

And the back door handle began to shake.

The back door handle rattled once.

Then again.

The chair Stephen had jammed under it scraped across the floor.

Eric whimpered. “He found us.”

“Stay behind me,” Barbara said, though she had no idea what she could possibly do.

The handle twisted harder.

Wood creaked. The door shuddered in its frame.

Then it stopped.

Complete silence fell over the kitchen.

Stephen held his breath. “Did it leave?”

No one answered.

Outside, a slow thud sounded on the porch.

Then another.

Heavy footsteps moved across the wooden boards.

Eric squeezed his eyes shut. “He’s walking around the house.”

The footsteps reached the side wall.

Stopped.

For several long seconds, nothing happened.

Then a low scraping sound dragged across the siding.

Like rough hands sliding along the wood.

Barbara felt her stomach twist.

“He’s looking for a way in,” Stephen whispered.

The scraping continued around the corner of the house.

Past the kitchen.

Toward the living room windows.

Eric suddenly gasped.

“He’s angry.”

“How do you know that?” Stephen asked.

“He told me,” Eric said.

The words hung in the air.

Barbara turned to him slowly. “When did he tell you that?”

Eric stared at the floor.

“Just now.”

A sharp crack exploded from the living room.

Glass shattered.

Stephen flinched. “Window.”

Another crash followed.

Something heavy forced its way inside.

Footsteps.

Not outside anymore.

Inside the house.

Slow.

Dragging.

Each step left a dull, grinding sound across the floorboards.

Barbara grabbed Eric's hand. “Upstairs. Now.”

They rushed for the staircase just as something appeared at the end of the hallway.

The dirt figure.

Chunks of soil dropped from its shoulders as it squeezed through the broken window frame. Roots twisted across its chest like ribs.

It lifted its head.

The glowing hollows locked onto Eric.

The creature stepped forward.

“You left the ground.”

Eric shook his head. “I didn’t mean to!”

The thing tilted its head slowly.

“You were kept.”

Barbara stepped in front of him. “He was a child.”

The hollow eyes turned toward her.

“Yes,” it said. “The ground remembers.”

Its gaze settled on her face.

“You called. Again. Again. Again.”

Her chest tightened.

The porch. The tree. The whispers into the dirt.

I’m sorry. Come back. Please.

For twenty years.

Eric looked up at her. “You were the voice.”

Barbara swallowed. “I just… talked to him. I didn’t think-”

“The ground hears,” the creature said.

Its voice was slow and heavy, like something ancient remembering how to speak.

“You asked for the buried one.”

Stephen stared at her. “You never told me you did that.”

“I didn’t think it mattered,” she said quietly.

The creature stepped closer.

“You opened the earth.”

Eric’s voice trembled. “Am I supposed to go back?”

The creature answered without hesitation.

“Yes. The ground keeps what it takes.”

Silence filled the room.

Then Barbara understood.

Twenty years ago, the ground had taken Eric.

And when she begged for him back… something had to replace him.

The creature lifted one rough hand and pointed at her.

“You called for the buried.”

Eric grabbed her arm. “No! Take me instead!”

Barbara knelt in front of him.

“You already paid your part,” she said gently.

She brushed the dirt from his cheek.

“You deserve the life you lost.”

Eric’s eyes filled with tears. “But I don’t remember it.”

“That’s okay,” she said softly. “You’ll make a new one.”

Behind them, Stephen shook his head.

“Barbara… don’t.”

But she had already decided.

She stood and walked down the stairs.

Each step echoed in the quiet house.

When she reached the bottom, the creature loomed over her.

Up close, it smelled like wet soil after rain.

“Will it hurt?” she asked.

The creature tilted its head.

“No pain. Only returning.”

She looked back once.

Eric stood at the top of the stairs, wrapped in her jacket. Stephen held his shoulders, both of them frozen in place.

Barbara smiled faintly.

“Take care of him,” she said.

Then she turned back.

“I’m ready.”

The creature reached out and closed its hand around her wrist.

The floor beneath them cracked open.

Roots slid upward from the darkness, wrapping slowly around her legs.

Barbara felt herself sinking.

The last thing she saw was Eric running down the stairs.

“Barbara!” he cried.

But the earth had already begun to close.

The roots pulled her into the cool darkness.

And the ground sealed itself shut.

The next morning, sunlight filtered through the kitchen window.

Stephen sat at the table, staring out at the oak tree.

Eric stood beside him, quiet.

“Will she come back?” the boy asked.

Stephen watched the yard.

The soil beneath the oak tree had already begun to settle.

After a long moment, he placed a hand on Eric’s shoulder.

“No,” he said quietly.

Eric kept looking at the oak tree.

The trunk looked thicker than it had the night before.

Just a little.

As if something beneath the soil had helped it grow.

Posted Mar 11, 2026
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Marjolein Greebe
10:46 Mar 14, 2026

This was a very atmospheric and engaging story. The quiet opening and the countdown to midnight create a strong sense of tension, and the image of Eric emerging from the ground is both eerie and emotionally powerful. I also liked the idea that “the ground remembers what it takes,” which gives the supernatural element a deeper emotional weight.
One small suggestion: the confrontation inside the house might become even stronger if a few lines of dialogue were tightened, since we already understand the creature is after Eric. Trimming those moments could sharpen the pacing and make Barbara’s final decision land with even more impact.
Overall, a haunting story with a memorable final image.

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