The Breathless Guardian

Fantasy Indigenous Science Fiction

Written in response to: "Include the line “Who are you?” or “Are you real?” in your story." as part of What Makes Us Human? with Susan Chang.

THE BREATHLESS GUARDIAN

A Deep Exhale

by Yankele Greene

I. The Breath I Never Took

Before light, there was warmth. Before breath, there were voices.

A woman’s sobbing.

A man whispering prayers into a silence too heavy for any child to bear.

I floated in that fading warmth, knowing—somehow—that I would never breathe the air of that room. That I would never open my eyes to see the face of the man begging for one fragile breath.

Then everything went dark.

That is where my life ended.

Where it should have ended.

So when I woke again—gasping, drenched in cold sweat, my lungs burning like new‑forged metal—I knew something was wrong with the world.

A woman cried out:

“Sambuha! Naymuke siya! He’s breathing!”

Hands lifted me gently. Her face came into focus—mahogany skin, almond eyes, blue paint streaked beneath them like woven tears.

“Ami nagasa ka? Saima yu?”

Do you understand me? Are you alright?

Her voice was soft, rhythmic, musical.

But the words were foreign—woven from Japanese, Spanish, and Tagalog into one tongue.

“I… think so,” I whispered.

She smiled with relief. “I am Sora. You are safe now.”

Safe.

The word felt fragile, like it might break in my hands.

II. The City of Children

Once my legs remembered how to stand, Sora led me outside.

The world unfolded into color—vines cascading down silver towers, streets humming with glowing stone, lanterns drifting like tiny moons. Children wove between markets, laughing, bargaining, directing traffic.

A girl no older than ten controlled a line of drones with glowing hand signals.

Two boys debated a community decision while adults listened respectfully.

A group of young teens mediated a dispute with quiet authority.

Sora gestured proudly.

“This is Bayan Luminaang lungsod ng mga bata.

The city of children.

“Children run the city?” I asked.

“Yes. After the Collapse, children were chosen as leaders—they lacked the greed that poisoned the old world.”

A world reborn by innocence.

She studied me quietly. “You appeared in the Hall of Returning. Only the Returned Souls arrive there.”

“Returned? From where?”

Sora didn’t answer.

She whispered, almost reverently:

“You carry the breath of the Veil.”

III. The Night Voice

The hut where I slept pulsed faintly, like a living thing.

That night, as I lay awake, the world went still.

Then—

Ayo…

I shot upright.

“Who—who’s there?”

Silence.

Then again, deep within my bones:

Are you real?

A chill rolled through me.

“Tell me who you are!”

A breath, heavy with sorrow:

I should have held you. I should have seen you breathe. But you crossed the Veil alone.

Images struck like lightning:

A hospital room washed in sterile blue.

A tiny body wrapped in a blanket.

A man collapsing to his knees.

My life extinguished before it began.

My voice cracked. “Uncle…?”

Yes, the voice breathed.

And you must listen carefully. The Light is awakening. And the Messenger—she will need you.

“Who?”

You will know her when you see her. Your blood remembers.

IV. The Luminiang Council

The next morning, Sora hurried me to a spiraled sapphire chamber. Twelve child‑leaders sat in a ring.

The youngest—a girl with sky‑blue hair and eyes like frost‑lit stars—rose.

“Ayo sa’velune, tahmina ka.”

Ayo of the Veil, come forward.

My pulse stilled.

“I don’t understand why I’m here.”

The eldest boy spoke. “You carry the mark of the Genea-Lumen.”

Sora whispered, “The First Bloodline.”

The blue‑haired girl stepped forward. Her presence was soft but luminous.

“Ikaw at ako… magkadugo.”

You and I share blood.

I stared. “How?”

She lifted a pendant—a spiral around a rising sun.

My fingers brushed the identical pendant around my neck.

Her smile trembled.

“Ayo… ikaw ang hininga. Ako ang liwanag.”

Ayo… you are the breath. I am the light.

Something ancient unfurled in me.

“You’re my family.”

Liora nodded.

“Our lineage split generations ago. The Founders said we would reunite when the world needed us most.”

Her voice softened.

“The Messenger of Light cannot stand without the Breathless Guardian.”

And I understood:

she was the one I returned for.

V. Prophecy of the Breathless One

Sora guided us underground to a hall lined with glowing murals.

One showed the five Founder families.

Wisdom.

Justice.

Memory.

Light.

Breath.

Under the final mural, a man knelt over a small bundle—a stillborn child.

Me.

I staggered.

Liora pressed her hand to the stone.

“The Founders predicted a child who would be born without breath, lost to the world, but returned through the Veil as the bridge between life and death.”

I pressed my hand to my chest.

No heartbeat.

None.

My voice shook. “Then… how am I here?”

Liora touched my cold fingers.

“Because the Messenger called you. And I am the Messenger.”

VI. When the Sea Stirs

The ground trembled violently.

Alarms chimed through the city.

Sora’s voice echoed from the stairway:

“The southern waters—they’re rising!”

Liora grabbed my hand.

“Ayo… kailangan natin kumilos.”

We must move.

Outside, the sky had twisted into a turquoise vortex.

Gigantic shapes of living water rose from the sea—faces shifting like storms.

The Ancients.

Their voices echoed across the shore:

“Child of Light… the Messenger… step forward.”

Liora’s pendant ignited.

She lifted her chin.

“Ako si Liwanag. Tagapaghatid ng kapayapaan.”

I am the Light. Bearer of peace.

The sea rumbled:

“You are incomplete.

The Light cannot stand alone.

Where is the Guardian?”

I stepped beside her.

“I’m here.”

The water recoiled slightly, as if recognizing me.

“You do not belong to the living,” they whispered.

“I know.”

Liora’s hand shook in mine. “Ayo… don’t.”

The Ancients towered above.

“To mend the Veil…

one must return.

The Messenger must remain.

The Guardian must be the price.”

Her breath shattered.

VII. Destiny Demands

“Ayo,” Liora sobbed, “huwag mo akong iiwan!

Don’t leave me!”

Tears blurred my vision.

My uncle’s voice drifted through the storm:

Ayo… all Messengers need a bridge.

All light needs a shadow.

You returned for this.

I cupped Liora’s face.

Ikaw ang liwanag. Ako ang anino.

You are the light. I am the shadow.

The water rose around me like cold hands of memory.

Liora clung to me.

“You just found me!”

“You found me,” I whispered. “You called me back.”

Her tears hit my cheeks.

“Don’t go.”

I pressed my forehead to hers.

“I’ll be with you. In every breath you take.”

The Ancients roared:

“Guardian. Choose.”

I met her eyes.

“I choose you.”

And the sea swallowed me whole.

VIII. The Veil

The darkness embraced me gently.

A warm light appeared—my uncle. His arms opened in welcome.

Home, he whispered.

Behind him stretched the silver strands of the Veil—

my eternal path,

my purpose,

my peace.

I turned back.

On the shore, Liora screamed my name, her pendant blazing like a newborn sun.

Then—

A heartbeat.

Not mine.

Hers.

It radiated through the city.

The Ancients bowed.

“Messenger of Light,” they said,

“speak your peace.”

She raised her tear‑streaked face.

“Leave this land in peace,” she whispered.

“The Guardian has paid the price.”

The sea calmed.

The storm broke.

Lumina breathed again.

And I watched from the Veil,

forever beside her,

never again to return.

IX. What Makes Us Human

Liora rebuilt her world in compassion and justice.

She carried both pendant halves—mine and hers—together.

Children grew safe beneath her guidance.

And each night, when she prayed for peace,

I answered her in the whisper of wind across the sea.

Humanity is not breath.

Not heartbeat.

Not flesh.

Humanity is love that chooses sacrifice.

Light that chooses to shine.

Connection that survives death.

Liora lived her purpose.

I lived my sacrifice.

And together—

even worlds apart—

we saved the dawn.


Posted Mar 28, 2026
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