In The World Of Shadows

Science Fiction

Written in response to: "Set your story in a town disconnected from the rest of the world. " as part of Connection Lost.

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Posted Oct 12, 2021
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TJ Squared
October 16, 2021 03:50

Super interesting story; I regret not reading it sooner! The fact that the shadows could apply to a human was an interesting take on it. I also noticed that you changed up your main character a bit so that was nice!
Super coolio story overall :D

I hope you’re doing alright btw <3

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Dhwani Jain
October 16, 2021 06:00

Thanks a lot, Flow!
1. You should regret it! ;)
2. Yeah....
3. How so?

I am doing as well as I can. What about you?

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TJ Squared
October 16, 2021 15:43

:D np!
Yeah lol
Well, mostly you have the main character be a girl so a guy was a nice difference. I mean, being a shadow was also a cool change.

Doing alright.
I hope your bio doesn’t suggest that you’re leaving… right? I mean, breaks are good, but just leaving like that? Not so good.

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Dhwani Jain
October 17, 2021 05:52

=D
Yeah, I thought so too, about the MC

Great to hear that! Why aren't you as 'active' on Skribbls as you are on Reedsy?
Nope, I just wanted a fresh start for the bio...

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TJ Squared
October 17, 2021 19:27

:)

cause, I feel like Reedsy is better honestly-
phew! good to hear, cause I'd really miss you if you were to leave :)

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Dhwani Jain
October 18, 2021 02:57

Okay....

XD!

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Philia S
October 15, 2021 06:23

Wow. I'm stupified by this story, honestly, I loved it! Although the time lapses in between disoriented me a bit cause of a lil lack of details, I loved the idea and the way you portrayed it! Are you thinking of doing a sequel or sum? Cause I'd absolutely love that!

And your bootifool bio- TvT

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Dhwani Jain
October 15, 2021 12:55

Thanks Philia!
I got this idea while laying on the bed at night.
Maybe not. (for the sequel)

I love my NEAT and CLEAN bio too!
XD

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Philia S
October 15, 2021 15:47

Lol, nice!
Sedness :( (for the sequel XD)

XDD I MEANT WHAT HAPPENED TO IT-

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October 19, 2021 22:50

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Dhwani Jain
October 20, 2021 03:45

Okay...Which poem?

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October 20, 2021 19:20

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Dhwani Jain
October 21, 2021 03:08

Take another chance?

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October 21, 2021 18:43

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Dhwani Jain
October 22, 2021 13:27

Okay!

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October 14, 2021 01:31

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Dhwani Jain
October 14, 2021 06:42

Sienna!
I just wanted to go 'back to basics' for a while
Trying to lay low and see the reactions of others, I honestly kinda don't 'want' to publish any more stories here rn, 'cause no body cares about them.........

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Dhwani Jain
October 15, 2021 04:41

I don't think so....I think the MOOD is affecting me too

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Dhwani Jain
October 15, 2021 04:41

Yeah....

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