Submitted to: Contest #330

The Priest who healed the sky

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with a character saying goodbye, or asking a question."

Christian

“Why does life give its hardest lessons to the people already struggling to survive?”

Amina whispered the question into the window of the airplane, watching the clouds blur beneath her like white dust on blue cloth. It was a question she had carried for years—through hospital rooms, through fainting spells, through nights where breathing felt like swallowing glass. At twenty-nine, she had learned that her body was as unpredictable as the wind. Doctors called it “chronic autonomic failure with episodic collapse.” She called it “the thing that stole everything.”

Dreams. Stability. Plans.

Her body took all three and left her with constant fatigue, sudden dizziness, and a bitter understanding that every day might be the last day she saw the world clearly.

So she decided if her body was going to betray her, she would betray it back—by living. By traveling. By seeing everything she could before darkness caught up.

Travel, she learned, was its own kind of healing. Pain felt smaller when she looked at mosques glowing at sunset in Istanbul or when she tasted fresh street noodles in Bangkok. Every place taught her a lesson: how to be patient, how to enjoy fleeting moments, how to sit inside pain and still find beauty.

But China taught her something else—something she was not prepared for.

Wudang Mountain was not part of her original plan. She saw a photograph of the stone steps vanishing into clouds and booked a flight impulsively. When the taxi dropped her at the base of the mountain, she felt a chill—not from cold, but from recognition. As though her bones knew this place long before her feet touched its soil.

The climb shattered her.

Her chest tightened halfway up. Her hands trembled. The world tilted until the stone steps seemed to float. She tried to push forward, whispering encouragement to herself, but her knees buckled and she collapsed against the cold ground.

Everything went dark.

When she opened her eyes, she was staring into the face of a boy—no older than fifteen—whose calm brown eyes seemed impossibly ancient.

“You were dying,” he said plainly, as though announcing the weather.

“Not my first time,” she rasped. “Who… are you?”

He bowed slightly. “I am Liang.”

“A monk?”

“A Taoist priest-in-training. I… was not supposed to leave the temple.” He looked away. “But I felt something fall in the mountains. Something important.”

“You felt me fall?”

Liang nodded, touching his chest. “Your pain shook the qi around you. I heard it.”

Amina blinked. She wanted to laugh—pain? Qi? Magic hearing?—but the exhaustion in her bones drowned the humor.

The boy slowly lifted her. She was surprised by his strength. Her arm rested across his shoulders, and he supported her weight effortlessly.

“You need rest,” he said. “And healing.”

Healing. The word was so soft, so impossible, that Amina wanted to cry right there. She followed him through the mist until they reached a small temple tucked between pine trees. Simple. Quiet. Sacred. Lanterns swayed gently at the entrance, glowing like captured stars.

Liang laid her down on a thin mat inside the meditation hall.

His hands hovered over her chest—not touching, but sensing. Heat rippled from his palms like warm wind.

“Do you trust me?” he asked.

“No,” she said honestly. “But I’m too weak to argue.”

A shadow of a smile touched his lips.

Then he pressed two fingers beneath her collarbone, and the world shifted.

She woke the next morning feeling… different.

Her breath came without effort. Her heartbeat was slow, steady, grounded. The heaviness in her limbs was gone. For the first time in years, her body felt like her own.

Liang knelt beside her, studying her face like an old master examining a rare artifact.

“You are stronger now,” he said. “Your qi was tangled. I untangled it.”

“You make it sound like hair,” she muttered.

“It behaves the same way.” He shrugged.

Amina stared at him—really stared. His robes were simple linen. His hair tied into a neat braid. His posture impossibly straight, like someone who had lived a century inside discipline.

“How old are you?” she asked.

“Fifteen.”

“You heal people with magic and you’re fifteen?”

He looked offended. “It is not magic. It is balance.”

Amina shook her head, laughter bubbling in her chest. But the truth was undeniable—she felt better than she had in years.

Days passed.

Then weeks.

Liang treated her every morning with herbs steeped in clay cups, pressure points along her spine, and meditation techniques that slowed her racing thoughts. He spoke little at first, but gradually, he asked questions about her life outside the mountains—questions filled with innocent curiosity.

“What is a movie?”

“What does Wi-Fi smell like?”

“Why do people rush when they have nowhere to go?”

Amina answered everything, sometimes laughing, sometimes reflecting deeply.

She learned that Liang had lived his entire life inside the temple. He had been labeled a prodigy—born with extraordinary sensitivity to energy. The monks believed he could become one of the greatest Taoist healers in generations. But his inability to interact with the outside world was a problem.

“Healing requires understanding people,” Liang said one morning, while balancing on one foot atop a boulder. “But I do not understand the world you come from.”

“So learn,” Amina replied, sipping tea.

He stopped. “How?”

“Start by leaving this mountain.”

He looked horrified.

But fate listens to bold words.

Two days later, a message arrived from Liang’s master. The old monk, thin as wind, called Liang and Amina to the courtyard.

“Liang,” he said, “your training is incomplete. You know the flows of energy, but not the flows of the world.” He tapped his staff on the ground. “You must descend the mountain. Live among people. Learn their rhythms.”

Liang bowed his head. “Yes, Shifu.”

“And Amina…” The old man turned to her. “You were not brought here by accident. You must guide him. Teach him the world he has never touched.”

Amina blinked. “Me? I’m… barely surviving myself.”

The master smiled. “Sometimes, the broken carry the greatest wisdom.”

And that was how the strangest journey of Amina’s life began—traveling the world with a fifteen-year-old Taoist priest who could heal with his hands but didn’t know how to buy a bus ticket.

Their first stop was Shanghai.

Liang nearly fainted at the sight of skyscrapers.

“It’s like iron mountains,” he whispered.

He tried to bow to a taxi driver, who nearly drove away in confusion. He stared at traffic lights like they were divine signs from the heavens. He accidentally tried to meditate in the middle of a shopping mall because he felt “too much energy.”

Amina guided him through everything.

How to use a phone.

How to order food.

How to talk without sounding like a centuries-old sage.

And Liang, in return, taught her the kind of peace she never knew existed.

He taught her breathing patterns that eased her chronic dizziness. He placed warm palms on her temples when her headaches returned. He watched her carefully, always sensing subtle shifts in her energy.

“You are like a sky with storms that come suddenly,” he told her once. “But storms can be calmed.”

Together, they traveled.

Japan. Kenya. Morocco. Italy. India.

Everywhere they went, people were drawn to Liang. His gentle nature, his wisdom beyond his years, his strange sensitivity. But only Amina knew the truth—that he was still learning how to live.

He was awkward sometimes. Too honest. Too serious.

But he was growing.

Changing.

One night, in Zanzibar, while sitting by the ocean, he said softly:

“Amina, when I heal others… I also feel healed.”

Her breath caught. She looked at him, seeing not a boy, but a soul ancient and young all at once.

“Thank you,” he whispered. “For teaching me the world.”

But healing always has a cost.

A few months later, while they were in Nepal, Liang collapsed.

Amina panicked, shaking him violently. “Liang! Liang! Wake up!”

His lips trembled. “I gave you too much qi,” he whispered. “More than I should have. I did not realize how deep your imbalance ran.”

Amina froze.

“You used your life force on me?”

He nodded weakly. “Healing takes from me what you receive. It is the balance.”

Her heart clenched painfully. “Why didn’t you tell me?”

“Because I wanted you to live.”

Tears streamed down her face. “You’re just a child—”

“I am a healer,” he corrected gently.

They returned briefly to Wudang Mountain. The master shook his head with a mix of sorrow and pride.

“Liang has given too much,” the elder said. “He must return to the mountain to restore himself.”

Amina felt something break inside her.

“No,” she whispered. “I can’t lose him. Not now.”

Liang stepped forward, touching her hand. “Amina… nothing is lost. But I must go back to recover. I have given you years of my strength. Now I need time to rebuild mine.”

“And me?” she whispered.

“You must continue living.” He smiled faintly. “That was the promise I made when I healed you.”

The air grew heavy.

Silent.

Final.

They walked together toward the temple gates. Lanterns glowed softly, and mountain winds carried the scent of pine. Amina’s chest tightened with every step.

When they reached the entrance, Liang turned to her.

He looked taller. Older. Or maybe she finally understood him in a way she hadn’t before.

“Amina…” he said quietly. “Before I return to my training… before our paths divide…”

He reached out and touched her wrist gently, the way he did when checking her energy.

“Tell me…”

His eyes softened, full of sadness and hope intertwined.

“…after everything we shared and everything you’ve learned—what will you do with the life I gave back to you?”

Posted Nov 26, 2025
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