I woke up feeling relatively chirpy this morning, as a lonely sunray slipped through my window and settled upon my face. My light cotton curtains caught the winter glow, making them appear like friendly ghosts, gently levitating as if nudging me awake in their own peculiar way. Despite the sunlight, the air remained bitterly cold, yet there was a sparkling joy within me, for I knew that in a few hours I would be at the winter solstice, indulging in the endless array of Elderberry pies that every household here insists on bringing.
I have always loved the pie Mrs Ashvale makes, it’s a gooey delight with a crisp top and elder berries tucked generously into every corner. Each year, every household presents the same offering, and each year, I devour them all, always finding myself most enamored with hers. It never changes, and yet the anticipation only seems to grow.
Long ago, before our town was built, these lands were nothing but vast thickets of elderberries. When the settlement rose, it was named for them Elderton. A town that carries a joy unlike any other. And here, in Elderton, nothing ever really happens. Nothing bad……
A few hours pass before I find myself staring into the mirror, quietly satisfied with my reflection. I’ve chosen a black, thick-knitted top paired with a beige wool skirt and soft cream tights, finishing the look with a deep crimson coat. After one final glance, I secure my boots with a firm knot and slip out of the house. A waft of chilly air presses a frozen kiss to my face, making me shiver, and I feel grateful for the beanie shielding my ears from the cold.
Taking in the beauty of winter, I make my way towards the town square for the solstice. Yet, as I arrive, I sense the tension lingering in the air. My gaze settles on a cluster of townsfolk speaking in hushed tones, their whispers sharp against the silence. Everyone looks uneasy but of what, I haven’t the faintest clue.
I stand there a moment, trying to piece it together, until Clara suddenly appears, pulling me from my thoughts. We greet one another warmly, but almost at once she stiffens and fills me in on the cause of the unease I had sensed. Her words root me to the spot, my heart sinking, a fresh wave of shivers coursing through me. This town was always the safest place I knew, so how could it be that two dead bodies had been found by the lake?
My curious mind gets the better of me as I push towards the crowd, straining to catch fragments of conversation. I’m on the verge of asking outright about the tragedy when something stops me, a whisper, sharp as the wind: “The Veiled Woman.” The name alone catches me off guard, sending a rush of fear and anxiety coursing through me.
At once, I recall the tale my grandmum used to tell me, the story of the Veiled Woman who rose from the lake to claim the souls of those foolish enough to wander past midnight. Once, she was a dignified lady of such striking beauty that men fell to their knees for a chance at her hand. Every man desired her, yet she gave her heart to one alone, the man she believed would spend eternity by her side. But he wanted nothing more than her inheritance.
They were set to marry, until she uncovered his true intentions and broke off the engagement. She could not have known what cruelty awaited her for that choice. The very feature that had captivated men the beauty that had been her blessing was stripped from her when her betrothed burned her face beyond recognition. From then on, she walked veiled, hiding the scars of his betrayal.One day, weary of the whispers that followed her every step, she waded into the lake and drowned herself. Since then, her spirit has haunted its waters, claiming the lake as her sanctuary, her hatred for the townsfolk twisting into a curse. One by one, lives were taken.And then, ten years ago, it stopped. No one knew why, and in time the town simply let the mystery fade, enjoying a decade of peace. Happiness returned… until now. Until this winter solstice.
When my grandmum would tell me this tale sipping her night-time tea, I would be snuggled near the fireplace & listening with wide-eyed fascination. Such tales were meant to frighten me, and at the time they did, though I knew they were no more than make-believe. So I listened, half-afraid, half-enchanted, delighting in the drama of it. Never did I reckon it could hold any truth.
Yet here it was, standing before me, the deaths of two young boys. Even then, I could not bring myself to believe it was the work of some spirit, some woman of legend.No, I told myself, this was the doing of a murderer, flesh and blood. The Veiled Woman was a myth, a tale the townsfolk had spun for their own entertainment.
Still, a yearning stirred within me, the need to uncover the truth. And I will. I believe in my own resolve, and when I do find the culprit, I shall see to it that they rest behind bars. As I walk towards my house, a strange unease takes hold, a weight in the pit of my stomach. Try as I might, I cannot rid my thoughts of her. The Veiled Woman clings to the corners of my mind, clouding me with a fear I dare not name….. I think to myself, if she truly existed, if she killed all those years ago, why did she stop? And why continue now? Perhaps the townsfolk are so deep in denial they refuse to embrace reason, yet the mystery of her sudden return does not fail to intrigue me, it keeps my curious mind restless. I now stand hell-bent on uncovering the truth. In some hidden corner of me, I even wish it to be the work of a person, for that would be simpler, the culprit caught and placed behind bars.
Yet, there lingers within me a foreign feeling, whispering that there is far more I do not know, shadows I have yet to glimpse. And still, I intend to find them.
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Ack! What happens next?!? I guess this is my comeuppance for leaving you with a mystery in my story from last week! 🤣 I hope there's more coming. Also: justice for the Veiled Woman! Thanks for sharing, Mantasha!
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Haha i lovee that!!!! I’m definitely planning the next part, so more of the mystery………and the veiled woman is on the way. Thankyou for the fun comment and reading!
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Oooh, who committed the murders? Thanks for writing and sharing.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it!! I’m hoping to reveal the murderer, though still working on the next part. Stay tuned!! Thanks so much for reading.
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