Submitted to: Contest #332

The Unasked Destination

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the weather takes an unexpected turn."

Fiction Speculative

The morning started out dull, the kind of gray that feels stuck between seasons. Liz pulled on her jacket anyway and stepped outside with her dog, guessing they’d beat the rain the forecast kept teasing.

Halfway down the block the air shifted. It wasn’t colder or warmer, just charged, like the moment before someone flips on a light. The clouds thinned, not in patches but in clean, straight lines, as though some giant hand had dragged a ruler across the sky.

Then the snow began.

Not flakes. Shapes.

Liz stopped walking. Her dog sat, puzzled. From the brightening sky drifted tiny, perfect hexagons, each one stamped with a different pattern. Some looked like fingerprints. Others like tiny maps. They landed gently and didn’t melt, even on the warm pavement. One fell on Liz's sleeve. It held the outline of her own street, every house drawn in miniature.

Within minutes the whole neighborhood stepped outside. People whispered, then fell quiet. More shapes drifted down. A man across the street held out his palm and caught a hexagon sketched with the face of someone he hadn’t seen in years. A kid picked one up showing a place she didn’t recognize. The air stayed perfectly still, as if waiting.

Liz pocketed the one with her street and looked up again. The strange snowfall slowed, then stopped. The sky sealed into an even blue, calm and ordinary. Except nothing felt ordinary anymore.

She headed home with the dog trotting close. At her porch she paused. The hexagon in her pocket felt warm, as if remembering where it came from. She set it on the railing. It didn’t blow away or slide. It stayed put, like it had chosen its spot.

Across the street the man with the familiar face on his hexagon was still standing in the road. He walked over, holding it between two fingers. “It changed,” he said. He tilted it toward her. The face was gone. Now the shape showed a short note written in thin black lines- Go look.

“Look where?” Liz asked.

He shrugged. “It didn’t say.”

A few more neighbors wandered closer, each holding their own hexagon. None of them matched. One showed a river that didn’t exist anywhere nearby. Another held a date from ten years ago. Someone else’s had turned blank after landing, as if it were waiting for instructions.

Liz picked up hers again. The map of her street had shifted. The tiny version of her own house pulsed with a faint glow, no brighter than a watch face in the dark.

“Mine’s doing something,” she said.

A couple of people edged closer to see. The glow steadied, then brightened, then faded as if satisfied it had been noticed.

Her dog let out a small whine and nudged her knee. Liz looked down. Specks of light clung to the dog’s fur, scattered like dust motes. They floated upward, slow and deliberate, then dissolved as they reached eye level. The crowd stepped back without meaning to.

Something was waking up. Or arriving. Or simply revealing itself.

Liz slipped the hexagon back into her pocket and felt it settle flat against her palm. “I think these want us to do something,” she said.

“What?” someone asked.

“I don’t know. But whatever message this is, it wasn’t sent to one person.” She scanned the group. More neighbors were coming out now, some barefoot, some still in pajamas. Each one held a hexagon, turning it this way and that, trying to make sense of it.

Above them the sky stayed impossibly calm, a blank page after a strange paragraph.

Liz took a breath. “Let’s start by comparing them. Maybe they fit together.”

The man with the note frowned. “Like a puzzle?”

“Maybe.”

They formed a loose circle on the sidewalk. People placed their hexagons in the center. Some clicked together neatly, their edges lining up as if they’d been cut from the same sheet. Others refused to touch, sliding apart no matter how carefully they were pushed.

Liz added hers last. As soon as it touched the others, the whole cluster gave a soft hum. Not loud. More like a shared breath. Lines stretched across the pieces, linking shapes that hadn’t touched before. The cluster began to show something — an image or a message still too faint to read.

A few neighbors gasped. One stepped back.

Liz didn’t move. She watched the slow gathering of lines, the way they seemed to search for the right form.

The hum faded. The pieces went still.

The image wasn’t complete yet, but it had direction. A rough outline. A suggestion of movement.

Liz looked from the cluster to the blue, empty sky.

Whatever those shapes were, they’d arrived with purpose. And they’d left something behind, too- the sense that the weather had decided to tell everyone a story of its own, and this was only the first chapter.

“Tomorrow,” Liz said, almost to herself. “I think something else is coming tomorrow.”

No one argued. The air felt like it agreed.

That night, no one in the neighborhood slept well. Porch lights stayed on. Curtains twitched. Even the dogs that usually barked at everything kept quiet, as if some instinct warned them not to break whatever spell had settled over the block.

Liz set the hexagon on her bedside table. She checked it every hour without meaning to. Each time, it looked the same- her street, her house, the faint pulse now gone. Still, she felt watched. Not in a threatening way. More like someone was waiting for her to notice the next step.

Just before dawn, her phone buzzed with a message from an unknown number. Are you awake? No signature. A second message followed- Bring yours outside.

She didn’t answer. She only grabbed her jacket, whistled for the dog, and pocketed the hexagon. The air outside held the same charged stillness as the morning before, but the sky was clear and pale, no sign of more strange snow.

A few houses down, the man from yesterday was already outside. He lifted his hand in a small wave.

“You got the message too?” Liz asked.

He nodded. “Didn’t like it. Came out anyway.”

Others emerged one by one. Pajamas, boots, coats thrown over shoulders. Every person held their hexagon as if it might break.

They drifted toward the sidewalk where the pieces had hummed the day before. The cluster lay exactly where they’d left it, unchanged. Liz crouched beside it. Her dog stayed close, hackles faintly raised.

“Do we put them back together?” someone asked.

Before Liz could answer, the hexagons shifted on their own.

Not much. Just enough to show they were awake again.

A soft tapping sound passed through them, like distant rain on glass. Lines rearranged. Edges nudged. Shapes that had refused to touch yesterday eased toward one another. A few neighbors gasped and stepped back, but no one left.

The shapes settled into place. The cluster widened into a ring, and at its center the pavement bleached itself to a soft, unnatural gray — the color of stone you’d swear was ancient, except it hadn’t been there five seconds ago.

A kid — maybe twelve — leaned forward. “It’s a map,” she whispered.

She wasn’t wrong. But it didn’t look like any map Liz had ever seen. The hexagons showed a narrow peninsula stabbing into a dark mass of water, but the land wasn’t shaped like erosion or tides had touched it. It curved in strange, smooth arcs, as though something enormous had pressed a fingertip into the earth and dragged outward.

At the far end of the stretch of land stood a single stone. Not a lighthouse. Not a monument. A spire too thin to balance, too tall to make sense, tapering to a point that bent ever so slightly toward the sea — like it was listening. Or leaning closer. Or waiting.

A path clung to the peninsula’s spine, impossibly straight, ending at the base of that tilting spire. The stone pulsed with warm gold, but the glow wasn’t steady. It flickered in a rhythm that felt alive, like breath or thought.

“Anyone know where that is?” the man asked.

No one answered. They all just stared.

Liz followed the path with her eyes. When she reached the glowing spire, the pulse brightened once, softly — not enough to be a signal, but enough to acknowledge her.

Her dog whined and pressed against her leg. Stray lights rose from her fur again, fewer than yesterday but sharper, like sparks instead of dust. They drifted over the map and spun together in a tight, trembling spiral before uncoiling into nothing.

Under their feet, the pavement shivered.

“Okay,” Liz said, her voice low but sure. “This isn’t just a picture. It’s pointing somewhere.”

“A direction to what?” a woman asked.

Liz didn’t know. But her chest tightened the way it did before a storm rolled in — pressure shifting, electricity gathering somewhere she couldn’t see. Whatever waited at the end of that impossible peninsula, it felt aware of them. Aware of her.

“We’re supposed to follow it,” she said.

The group rustled. Somebody swore under their breath. Someone else shivered despite the calm air.

The man folded his arms. “You’re assuming this thing means us well.”

Liz shook her head. “I’m assuming it means something. And we’re part of it now. Whether we asked to be or not.”

A neighbor pointed at the ring. “Look.”

The golden glow running the length of the peninsula dimmed — not fading, but holding its breath.

Liz raised her hexagon. Others lifted theirs too. As they angled them toward the map, the spire’s glow quickened, pulsing with eerie, deliberate precision. The peninsula brightened, not with sunlight but with some kind of memory.

“Tomorrow,” Liz whispered. “It was warning us about tomorrow.”

Someone’s voice cracked. “What happens tomorrow?”

Liz kept her eyes on the leaning spire, the way it seemed to tilt further with each breath of wind, like it was straining to see them.

“I think we’re supposed to go there.”

A gust swept through the street, carrying a metallic scent — like rain hitting a stone that’s been sealed underground for centuries. The hexagons hummed again, low, resonant, unsettling.

And the map waited.

Posted Dec 08, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
23:18 Dec 08, 2025

Other worldly.

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