My friends and I used to joke that the movie theater we worked at was the absolute safest place to be during a zombie apocalypse. Unlike normal theaters, ours had a full restaurant-style kitchen inside, complete with walk-in freezers stocked with food. The auditoriums had high-end leather recliners that went completely flat. And in a worst-case scenario, we had the upstairs—a restricted area accessible through a heavy steel door requiring a passcode.
So why was I currently eating my words?
You see, there are two entrances to the breakroom. One is a stairwell on the far right wall of the building that leads straight up—just go up a single flight of stairs and boom, you're there. The second is smack in the middle of the building. Barely anyone uses that path, so it's usually packed with boxes and used as storage for old decorations or our mascot costume. There’s still walkable space for those lazy enough not to walk around, or for anyone heading to the manager's office. Other than that, there's no reason to touch it unless you’re curious about where the long row of projectors goes... straight into a milky dark abyss that gets even more cluttered than the stairwell.
At the very end of that hall, there’s a door that leads into a turn, but no one really knew what was back there. Our manager, Aaron, told us it was a corporate office—even though corporate doesn't operate out of our location at all. But no one pressed further. Hearing such a boring response, everyone just stopped caring.
The breakroom upstairs was chill, but whenever I was up there alone, I’d get this weird sense of being totally disconnected from reality. It felt like if I were to open the door leading downstairs to the normal theater, no one would be there. It was so devoid of noise up there that you only heard the dull thrum of the movies playing. Even if a theater was packed, you couldn't hear the people—just the artificial evidence of life from the screen.
The spell broke the second someone opened the door. Suddenly, all the sounds rushed back in at once: servers jostling drinks with ice cubes clinking against glass, food runners slapping metal trays onto tables, theater doors whooshing open and shut, paper wrappers crinkling, and the laughter-filled voices of my coworkers slipping between professionalism and gossiping about terrible customers. You could hear all of it in the two seconds it took someone to step inside.
I wouldn't say it was a scary feeling, but I wouldn't say it didn't make me uneasy. It was just off-putting, existing in dead silence in the middle of the day. And that long hallway leading past the corporate office into the dark didn't help ease the feeling either. Sometimes when I was alone up there, I couldn't help but think I should be more aware of that side of the building. I couldn't explain why.
It looked kinda ominous, sure, but I wasn't scared. Acknowledging that a dark hallway looks creepy doesn't make you a coward.
My so-called friends didn't see it that way. When I offhandedly mentioned that the back hall looked slightly creepy, they took that single comment and ran with it, constructing a whole narrative that I—a grown-ass twenty-two-year-old man—was terrified of the dark.
It escalated fast. I have a bit of a temper, and I absolutely hate being labeled as something I’m not. Seth started egging me on. Seth is almost incapable of forming a sentence without cursing—every other word out of his mouth is "fuck," "shit," or "bitch."
Seth cursed me out and pushed every single one of my buttons until I backed myself into a corner, daring me to spend the night up here and livestream the whole thing.
When close hit, I hid until the building was cleared. By 11pm.everything was dead silent. I stepped out, threw my backpack over my shoulder, plugged my phone into a portable charger, and went live. Five names instantly popped up in the chat.
"Ha. Y'all are losers, by the way," I whispered into the mic, flexing the blanket I’d brought.
Brian: says the one about to say night night on the floor with rats XD
Niko: Aww look look at you, ready to get tucked in baby boi?
"Niko, shut the fuck up," I muttered into the phone, rolling my eyes as I aimed my phone flashlight down the storage corridor.
Kaizair: This is so dumb, we’re watching you speedrun getting fired.
Saint: tell him to stop flexing that tiny ahh blanket
Renee: Hey bud just so you know, no one actually thinks u are scared of the dark.
Saint: I do
Seth: I fucking do
Renee: wait no I forgot, I do
Yup there she is, our resident troll,Renee loved saying the dumbest things just to troll us for reactions. During a zombie survival debate last week, she swore with a dead serious face that biting a zombie back would reverse zombify it. She was such a good actress that half of us actually argued with her for an hour before realizing she was baiting us.
I walked past the clutter toward the door Aaron always called the "corporate office." To my surprise, the brass handle turned easily under my grip. It was unlocked.
"Guys, the corporate door is open," I said, shining my phone light inside.
The room was cramped, filled with dust-covered filing cabinets and old promotional standees. But right beside a stack of movie posters, a second door sat partially blocked by heavy cardboard boxes. Mounted right on the door frame was a brass plate labeled Auditoriums 7–12.
"Wait, what?" I frowned. "We only have six theaters."
Brian: maybe they mean a different location's extra doors or something?
"No, look," I said, moving a heavy box of popcorn buckets out of the way. A rusted key was sitting right on top of a nearby electrical junction box, attached to a faded plastic tag that read DO NOT OPEN.
Seth: BRO OPEN THAT SHIT DON'T BE A PUSSY.
Saint: Yo, seriously, is there extra space back there?
Hyped up by their sudden interest, I slid the key into the lock and turned it. The bolt clicked back.
The moment the door swung open, a wall of freezing, stale air hit my face. An instant, heavy knot of dread dropped straight into the pit of my stomach. My hand holding the phone trembled slightly, but the guys were blowing up the chat, completely fascinated by the idea that our small theater had hidden rooms.
I stepped through the doorway. The plush carpet faded into cold, dull concrete. Mounted along the drywall were small brass plates reading Theater 7, Theater 8, and an entire row of dusty digital projectors pointing down through tiny glass observation windows.
"They must’ve been planning a bigger theater at one point," I muttered, trying to rationalize it to myself and the stream. "Obviously they abandoned it since there’s no physical space on the lot for more auditoriums."
I crouched down and looked through one of the observation windows. Down below, dimly lit by my phone's flash, was an auditorium—an actual, fully furnished auditorium with rows of leather recliners.
"Wait," I whispered, my brain short-circuiting. "That doesn't make sense. Because of the way I turned, there shouldn't be a theater facing this direction. This would be hanging out over the parking lot."
Kaizair: bro what? are you sure that's not just Theater 4?
"It can't be Theater 4!" I said, my voice rising slightly. "The geometry is completely wrong!"
The path ahead stretched into pitch-black nothingness. The dread in my chest was getting heavier, suffocating the last bit of my bravado. I was about to turn on my heel and march straight back to the breakroom when Renée typed in all caps:
Renée: WAIT. WHAT IS THAT.
"What's what?" I asked, stopping dead in my tracks.
Renée: at the very end of the hall! turn the camera!
I raised my phone. Far down the corridor, buried deep in the darkness where no light should have been, was a tiny, faint sliver of pale grey light.
Seth: GO CHECK IT OUT BRO DO IT.
Against my better judgment, driven entirely by the eerie silence, I crept down the concrete hall toward the light.
It was a single projector, humming quietly in the dark. It was powered on, projecting a beam of light through an observation window onto a screen below. I held up my phone, filming the machine. The screen in the theater below was displaying nothing but a motionless wall of pale, static gray.
"Why is this running?" I whispered, my heart hammering against my ribs. "Did Aaron even know this was back here?"
The air was ice cold now, smelling heavily of wet paper and ozone. I felt an intense, overwhelming urge to get out.
"Alright," I told the stream, turning away from the window. "I don't like this feeling at all. I'm going back to the breakroom, locking the door, and going to sleep. Y'all can sign off or stay being weird watching me sleep, but I'm done exploring."
I turned my back on the projector and began hurrying back down the concrete hall, stepping through the DO NOT OPEN doorway and back into the clutter of the corporate office room.
I took two steps into the office—and my heart completely stopped.
Inside the room, someone—or something—was frantically tearing through the office. Paper stacks were being violently ripped apart, folders hurled against walls, and steel filing drawers scraped open in a manic rhythm.
Instinct took over before my brain could process it. I killed my phone's flash, backed smoothly into the shadow of a tall metal cabinet near the entry, and went completely motionless. Something deep in my gut screamed that it would be in my best interest to not let whoever was in that room see me.
My chat, however, was having a field day.
Renee: Is that the manager? You’re so cooked XD
Seth: LOL bro why are you hiding???
Kaizair: the boss probably has a spare key to that door, if he locks you in there u gonna be trapped all night just tell him u forgot your phone or something
I didn't answer. I held my phone low, camera pointed at the doorway, screen dimming.
I blinked once.
In the fraction of a second my eyes were closed, whatever happened on the camera stream sent the chat into an instant, absolute frenzy.
Seth: WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT
Renée: OMG
Kaizair: DUDE DON'T MOVE FROM THAT SPOT
Saint: YOU NEED TO GET OUT LIKE RIGHT NOW OMG
The knot of dread in my stomach tightened into a vice. My heart thumped so violently against my ribs I was genuinely terrified whatever was in the office would hear it rattling in my chest. But what scared me more was knowing, with absolute, terrifying clarity, that it wasn't Aaron. It wasn't a manager. It wasn't human.
The problem was, even if I managed to slip past it to the main floor, the entire building was locked down. The lobby doors were made of thick, heavy security glass. For once in my life, I was ready to admit Seth was right—I was on the weaker side, and there was no way in hell I had the physical strength to shatter bulletproof glass to escape.
I couldn't take my eyes off the doorway. Even Seth and Renée—the two biggest trolls in the entire group—were typing in caps, pleading with me to run.
Then it moved into the frame.
A black, humanoid figure stepped into the doorway. It was tall—impossibly tall, far beyond any human height. Its head extended past the top of the doorframe, obscured in the upper shadow. It didn't seem to have a face, just a slick, void-like surface where features should be.
Slowly, agonizingly, it crouched down, its long, jointed spine bending at unnatural angles as it peered directly into the darkness where I was hiding.
My breathing stopped completely. My legs felt frozen, turned to liquid lead. Like it knew I was there.
Saint: do you still have the key from before???
Brian: dude you need to lock it back in there! it definitely came out from where you were!
My hands were shaking so hard I could barely hold the phone. I flipped the camera to my face, my eyes wide with unspeakable terror. Niko’s chat popped up instantly—he dropped the teasing tone completely, his words sharp with desperate focus.
Niko: Hey. You gotta calm down. I'm coming down there right now. Just stay right there, okay? Stay calm.
Renée: You need to wait for that thing to leave the room. As soon as it's gone, go in and lock the door behind you!
It was a solid plan, but the entity didn't move. It remained crouched in the doorway, staring right toward my corner as if waiting for me to make the first move.
Seth: I'm coming too. We might need backup. If anyone has weapons bring em.
Suddenly, the entity dropped flat. Its joints popped with sickening, crackling snaps as it contorted itself onto all fours like an overgrown spider. With unnatural, jerky speed, it skittered through the dark straight past my hiding spot, its spindly limbs blurring across the floor as it vanished down the hall.
I sat in dead silence for a second, my heart hammering in my ears, listening for any trace of movement. Nothing.
I scrambled up, sprinted into the ransacked corporate office, and grabbed the door. I slammed it shut and hurriedly dragged two heavy boxes of old promotional flyers against the frame to block it, praying it would buy me seconds. But horror crashed over me again—the key didn't work from this side. There was no latch. The door didn't lock. That thin barrier of cardboard boxes was the only thing stopping it, and that thing could easily throw them aside.
Panicking, I sprinted through the main breakroom and threw open the door to the stairwell, flying down the steps toward the ground floor.
I didn't notice it at first—my eyes were frantic, fixed on the bottom of the stairs. But the hallway was wrong. Things were in completely different places. The framed movie posters on the walls were gone, replaced by faded portraits of strangers I’d never seen in my life.
I shoved open the stairwell door at the bottom, tripped hard over a pile of clutter, and hit the floor.
"Shit!" I hissed, going dead quiet, terror gripping me in case the noise alerted the creature.
I checked my glowing phone screen. A direct text from Brian was sitting at the top:
Brian: that isn't what our theater looks like.
"Huh?" I whispered, frowning down at the screen.
I raised my eyes to look at what I’d just tripped over. It wasn't theater equipment or popcorn bags. It was stacks of cardboard boxes overflowing with thousands of used, plastic syringes, and the walls around me were smeared with rusty, dried specks of fluid I prayed wasn't blood.
Shit. Shit.
I knew the layout had been weird, but as I stared at the grim, clinical decay of the room, reality hit me like a bucket of ice water. When I got turned around earlier, I hadn't stepped into our corporate office at all—I had walked into a room that merely looked identical to it.
I turned back to the stairwell door I’d just come through. Mounted on the interior face was a heavy, mechanical deadbolt.
My stomach dropped. This wasn't the normal theater stairwell. Our building’s stairwells had electronic keypads on the outside to keep customers from sneaking upstairs. This door was built with a manual lock on the inside—a design meant specifically to lock something in, preventing whatever was on the stairs from even touching the lock from the other side.
Just then, heavy, wet thuds echoed from above.
The sound was coming from the top of the stairs I’d just run down, moving fast, coming straight for the stairwell door. Was it looking for me? Crap that means its something highly intelligent and I cant just let hiding behind boxes be my only resort.
I gripped the interior deadbolt, my mind racing. Going through the unknown door ahead was terrifying, but it was my only chance. If this place mimicked our theater's layout, maybe the lobby down here had an exit I could break through and reach the outside. I just had to put distance between myself and that thing.
I turn the knob just as i hear the door above me start to click.
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I really liked how the livestream chat changes with the story. At first everyone is joking around and calling him scared, but once that thing appears, even the trolls are telling him to run. That made the horror feel more immediate because we’re watching them realize what’s happening at the same time he is.
And that final discovery with the syringes was nasty in the best way. Realizing he hadn’t actually been in his own theater at all made everything before it feel even more unsettling.
You’ve definitely got the kind of ending that makes someone want to know what happens next. Is this part of a longer story, or are you building these horror pieces as standalone stories?
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This was initially standalone cause I've never actually finished a story before, but I kinda got attached to the characters, so now I'm thinking of continuing making it a webtoon or Wattpad, because it came out funnier than I thought, and I like the idea of his most problematic friends coming to help first just to end up in deeper and darker situations.
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Honestly, I can see why you got attached to the characters. The idea of the friends coming in thinking they’re going to help, only to end up getting pulled into something even darker, could give you so much room to play with their personalities and relationships.
And now that you’ve got that connection to the characters, why not let it grow beyond one story? You could even turn it into a series of books, where each story pulls them a little deeper into whatever is happening. I think that could be really fun to build, especially with the humour mixed into the horror.
Have you already started thinking about what the next situation would be for them, or are you still letting this one sit with you?
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